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When she coloured my canvas – IB & DBO – Colour 35

Shraddha-DBOBy Shraddha-DBOJune 23, 201720 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I’m back with a khidkitod double DHAMAKA

Thanks to my cousin who is posting this.Sorry I haven’t read ur comments till now, but I can guess ur comments on last part.

For previous chappies http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/11299/?profiletab=posts

Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attacked Gouri again,but was saved by Om & rikara married.
Shivom faces business rivalry from Mr.Lal. Gouri is carrying since 5 months,rikara meet with an accident.

Hope u would like this chappy.Sorry for typo errors,try to give a colour for this.

Colour 35

Om was slowly opening his eyes; he felt strange seeing the hospital room.He could feel his whole body aching.He couldn’t move an inch.But the fb of all incidents made him tensed about Gouri’s situation.

He clearly remember driving straight while he noticed a big lorry coming from opposite side just facing them
He thought to turn the car by one side, but the lorry accelerated and hit their car.He remember screaming her name in top of his voice & holding her hand .The car lost its control,he could hear her cry…

And now as he opened the eyes he saw this hospital room.A thousand fears were engulfing him.As he was about to move he saw anika coming in.
O: bhabhi bhabhi, mera gouri…humare baccha….
A: don’t worry Om, Gouri is absolutely fine.She is safe…..
O: ha… thank u bhabhi….did everyone come.
A: No only shivru & me.V didn’t tell.anyone else.
O: when can v go home bhabhi.

” Soon Mr.oberoi”, told a voice.It was the doctor.
D: it’s miraculous, it was a big accident according to witnesses but both of u r absolutely ok except for some fractures in hands & legs.
O: can I see gouri?
D: no Mr.oberoi both of u need rest.& she cannot me made stressed in this condition.

Anika stared at the doctor.
O: yes, it’s 5 months for her.Fine.when can I see her.
D: tomorrow morning.Probably by tomorrow evening u can b discharged.But make sure both of u take ample rest.Dont stress ur bodies.Else fractures might become worse.

Om was relieved but he was feeling sleepy due to the power of sedatives.He smiled thinking of his meeting with gouri….

Next day morning, he saw his mom near him.She was going to feed him some porridge.But he was restless to meet her…..

Some how he managed to stand up.He could feel his body shrinking in pain but it was washed off by his desire to meet gouri.As he slowly limbed to the ward , he saw gouri sleeping soundly.Jhanvi slowly made him sit near gouri; he could see his mom’s eyes wet on seeing gouri.He was happy that she was fine.

He watched her sleeping and after 2 mins she opened her eyes slowly.She was amazed to see him.Om was happy on seeing her & he slowly kissed her forehead.Gouris eyes were tired; it was red.He slowly caressed her face.He saw that she was crying.He slowly kept his hand on her abdomen & smiled looking her.

She was terrified; she let out the whole ocean of depression in her mind & began crying hardly.Om was surprised seeing this.Gouri kept her hand on his which was resting on her abdomen & shook her head in negative…

Om was trembling; he thought his heart stopped beating for a second.He thought his breath had stopped for a second.He feared to think that….that his baby was no more…

He didn’t know how to console gouri who was crying her heart out.He had never seen her in this state; not even when Kali was about to kill her.He thought, losing one’s life was not more important than losing one’s part of life.

He sat frozen there; with a blank face.Tears were not ready to flow out.He heard shivay screaming & coming in.He was shaking a frozen Om; but Om wasn’t knowing anything.He didn’t even know shivay taking him back to his ward.

All worried because at one side gouri was crying out her life whereas Om was simply laying down blankly with open eyes; he wasn’t talking, seeing or feeling anything…..

Gouri was slowly walking to their room with the help of bhabhi.She had been in dadi’s room for hours crying on her lap.But dadi’s consoling couldn’t calm her inner storm.Somehow she managed to stop crying & now she want to seeOm.All of them told that he wasn’t responding to anything.She didn’t know how to face him.She remember him coming to see her but she was not in her senses as she was totally dipped in depression.

As she entered their room she saw Om resting on the bed with open eyes.Anika helped her to sit on the other side of the bed silently; she closed the door & went out.

