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Teri Meri Love Stories….few shots by Zaimal (episode 1)

zaimalBy zaimalJune 21, 201786 Comments12 Mins Read
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“sanskar… let’s go” a boy said after entering inside the study but was shocked to see the scene. sanskar left swara’s hand. swara turned back.
” swara!….” boy said with mixed feeling of shock, surprise and happiness.
“Adi….” swara said happily, run and hug him. Boy left her up from the ground and twirl her.
Sanskar felt strange with their closeness.
Adi put her back on the ground.
“what a pleasant surprise… I started forgetting your face” adi said patting her cheek. swara just smiles. sanskar clears her throat.

Adi(adharsh) and swara looked at him
“oh sanskar….I guess we have to spend our plan…..need to spend time with sister” adharsh said,smiling warmly.
sanskar nodded,feeling deep relief suddenly.

“will not introduce us” sanskar said, looking at swara with deep eyes.
“swara…he is sanskar my best friend, ASP….and sanskar, she is my elder sister swara…now you go get fresh…u must be tired” adi said in one breath and push swara toward door. swara chuckles at his antics, picks her bag and left from their, without giving second look to sanskar.
Adi looks at sanskar, with raised eye brow, who was looking at the door from which swara left.
“where are you lost bro!” Adi said confused.
sanskar looks at him and said”I am here only….u will send me without lunch”
“say it straight…..u want to eat mom’s hands food” Adi said chuckling and both walked toward dining hall.

“Sanskar child…you are not eating anything….take this dish” shomi said forwarding dish toward him.
“aunty my plate is full…” sanskar said and looked around with narrowed eyes.
“oye!….where are you looking? uttra is not at home…. she went for vacations with her friends” Adi whispered in sanskar’s ear in teasing tone.
Sanskar looked at him dryly.
“swara had come?….” shekhar asked in strict tone without any affection in it.
“yes dad…” Adi said quickly.
shomi murmured something under her breath

“didn’t come for lunch?” shekhar asked in more strict tone.
“She is tired dad…taking rest in her room….I will take her out in evening” Adi said smiling.
shekhar nodded. sanskar sighed heavily and concentrate on his food
******************
Evening

“swara….I am warning you….after two days there is my show, dare if you missed that” kavita’s threatening voice came out from swara’s mobile.
“I will reach there before your show’s starting….okay?” swara said, making face. it was her third call in which she was repeating the sane phrase again and again
“okay!…” kavita said and cut the call. swara shook her head in disbelief.
“swara!….are you ready?” adi said loudly from down stairs.
swara quickly throw her phone inside her bag, keep it on shoulder and run outside

At Night

Swara and adi stepped inside the house, eating ice cream together of same orange flavour.
“you came?…” shomi said in firm tone, crossing her arms. shekhar was sitting on big single sofa in businessman attire.
Swara’s face expressions changed to flat immediately.
“What you think of this house….. police station…whenever you want, you will come and whenever you want you will leave” shomi said angrily
“mom what’s wrong….. she just came today and you are behaving like this?..” adharsh said, confused and somewhat angry.

“Adiharsh….don’t speak in between…go to your room” shekhar scolded him.
“but dad….” adi tried to speak but swara holds his hand and sign him to go.
Adi left from their,angry like hell.
“what were you saying Mrs.gadodia?…..what I think?….first tell me who give you right to ask question from me?” swara said focusing on the woman,standing in front of her.
Shomi looked at shekhar.
“she is your mother” shekhar said angrily. swara’s blood boiled.

“She is not my mother and pitch low Mr.gadodia” swara said in firm voice. after saying she left from there. shekhar and shomi just saw her leaving with erect head.
swara picks up her bag and starts throwing few things in it which she take out in morning.Her face was expression less.
“you are leaving?…” Adi asked,standing at door step. swara zipped her bag and turned.
“yup…” swara said,put bag on shoulder and stands in front of him
“I just came to meet you….time to leave now” swara said with smile.
“I don’t understand why mom and dad behave like this with you” adi said, passing his fingers from hair.

