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Home»Fan Fiction»RagLak and their love story -RagLak ff part 1 by darshu
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RagLak and their love story -RagLak ff part 1 by darshu

DarshiniBy DarshiniJune 20, 2017Updated:June 20, 201732 Comments5 Mins Read
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Raglak and their love story -1
Hii everyone..,this is darshu back with the first part of this ff..!!did anyone remember this ff..,I knw many of you might have forgotten..!this is the first part of the dare-applying vermilion on ragini’s hairline by laksh..!now u will got it I think..!!ok I will stop my blabber and let’s move to the plot..!!
Happy reading..!!
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Prologue: “prologue-2”
A girl in the age of 22 lying on the bed holding her pillow and was crying bitterly..!her face was pale and her eyes were swollen..,it seems like she has been crying since a long time..!!
Her tears were like non stop gushing out like an waterfalls..!!
Her pov
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Everything was perfect..,myself,Ragini gadodia from a traditional marwari family got almost everything and were happy with my sweet and small family..!
My dadi and my bhai were my close friends till day but I lost their faith.,their trust on me.,their love towards me..!
That day changed my life..!the day when my family took me to our village temple for fixing my alliance with the most eligible bachelor who completed his M.S in Singapore and was currently working there.!
He is the one who studied a lot in our village since he is from a very rich and educated family..!even we are also not low in status in compared to them but my qualification is lesser compared to him..!
But he agreed to our marriage since he saw me many times in our village and I must tell he is an handsome guy and a good person too.
That day.,my dadi and few of my friends did my styles and made me looks pretty infront of me.!!
We all started from our house to that big temple before the groom’s family reaches there.!i was taken to the place near the lord Krishna’s idol and few of my friends were around me teasing about my blush..,my life partner and all..!
Suddenly dadi’s voice made everyone to rush out.,my friends left me alone and they went to see my groom whom they haven’t saw before..!!
I was standing alone and was twisting my pallu’s end and was biting my nails.!even though he was a nice guy but still I don’t know he will understand and adjust with me or not since I am a sensitive girl..!!
Then I found my man..,my cutiee Krishna.,my god to whom I used to go and share my feelings..!I closed my eyes and started talking with him about my feelings.,my insights..!
That moment when dadimaa called my name.,I immediately bids bye to my Krishna idol and left covering my face with the pallu..!
Everything got finalised.,groom’s family liked me and my marriage got fixed with him..!I experienced with a mixture of emotions..!!
“papa.,if you give me permission I wanna share few words with Ragini.,will you..!”he asked his dad..!!
My dadimaa wasn’t liking this thing tried to avoid but agreed when groom’s dad insists..!!
I was not going through any kind of feelings which every girl used to undergo when they are meeting their man for a very first time..!
Never mind.!I thought that I was comfortable around him.!
He started the convo about him.,his work.,his fame.,his richness and everything.!i got bored and was not listening..!
“ok tell me something about you..!”he said.!
I take a deep sigh that atleast now he gave me space to utter few words about “ME”..!
I was about to start but at that time a strong wind attacked me and my pallu flies away from my face..!and my face got revealed..!even though it wasn’t a first time that he is seeing me but his eyes were glued with something.,his facial expressions changes and it clearly shows that something had gone wrong..!!
“what the hell..!!”he shouted and i wasn’t understanding what had happened..!
He immediately rushed to the gathering and shouted again and says”this marriage can’t happen..!!”
My bhaai and dadi got confused and asks”but why..!!”
“don’t you know..!fine.,bcz she is already married..”his words made everyone to stand numb.!
I was recalling whether I heard something wrong..!but he repeated his words..!!
“what he is saying ..!”I gave a confused look and my eyes were filled with tears..!!
“ji you might have misunderstood..!!”my bhaai goes to him and clarified why he is saying so..!!
That time only.,my hands unknowingly travelled towards my hairline and I was shocked..!!
“laado..!what is this..”my coolest ever daadi spoke against me and doubted too.!
I just shooked my head in no..!but what’s the use.,noone believed me..!
Everyone taunts me.!few yelled. “without her knowledge how is it Possible.,she might be hiding..!”
I broke down completely..!the one’s who brought up me were not at all believing me.!I lost everyone’s trust.,everyone were gossiping about my character.!
But I pushed away all my thoughts and just faint a smile when my bhai stands by my side..!
“I really don’t know bhaiyya.,how it comes on my hairline..!”I sobbed more hugging him..!
“I believe you..”he said and consoles me..!
The marriage proposal got broken and I was taken home.my dadi wasn’t even looked at me.my bhai was with me in all the tough times but today he too didn’t took my side because of that man.,the one who is responsible for my this state.
Because of him.,me and my family was insulted badly before everyone.my life has been under question mark..!!
Who is he.??what he really wants from me.?why he came into my life..?
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“Ragini..!!”
Her thoughts got disturbed when her bhai calls her in a rage voice and she felt the anger in his eyes..!
Ragini:I don’t know bhaiyya..!sachchi..!!(her tears touched her cheeks)
“do you think that he will believe you even now..”dadi screams in rage and was about to give a tight slap to Ragini..!but her brother held her hand
To be continued •••
So guys done with the first chappy..!!do tell me about the plot .take care dears.
~Darshu

