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JAB WE MEET in US by Neha-17 (Chapter-8)

Neha_PheonixBy Neha_PheonixJune 9, 201768 Comments10 Mins Read
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Author’s Note: Here, is the awaited update. I am grateful for your showers of comment, please don’t stop them. I am super late, but I wasn’t getting the way to shape up the story. Enjoy Reading! And for Anika’s revelation, I can’t let her express until they share a bond. So, that will take a time.

Link for Chapter 7:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/jab-meet-us-neha-17-chapter-7/

Link for previous posts:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/7785/?profiletab=posts
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Chapter 8 :-

Here, Shivaay and Robin were wondering what these girls are up to.
Robin: Are u leaving? Or you are waiting for her?
Now, I understand why people troll gossip of ladies. Maybe, that’s never ending.
Shivaay: Haha.Ya true, when two childhood friends meet from long time, they have lots to share. That too when they are girls!
Now, as I have been waiting for 20 mins or so another few minutes won’t make any difference.
Soon, these girls came. Anika was surprised, Shivaay is still waiting. She thought he had left.
It was late in night and time to leave. Tia and Anika shared a brief hug and greeted goodbye.

Anika followed Shivaay and now they were standing on the pavement.
Shivaay: So, how are you going home?
Anika: Oh! I came by the metro. I will prefer it in this never sleeping ever busy city. It’s just few minutes walkable from here.
And you?
Shivaay: Yes, even I will prefer the metro. I had told my driver to leave then.

(Shivaay had arrived in car and car was waiting from him, but he wanted to spend time with Anika. Hence he lied.Whereas, Anika’s driver was on leave.)
Anika: Okay, let’s use the pedestrian walkway.

Both, of them were walking but they were as silent as a grave. It was like they wanted to talk but getting to a suitable topic was difficult.

Shivaay POV:
I want to talk so much with her. I want to know what’s troubling her? But, where to begin with? Alas! I am so talkative but now, thoughts are vanished from my min. We fight like mad and now its pin drop silence. We don’t know each other much. How, can I directly start a personal topic. Then near by, I noticed a Candy shop. I thought we should visit. Maybe, it will help to lighten up her mood. I told her we should visit as I have sweet tooth. She just nodded and we went into the shop. It was a two storey shop entirely filled with vibrant candies. Such, shops are rare to find in India.
The mouth water confectionery included candy sticks,candy drops, truffles, wafer chocolate, variety of chocolates, chew and hard types,coconut candy, bubble gum and chewing gum, lollipops, caramel and many more……

Her face was elated, which was visibly seen. She said,” Wow! I could possibly spend a day and taste all. But, now I will go for Buddhi ke Baal. Oops! I mean Cotton candy and ordered it”. Also, she took a small, plate sized lollipop which was filled with rainbow colors and took for me too. While, paying the bill we almost smiled remembering last incident where I broke her card and she had thrown water on me. This, time I let her pay without interfering. We left the store, my desires went crazy to lick her as she was licking the lollipop. My breathing became uneven. It was fun to watch her that way. But, I have a good self-control.

Then, surprisingly she started talking. She told she used to eat Bhel and buddhi ke baal at Chowpaty in Mumbai. Also, she likes beaches.Well, I surely wouldn’t have done that, as it is very unhygienic food. Right now, raising this issue, I don’t want to invite fight. So, I kept mum. Then, we almost reached the station.
End of POV.
Anika: Your younger brother, Rudra isn’t he loved by everyone? As, well as cool and fun-loving person. I really liked his talks; it reminded me of someone dear to me.
Anika was feeling clumsy.

Shivaay: Rudra is a charming person. He makes lots of friends in the first meet. Well, Anika, I could observe you were off-track and emotional. If something is bothering you, expressing it, makes us feel better. If you are missing that person so much, talk or meet. Solutions exist but you are creating emotional turmoil of yourself and stretching the matter.

With Shivaay, said this, Anika began crying uncontrollably. She hugged Shivaay, rested her head on his chest and caught hold of his coat. Shivaay hadn’t expected this reaction. He felt bad, maybe his words have hurted her. Still, he felt she should cry out, to lessen up her pain. Shivaay was quite for a while.

Shivaay: Hey, sorry if I have said something wrong. Don’t cry, say something. Anika…
Then she looked at him and was controlling her tears. And, Shivaay was soothing her back.

