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Naughty billo (swasan ff) shot 23 by mars

MarsBy MarsJuly 7, 2017102 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hloooo guys!! Firstly Veryyyyyy sorry for being late.What to tell yarr I had written this part and was just at ending but bcoz of my little carelessness it got cleared from wordpad.I really felt like crying. But then thought to write again as many are waiting.firstly I m not getting enough time to write and above all this stupid thing.

Once again sorry.And pzzz forgive if this part is not up to mark.
Thank you sooooo much for your overwhelming response on last part. I should have given this part earlier as a treat but it got delayed.Never mind next will try to give soon.Not wasting more time let’s begin

NAUGHTY BILLO(swasan ff)
SHOT 23:
Blue moon hotel(goa)
Swasan room:
Early morning:
Sanskar is sleeping on bed alone as swara is not there. She is in balcony clicking pics of the city from there. She clicked many pics and then came inside only to see Sanskar still sleeping.
She slowly sit on her side of bed and took selfie pouting with sanskar who is sleeping with little open mouth,messy hairs. She giggles looking at the pic.
Then Swara posted that pic on insta and fb with caption ” my cute sleepy baby”.She again ran to balcony.

After breakfast:
Sanskar is Sitting on couch using laptop while Swara is on bed.She is continuously looking at him from corner of her eyes. She is having phone in her hand and is again and again checking something on it.She got irritated and thought
Swara: why he is not getting online. I m waiting from half an hour.
Then she thought to ask herself only to see the pic.She went to couch and sit beside him.Swara peep in laptop to know what he is doing. Her eyes got widened when she saw him reading latest physics syllabus on net.She got angry and said
Swara: excuse me Mr maheshwari we are on our honeymoon not any science trip that u are doing all this.Huh!! Unbelievable.
She turn her face other side.

Sanskar chuckles seeing her drama.
Sanskar (pull her closer): then what my shona wants me to do?
Listening him, swara instantly turned grinningly and said
Swara: like my new pic on insta and fb.
Sanskar: ok I will see later.
Swara: no plzzz see now only.

Sanskar(signed): okay.
Sanskar look at the pic in which he is sleeping and Swara is pouting.He got angry and said
Sanskar:what is this swara?how can u post such pics.what will my students think.
Swara:they will think their professor is Veryyyyyy cute.
She pull his cheeks.He slightly jerked her hand and got up.
Sanskar(shouted): just shut up.

Swara got scared seeing his anger and started crying.Sanskar smiles and immediately click her photo when she was indulged in crying. He also posted on fb with caption” my cry baby”.
Then he sit beside her and wrapping her arm around her shoulder.
Sanskar:shonaaa
Swara:I m not talking to u(sniffs) its my mobile my I’d my wish what I want to post.
Sanskar: okay sorry now see my new pic.
Swara:why should I?

Sanskar :plzz I had also seen.
Swara: okay but last time I m listening to u.
Sanskar(kiss her cheek): love u.
Swara saw the pic in which she was caring like baby.She make weird faces after seeing it.Sanskar roll on couch laughing while she looked at him angrily.She hit him with pillow and said
Swara(warning): remove the pic.
Sanskar shook his head in no. Swara again hit pillow at his head.He was trying to hold her hand
Sanskar:just wait I will show u.

Swara ran out of the room sticking her tongue at him.
Sanskar started clearing the mess created by his kiddo wife.

Corridor:
After coming from room,swara was roaming in corridor looking at the paintings hanging on the walls. Then only she saw that giant man coming who called her dwarfty.
He entered inside the room which is next to swasan room. Swara thought
Swara: so he is staying here I will show him today.
She stood in front of his room door and after knocking loudly she ran away.
The man opened the door but didn’t find anyone.Swara hidded herself behind the vase.she is giggling seeing him confused.He closed the door and went inside. Swara again knock the door and did same thing second time. Now the man got irritated so to find whose there he stood near door only.When third time swara knock the door, it instantly got opened as he was standing there only.
Swara got shocked and immediately ran to her room.Man saw her and shouted
Man:stop u.

But swara had entered inside her room.

Swasan room:
Swara closed the door loudly and was breathing heavily.Sanskar looked at her condition and went to her.
Sanskar: what happened swara?
Before swara could reply, there was knock on the door.
Man (shout): hey u girl open the door.
Swara(whispers): I had shown u giant man in park na.