“it is because you are younger to me” swara said pulling his cheek.
“oh hello madam…..I am not younger than you….”adi said glaring at her.
“from brain….I meant” swara said teasing him.
Adi jaw dropped to the ground.
swara hug him and said”bye….take care”
“bye….you too take care….tell me your address….I will come to meet you otherwise you will not show your face for three years” adi said hugging her back.
“I will come…” swara said,break hug and left.

Airport

“ma’am next flight for Mumbai is in morning” receptionist informed her.
“thank you…” swara said and start waiting on airport.
****************
Mumbai

“Thank you so much for your donation” mother said to a lady,sitting in front of her.
“don’t thank me….but I want to know where you will spend this money.i mean to say this orphanage is best developed orphanage of Mumbai….every facility is present here….this look more a five start hotel than orphanage” lady said, looking around.
Mother chuckled lightly at that.
“it all because of my daughters……spend all their money at orphanage” mother said with full love.

“you are not married….are you?” lady asked giggling.
“they live in orphanage….” mother said laughing.
“they seem very close to you?”
“hmm…..they are my daughters….swara,ragini,kavya and kavita……they are four shining stars of orphanage” mother said with proud.
“if I am not wrong…… are you talking about…..”
Her sentence was not completed when our shining stars came with bang.
“kavita!….I am warning you, shut your mouth before I break it” ragini said in threatening voice.
“you shut your mouth” kavita said in more angry voice
kavya and swara were giggling.they sit with mother on large couch.
all four started telling mother about their in one go.
“one….one second…first meet Mrs.kapoor…….she donated 1 lack for orphanage” mother said, putting barrier in front of their tongue.
they greets her like good girls.

“look like…..all famous celebrates of Mumbai are here” Mrs.kapoor said chuckling.
All laughed.
“don’t worry about your money…..we will use to enlarge the orphanage where girls will get education”
Mrs.kapoor nodded, smiling.
“you all go get fresh….” mother said and they left without any objection.
“mother……don’t you think its time for their marriage……I mean to say I know them very well……their need are always on front page of newspaper…. they are successful then?” Mrs.kapoor said with little hesitation.
“Never take marriage word in front of them…..” mother said

“what do you mean?” Mrs.kapoor asked being confused.
“I am sorry child but I believe we should not talk about past” mother said.Mrs.kapoor understands that she don’t want to share.
“Don’t worry everything will be alright” Mrs.kapoor said and gets up to leave.Mother also gets up and show her the way.Mrs.kapoor stopped in front of football playground and saw girls playing football together. Their low laughter voices were touching her ears.she smiled and stepped out from gate.
Mother was still looking at girls.
“Jesus plz do any miracle and fill their lives with happiness” mother murmured sadly with glimpse of tears in eyes.
***************
Morning

“Pick me at 6….” kavita said,closing the car door.
“okay madam…..” ragini said and drove the car.
kavita entered inside the fashion house and direct went to her cabin and looked at the dress which shows topper was going to wear.she checked it carefully and start working on other designs.
Meanwhile her boss entered the cabin.kavita turned and look at him.
Her boss Sahil maheswari. Owner of maheswari fashion house and industry.Handsome and hot looking.he was friendly with everyone except kavita.he talks with her only if their is work but still

he was number one ‘CHIPO’ in kavita’s list.
“Good morning miss kavita…..” sahil wished her. kavita him fake smile instead of wishing him back as usual.
“tomorrow is very important show….I hope all designs are ready but still check them again and…..”
his sentence was not completed when kavita cut him.

“I don’t need your advice,I very well know how to do my work” kavita snapped at him.
“And staff complains I behave differently with her” sahil thought in his mind looking at her with small unseen smile on lips as kavita was still scolding him like she was his boss. sahil got call while getting scolding from kavita.
“one second miss kavita” sahil said and attended the call.
“what!!!!!…” sahil said shocked after hearing something.
“I am coming….” sahil said and cut the call.
“miss kavita I will complete this scolding session some other day” sahil said and hurriedly left from there. kavita turned back to work cursing him
*************

“hold the steering wheel tight” kavya advised ragini sitting on back seat.
“I know how to drive” ragini said irritated.
“don’t talk…..focus on the road..u will hit someone” swara scolded her. ragini turns her head and looked at her angrily. kavya slaps her from behind.
“look at the road and decrease the speed you are still learning” kavya said
“I am already driving at 30km/s…” ragini said making face.
“do oy 15……so that if u hit someone, it should not cause big damage” swara said
ragini decrease the speed,cursing both
swara and kavya keep on giving her instructions.
“you two come and drive….” ragini said angry like hell.she left the staring and crossed her arms over chest.

