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Home»Fan Fiction»The Key To His Heart… Swasan fanfic (Chapter 4)
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The Key To His Heart… Swasan fanfic (Chapter 4)

LostStoriesBy LostStoriesJune 10, 201737 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hai…guys… I’m back with new chapter. Hope u enjoy it. And… SwaSanians…and RagLakians… Have patience… ????
Chapter 4
*** THE DREAM GIRL***
Chapter 3 ⬇
Here
#Laksh’s pov
It was pin drop silent in the car. Swara sat in the car’s backseat like a trouble maker facing the school principal, when Sanskar sat in the front seat busy with his I phone. I drove the car and I was bored to death. I looked at Swara through my rear view mirror. She sat sulking. Poor girl.. she would be having a hell of a time sitting without uttering a word. The Swara I met few days back can’t spend 2 seconds without talking and..now she was sitting like a dump for a half n hour. She saw me through the mirror and she showed her tongue at me. ??
I showed mine in return. Then she pointed her eyes at Sanskar and gestured that she wants to punch him. I smiled.
” If u really want to.. you can show that to my face”
Suddenly Sanskar spoke out of blue. Making both me and Swara startling. He said that without looking at Swara but… His voice meant sarcasm with a hinge of power. That’s how he talks. In just a simple word..he demands attention as well as business. He saw swara’s gesture through the same way I did. Now Swara looked like she is gonna have a heart attack.
‘Oh..the fun has just began…’ I couldn’t suppress my laughter. I chuckled and she rounded her eyes at me. Thank God.. Sanskar’s phone just beeped. And..he again got busy with his phone. Swara sighed in relief.
After 10 or more minutes.. we reached the mall. Sanskar walked in front and me and Swara followed him. Well.. I couldn’t ignore the fact that.. Swara was getting attention and we were walking together hand in hand. Anyone who doesn’t know us would mistake us for a couple but we both don’t care..??.. from the minute we talked I knew..this girl is gonna be irritating.. maddening but… Cute. She is happy and spreads it. She became my best friend in such a short time and this pure bond is something I cherish. But right now.. I had another things to thinks about.. for example.. why Sanskar wants my help?????
# Swara’s POV
I hate this man…
When I thought I could have fun and have a good time shopping.. these idiot Mr.I’m-so-angry had to come along and ruin my day. What does he think himself?
And.. there’s Laksh.. he is supposed to be the only person who understood me and now he is acting like he is his brother’s right hand. And I hate his smirk.

#Third person pov
The shopping turned out to be pretty fun for Laksh like he thought. In the shop.. Sanskar only wanted to buy something for his mother. But… Swara was thinking of buying the whole shop. ???
She kept pointing to almost every dress in the shop and went to trial room. After wearing every dress she asked Laksh and never even looked at Sanskar.
Laksh could sense his brother’s irritation. And.. Swara was acting like he doesn’t exist. ??
” Swara….it has been like an hour.. I need to buy some things too.. please come out”
Laksh shouted that Swara can hear from the trial room..
“Just one more” Swara said while putting on the 17 th dress she selected. After 2 minutes Swara came out of the trial room.
Lucky couldn’t believe his eyes. The Swara went into the trial room was different. This one looked more beautiful and elegant. She was wearing a peach color full gown. It was simple and only had floral embroidery at its waist. It had slight sleeves but not half sleeves.. its neck was just wide rounded.. but Swara looked like a princess. Laksh watched her open mouthed for a second.
” Who are u? What have u done to my Swara?”
Laksh teased Swara and she pouted.
After taking a 32 selfies with Laskh she went back to change her into her own clothes.. and Laksh specifically asked the sales girl (who was literally drooling over Sanskar??) to bill the peach gown in his account.
But…when he looked back he saw something more shocking…..???
Sanskar was looking where Swara was standing 1 minute ago with open mouth and his eyes had some twinkle Laksh has never seen before. Laksh walked near him and whispered….
” Bhai… Close that mouth before someone notices..and also she left a minute ago..”
????
Sanskar just glared at Laksh and Laksh could see a slight red in his face..but before he could confirm if it was blush.. he walked towards the exit. Swara came out from the trial room and she only saw a laughing Laksh and walking Sanskar. She couldn’t understand what’s going on..she didn’t wanna know too..

After the shopping… The three settled down in a cafe to take some time off. Swara and Laksh kept on teasing each other. And… Sanskar kept his face like he is gonna explode soon. Swara even named him Hulk. At last ….they were silent only because of the coffee and suddenly Sanskar popped up the most anticipated question…
” Are u both dating?”
Swara spitted her coffee and Laksh’s eye popped out.
Then they both laughed. Before Laksh could answer.. Swara questioned.
” Are you nuts?”
” I asked a question… ” Sanskar glared at Swara.
“In. Which angle we look like a couple?”
” Another question.. Miss Roy”
Laksh could feel the heat between them and he also knew that this is gonna be a riot if he doesn’t stepped in middle.
“Time off u two”
Laksh said while gesturing a “T” using his both hands. They both glared at Laksh like they wanna shoot him down. But.. Laksh continued..
” Okay…Bhai.. Swara is my best friend.. Nothing more. And Swara… He just asked.. he has the right to ask me.. don’t take it personally ..”
SwaSan was having a war with glares. If looks can kill they both would be dead.
But.. Swara wasn’t ready to give up..
” And… U know.. I already have a boyfriend”

To be continued…

Please do comment… It means a lot to me… And.. love u all…
With HOPE, Faith and Love..
LostStories???

