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End less love story (part 17)

AstraBy AstraJune 21, 2017Updated:June 21, 201733 Comments8 Mins Read
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Part 17

Laksh calls to someone. In GM, Ramu kaka will lift the phone.

Laksh: Ramu kaka, how is Ragini feeling..?

Ramu: she is fine babu..

Laksh smiles and cuts the call.

Ap: Laksh, if Ragini is not liking you, why are you still…

Laksh: no maa, she loves me still..! and she loves me forever..!

Ap: don’t you even have that feeling, that she has loved someone and..

Laksh: mom, that is her past. I don’t care about her past.. bcz, she is my future.. and I see only my future with her.. and, Ragini really loves me.

Ap looks on..

Then, Laksh gets a post. He looks at it and shocks.

Ap: what is it Laksh..?

Laksh in tears: Ragini has sent me divorce notice maa..

Ap shocks.

There in GM, Ragini is looking at the divorce notice sent by Laksh palely.

“How proud he is..!! we are the one who has to tell him a lesson and he has sent divorce notice..??”
Shekar is frustrating.

Ragini wipes a tear from her eye.

“Let it be papa. If he is that much concerned for this, let’s also give him away..!!” Ragini says and signs on those papers.

Sumi: but Ragini, talk with Laksh once. May be, there is some misunderstanding.. don’t you trust him..? he loves you..!!

Ragini: maa, I’m tired trusting people a lot. Whoever I have trusted, they have cheated me. Firstly my sister swara. Secondly Sanskar and later whom I thought as my best friend Laksh. There is nothing to trust anymore maa…

Ragini drops the pen on table runs into her room. All looks sadly at Ragini.

Sanskar who was sitting in his room at his house,
“Wow, my first plan is success..!” he smirks.
He is the one who has sent the divorce papers to both of them.

“Hmm, now in this depression, Ragini needs me..!!” says Sanskar and he goes to her house.

In their house,

San: uncle, I know Ragini is very depressed with these incidents. So, let’s go to a small party. It’s my friend’s bachelor party..

Shekar: haha, but elders are allowed there..? and ladies..?

San: no problem uncle..! all are coming. I want to take you all… plz come..

Shekar looks at Sumi. Sumi nods her head negatively.

Ragini: let’s go papa.

All looks amazed at Ragini.

Ragini: I have to clear many things to some people. So, we have to go..!!

Ragini looks at Sanskar and says. Sanskar smiles that Ragini may accept him back. Sumi agrees unwillingly.

Sanskar will be driving the car, Ragini and Sumi are sitting in back seat. Sanskar is looking at her from front mirror. Her thoughts are lost somewhere…

Sanskar dares to talk before her parents,

“Ragini, you will like the party for sure. I mean… for a change..!!”

Ragini is looking silently out…
Shekar and Sumi looks at her.

Sanskar calls again: Ragini..!!

Ragini: haaa Laksh..?

Sanskar shocks.

San: Ragini…

Ragini: yes Laksh, tell me..!!

Ragini looks at Sanskar then she comes out of her thoughts.

“Oh, I was thinking about Laksh. What did you say Sanskar?” she asks.

San: nothing..!

Then Sanskar stops car before a resort.

Sumi hates to come there, but as her husband is silent. She can’t speak anything. Moreover they are following Ragini’s words now.

Sanskar takes them inside. A boy comes and hugs Sanskar.

“So, you are getting married..!!” Sanskar says..
“yeah..!!” that boy says..

That boy looks at Ragini.

“Hey, she was your would be once, but.. she has married Laksh know..!!” he says.

Sanskar’s smile fades away. Ragini looks at that boy.

“Haa, Laksh is my husband..!!” says Ragini. That boy looks on, and Sanskar tights his fists.
Already some people start talking about them…

“Everyone..!!” they hear a voice in mike. All turns to stage and finds Laksh.
Ragini keeps looking at Laksh hollow. Sanskar shocks.

Shekar: we have to go away now..!!

Ragini: no papa. Let’s stay..!!
Sumi confuses.

San: why did you call him..???

Boy: come on dude, we all are friends right..!!

Then Laksh speaks in mike,

“my friend’s marriage is fixed, so I want to dance and sing..!!”
Laksh’s voice is drunk.

Ragini looks on…

Music plays…

{Guys, now I’m going to put a telugu movie song..}

Laksh sings,

“My love is gone…
My love is gone..!!
My love is gone..
My love is gone..!!”

