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Sukor pehela pyaar (Episode 13)

PiyalBy PiyalJuly 4, 20179 Comments5 Mins Read
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So sorry guys for late update plz enjoy….
recap; kamal wants to use chakor for power vimli and chakor car is smashed to pieces suraj gets worried for chakor….

Suraj holds chakor in a very tight grip mahiya plays…..
Suraj;doyou understand the pain i was in the fear that had captured my body….
Chakor;suraj im fine look at me there’s not even one scratch on my body…
The cars beep at sukor…
Chakor; suraj we are standing in the middle of the road…chakor lets go from suraj hug and grabs his hand she makes him sit on the bench… wait here suraj im coming…
Suraj; grabs chakor hand(mahiya plays…) chakor trips and fall ontop of suraj….
Sukor have a deep stare into each other’s eyes…
Chakor’s hair flies on suraj face suraj slowly moves her hair to the side and smiles….chakor gets up…
Chakor; suraj dont worry im coming….
Chakor buys water for suraj…
Chakor;here suraj calm down drink some water… and il tell u what happened well i was having a nap and mumma called me cuz ur entire family came saying thier was a ritual left and i left with vimli but on the way i saw a gooal gopa stand so we went to eat…
Suraj laughs let me guess you ate all the gooal gopa’s….
Chakor; shut up? Suraj…. and then wen we were heading back to the car some1 smashed vivasn car so i decided to come back home and i was waiting for the driver but i heard you shouting for me
Suraj; i got worried cuz u never picked up ur daughter phone and wen i phoned at the haveli some1 sedurcar had an accident….
Chakor; well im fine… chakor sees a icecream stand….
Chakor;suraj i want icecream!!!!!! Now

Arrav decides to drop tina home they see a icecream stand outside and tins spots suraj….
Tina olv suraj i wanna see my future husband….
Tina touches arrav arms…. listen hottie i want icecream to sizzle down the temperature….
arrav sure anything for u arrav kisses tina cheek…
Tina olv all this is worth to see suraj…
Suraj; sure chakor your wish is my command….
Sukor laugh… suraj helps chakor up
Suraj and chakor reach the icecream man…
Chakor; i want a double cone with6 flavours 2 scoops of chocolate 2 of strawberry and 2 of vanilla flavouring….
Suraj olv there she goes again she eating for the 2 people but she is acting like we are having twins….
Suraj;twins??…. ermmmm chakor why are you ordering so much…
Chakor; budu 4 scoops for me and 2 for you well i felt bad cuz in the mall i ate all the pizza…
Suraj olv thank god its only one…
Chakor; why what were you ?….
Suraj; nothing….

The icecream man; vaaa look at u guys u are so a cute couple and oh my god chakor khanna please can i click a selfie with you please….
Chakor;only if you give us one more scoop…
Icecream guy; for chakor khanna i can scarifce my life…
Suraj olv look at this overdrmatic icecream guy flirting with my wife….
Suraj; oh hello enough with your filmy dialogues…
Chakor olv looks like some1 is getting a bit jealous…
Chakor; sure i click a selfie… chakor clicks several pictures with the guy suraj looks on…
Arrav comes with tina….
Tina;suraj…..
Tina hugs suraj and suraj gets irritated ?
Chakor sees tina hugging suraj… this girl cant keep her hands to herself… tina ignores chakor arrav stares at chakor….
Arrav olv suraj seriously won the lottery look at how hot she is wow…. even in pregnancy she is looking so hot man suraj doesnt even need to party anymore he got this beauty to party with all day and night…
Chakor notcies arrav stareing and stands behind suraj….
Arrav oh shit… hi suraj how r u too chakor how is the baby…
Tina; baby i thought suraj was lying…
Chakor olv so he told these low people but doesn’t let me tell anyone
Arrav; lying why would suraj lie i mean you can clearly see chakor belly…
Chakor gets frustrated as she understand arrav has evil intentions
Tina burns in anger…
Icecream man; thank u chakor jee here is a free scoop and the icecream was on the house…
Suraj; well see u guys around…
Arrav hey suraj me and tina will join you save us a seat…
Chakor olv no i dont want this cheap man around me…
Chakor notices a old couple and grabs suraj…
Chakor;suraj lets sit here….
Suraj; but a old couple is there…
Chakor; sowhat…
Sukorsit down…

Tina and arrav see thier is no space so sit behind sukor…
Chakor olv thank god now i can eat my icecream in peace…
Old couple; awwww look at these cute kids having icecream so late at night u know me and my husband came here around your age and since then we have always come here to eat icecream…
Chakor giggles… wow how romantic
Theold woman pulls suraj cheeks…
Old woman; beti ur husband is one handsome man…. you guys look like you are so in love…
Sukor look on… i want you too feed her withyour hands young man
Suraj hesitates…. and looks on
Old woman: comeon she is ur wife if your not gonna feed her will who else will you feed…
chakor laughs…
Moore piya plays… suraj feeds chakor icecream they both get lost into each others eyes…
Tina gets angry and walks off arrav runs after tina…
Old couple; this is what you call true love lokk at how they are lost into each others eyes….

Precap; kamal and the rest of rajvanshi family find out sukor are having a child how will they react will suraj realise heloves chakor has chakor formed a soft bond with suraj….

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    9 Comments

    1. sukorian on July 4, 2017 10:11 am

      oh nice like the twins idea please make them have twins ??

    2. Aanya on July 4, 2017 10:44 am

      Hope so.thnks for this lvly ff.

    3. sukorlover on July 4, 2017 10:49 am

      Awesome update. Sukor moment was cute

    4. Tina on July 4, 2017 11:06 am

      So interesting I love the story????

    5. CrazygirlS.P on July 4, 2017 1:46 pm

      Fantastic

    6. Shanaya on July 4, 2017 2:38 pm

      Awesome update piyal. I missed it alot. Sukor scene were so sweet. Loved it. Waiting for the next.

    7. Crishel on July 4, 2017 6:27 pm

      Awesome update do loved it.Update soon ok

    8. Nemo on July 4, 2017 9:04 pm

      Thanks for updating! Amazing! Sukor are so cute, Can’t wait for the next update.

    9. Bidisha Karar on July 4, 2017 10:52 pm

      Awesome epi.

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