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Home»Fan Fiction»Dhoor hokar bhi hum pas hai – Introduction & Part-1.
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Dhoor hokar bhi hum pas hai – Introduction & Part-1.

Sakash.By Sakash.June 13, 201719 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Keep commenting if u like my FF friends.
Please give ur support friends.
Similar FF was send by sangeetha behalf of me.I make some changes & i changed title too.

Introduction :
All characters r same like in serial. I introduce some new characters.These new characters will reunite Shivika & Gaurika unknowingly.In my FF their names i will introduce later.
Brother & Sister :
1)Ankit Raj – Opposite of Anika.
2)Aditi Gupta(Meghana) – Opposite of Shivay.
I introduce their family later.
Shankar malohtra young successful business tycoon same to oberoi’s level.
1)Shankar( Shankar name meaning One who give happiness) (Siddharth arora) – Opposite of Gauri.
2)Shankar malohtra friend Stuthi(Nikkita dutta) (Stuthi name meaning “Praise” Lord Durga) – Mahi’s love

The story starts :
Shivay and anika get seperated.Pinky’s plan gets successful.The same day omkara too give divorce to gauri and they too get seperated because of buamma.
Gauri & Anika decided to live together as sisters.
Mahi saw gauri & anika.Mahi bring anika & gauri to his house.First they didn’t accept after lot of requests of mahi they finally agreed.Mahi asked anika & gauri what had happened?anika & gauri explained whole matter.He was hell angry on pinky& buamma.In that anger he will definately kill both of them.Anika & gauri some how managed him & divert him.
Mahi said from today onwards u both r my responsibility.
Promise me u 2 never leave me alone.I am alone in this world anika & gauri.I want one reason to live my life happily.Will u 2 become reason to live my life.Tears falling from his eyes.
Gauri’s & Anika’s eyes also become wet.
Anika : Till now i had only person in my life.
1)Sahil,From today mahi & gauri will be in my life upto my last breath.I never leave u mahi.Pinky promise.Now tell ur decision gauri.
Gauri : Till now i had only person in my life.
1)Maa,From today anika di,Mahi,&Sahil will be in my life upto my last my breath.I never leave u all.Shankar ji ki kasam.
All gets emotional.
Mahi comes near Anika & Gauri.He hugged both anika & gauri.
All r happy.

That day night,
Anika & Gauri vomit 5 to 6 times.Seeing their condition,mahi brings doctor.Doctor checked both anika & gauri.Doctor smiles looking mahi & says these 2 r pregnant.Doctor give some medicines without any complications in their pregnancy. He also tell some precautions to gauri & anika.Mahi brings sweets.Mahi gives to doctor.Doctor left.
Mahi nae anika and gauri ko sweet khilaya.Anika & gauri mahi ko khilaya.
Their eyes become wet.
Gauri & Anika at a same time happy,shocked & sad.Mahi consoled them.
Gauri’s maa comes there & she took care of anika & gauri.Sahil too brought to home.
Shivay & omkara unaware of anri’s pregnancy.
One fine day,
On morning anika gave birth to twins.
On evening gauri gave birth to twins.
The 4 kids r beautiful.
Sahil says anika didi girl child like shivay jiju and boy child like u didi.Anika’s tears become wet. He says same with gauri Sahil say sorry to anika & gauri.Anri said no need to say sorry.Mahi came there & change the topic.
Mahi played with them.He prayed god to keep this happiness long.
Anika & Gauri happy to see their babies. But sad they don’t have their husbands with them.But mahi divert them.Anika & Gauri made promise with mahi their babies matter must not come out especially to oberoi’s.Mahi agreed.

After 7 days,
Anika & Gauri recovered & brought to home.They hate the hospital climate. Mahi managed everything.He & shankar stands as great wall to anika & gauri.
Anika and Gauri doesn’t want to face their children the same fate they get.They want their children to get every thing.They want their children to get Father & Mother’s love.Mahi promised anika that he will take responsibility of both childs as their father not as her husband.He promise that he will give his name to her babies.
Firsh she denied at last,
Anika agreed to mahi’s decision.
Mahi’s friend shankar malohtra likes gauri from first look.He love her.He knows every thing about her & anika.Gauri too
respects him.
Shankar says gauri i want to talk to u,if u don’t mine,i will give Father’s love to ur babies.
Trust me i will do all my responsibilities of being father only if u agree.
Gauri says if u don’t have any problem in society.Shankar replies no problem. At first Gauri denies at last she agrees.
Shankar says,
From now onwords Anika,Gauri,Sahil,Gauri’s maa& mahi live in my malohtra mansion.
From today mahi u r my big brother Maheshwar malohtra,Anika malohtra &
Gauri malohtra,Sahil malohtra & Gauri’s maa.
Anika,Gauri don’t like this,for the sake of their children they accept the fact.They
Know shivay & om will never accept them.They can handle situation single but this time they had responsibility of kids.
So they step back not to take risk.

