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Ambaraan barasya paani.. mitti di khusboo (Epilogue)

AstraBy AstraJune 23, 201735 Comments8 Mins Read
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Epilogue of Ambaran barasya paani.. mitti di khusboo..

The weather is cool, with the just arrived clouds. The wind is coming which is about to turn as storm.
The couple were walking on the side of road. She is holding his arm completely and her head is resting on his shoulder. He was holding his love’s palm. They are rubbing eo’s palms. Both have a too pleasant smile. As it was their beautiful time.

“Ladoo..”

“Ha lucky..”

She says with his call Ladoo. Her real name is Ragini. But she loves when he calls her “ladoo..” His real name is Laksh, but he loves to hear “lucky” from her honey secreting lips.

Lucky remains calm after calling her. He just called her to listen his name from her mouth. And she too knew it very well. She too remains calm smiling after that. Sometimes, this silence is their language to share many underneath feelings. Because, in that silence they experience their heart beats which are louder than any high pitch sounds in this universe.

That cool wind slowly took it furious form and a big wind starts blowing. Ragini holds his arm tighter.
“Aa..” she holds her eyes as something went in to them. Laksh holds her head. He stops Ragini from rubbing her eyes. He makes her open her eyes and he slowly blows air into her eye. His hot touches her cheek making Ragini blush and she turns her head in smile.

She rubs her shoulders in shy and Laksh slowly moves his fingers on her shoulder and then he gently grabs her near. Rag was bending her head rubbing her both hands.

Laksh always love his shy wife, and Ragini loves her silly husband. Her face becomes nervous when he keeps pulling her more near.

“Lucky, all are looking at us.” She tries to move far but he holds her near.
“Ladoo, let them see. But, I won’t leave you.” He says looking at her.
“You are very adamant Lucky..” she says putting her hand around his waist. Then she lands her head on his chest again.
“Hmm, now people aren’t seeing..?” Laksh asks rubbing her shoulder.
“Let them see. I’m holding my husband..! What’s their problem..?” She asks.
Laksh laughs. Then Ragini moves other hand on his chest. Laksh looks at her. She was looking at him. He places other hand on her cheek.

“Ladoo..” he says and pulls her cheek. “Lucky..!” She blushes and hides her face in his chest.
That stormy wind has calmed a little and the sky starts showering water.

“It’s raining.” Ragini exclaims in happiness. “You want to get wet?” He asks.
“No. you will catch cold.” Ragini says,

The rain starts with full fledge. They start getting wet soon. Laksh removes his over coat and places it above both of them. Both runs to a near shelter taking shelter of his coat.

Both run down to that shelter. They are laughing. They are panting as they ran. Both look at each other. Laksh steadily looks at the thin water droplets which are running on her face and touching her lips. Maybe due to that, her lips are trembling. Ragini moves her eyes aside with intensity in his looks.
Laksh suddenly holds her waist and drags her near. Both look at each other and Ragini closes her eyes.

A thunder strikes…

And Ragini clutches his shirt more tightly, Laksh locks her in his embrace…

They remember what has just happened two days back….

It’s their engagement…

Ragini was happy, her love was back to her. She thought Laksh has rejected her all these days.. but, he has searched for her.

Laksh places ring to Ragini. So, actually Ragini is not talking with him now…
(he acted as if he don’t know Ragini right..)
Laksh was looking at her in smile. But she… hmm, she was also acting as if she is angry. But, her heart is shouting like anything to talk with him.
Actually, Ragini face has veil.. as in their custom, groom shouldn’t see bride before marriage..

‘Talk with me naa Ragini..’ Laksh asks like cute kitten. Ragini laughs inside her veil, however Laksh can’t see her.

Later, Janaki takes away Ragini as she has to do many rituals. They don’t get chance to talk.

Ragini was clearing her make up in her room.
“Oh no, how girls makeup..?? i can’t bear all these things..!!” she rubs her eyes and her kajal spreads all over her eyes.

Ragini laughs looking at herself. Laksh who secretly enters into room, looks at her through mirror.
As Ragini was setting her hair too, it falls on her face. Laksh scares looking at her. Ragini turns at him. Laksh then starts laughing.
Ragini starts shouting angrily,
“Hey, why did you come here..?? get out..!!”
Laksh gets even more laugh as she is shouting. He takes video of her. “Ragini, let’s show this to our kids in future.. they will scare and listen to you.”

Ragini gets angry and chases him to take the cell. Laksh runs. Janaki and Daadi sees this scene.

Daadi: arey, they are not supposed to meet before marriage..!! but, they are running like this..?
Janaki: generation maa..! generation..!!

Laksh stops and turns back, but Ragini who was still running, falls on him. Laksh falls on ground and Ragini is over him.

Daadi beats her head with hand, “Notorious generation Janaki..!! Notorious..!!”
Janaki laughs.

Ragini and Laksh look at each other. Soon, Ragini gets from Laksh and she turns away her face in pout.
“Hey, if you don’t like.. i will delete it. I was just kidding..!!” Laksh says and about to delete it. But, Ragini stops him.
“Let it be, it will be sweet memory after marriage” she says.

Laksh smiles and about to kiss her, but she slaps his face gently.
“Anything after marriage..!!” she says and goes away.

“It took four years to reach you..!! i don’t know how many days will it take to kiss you..!!” Laksh sighs.

Next day, their marriage. Laksh fills Ragini’s maang and makes her his assert.
‘You are mine Ragini’ he says in smirk while tying mangal sutr.
Ragini blushes bending her head.

Shekar, “janu, see our ladoo is behaving as a girl first time..!!”
All around laughs, Ragini glares at Shekar.. he hides behind daadi.

