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Home»Fan Fiction»Aise kaise jaane doon! -Episode 10
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Aise kaise jaane doon! -Episode 10

ReshBy ReshJune 13, 201718 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello! Thank you all for a great response and for the love you shower upon me! I feel special! Hope you like this episode!Omg!!! This is episode 10!!!! That’s awesome!!! Thank you so much guys!! Love you all!!
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Normally Mondays were boring and long but this time..it was so much of fun together that they didn’t notice the time pass by! The day had ended soon!

Naina’s college had reached their project destination! At 8:00 in the evening!
Meanwhile Meghna had bid bye to the guys and had left with Priyanka to the hostel.. she was waiting for Naina’s call.

Karan and Kunal both didn’t care about each other. They had never talked to each other like any other sibling. Karan had tried ignoring people at his house, but he failed in it. Masima was their to understand him. She was his secret box. He loved his Mom for the care she had shown always. He would do anything for his ma. He could never ignore or disobey his Dadaji. He respected Dadaji! He hated Kunal! At least that’s what we thought it is! But the truth is that he loved his brother! He also cared for him but had never shown this love and care to him.Kunal too had the same feeling but he just kept away from him! Khyathi loved her brothers equally! NK loves Kunal and hates Karan and the other way around too! Kunal had everybody’s concern except half of his ma’s concern and from Karan, who didn’t care about him(according to Kunal).

Everyone were rushing out. After the rush Naina slowly got up and moved aside.

Karan got up and pulled out the bags from above and carried them. Naina ran after him asking for her bag.Karan acted deaf and kept walking towards the door of the bus , to exit.
Naina: Oye coolie! Mein apna bag Khud pakdoongi!
Karan turned around : Kya Mein tumble coolie diktha hoon?
Naina laughed: ha..yes!
Karan : ok fine! Here you go!
He kept her bag aside and walked out. He looked a bit anger. She ran picked up her bag and got out of the bus searching for Karan! Karan was looking at Naina mischievously and was hiding his face from her! But soon she found out she went and stood next to him. While he just ignores her and listens to the instructions! After that they were going to their rooms! Karan kept ignoring her , she kept walking behind him. And she finally stopped him as people entered their rooms!
Naina( made a puppy face and holding her ears): Sorry Karan! Mein tumhe hurt nahi karna chahthi thi! Woh toh sirf mazak tha!

Karan kept looking at her. He couldn’t control he started laughing!!
Karan(pulling her cheek and laughing): Tum bohoth funny aur cute bhi ho Naina!
Naina faked anger and smiled at the way his was laughing at her!
Naina: Aise hasne ke liye tum hamesha meri mazak uda sakthe ho!
Karan stopped laughing hearing that he smile at her and looked at her. They had an eyelock, an eyelock of love!
Soon it broke as Radhika called out for Naina!
Naina: Karan , I’m gonna meet my sister tomorrow, you wanna meet her?
Karan : ya sure! I need to salute her for tolerating you!
Naina faked anger! Soon both bursts out laughing and then both bid bye and left to their rooms!
Soon they met in the morning for their project.. they were all very busy until 4 in the afternoon..

Meghna’s college:
The 4 friends were done with their classes.. and before leaving to their homes and hostels..
Meghna: toh tum logo aa rahe ho na?
Kunal, Rahul and Priyanka: yes!!
Meghna: so we’ll meet next to the girls college! Ok?
Kunal: yeah! And I’ll take u guys in my car !
Rahul and Priyanka: Cool!
They looked at each other and smiled!

While Meghnal smiled at the two of them!
Soon everyone left and met in front of the hostel!
Kunal was in the driver’s seat. Priyanka and Rahul pushed Meghna and told her to sit in the front with Kunal as she had called them to meet her sister..(a stupid excuse they made so as to make Meghna and Kunal sit together!
Kunal: Guys!! Jaldi chalo! Get in fast
He was sitting and screaming inside the car!

Kunal was shocked to see Meghna sitting next to him! They looked at each other and then at the back seats!
Rahul and Priyanka jumped in together.. such that they bumped into eachother and hurt their head badly!
Priyanka and Rahul: Aaahhh!
Kunal and Meghna giggled and looked at each other and giggled again then started on their journey!

Nairan’s place:
Naina: chalo that’s it for today Karan! Let’s go!
She held Karan’s hand pulled him up from his chair!
Karan: where?
Naina: I told you na? My di…
Karan interrupted: oh I’m sorry!! Mein bhool gaya!
Naina: haan! Toh go fast we will meet here in 5 minutes..
Karan left. Naina kept looking at Karan until he left. Then she moved to get ready.

After 5 minutes they met and left to their destination.
The reached their in the restaurant in 15 minutes and took a seat.
Since the place was in a mountainous region they had to park their car below and walk up to the Restaurant. Priyahul and Meghnal walked up. Priyanka held on Rahul’s hand for safety as it was pretty slippery!
Meghna was climbing alone. They had almost reached there.Suddenly she saw something in the grass and she looked at that place and kept walking, she didn’t give attention to the route in front of her! She was about to fall of the cliff she suddenly noticed it. Kunal turned to look at her then stretched out and held onto her hand pulled her up!
Naina spotted her sister and her group and called Karan and showed him! They suddenly noticed that Meghna was falling off.
Naina: Di!!!!!!!!

Kunal: Meghna!!
Kunal pulled her up towards him and she fell onto him. He hugged her tight and she did the same..both of them had tears in their eyes!
Naina ran out While Karan stood in fear ! He then realised the situation and got a water bottle in his hand.. and ran out

Kunal broke the hug but still holding onto her hands.
Kunal: tum pagal ho kya? Tum kaha dekh kar chal rahi thi? Pagal ladki!!
He brought his hands up and cupped her face. He had tears flowing out of his eyes!
Kunal: Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh? Mein Kya karta?
Meghna was crying but she didn’t understand what he meant.
Kunal: oye pagal! I love you yaar! Tumhe Mein Aise kaise jaane detha?
Meghna broke down and hugged him tight..
She realised what she was doing.. she saw her sister running towards her!
She tried to break the hug.
Kunal: first give me my answer!

