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Home»Fan Fiction»Avneil Sweetest Love Story Episode 13
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Avneil Sweetest Love Story Episode 13

Sweetgirl7By Sweetgirl7July 18, 20175 Comments4 Mins Read
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P.S – This is the emotional chapter . I don’t like being emotional but to take the story forward I had to do this.

A few days later
That day was as usual
Night came
Avni was in a different mood and started singing . Neil noticed her.

Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bharti hoon
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hoon

Hawa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yoon pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

Meri nazar ka safar
Tujhpe hi aake ruke
Kehne ko baaki hai kya
Kehna tha jo keh chhuke

Meri nigahein hain teri nigahon ki
Tujhe khabar kya bekabar

Main tujhse hi chup chup kar
Teri aankhein padhti hoon
Koi nahi tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

Tu jo mujhe aa mila
Sapne hue sarphire
Haathon mein aate nahi
Udte hain lamhein mere

Meri hasi tujhse
Meri khushi tujhse
Tujhe khabar kya beqadar

Jis din tujhko na dekhun
Pagal pagal phirti hoon
Koi nahi tujhe yoon pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

He remembered juhi also singing the same before the day she died but juhi kept asking herself and avni was saying that she wouldn’t leave him and no one would love him like she has…
Neil came inside and said : Tumhara gaana aur tum sabse khoobsurat ho.
Neil’s face was showing serious expressions
Avni : Kya hua ? Tum serious kyu lag rahe ho?
Neil :Juhi bhi yahi gaana uske marne kai ek din pehle gaa rahi thi par vo pooch rahi thi ki mujhe uske jaisa pyaar kaun karega Jaise ki usko pata tha ki voh mar jayengi aur tum toh . Avni stopped him
Avni : Mujhe samajh aa gaya. Ab juhi ki marne ki baat mat karo. Use accha nahi lagega , voh hame upar se dekh rahi hogi , jaise aisha maa dekhti hai.. Ab so jate hai Neil.
They started sleeping but both of them saw something

Avni’s Dream : Ali Riya and Neil and Avni went somewhere in the forest for a trip. During their journey Riya got hurt so ali took her to a hospital. Meanwhile Avni shouted Neil and said him to drive fast. He did but he was badly injured by the gunshots. Avni was also injured by a gunshot so she couldn’t do anything and cried bitterly . She tried to call Ali. After many callls till Avneil had lost lot of blood , the call was picked up. Ali rushed with an ambulance. Avneil were admitted there.They both were in the same room laying unconscious . In few hours Avni woke up and saw that Neil was badly affected by the gunshots. She didn’t care about her bruised, blood clotted skin or the gunshots. She said : Bhagwaan hamesha mere saath hi kyu hota hai. Pehle Aisha maa ab Neil. Hai Ganpatti bappa! Neil ki jaan gayi toh meri bhi gayi.
Next moment his hand started fidgeting and he started opening his eyes .

Neil’s dream – Ali Riya and Neil Avni were visiting the forest trip. They went in 2 groups. Neil and Avni went towards a mountain cliff. Avneil sat at the clifftop. They were viewing the extraordinary scene from the top. Suddenly Avni shifted forward forgetting that she could fall. Neil was about to catch her but Avni fall down.

Avni woke up from her dream in the morning and cried : Neil!!!!
Neil woke up from his dream in the morning and cried : Avni!!!!
They both said this at the same time
Avni : Thank god you are safe Neil.
Neil : Thank god you are safe Avni .

Precap : story after 9 months , i.e Avni’s pregnancy of 8 months

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Sweetgirl7

    I love my mum dad brother best friend (their are 2) and Avneil.

    5 Comments

    1. Samm on July 19, 2017 1:05 am

      what was that dream about??

    2. Fatima on July 19, 2017 1:09 am

      Awesome ?
      Loved it so much ❤️❤️??
      So their dream was ??
      Well good
      Update soon
      Can’t wait

    3. Diya dhiravian on July 19, 2017 4:27 am

      Plz use English words I didn’t know Hindi so can u

    4. krati jain on July 19, 2017 3:18 pm

      plz upload the next episode soon

    5. Avneil_lover on July 19, 2017 3:26 pm

      It was super duper awesome…enjoyed readimg it…continue soo..waiting for next one

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