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Home»Fan Fiction»Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff)By Akshada (Part-20)
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Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff)By Akshada (Part-20)

V.V.harshitaBy V.V.harshitaJune 26, 201724 Comments4 Mins Read
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hey guys bak wid the nxt one …this would be a small one plzs bare me…
******************

Sona”s pov :
i started crying
Me:plzs vicky mujhe chodo
vicky: i vil leave u …but aftr my work is done
Me: plzs meri life barbad mat kar plzs vicky
he cam near me took me in his arms
Me: plzs plzs vicky leave me i am srry fr wht i did
he threw me on the bed but before he could cam on top of me i r4an naer the door
and started shouting
HELP ME PLZ S
ANYONE THR HELP ME
HELP ME PLZS
PLZ PLZS KOYI HAI
my hands were tied….so i was nt able to do anything
he cam near me again took me in his arms and again threw me on the bed …but this time before i cold escape he caught me
Vicky: na na na na u cant escape…
he cam closer to me and kissed my cheeks …i turned my face and struggled in his arms he tore my sleeves …and kissed my shoulder…i tried my best to push him but he was strong….he tore a bit of my shirt…and tried to tear more but i did nt let him do..tht
this shuld nt happen to me …pls plzs plzs god !!
and suddenly some one breaked the door
Vicky got up frm me
wen i saw who was it

it was

MR.DEV
hw is he here i mean hw did he even cm to knw tht i am here ….
i ran to mr.dev and hugged him tightly…i felt so….secured in his arms …he too hugged me bak …we broke the hug…he took look ovr me and gave his ovr coat and made me to wear it
he is seriously my god
i wisphered a a thank u ti him
before we could get inside the car
mr.dev:inspector one sec
he tunred towards me
mr.dev: ms..sona …aap jo bhi punishment dena chati ho wo..dedo usse
end of Sona’s pov

Dev’s pov:
i seriously was nt nt able to see hr in tht state…i felt like killing him….hw dare he touch my sona …
i told sona to give hima gud punishment
she went near him…..and took hr slippers and gave him left and right 4 times
and then we both sat and i started driving …
while driving she was taking glances of me
me:app kyu aise dekh rahiho??
sona:kuch nahi
sona: mr.dev
me:yup
sona: if u dont mind can i open my window …nw i jst need some cool breeze
hmm i can understand hr situation
me: sure
i switched off the AC and opened my window too….
after some mins she again started behaving wired …
me: aap kyu itni reatless ho??
sona: wo….hmm….hmmm…..i….
me:continue
sona:…i am …….damn…hungry….wo..i did nt eat anything frm 12 noon…
is she mad!! she did nt eat anytime ??
i hope she felt a little shy to ask me
me: hmm..kk i will jst check out if thr is any hotel here
and aftr 15 mins we found a hotel …i parked my car….we both went inside
we ordered some dishes
servant: sir we hav special couple food over here
omg!! he thought us as couple nt bad!!
me: we r nt couples hmm…
servant: oh i am srry sir aap dono ko dekh kar mujhe aise hi laga
nt bad wow !! tht was an awsm complement by him…i think shuld give him a nice tips
and suddenly some one cam
guy: sir aap aap…wo actor dev dixit hai na ….
dev:hmm…
guy: sir aapki wife bohot hi kubsoorat hai…
wow!! they thought hr as my wife..i hope we both look gud as a pair…nw i think shuld give him more tips (oh hello dev ..this is too much yaar hahahahaaha heheehehe)
dev: wo..meri biwi nahi hai…hmm
end of devs pov

SONA’s pov:
i did nt like wen he said we r nt couples and again wen he said tht i am nt his wife…i seriously dont knw why..i am so…into him…nw….maybe coz he saved me..or…is…this..
no way sona hw can he love u…he vil get better no best gril than u !! stop ovr thinking…..but if he is also…shut up sona

/****************
so thts it guys i am seriosuly srry fr a short one but nxt time i vil try my best to post a longer one and bare my mistakes plzs
bye frm AKSHADA and Harshita

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V.V.harshita

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    24 Comments

    1. Star on June 26, 2017 9:45 am

      Bakwaas hai …. Boring ?

    2. Muthash on June 26, 2017 10:19 am

      Finally dev came for rescue….

      • V.V.harshita on June 26, 2017 3:55 pm

        Yup thnxs

    3. akshita on June 26, 2017 1:05 pm

      Its nive yr do you updated it on wattpad too if yes then plzzz tell??

      • V.V.harshita on June 26, 2017 3:56 pm

        Thnxs vil post asap

      • akshita on June 27, 2017 12:42 am

        Are you in wattpad??

    4. Ritya on June 26, 2017 1:21 pm

      Wanted a fight sequence ?? but koi na its ohk and that couple and wife vala part was awsome ??

      • V.V.harshita on June 26, 2017 3:56 pm

        I am srry fr nt giving a fight sequence ….seriously srry and vil post asap

    5. Harshita on June 26, 2017 1:45 pm

      it was amazing
      it just love it
      post asap

      • V.V.harshita on June 26, 2017 8:37 pm

        Thnxs vil post asap

    6. Ekani on June 26, 2017 7:53 pm

      really good…dev saves his sona…& vicky’s punishment given by sona…he deserves it…
      couples part..amazing…post asap…love u

      • V.V.harshita on June 26, 2017 8:36 pm

        Thnxs vil post asap

    7. MANSINAIK on June 26, 2017 8:21 pm

      Couple and wife was amazing
      Post asap

      • V.V.harshita on July 2, 2017 11:12 am

        Thnxs

    8. darshana on June 26, 2017 8:38 pm

      It was superb dear..post asap?

      • V.V.harshita on July 2, 2017 11:12 am

        Thnxs vil post asap

    9. Abhirami on June 26, 2017 10:23 pm

      ??? finally dev arrived r else…….???

      • V.V.harshita on July 2, 2017 11:13 am

        Thnxs

    10. Fan Lover on June 27, 2017 2:51 am

      Awesomeee plsss post soon

      • V.V.harshita on July 2, 2017 11:13 am

        Thnxs vil post soon

    11. Princess. on June 28, 2017 11:02 am

      Awesome Awesome

      • V.V.harshita on July 2, 2017 11:16 am

        Thnxs

    12. Aarti32 on July 1, 2017 6:06 pm

      Awesome episode..thank God Dev came on time

      • V.V.harshita on July 2, 2017 11:16 am

        Thnxs

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