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    37 Comments

    1. kumu on June 10, 2017 11:44 pm

      awesome..tc..

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 6:09 am

        Thanks Kumu…tc.. ?

    2. Febi on June 11, 2017 12:02 am

      Nice dear

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 6:10 am

        Thanks Febi.. tc?

    3. moon on June 11, 2017 1:32 am

      awesome dear swara and laksh antiques swasan argument and bechara laksh. whole chappy is awesome and i enjoyed it

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 6:13 am

        Thanks Moon.. I enjoy writing SwaLak’s funny moments… Glad that u like it… TV..?

    4. gayathri.visu on June 11, 2017 4:38 am

      Wow! Fantastic dear. Laksh n Swara’s antics….OMG! Very funny. And last line, Swara have a boy friend? Update next part asap dear.

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 7:16 am

        Hai… Gayu..?? I was thinking of giving something to ponder on.. well… My dear.. my friend…wait n watch…???? Laksh and Swara is a symbol of every girl and boy who are best friends but… Society thinks of them as bf and gf even when they are not. I think almost every girl and boy can connect with that.

      • gayathri.visu on June 11, 2017 9:19 am

        Good morning my dear friend!
        U r absolutely correct. If a boy n girl are close to each other, it doesn’t mean they are bf n gf! They can be best friends also, right!!

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 11:39 am

        Yep… And.. a very good morning… Dear… ??

    5. Seebu_s on June 11, 2017 5:22 am

      Loved it…i want to see swasan this type of silly fights..

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 7:20 am

        Hai… Seebu.. wait n watch..my dear.. soon.. it’s gonna be war bw swasan. ?? TC ??

    6. ritu on June 11, 2017 5:39 am

      amazing..continue soon

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 7:21 am

        Thanks Ritu… TC?

    7. Sus on June 11, 2017 6:24 am

      well awesome chappy, bechara sanskar and swara omg how she will live her life with such a boring person

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 8:52 am

        Hai..Sus.. don’t call my Sanskar boring.. wait n watch to see the real face of Sanskar…???

    8. phoniex on June 11, 2017 6:41 am

      Haha this was so funny ???

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 8:54 am

        Thanks Phoenix.. glad dat u found dis epi funny.. tc ??

    9. sneha on June 11, 2017 7:03 am

      Fantastic ..amazing episode dear

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 8:55 am

        Thanks Sneha… Stay tuned for more.. take care???

    10. meera_s on June 11, 2017 7:57 am

      nice

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 8:55 am

        Thanks Meera.. tc ??

    11. neha on June 11, 2017 10:39 am

      loved it

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 11:40 am

        Thanks Neha… Glad dat u like it..???

    12. Rizna on June 11, 2017 1:51 pm

      Amazing

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 2:47 pm

        Thank u Rizna… Tc ??

    13. anu on June 11, 2017 3:14 pm

      nice

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 3:55 pm

        Thanks..Anu…??

    14. Soujanya on June 11, 2017 6:59 pm

      Awesome…

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 9:18 pm

        Thanks Soujanya.. tc ??

    15. Simi on June 11, 2017 9:07 pm

      Awesome update
      Mall scene was superb.. I like swara n laksh’s bond…

      • LostStories on June 11, 2017 9:22 pm

        Thanks… Simi.. I too like SwaLak bond.. I wanted them like this but… what to do..? TC ??

    16. Manasvi on June 11, 2017 11:25 pm

      Awesome..
      And why is Swara having a bf???
      I want to read the next one soon.. And for that you will have to post soon.. So post soon??
      Love you..?
      Take care..!!

      • LostStories on June 12, 2017 7:57 am

        Patience…my dear.. I’m on it.. love u too ???

    17. Arshaanya on June 12, 2017 3:15 pm

      Wwwweeeiiiiiiii m loving swalak bond… dey r so cuteeeee….
      N swasan ??
      I hve a doubt– i think swasan alrdy knw eo ???…
      Its jus a guess ???…
      I loved it…
      Continue soon

      • LostStories on June 12, 2017 7:01 pm

        Well… I like ur guess… But.. picture abhi baaki hai mere dost… ?? SwaLak is based on my bestie… Love u..dear.. take care… And keep smiling..???

    18. vyshu10 on June 14, 2017 5:56 pm

      nice

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