In MM, in Laksh’s room which is decorated. Ragini is sitting in centre of bed.. and she is crying..!
Laksh was sitting with tissue box beside her and supplying tissues for her tears. Ragini was kept on wiping her tears and her eyes become smudge with Kajal. Laksh laughs…
(awww.. we all know how cutely Nami laughs know.. imagine that laugh)

Ragini beats him,
“are you laughing, while i’m crying..!!” she says in cry tone.

Laksh:: then.? You started crying during bidaai time. And, it has been two hours and still your are crying. We live in same town. We will meet your parents when ever you miss them..? why to cry this much..??

Ragini looks at Laksh innocently with his continues speech stopping crying. Looking at her eyes he controls laugh again.. Ragini frowns her eyes..
Then Laksh cups her face and kisses her forehead.
“Aww, mera baccha..! you are my ladoo from today.”
Ragini smiles.
“you are my luck..! so lucky..!!”

Laksh smiles and hugs her to heart. Ragini buries her face happily in his embrace.
That’s why, both love to be called with those names.

Fb ends..

The rain which is falling on the ground is shown. The drops slowly get dispersed. The rain stops. The drops which are falling from the leaves is shown. The clouds in the sky get cleared.

Ragini who was placing her hands on his shoulder removes her hands, Laksh removes hands from her waist. Both move their faces far opening their eyes. They look at each other. Ragini smiles and bites her lips. His saliva was travelling on her lips and her lipstick was glued to his lips. Just to show how deep and intense lip lock they have gone through just now.

Ragini was about to rub her lips, but Laksh places his thumb on her lips and rubs them gently. Ragini closes her eyes.
“Do it to me..!!” Laksh orders her. Ragini laughs as his lips turn red as he has bite a cherry just now. Ragini rubs the gloss over his lips.

“I love you.” Laksh says.
Ragini gets tears, “say it again Laksh”
“I love you Ragini”
Ragini happily hugs him. Ladoo and Lucky are one now.

Laksh holds her hand, Ragini again holds his arm completely and places her head on his shoulder. They keep walking on that wet road again. Their palms are rubbing eo palms.

Again the silent prevails for minutes, because their hearts are busy in talking.

“Ladoo..” he calls, “lucky..” she calls.

Both smile and they keep walking….

Ambaran barasya paani…. song starts playing…

The end.

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    35 Comments

    1. lovely7 on June 23, 2017 2:17 pm

      Amazing

      • Astra on June 23, 2017 5:15 pm

        thanks dear

    2. tania-the fairy on June 23, 2017 2:42 pm

      FOR THE first time I loved some ff.actually I dont like reading ff.but it stole my heart.I always wanted to se raglak.but when they didnt give them I stopped watching sawragini.but this ff filled d blank.countinue………
      not some but 1 ff.

      • Astra on June 23, 2017 5:16 pm

        thank you tania

    3. Rehna on June 23, 2017 2:48 pm

      Amazing loved it a lot dear

      • Astra on June 23, 2017 5:17 pm

        thanks rehna

    4. avika on June 23, 2017 3:14 pm

      awesomeee

      • Astra on June 23, 2017 5:18 pm

        thanks avika

    5. Pearly on June 23, 2017 4:10 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on June 23, 2017 5:19 pm

        thanks pearly

    6. Arjuna on June 23, 2017 4:27 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Astra on June 23, 2017 5:19 pm

        thank you

    7. dharani on June 23, 2017 5:19 pm

      Awesome

    8. Jiyani on June 23, 2017 6:04 pm

      Awesome end

    9. ROJARANI on June 23, 2017 7:11 pm

      It is very nice I will miss this ff

    10. abi on June 23, 2017 7:18 pm

      Cute raglak and cute story
      I will miss this ff
      “Cursed pendant” I read this ff I’m a raglak page but didn’t commented. Awesome ff
      It’s superb. Keep it up

      • abi on June 23, 2017 7:18 pm

        *in

    11. Sherin on June 23, 2017 7:48 pm

      Awesome dear

    12. Asw on June 23, 2017 8:49 pm

      Amazing ?

    13. Ammu on June 23, 2017 9:11 pm

      Outstanding epilogue dear ???? Raglak scenes are really beautiful ???? Loved it a lot specially Raglak rain romance ????. Love you dear and take care ??????

    14. Monisha on June 23, 2017 9:44 pm

      Awesome

    15. Mintu on June 23, 2017 10:00 pm

      Awesome sis

    16. Akshata on June 23, 2017 10:53 pm

      romance in the rain….. nice…. nice.. i loved it when dadi said,” “Notorious generation Janaki..!! Notorious”. yup she is right we all are very notorious. last but not the least, the way you have written their kiss, i was like astra u are becoming naughty n notorious day by day.

    17. Soumya on June 24, 2017 10:31 am

      Simply superb di….post next soon

    18. Anju on June 24, 2017 11:00 am

      Awesome

    19. Vennila on June 24, 2017 1:26 pm

      Superb

    20. Elizebathlovely on June 24, 2017 2:32 pm

      Awesome part

    21. Laashya on June 24, 2017 2:52 pm

      Fantastic epilogue

    22. Aamy on June 24, 2017 3:36 pm

      awesome

    23. Malu on June 24, 2017 3:37 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Malu on June 24, 2017 3:37 pm

        sry i mean write more

    24. Ashly on June 24, 2017 4:55 pm

      Fantastic superb amazing

    25. Monu on June 24, 2017 5:35 pm

      Awesome episode

    26. Vini on June 24, 2017 7:32 pm

      Good epilogue

    27. IQRA222 on June 25, 2017 6:31 pm

      oh my god asthu di this was fab so much totally in love with this ff
      i am all over a fan of it
      the epilogue relived all my memories of this wonderful ff
      loved thier moments
      and laughed too much on dadi’s comment

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