Meghna: Kunal…
Kunal: Meghna..
and then he left her! She kept looking at him.
Priyanka and Rahul were just still in shock of what just happened: the fall and the love confession.
Naina ran and hugged her sister!
Meghna: cheeku!!

Naina: Di!! Aap teek ho na?
Meghna jaane cheeku!
They were still hugging. Karan came out with the bottle!
Kunal thought how I wish my sibling would care about me just like Naina! But.. forget it..Karan won’t care about anyone! Especially me!
Karan came with the bottle stretched out in his hand..
Karan: Meghu Di! Yeh lejiye paani pee lejiye!
Meghna and Naina broke their hug..
Kunal recognised the voice.. and he looked up!

Kunal : Karan!
Karan without noticing , turned around and replied..
Karan: haan, bhai!
Then he noticed Kunal standing in front of him!
He asked himself: bhai ?!
The episode ends… showing the brothers faces!☺️?
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Tell me what you think about the brothers relationship in both the serial and my ff! ☺️I would love to know!

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    18 Comments

    1. Resh on June 13, 2017 3:22 pm

      https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=c2gSzYLJ8sY

      Play this in the background after this sentence….Everyone were rushing out. After the rush Naina slowly got up and moved aside….

      • Resh on June 13, 2017 3:23 pm

        So sorry that I’m not able to send it through the ff! I don’t know y it doesn’t work!

    2. Minerva on June 13, 2017 5:30 pm

      Amazing episode. The cute banter between naina and karan followed by naina’s apology, karan’s laughter and their lovely eyelock was so very beautiful. Naina pestering him all throughout and him enjoying it plus his acceptance of naina’s request to meet her sister was just too awesome. The scene in the car with rahul and priyanka doing a head-bang and meghnal giggling away was truly adorable. Meghna slipping off the cliff and kunal running to save her – a scene well conceptualised and perfectly presented. Kunal’s heady start to save meghna followed by his confession was indeed stupendous. Naina caring for her sister and karan forwarding the bottle of water adfed the right amount of zing to this episode.
      Reading about the distance between the brothers and visualising the same in the serial (sometimes) is surely thought-provoking. The hidden love they have for each other which cannot be openly expressed owing to some misconceptions is truly intriguing. Nevertheless, the undying concern and love for each other that they nurture needs a vent to be released right now. It has been suppressed for too long and now demands a right to freedom presently through the utterance of the word “bhai” from karan. Hope for the distances to be nullified soon and the sisters to endeavour to bridge the brothers’ broken souls..

      • Resh on June 13, 2017 8:43 pm

        Thank you so much Minerva! Don’t worry! All the problems will be solved soon!! I’m sure you would know what my “soon” is by now! ?? it will take time! Thank you so much again for such a lovely comment ☺️❤️️

    3. seyal on June 13, 2017 6:07 pm

      Yaar loved it u rocked it resh.. Ooo since l haven’t asked ur age… I don’t know what to call u… Oh what a wonderful confession.. Looks like he was waiting for a chance… And that last part… Superb dear
      Loads of love -Seyal ?

      • Resh on June 13, 2017 8:46 pm

        Thank you so much yaar! Neither do I know any of your ages! I randomly call out names! Sorry for that if I’m younger! I’m a sour 16??✌? Just kidding!! Tell me yours too! Wanna know if I need to call you di or sumthin! Thank you so much again ☺️☺️❤️️

      • seyal on June 14, 2017 6:17 pm

        Yaar… U are 16!!! 16 is always sweetvnot sour.. Ya it gives us some tensions coz many of us will befacing our 10th results at that age… But it’s a pretty good time with friends….. I also had my sweetest moments ever in my life with friends at the age of 16…… The cute banters between us are still alive in me.. I can’t resist myself if i started to say about my friends…. Luv u girl…..

      • seyal on June 14, 2017 6:18 pm

        Forgot to say my age… It’s 17…….

      • Resh on June 14, 2017 9:30 pm

        I was just kidding about the sour thing ik it’s sweet! Looks like I need to call you di!?! Upto u! But I love you too☺️❤️

      • seyal on June 15, 2017 6:30 pm

        l know that u were also just kidding yaar… And call me whatever u like to… Any my sister(cousin ) of ur age calls me by nickname…. So decision is urs…..???

    4. Robin on June 13, 2017 7:11 pm

      Karan is changing great ff

      • Resh on June 13, 2017 8:48 pm

        Yes he is changing! Thank you so much Robin!?

    5. #nairanlover:-) on June 13, 2017 8:06 pm

      It was a nice one.Post ASAP.

      • Resh on June 13, 2017 10:13 pm

        Thank you so much ☺️

    6. Rosie25 on June 13, 2017 8:42 pm

      Such a good ff loved it resh
      Love u ??? for ur work

      • Resh on June 13, 2017 10:15 pm

        Thank you so much Rosie!! Love you too for being my reader?☺️❤️!

    7. Ayonija on June 13, 2017 8:51 pm

      Oh! wow Reshma. U are such a geeat person that i can’t imagine ever. I everytime wait for ur FF becoz it is so good. Loved it so much. Ur all chapters are becoming my fav… Keep it up best writer.. Loads of love

      • Resh on June 13, 2017 10:16 pm

        Thank you so much Ayonija! That’s really sweet of you! I’m happy that they are your favourites.. thank you so much..☺️️❤️

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