Sanskar nodded
Swara:I was teasing him by knocking his room door again and again and he saw me(bite her nails)now he came to beat me.
Sanskar was looking at her with wide eyes and open mouth.
Swara(jerk him):sanskar
Sanskar:what to do now?
Swara:I will hide in washroom and u tell him that I didn’t came here.

Sanskar: mee?
Again there was knock on the door.
Swara:yes do fast I m going.
Swara ran to washroom while sanskar made him presentable and opened the door.
Sanskar: yes
Man: where is that girl?
Sanskar(innocently): which girl.There is no girl.
Man: don’t lie I had seen her coming here only(he said angrily)
Sanskar gulp seeing his muscles.
Sanskar:I think u r mistaken.
Man: let me see she is here only.

Man entered inside but didn’t find anyone.
Sanskar: see I told there is no one.
Man: hmm
Then only there comes some noise from washroom
Man: who is inside?
Sanskar: she is my wife.
Man: it means that girl is your wife?

Sanskar:no no she is my wife that girl is that only (even he don’t know what he is speaking).
Swara listens to them and got tensed.
She thought something and said loudly from inside
Swara(extra sweetly): suniye Ji, if no one else is there then may I come out in bathrobe only.(said shyly).
Man got embarassed. Sanskar trying to control his laugh said
Sanskar: see mister u are disturbing us.

Man: okay sorry but if u find that girl then tell me.
Sanskar: yes yes surely.
Man left from there.Sanskar closed the door and signed in relief.
Swara peep from washroom and saw only sanskar is there so she came out.
She started laughing loudly rolling on bed. Sanskar signed and went near her
and said
Sanskar: tum pakka pitwayugi mujhe. Uski body dhekhi hai. He would have crushed me.(I will be surely get beaten bcoz of u. Have u seen his body)
Swara looked at him for instance then again started laughing.
Sanskar: firstly stop laughing.
Swara pull him on bed and said

Swara:just chill we should enjoy our victory. How easily we fooled him.
Swara took his hand herself and give hifi. Sanskar was just staring him.
Feeling his continuous gaze she asked
Swara:what???
Sanskar:I never thought in my dreams also that I will do such crazy acts in my life.
Swara(proudly): and the whole credit goes to Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheshwari.
Both started laughing.

Evening:
Swasan were roaming in streets and doing their crazy acts. Swara hit Sanskar on shoulder slightly and ran away shouting
Swara:catch me Sanskar.
Sanskar signed and said

Sanskar: just wait I m coming.
He ran after swara.While running swara was looking back at sanskar so striked with someone. The person held her from waist preventing her from falling.
Swara had closed her eyes tightly in fear.Sanskar stopped seeing them.The jealousy can be clearly seem in his eyes.His gaze was just at swara’s waist where person is holding her.He got angry and mumble
Sanskar:how dare he to touch my swara.
He went to them and held Swara’s arm and pulled her towards him
Sanskar:swara u r ok?
Swara nodded.

Sanskar got annoyed when he saw that the person is seeing Swara keenly.
Sanskar:thank you Mister for saving my wife.
But the person ignored his words and said to swara
Person: hey!!!! Shona don???

Listening this name swara instantly looked at the person and jumped in excitement seeing him
Swara: ohhh lucky bucky u here.
Sanskar was looking at their faces with open mouth not understanding what is happening.

To be continued…..

Precap: jealousy at peak. More fun and romance.

Sooooo sorrrryyyy once again for small part. Next I will post soon and will try to make long one.Plzz today compromise.

One thing I had started new story
” Beast’s soulmate”. This I had written for wattpad but posted here also.
So if u find it interesting then tell me so that I will continue here also.

Today I won’t plead for comments as I know it’s not that deserving but still try to give your views.

U can follow me on wattpad.
My wattpad id is mars_111
Thank you
Lots of love
Bye
Take care.

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    102 Comments

    1. Suma on July 7, 2017 3:47 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 4:04 pm

        Thank you dear

    2. neeti on July 7, 2017 3:50 pm

      It was such a cute part

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 5:28 pm

        Thank you dear

    3. pnap on July 7, 2017 3:52 pm

      sooooooooooo cute part
      loved it

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:52 pm

        Thank you dear

    4. Darlzz002 on July 7, 2017 3:53 pm

      Fantastic epi…
      So nyc n lovely..
      Really really gud

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:53 pm

        Thank you dear

    5. Stg on July 7, 2017 3:58 pm

      Awesome ?? but pls make swara jealous too..

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thank you dear will make Swara also jealous.