(Music plays… Laksh starts dancing.. people joins him… now, he sings..)Ragini keeps looking at him.
“Poye Poye Love E Poye
Pothe Poinde
It’s Gone
It’s Gone
It’s Gone My Love Is Gone”

All people keeps cheering at Laksh. And Laksh is dancing. Sanskar shakes his hand with his friend. That friend smirks.

Laksh sings…

“Velugantha Aaripoye
Kadha Maaripoye
Ika Cheekatentho Baagunde..”
“Velugantha Jaaripoye
Nannu Veedipoye
Ika Votamentho Baagunde”

The lights around Laksh becomes dark.. he bends his head and sings…

“My Love Is Gone
My Love Is Gone
My Love Is Gone
My Love Is Gone”

Laksh was dancing not caring the surroundings, and Ragini was just looking at him forgetting her surroundings. Her eyes are only filled with Laksh.

Now, Laksh sings,
And his dance continues…

“Honest Ga Unde Paniledhe
The Best Ga Unde Paniledhe
Habits Maarche Paniledhe
Em Maarche Paniledhe”
“Preminchi Gelichinollu
Shaadi Jariginollu
Illallona Miguluthaare
Love Chesi Odinodu
Lokaaneluthadu
History Lona Veluguthaade..!!!”

Ragini doesn’t get tears but she can feel each and every feelings in his words. she was looking at him without blinking her eyes.
He sings…
“My Love Is Gone
My Love Is Gone
My Love Is Gone
My Love Is Gone…”

Sanskar was smiling looking at Laksh, on other hand Shekar and Sumi are looking at him in disgust.

Laksh falls as he drank a lot…

Shekar: he is ruining the party, why someone throw him out..??

Shekar looks at Ragini to call her to go home, but she has gone already… not out..!!
But, near Laksh.

Ragini keeps his head in her lap. “Laksh..” she calls.

Sanskar with his friend,
“Now, uncle and aunty will totally hate Laksh. They never accept him back..!!”

His friend,
“but see Ragini.. what she is doing..”

Sanskar looks at her, she was holding Laksh.

Sanskar shocks.

Rag: Sanskar, help me. Let’s take Laksh home..!!

Sanskar nods his head unwillingly.

His friend: see dude, you shouldn’t change this world’s views. But, Ragini’s views. Change her first..!!

Sanskar looks on…

They takes Laksh to his house.

Ap shocks to see that Laksh has drank.

Ap: what is this.? Laksh don’t have drinking habit..!!

They make Laksh sleep.

Sanskar goes away soon out. Ragini is about to go.. Ap stops.

Ap: See Ragini, I can’t support Laksh just bcz he is my son. Yes, he has done wrong..!! but, he loves you. Don’t spoil both of your lives with divorce decision..!!

Ragini looks at Ap in tears,
“who was it who has sent divorce maa..? Is it not Laksh..??!!” Ragini asks and Ap confuses. Ragini goes away in tears.

Sanskar was waiting out… Ragini comes.

“See Sanskar..” she calls. Sanky looks at her in smile.

“It was truth once I wished to have life with you. But, it’s past..! but, presently you are nothing for me Sanskar.”

Sanskar smile fades.

“it’s not like I hate you. Nor I love you. And yeah, I love Laksh whatever..!! and this can’t be changed forever. You may think Sanskar, I have loved you once, now Laksh.. in future I may change my mind..?? But not this time..!! because, people doesn’t do mistake twice. And that mistake was loving you once..!!”
Says Ragini.

Sanskar gets tears,
“Ragini, why are you saying such words..?”

Ragini: I don’t want to hurt you Sanskar. You and Laksh were best friends before. But, everything is changed. and, that was all bcz of me. I wish only one thing, forget me and you both start being as before..

Sanskar: if he didn’t come in between us, we would have married Ragini..!!

Ragini: don’t take a word against laksh Sanskar..!!

Sansakr looks on..

Ragini: it was my sister who has ruined my name. and it was you who misunderstood..! what Laksh has done in middle..?

Sanskar remains calm.

Ragini: his only mistake was cheating everyone. And, he is already facing his punishment..!! so, plz..!! don’t talk about Laksh again..!!

Ragini steps ahead to go away… then she stops.

“And finally, I will never forget Laksh..!! so, don’t try to come in my life again Sanskar..!!” says Ragini and starts going away.