BOOM!!!!!!!
their car hit against another and car was still moving making first car also moving.
Girls bended forward.kavya’s head strikes with seat.ragini’s head with steering wheel,swara’s with dashboard
“God….” ragini said rubbing her forehead.
“hey bhagwan…” kavya cried
“f**k..” swara said angrily

Car was still moving
“stop the carrrr….” kavya and swara shouted coming back to their senses. ragini applied the break and trio came out and looked at the damage. front portion was hanging down and lights were broken.
trio bested their forehead.
“I guess its 3rd time in one month” kavya said dryly.
“Bhai’s catr….” horrified voice of a boy touched their ears. girls turned their heads and looked at the two boys who were completely bend over their car. Both boys get straight and throw daggers at them.

“I have heard girl’s driving have improved………THIS IS IMPROVEMENT,DIDN’T SEE THAT RED SIGNAL” boy said first sentence in dilemma and last shouted on their face.
girls got angry.
“there….there is red signal” same boy said pointing at their back.
“DONE……” ragini said and trio girls crossed their arms.
Boys jaw dropped to the ground at their attitude.

“let’s go” kavya said and trio turned to leave.
“oh hello! madam show this atti…..” 2nd boy said holding kavys’s arm
but his sentence was left incomplete with tight slap of kavya.
“how dare you touch me” kavya said angrily. boy freezes their with one hand on cheek.
girls give them dirty look.
“jerks….”they give them compliment ,sit inside the car and left.
2nd boy walks car with hand on cheek and sit inside. first boy called twice and informed them to come home.
**************
Maheswari Mention

Sanskar and sahil hurriedly entered the hall together.
” lakshya!!!….” sanskar shouted worriedly.
“lucky….” sahil shouted
“we are here…” lucky said,signalling them to come there.
both goes and sit on couch with him.

“why u called me so urgently” sanskar asked.
“everything alright?” sahil asked.
“look there.” lucky said pointing forward.sahil and sanskar looks forward.
“karan why are u sitting like this(with one hand on cheek)” sanskar asked.
“he got his first ever slap today that too from a girl” lucky said dramatically.
“what….” sahil and sanskar said shocked. In next moment hall echoed with sahil and Lucky’s laughter voice. sanskar pressed his lips to hide his smile.
“bhai see they are laughing” karan complained to sanskar like whining child.sanskar clears his throat

sahil and lucky stop laughing but was still giggling.
“how this happened?” sanskar asked in composed tone.
“we were waiting for signal to turn green and suddenly they hit our car from behind…we were shouting to stop the car but didn’t listen to us and when we confronted them then they showed us attitude and tried to leave I just her hand to stop her and in response she give me tight slap” karan repeated the scene to them like baby.
“you should not have hold her hand” sanskar said softly.
“bhai I was not going to take her to moon” karan said complaining.
“its alright…this moment comes in every men lives….you should face it bravely” sahil said chuckling

“Gentlemen plz hold this candles and keep silence for 3 minutes in sorrow of our younger brother’s first slap anddddd for bhai’s car accident” lucky said giving them burning candles.
“you both took my car” sanskar asked in serious tone.
“kaka off the lights plz” lucky shouted hurriedly, avoiding sanskar question. sanskar shook her head and prepared himself for the idiotic thing. trio kept silence for 3 minutes and karan was sitting between them with hand on cheek.
********************
Thank you so much guts for such warming and loving comments. I hope u all will like this part also and leave comments.

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    86 Comments

    1. pummy on June 21, 2017 8:51 pm

      Awesme pñpt nxt part soon

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:11 pm

        Thanks a lot

    2. Simin on June 21, 2017 8:54 pm

      Like i loved it
      Amazing part n amazing story zaimal
      Hayeeee din bana diya
      Strong,bold women
      Plz post next soon……..

