Hey guys, this is my first time so please support me with your healthy comments. So my story is basically on current track of Shivika.
Shivaay announces his engagement with Ragini. All members of Oberoi Mansion are in shock except pinky.
All characters in my ff are same as in Ishqbaaz. So lets start.
After announcing his marriage with Ragini, Shivaay starts moving towards Annika and stands in front of her.
Shivaay to Annika:
Shivaay: Annika won’t you congratulate me?
Annika (controlling her tear): Why not Shivaay, congratulation.
(before she could say something more her phone rang and with a heavy heart she opened the phone and found message by Rudra)
Annika: Shivaay I will talk to you later, I have to reach somewhere quick, so bye.
(Shivaay becomes angry and moves toward his room and Annika moves toward Oberoi Mansion’s main gate with tears in her eyes)
That’s all for today.
Bye
Please do comments
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Superb intro
Nycc
interesting continue it plz………
Superb start…..plzz do post the next one longer
Awesome
Nice…
But too short !
Nice…continue
Interesting…… Nice
It is nice one dear
Hey di congrats for writing such a nice intro as a first try…… Interesting plot always wanted to read something like that so I’ll be looking forward to it…..
Post next one soon and try to make it longer because your little sister is waiting to read her di’s work a little longer…..?
Awesome yaar…. Lovely start…. Post the next part as soon as possible… Make it a long one…
superb one.. Will definitely support you…. Make it longer next time?
awsm……..
post asap……
AWESOME INTERESTING???
Amazinggggg start dr… keep writing…nice plot…. seems to be interesting… looking forward to it.. post nxt soon… n plz make longer updates
Good starting…all the best…
Nice intro… Continue soon
Interesting & intriguing
update soon
Nycc one dr…. Waiting 4 nxt…
Good start . Post next part asap