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    32 Comments

    1. Monu on June 20, 2017 5:29 pm

      Superb episode

    2. Arjuna on June 20, 2017 5:30 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    3. Malu on June 20, 2017 5:30 pm

      Amazing part

    4. Haripriya on June 20, 2017 5:36 pm

      This is amazing.. And rocking with KRISHNA leela…..

    5. Vennila on June 20, 2017 5:36 pm

      Awesome

    6. Vini on June 20, 2017 5:47 pm

      Awesome dear

    7. Mintu on June 20, 2017 6:07 pm

      Awesome sisy.. Aiyoo ena dhn aachu pavam ragu.. Laksh ipo ena panunan da??? Avan ena panunan apidi ragu, ava bro tension aakura level ku?? Lot of questions arises dear.. Ckrm ellathukum answer slunga.. Interesting plot da…!!! Post the next part soon dear.. Take care ?

    8. harinipriya on June 20, 2017 6:26 pm

      Poor Ragini don’t know what she is gonna face!! But where is this idiot monkey Laksh had gone???? :rage: I want to know soon akka, heeheheheeee 😀
      I love this ff very much akka, ok now don’t jump on ur bed reading my comment 😉 Okk akka keep smiling and take care akka!! bye!! love u so much!! Ummmaaahhhh!!

    9. asra on June 20, 2017 6:41 pm

      it’s awesome darshu dear…loved it alot….poor ragu dear…laksh ne yeana kariyam panida…unala pavam ragu alugura…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    10. avika on June 20, 2017 6:46 pm

      awesome

    11. dharani on June 20, 2017 7:09 pm

      Awesome darshu… Feeling very bad for ragu…. Hope her brother understands her

    12. Sherin on June 20, 2017 7:27 pm

      Awesome dear

    13. sethidisha002 on June 20, 2017 7:33 pm

      Nice

    14. Akshitha on June 20, 2017 7:47 pm

      Interesting

    15. Anju on June 20, 2017 8:58 pm

      Superb update

    16. Monisha on June 20, 2017 9:21 pm

      Awesome

    17. lovely7 on June 20, 2017 9:29 pm

      Confused
      Feeling bad for ragini

    18. Aamy on June 20, 2017 11:45 pm

      Poor Ragini

    19. Elizabethlovely on June 21, 2017 9:51 am

      Awesome

    20. Ammu on June 21, 2017 10:41 am

      Awesome episode dear and feeling bad for Ragini. Eagerly waiting for Raglak scenes and please post next part ASAP

    21. Laashya on June 21, 2017 1:31 pm

      Awesome episode

    22. Bela on June 21, 2017 1:51 pm

      Oh yeah Darshu, while I am feeling really bad for Ragini, I want to know how this all turns out. Love this???

    23. Pearly on June 21, 2017 2:16 pm

      superb

    24. nymisha281 on June 21, 2017 2:23 pm

      awesome episode…poor ragu…waiting for raglak meeting.

    25. Soumya on June 21, 2017 3:05 pm

      Simply superb di…post next soon

    26. aleeza on June 21, 2017 3:07 pm

      Awesome

    27. jazzy on June 21, 2017 3:25 pm

      amazingggg

    28. Ashly on June 21, 2017 3:51 pm

      Awesome superb amazing

    29. Rehna on June 21, 2017 4:49 pm

      Awesome dear

    30. Jiyani on June 21, 2017 7:46 pm

      Superb dear and waiting for raglak second meeting

    31. Megha on June 23, 2017 9:27 am

      Amazing

    32. hemalattha on June 26, 2017 10:48 am

      Amazing

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