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:12 pm

        Thank you so much.
        Welcome for making you day.

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:12 pm

        Your*

    3. Rockleon on June 21, 2017 8:55 pm

      GOD zaimal u r crazy girl!!!
      That light and candel idea is craxy and only u can do that !!!
      Weellits aawesome!!!

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:13 pm

        Hahaha….thank you for compliment

    4. Deepti on June 21, 2017 8:57 pm

      simply awesome loved it .will be awaiting for next epi eagerly

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:14 pm

        Thanks a lot

    5. Guna on June 21, 2017 9:04 pm

      Ha ha zaimal.poor Karan y these gls behave so rude to them?

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:18 pm

        They hate all men in world therefore they behave rude

    6. sethidisha002 on June 21, 2017 9:19 pm

      Mast

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:18 pm

        Thanks

    7. Rachna on June 21, 2017 9:25 pm

      Awsm Dr… Update soon

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:21 pm

        Thank you

    8. Tamil on June 21, 2017 9:36 pm

      Awesome dear…..loved their bond

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:21 pm

        Thanks you

    9. independent on June 21, 2017 9:56 pm

      Amazing dear

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:22 pm

        Thanks

    10. SHAN on June 21, 2017 10:39 pm

      Awesome dr

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:23 pm

        Thanks you

    11. Kuttu on June 21, 2017 10:46 pm

      Oh my god…..its awesome…..pls be back soon….

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:24 pm

        Thanks a lot

    12. Sus on June 21, 2017 10:46 pm

      well lovly dear

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:24 pm

        Thanks

    13. Kumu on June 21, 2017 10:48 pm

      Amazing..tc..

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:25 pm

        Thanks

    14. Stg on June 21, 2017 10:49 pm

      awesome ?

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:26 pm

        Thank you

    15. Suma on June 21, 2017 10:50 pm

      Nice

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:26 pm

        Thanks

    16. Febi on June 21, 2017 11:04 pm

      Excellent and awesome dear

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:27 pm

        Thank you

    17. pari shah hamdani on June 21, 2017 11:06 pm

      Awesome yaar

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:27 pm

        Thank you

    18. Swasan on June 21, 2017 11:16 pm

      Amazing……wow

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:29 pm

        Thank you

    19. Pramudi on June 21, 2017 11:35 pm

      Awesome. Loved it.
      And thnk u so mch dear for accepting my request. ?

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:30 pm

        Pleasure is mine…
        But I hope she will post this time also

    20. Maithili on June 21, 2017 11:39 pm

      Zaimal i am flying kn air seeing ur post…i am huge fan of ur writings….superb episode…post next episode sooooonnn. Plzzzzzz…

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:40 pm

        Thank you so much dear.glad u like it

    21. Aashi on June 21, 2017 11:53 pm

      awesome
      hated Swa’s parents behaviour
      loved Adi
      plz make it RagLak & SwaSan
      plz dont turn KavHil &KarAvya into villan
      hilarious LakRan
      p.s.:update soon

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 3:44 pm

        Thanks a lot dear.and about villains and heroes u have to read

    22. Shiksha on June 22, 2017 12:26 am

      It’s awesome.. It’s pleasure to have you here..back again..with a new story… We missed you so much..
      Thank u, thank u, thank u…. So much…
      Well about the episodes it’s fantastic.. With Some elements of love, hate, seriousness n humour blend perfectly..
      N I love this Swara, ragini, kavitha n kavya and also the male leads Sanskar, sahil, laksya n Karan..
      I like the pairs n each n every character too ..
      N their moments.. Be it
      Kavi n sahil scolding session or
      The four friends n the bros bonding ..
      Everything is perfectly balanced…
      It’s wonderful..
      Continue writing…
      Update soon…

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 4:00 pm

        Thank you sooooo much dear for such lovely comment.
        Glad u like the part this much

    23. Neptune on June 22, 2017 1:49 am

      omg poor karan feeling sad for him. and upon that laksh’s silence for 3 minutes hilarious yaar am laughing sooooooooooooooooooo much..
      superb epi zaimal, please post the next one sooner..

      please please write love is a beautiful emotion season 3 too, i just love that ff of yours sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much..
      please do think about it..