Sanskar releases his fists who was holding tightly.
“I appreciate your decision Ragini. But, when you change it for me..!!” Sanskar says and smirks.

Precap: Laksh to be prey in sanskar’s net..? will ragini misunderstand Laksh..?

Astra.

Meaning for the song…
{it’s lost it’s lost.. my love was lost..! let it be lost..!
The brightness is gone..
The story has changed
The darkness now is nice..!!
The light has left me… now, the defeat is awesome..!! my love is gone..

There is no need to be honest, best, nothing to be changed..!!
The one who loved and won, gets married and remains in house..
But, one who failed in love will rule the world, and they remain in history..!!}

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    33 Comments

    1. Jayanti on June 21, 2017 5:40 pm

      the episode was sooo emotional…..unite raglak soon astra dear…cnt see them in pain

    2. sanchami on June 21, 2017 6:16 pm

      Plz yaar don’t separate raglak dr really now I hate sanskar very much

    3. asra on June 21, 2017 6:37 pm

      awesome dear…feeling bad for laksh…plz unite them…waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    4. Darshini on June 21, 2017 6:39 pm

      Asthu dear..,it’s amazing..!poor raglak feeling bad for them..!
      I appreciate ragu’s decision..!bring the truth abt divorce to raglak dear..
      And it was too emotional but loved the way raglak cares for each other..!!
      Post the next part soon dear..!tc..!!

    5. avika on June 21, 2017 6:54 pm

      nice

    6. Laashya on June 21, 2017 7:22 pm

      Awesome episode and poor Raglak

    7. Naymaz on June 21, 2017 7:41 pm

      astra di i am crying now…..feeling pity for lakshya…….i can never hate sanky……..but still want raglak

    8. Jiyani on June 21, 2017 8:19 pm

      Superb episode

    9. Malu on June 21, 2017 8:32 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    10. DivzS on June 21, 2017 8:50 pm

      Wowwww.. Twisty by the day.. Loving it more than anything. Your two ffs are competing against each other!! God help me decide! Keep giving such shocks.. We like it.. I guess AP will figure out the truth and laksh gears up?? Excited.. Update soon

      • Astra on June 22, 2017 4:17 pm

        thank you so much dear.. let’s see..

    11. Ammu on June 21, 2017 9:05 pm

      As usual Outstanding episode dear ????? loved Raglak scenes but feeling really bad for them. I hate this sanskar? eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP ??????

    12. Asw on June 21, 2017 9:23 pm

      Amazing yaar I like sanskar don’t make so evil ? keep going

      • Astra on June 22, 2017 4:16 pm

        no dear.. i won’t make him that negitive..

    13. Vini on June 21, 2017 9:40 pm

      Awesome

    14. Mitra on June 21, 2017 9:56 pm

      Amazing one.

    15. Arjuna on June 21, 2017 9:57 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    16. sethidisha002 on June 21, 2017 10:27 pm

      Plz unite raglak and i hate this sanskar

    17. AimRagLak on June 21, 2017 11:50 pm

      Pleaseee Astra Beat Sanskaar.He is the kabab me haddi in my every favourite ff?

      • Astra on June 22, 2017 11:19 am

        hahaha, ok..

    18. Bela on June 22, 2017 3:13 pm

      Hey Astra…was that Arya’s song? The one with Allu Arjun?

      And I like this part and most specifically, Ragini. She is showing so much clarity now.

      • Astra on June 22, 2017 4:17 pm

        yeah.. allu arjun’s song… Arya2..

    19. Sherin on June 22, 2017 3:48 pm

      Awesome dear

    20. Anju on June 22, 2017 4:01 pm

      Superb

    21. Aamy on June 22, 2017 4:44 pm

      Awesome

    22. Elizebathlovely on June 22, 2017 5:15 pm

      superb part

    23. Soumya on June 22, 2017 5:38 pm

      Awesome di

    24. Monisha on June 22, 2017 8:57 pm

      Loved it

    25. Vennila on June 22, 2017 9:24 pm

      Cute raglak moments

    26. Ashly on June 22, 2017 9:50 pm

      Superb

    27. Megha on June 23, 2017 9:16 am

      Awesome

    28. teitokUn1718 on June 24, 2017 6:13 am

      Feeling bad for Raglak…

    29. hemalattha on June 26, 2017 7:02 pm

      Feeling bad for raglak yaar. Continue dear. This part really awesome.

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