    6. scooby on July 7, 2017 4:01 pm

      Superb ??

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:44 pm

        Thank you dear

    7. SHAN on July 7, 2017 4:08 pm

      Wow!!! Loved it a lot…. Lucky entered going to be interesting to see sanskar’s Jealousy

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 5:26 pm

        Thank you shan di

    8. Ashwini on July 7, 2017 4:11 pm

      Nice part.. Waiting for jealousy part dear ??????

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:43 pm

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    9. Nagamanasa on July 7, 2017 4:16 pm

      Awesome dear…continue soon

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:41 pm

        Thank you dear will post soon.

    10. Romaisa on July 7, 2017 4:16 pm

      Wow loved it

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:37 pm

        Thank you dear

    11. AbrahamEzra on July 7, 2017 4:32 pm

      It was so funny and my sanky is jealous so cute.

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:36 pm

        Thank you dear

    12. Kumu on July 7, 2017 4:32 pm

      Awesome dear..Nw sanskar has become crazy just like swara..??
      Tc..

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:34 pm

        Thank you dear and yup company matters.

    13. phoniex on July 7, 2017 4:34 pm

      she is prankster

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:33 pm

        Thank you dear

    14. reethu on July 7, 2017 4:37 pm

      awesome dear.don’t dare to say it’s not deserving okay.

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:31 pm

        Thank you dear

    15. Avan on July 7, 2017 4:57 pm

      Supr dear..eagerly for next..plz post asap..this and other ff also..love all yur ff..

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 5:20 pm

        Thank you dear and will post my other ff also soon.

    16. Rosey on July 7, 2017 5:24 pm

      Wow mars superbbb I just loved it…
      It was so funny that suniye ji was awesom

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:30 pm

        Thank you dear

    17. Anjali on July 7, 2017 5:33 pm

      superb loved it nd i just love this swara

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:28 pm

        Thank you dear

    18. NDSG on July 7, 2017 5:44 pm

      Look someone is jealous???????

      Shona is too mischievous… And that giant man ??????? SwaSan fooled him… Suniye ji????

      Awesome chappy and feeling bad that this part got deleted. Once it happened with me also???? it hurts a lot…. But next time be careful…

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:25 pm

        Thank you dear and I was so frustrated that I thought not to write again but then I remember my lovely readers and got the courage to write all over again. And yup next time I will be careful.

      • NDSG on July 7, 2017 6:32 pm

        Lovely reader like me ???????????

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:17 am

        Hihihihi yupppp

    19. Febi on July 7, 2017 5:46 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:23 pm

        Thank you dear

    20. mahavir on July 7, 2017 5:47 pm

      hey marsuuuu..!! so sry dear for not commenting from so long as i was not active here..!! i read all the parts of betterhalf nd naughty billo today it was awesomeeeee..!! just beautifully written..!! keep going dear nd i saw ur another story too can u give me the wattpad link of Beast soulmate..!! nd yeah post betterhalf soon i m waiting

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:22 pm

        First of all welcome back dear. I missed your comments. Don’t be sorry its alright.thanks and I m glad u liked the stories. And beast’s soulmate I had posted only prologue on wattpad also will continue simultaneously on wattpad and tu.
        Thanks
        Take care.

      • mahavir on July 7, 2017 8:22 pm

        hahaa ok marsu will definetly read the stries nd i m not sure that i can be regular..!! coz studies u know

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:20 am

        Don’t worry u can read when u get time. All the best for your studies

    21. anu on July 7, 2017 6:31 pm

      awesome update next part soon

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:21 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    22. ankita Gaude on July 7, 2017 6:39 pm

      awsome ????

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:23 am

        Thank you dear

    23. gayathri.visu on July 7, 2017 7:03 pm

      Awesome yaar…. I fully enjoyed it espcially that suniyeji part…..! Can u tell now how many stories are u writing??? U r writing so many stories dear….how can u manage ur time for this much stories???

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:27 am

        Thank you dear and currently I m writing break up patch up, struggle, naughty Billo, my better half, uncontrollable feelings.
        Actually I m waiting for my offer letters that why I m free now so write to time pass.

    24. Anu Rathore on July 7, 2017 8:04 pm

      Awesome…..

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:28 am

        Thank you dear

    25. Kanha on July 7, 2017 8:53 pm

      Yeh Swara bhi na. Pata nahi iska kya hoga. Heyy Kanhaji, lagta hai yeh dono honeymoon ke bajaaye disneyland mein aa gaye hain? Mars you are too good yaar. Jaldi post karo. Sanskar ki pareeksha ab shuru hogi. Bechara????? Love you yaarrrrr???