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 4:51 pm

        Thank you so much dear.glad u liked epi this much and about LIBE
        I am thinking to write it after this SS.

    24. Mars on June 22, 2017 4:29 am

      Just awesome…. Can’t wait to know about swasan past.And last part was tooooo gooood.loved it.
      Plzzz post soon…..waiting.

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 4:57 pm

        Thank you sooooo much deardear.glad u like the part

    25. Savanshi27 on June 22, 2017 8:36 am

      U know what Ziamal…. I m far more happy on ur comeback than u urself… although right now I can’t write down all my emotions coz of being stuck but yet I would like to say I m gonna celebrate ur comeback… this is damn Awsm and l’m loving it?

      • Savanshi27 on June 22, 2017 8:37 am

        Zaimal* it’s typo error babe I can never forget ur name saccchhiiii?

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:03 pm

        Thanks a lotttttt dear and don’t worry I also do typing mistakes

    26. Namanya Ahuja on June 22, 2017 8:58 am

      Awwwwwsme i seriously love u .
      ur every story is just mindblowing ,my happiness knew no bound when i saw d ur name in title
      i m eagerly waitng fr further story.

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:04 pm

        Thanks a lot eear

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:09 pm

        Dear*

    27. neha_01 on June 22, 2017 9:04 am

      Awesome..Waiting for next part

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:11 pm

        Thanks

    28. Soujanya on June 22, 2017 9:19 am

      Awesome….

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:11 pm

        Thanks

    29. anu on June 22, 2017 10:10 am

      awesome

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:13 pm

        Thanks

    30. vyshu10 on June 22, 2017 11:10 am

      nice

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:13 pm

        Thanks

    31. phoniex on June 22, 2017 11:17 am

      all are lovely dear. 🙂 I am sure there is no villain in the girls.

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:15 pm

        For that u have to read

    32. Milestone on June 22, 2017 12:56 pm

      Ha ha ha…… awesome dear….. candle.. silence…???

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:17 pm

        Thanks a lot

    33. SNY on June 22, 2017 2:01 pm

      Awesome …!!!
      Next one soon …!!!

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 7:31 pm

        Thanks a lot

    34. Arshaanya on June 22, 2017 2:18 pm

      Hahahahhahahaha poor karan….
      Loved it

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:18 pm

        Thank you

    35. Swarna01 on June 22, 2017 3:14 pm

      Ha ha ha girls r lyk heroes bt boys r lyk kitten. Ha ha ha. Amazing.

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:20 pm

        Boys are real heroes….I will not hear anything about my heroes

    36. gayathri.visu on June 22, 2017 4:26 pm

      Amazing… Loved it. Poor karan! Hehehe… Laksh’s 3minutes silence…hilarious.

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 5:20 pm

        Thanks a lot

    37. scooby on June 22, 2017 8:16 pm

      Awesome ?? loved last part so much ??

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 9:16 pm

        Thank you

    38. Simi on June 22, 2017 8:30 pm

      Awesome dear..Maheshwari brothers r funny.. 3 minutes prayer ???

      • zaimal on June 22, 2017 9:16 pm

        Thanks a lot

    39. a on June 22, 2017 11:16 pm

      nice

      • zaimal on June 23, 2017 3:32 pm

        Thanks

    40. sumayyah on June 23, 2017 6:51 am

      Zaimal it was excellent epi
      I’m head over heels in love with it
      You really nailed it
      Can we be friends where are you from dear??
      Come soon plz
      Will be waiting

      • zaimal on June 23, 2017 3:33 pm

        Thanks a lot dear.
        It will be my pleasure to have friend like you
        I am from Pakistan.
        U?

      • sumayyah on June 23, 2017 5:33 pm

        Yippie I guessed right I’m also from Pakistan Karachi
        And u ???
        If you don’t mind can we talk on pm

      • zaimal on June 23, 2017 5:53 pm

        On which time?
        I am from layyah…small city

    41. Seebu_s on June 25, 2017 7:24 am

      loved it

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