Gouri was seeing him.After almost 5 mins, he slightly turned his head to her.She could see a raging storm in his eyes which he was controlling hardly.She slightly moved towards him & cupped his face.Their faces were so close as they sat on the bed.Their eyes were searching for something in each other’s eyes; may be peace, comfort or solace.She could hear his fast breathing & beating heart….
She said to him, “cry out your heart Omkaraji!!!”

As if waiting to hear this, he pressed his face against her chest & began crying.With each second, the intensity of his sobbing was increasing; she worried whether he would burst out.Because he had been holding all this pain for 2 days.She began stroking his hair & his back.She was giving all the peace she had found out after crying for these days, away to him.She slowly kissed his ears& then his temple, then his hairs.This seemed to calm him, his voice was slowly diminishing.Their breaths & heartbeats were in since now.He raised his head.His eyes & nose were red due to crying; gouri couldn’t bear him in this state.She began kissing out his tears.He was trying to talk after all these days.

O: do….do…do u hate me gouri…
He didn’t complete the sentence because she covered his mouth.
G: how can I hate my bhagvan???

Once again they hugged; it was a bone crushing tight.Their already paining body was even more hurting due to the hug.But this gave them the solace; at least temporarily…

Sleepless night it was for them in their room.Gouri was simply mixing some colours and stroking in the paper.Om was staring the moon.Suddenly his moist eyes became furious.Fire was blazing in his tired eyes.

He immediately called shivay…..
Sh: bolo na Om…kuch discomfort?
O: sorry shivay to call u at this hour…
S: leave it bro, just tell me…

Shivay was shocked hearing it!!!!

My heart was paining while I was writing this…. please do tell me ur reactions guys….Don’t kill me for this, I know no.of comments r gonna b low for this.

Stay tuned, next chap coming right behind.

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    20 Comments

    1. fffan1234 on June 23, 2017 6:43 pm

      Very nice. Poor RiKara?

    2. keziaaaaaaaaaaaaaa on June 23, 2017 7:00 pm

      full emotional and making us thrilling in each scence ,i give black color for unbelievable situvation

    3. Richa19 on June 23, 2017 7:00 pm

      I’m feeling so sad for rikara… Poor they…. ?? I guess their rival has planned all this…. Pls post soon yaar

    4. Palak on June 23, 2017 7:05 pm

      Fabulous but sad they lost the baby

    5. keziaaaaaaaaaaaaa on June 23, 2017 7:13 pm

      full emotional and making us thrilling in each scence ,i give black color for unbelievable situvation

    6. simrat_14 on June 23, 2017 7:13 pm

      Oh nooo?. Nice update ?

    7. Aarti32 on June 23, 2017 7:27 pm

      Super thrilling..update soon

    8. Bubblu on June 23, 2017 7:34 pm

      emotional one didi…very sad for Rikara…hope the nxt one sooth out the pain in them..Black colour for condelence

    9. nikita_jai29 on June 23, 2017 7:39 pm

      It is nice one dear.. Grey color for sadness

    10. Charitha on June 23, 2017 7:42 pm

      Awesome

    11. Dini on June 23, 2017 8:00 pm

      why did u do this to Rikara

    12. alekhika20 on June 23, 2017 8:15 pm

      Emotional update

    13. Anusuya on June 23, 2017 8:40 pm

      What a sad chappy!But it was written nicely.almost started crying after reading this.
      Colour-white for those blank moments of sadness.

    14. Sairan on June 23, 2017 9:07 pm

      Fantastic fabulous EPISODE ?????

    15. Sakash. on June 23, 2017 9:47 pm

      Hi shraffs.I am Sakash.Touched my heart ?to the core dear.Love u & ur FF dear.

    16. Verna on June 23, 2017 9:57 pm

      I.really wanted to kill u right now.. just text me ur address.. I’ll come to trivandrum and just kill u.. y r u giving so much pain for my Om.. I hate u Shraddha

    17. Sagithya on June 23, 2017 11:10 pm

      It was full of emotional yaar…. U made me to cry…

    18. UF on June 24, 2017 2:12 am

      AWESOME EMOTIONAL??? HEART TOUCHING SUPERB??????

    19. Niriha on June 24, 2017 7:44 am

      Awesome….it’s very emotional part ???

    20. Aarti32 on June 24, 2017 1:23 pm

      Emotional one..but feel bad for OmRi

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