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:30 am

        Thank you siso will post next part soon and love u

    26. Neptune on July 7, 2017 9:50 pm

      omg marsuuuuuu i am soooooooooooooooo excited for sanskaar’s jealousy ca’t wait for it….
      please please please post it sooooooooonnnnnn….

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:32 am

        Thank you nepuuu will post soon

    27. Xavantikax on July 7, 2017 9:59 pm

      Awesome dear …. Just loved the naughty Swara ??

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:33 am

        Thank you dear

    28. Simi on July 7, 2017 10:02 pm

      Awesome dear…
      Swara is just impossible ?? She changed sanskar too?

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:35 am

        Thank you dear

    29. Soujanya on July 7, 2017 10:05 pm

      Awesome…?

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:36 am

        Thank you dear

    30. sneha on July 7, 2017 10:09 pm

      Hey dear loved the episode.

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:37 am

        Thank you dear

    31. Pramudi on July 7, 2017 10:26 pm

      Awesome dear..

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:41 am

        Thank you dear

    32. AnuAnn on July 7, 2017 10:31 pm

      Loved it dear

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:43 am

        Thank you dear

    33. Rachna on July 7, 2017 10:37 pm

      Awsm Dr… Update soon

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:44 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    34. Vidhi on July 7, 2017 10:41 pm

      First expression ????????????????????????
      Second expression ???????????????????????
      Third expression ????????????????????????
      Fourth one ??????????????????????????
      Fifth one ???????????????????????????
      Last one ???????????????????????????
      Update soon ❤❤❤❤
      I love u ?????❤??❤???❤???❤???❤???❤??

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:46 am

        Hihihihi loved the way u commented thanks and love u will post next part soon

    35. Rockleon on July 7, 2017 10:54 pm

      Goddd mars wht u wrote my stomach is paining due to laughing !!!
      Totally speechless!

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:47 am

        Thank you dear

    36. veena on July 7, 2017 11:14 pm

      Loved it

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:49 am

        Thank you dear

    37. Priya on July 7, 2017 11:16 pm

      Awesome dear Sanskar jealousy waiting for next part

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:50 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    38. yamee on July 7, 2017 11:29 pm

      Super amazing epi dear…loved it.precap seems like very interesting. Desperately waiting for next part post soon.

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:52 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    39. Prashasti7 on July 8, 2017 2:05 am

      Omg!!!!! I ws ROFL while reading the chappy our naughty swara is too much heheee awam part n entry of lucky not bad m waiting for more fun

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 6:53 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    40. Tani on July 8, 2017 7:17 am

      Awesome!

      • Mars on July 9, 2017 8:24 am

        Thank you dear

    41. SNY on July 8, 2017 7:39 am

      Nice

      • Mars on July 9, 2017 8:21 am

        Thank you dear

    42. kojagorimalik on July 8, 2017 10:38 am

      Swara sanskar ko pakka pitwayegi

      • Mars on July 9, 2017 8:18 am

        Thank you dear

    43. Tamil on July 8, 2017 2:05 pm

      Amazing dear

      • Mars on July 9, 2017 8:16 am

        Thank you dear

    44. Niharika on July 8, 2017 6:40 pm

      Great part luv it. Specifically swara. She is cute bubbly smart kiddo cry baby all at the same time. And sanskar is awesome

      • Mars on July 9, 2017 8:09 am

        Thank you dear

    45. Simin on July 9, 2017 12:31 pm

      Hayyyeeee
      Kitne cute hai dono
      Naughty shona
      Jealousy???????
      Ab maza aayega…
      .

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 5:34 am

        Thank you dear

    46. Rekha on July 9, 2017 1:50 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 5:36 am

        Thank you dear

    47. vyshu10 on July 9, 2017 11:44 pm

      superb

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 5:39 am

        Thank you dear

    48. raina on July 10, 2017 10:54 am

      hehe.. jealousy!!!
      sanskar also got naughty with swara..
      loved it..
      but i think you have a reason for bringing this giant man suddenly..

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 6:20 pm

        Thank you dear and seriously saying I had no hidden reason for bringing giant man its just for fun

    49. mica on July 11, 2017 11:56 am

      aahhhhhhh i still shivering whenever i read word Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheswary, love it

    50. kat on July 17, 2017 2:36 pm

      loved it so much

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