Sahil played with 4 kids & Gauri maa take care of children & she like shankar & mahi.
One fine morning,
Mahi,Anika,Shiv&Gauri went to temple.
Gauri’s maa did arrangements for naamkaran.
These 4 carry 4 babies.
Panditji said them to sit mahi sit beside anika.Shiv sit beside gauri.
Panditji did naamkaran puja of 4 kids Panditji said couples to tell their names.
Mahi tell to panditji as Mahi,anika&Gauri,shiv.
Anika & Gauri felt bad for their luck.
First anika did naamkaran to her twins & she give name to,
1.Boy child as Shivansh.
2.Girl child as Shivanshi.(She too had his papa’s kanji eyes)
All clapped and all eyes become wet.
Second gauri did naamkaran to her twins & she give name.
1.Boy child – Gaurom.
2.Girl child – Gaurika.
All clapped and 4 babies r laughing.
(Don’t misunderstand their relation.They only give names as father for kids.)
The puja end.

After 1 year saumya & priyanka give birth to 2 twins each.
There is a past story of saumya & rudra.I
will reveal later.
All oberoi family happy with double dhamaka.
Rudra&saumya’s child names,
1.Boy child : Somudra.
2.Girl child : Rumya.
Priyanka&Ranveer’s child names,
1.Boy child : Pranveer.
2.Girl child : Pranavi.
In my FF ranveer changed & Kamini arrested due to her deeds.
All oberoi family r double happy.

Precap : Leap After 6 years.

Any one want to see child images of oberoi heirs comment me.I will post their photos.Tell
me did u all like character’s sketch.
Give ur comments love u all.Please heart out ur feelings friends.Please give ur support.

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    19 Comments

    1. Anju on June 14, 2017 12:08 am

      Nice

    2. CrazygirlS.P on June 14, 2017 12:10 am

      Amazing

    3. Aashi on June 14, 2017 12:31 am

      nyc episode
      waiting for nxt update
      update soon

    4. fffan1234 on June 14, 2017 12:41 am

      Interesting start

    5. Sakash. on June 14, 2017 12:54 am

      Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur support friends.Keep supporting me & please give ur valuable comments if u like my FF.
      Sorry for mistake,Instead of writing anika’s eyes become wet.I write anika’s tears become wet & my second mistake instead of writing Shankar i had written shiv.
      Sorry for mistakes & don’t get confused.
      If u want to see all beautiful child images comment me.

    6. Sangeetha. on June 14, 2017 1:09 am

      All the best akash.I am happy.As a friend i post it.”Aap sae dhoor jana nahi”.Ur ideas r amazing.Love u dear.
      Thank u for giving me a chance to write ur
      FF.U changed title,i like this title also & intro too.
      It has a meaning.I love meaningful stories.
      Yes,please post child images.

    7. Ashwin. on June 14, 2017 1:16 am

      Superb bhai.I love this FF.U made khidkithod jodi’s bhai for jealousy track.
      I love child names.Every thing is perfect.
      Bhai please send cute kiddies pics.Post ASAP.
      Love u bhai.

    8. Banita on June 14, 2017 2:41 am

      Amazinggggg update Sakash….. Waiting 4 nxt…

    9. Anshi on June 14, 2017 8:46 am

      I shIvan should eyes like shivay so that he resembles his father

    10. Anshi on June 14, 2017 8:48 am

      I want SHIVANSH eyes like shivay

    11. gayathri.visu on June 14, 2017 8:52 am

      Awesome bro… Eagerly waiting for next part.
      Yes bro, even I m want to see babies photos.

    12. Sairan on June 14, 2017 10:06 am

      Wonderful episode

    13. Niriha on June 14, 2017 10:14 am

      Nice…..

    14. Lauren on June 14, 2017 11:11 am

      Amazinggggg post nxt soooooooon

    15. nikita_jai29 on June 14, 2017 12:49 pm

      Nice one dear

    16. Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 1:11 pm

      Ohh leap interesting dearrr
      This is an awesome episode
      Loved it!!
      Post next one soon..
      LOve ya!

    17. alekhika20 on June 14, 2017 3:48 pm

      Amazing update

    18. Sagithya on June 14, 2017 4:45 pm

      Awesome yaar…post the next part soon

    19. Stutii on June 14, 2017 4:53 pm

      Hey its amazing ur one character name stuthi bilkul mere name jaisa hy bs h haha do ? by the way awsm wrk dear

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