Anika: (Wiping her tears.) I know, I am behaving like silly. But, listening of your talks made remind of my brother- Sahil. A cute chubby boy, and understandable at very young age. I wish, I could meet or see him. But, that’s not possible.
Anika started crying again, loudly.( Aaahuhhh, Aaahuhuhuhh- imagine like the way she does in IB.) Shivaay was digesting this new piece of information. He could not understand why she isn’t calling him? Aren’t they on talking terms now?
Shivaay: Hey, give your phone. I will dial his number, you talk to him. It will make you feel better. Come, have a sit.
They were at the station, he pointed, to the seats nearby. But, Anika was sobbing like a child.

Anika: (Crying) I wish, I could. You are lucky to have your brothers, but my best brother…… (She was silent for a while.)
He is no more. He, left this world and his sister years ago and made me alone.

Shivaay was shocked to hell. He had never imagined this situation. He was feeling bad for her. He can’t imagine life without his brothers. He was chilled to the bone, thinking if something would happen to his brothers. And, her Anika was living without her brother. This made his eyes moist. To make her silent, he said-

Shivaay: Anika, calm down. (Half hugging her and soothing her hands.) I am sure; your brother won’t like his, sister weeping constantly. He will want you to be happy, so that he can stay peacefully. He must, be watching you, as he loved you a lot. So, won’t he feel bad,to see you in this state? Come, on smile for your brother, this will make him feel good, wherever he is.

Anika: Yes, my brother didn’t like when, I used to cry. He used to do every possible effort to cheer me up. But, the fact which always makes me guilty is he was left to die and I could not do anything. I will get justice for him, I will never forgive them. I am feeling low. I want to leave. Thanks, for being there and giving me a shoulder to cry. I am really grateful to you.

Shivaay: I don’t want to dig up the past. You can share anytime you want to. Remember, I am just a call away. Take care. Come, I will drop you home.
There he passed his visiting card.
Anika: (Anika had composed herself now.) Please don’t bother yourself much. Already, I have troubled you a lot. Let, me go my way, I will be safe. Also, we have our ways opposite side from this station. It’s late,even you go and take rest.

Shivaay didn’t want her to go. But, he didn’t want any arguments so he abided to her decison.
Shivaay: Take care, Anika. I don’t know, but I feel ought to be there for you. Bye!

She gave a weak smile and went inside the metro. Shivaay stood there watching her.
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Shivaay had waited for her call or text that night but she didn’t. He wasn’t having any source to contact her. He thought maybe, she doesn’t feel to share with him. After all, we only had hate relation till now.
Anika POV: I never felt, I will share the pain with anyone. Shivaay is a good person. He really cares for me. After long time, I got a shoulder to cry on, a person to understand me. I feel, I will invite unwanted trouble for him if he gets close to me. She felt the urge to call him, but was afraid that if he ever refuses to accept her, she will be totally broken. So, she thought better she won’t disturb Shivaay anymore. She also felt selfish not to thank him, as he was worried for her. These emotions were juggling in her mind.
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At last, after few days, she decided to write him an email, to the address which was mentioned on the card.She decided to keep it formal.

// Dear Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi,

Hello! I hope you are doing well? I am totally fine, busy with my exams. That day, I really felt your friendly presence, appreciative for consoling me. Sorry, I didn’t contact you as, I went home and went into deep slumber while sobbing. I am not weak,but that day my roots were shaken. Thanks, for your efforts, I am managing myself great.
Take care.

Best Regards,
Anika //
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The mail was unseen by Shivaay for a few days. Anika thought that, it’s good he didn’t replied, as she thought to maintain distance with him. But, she used to check all the mails. (In her heart she had expected his reply).Suddenly, the new email notification ping came. Anika checked. It was from Shivaay. It read as,

//Respected Ms. Anika,

You are Welcome! Take care. All the best! Best wishes!

Regards,
Shivaay Singh Oberoi //

Anika felt bad reading such a short reply. She had made the first step to distance him from her and now this was the result.
Anika POV: I will never message him now. Respected Ms.Anika??I at least made an effort to write dear. Maybe, he is angry on me that, it took many days for me to reply. It would have been fine, if had not replied. He will never lose his “Akduness”. Have, I lost his caring? Or he is busy. Well, anyways, what happens is for good.

Anyways, I don’t care.

Whereas, by saying this, the person mentions, they really do CARE!
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Note: Please, just a word will be appreciating. Silent readers, do comment. I will be waiting for your comments as they reach to my heart. You can just topics for Food for thought by sending PM. Any changes or reviews [pos,neg] let me know. Next, episode will be more fun and I have started writing it too. So, this time I will post in time. Pinky promise.

Love ya !

Best Regards,
Neha-17

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    68 Comments

    1. alekhika20 on June 9, 2017 9:13 pm

      Nice update

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:33 pm

        Thanks dearr..a lottt..!
        You always support and motivate me…really u r a fav reader!
        Love ya!????

    2. aryaraju on June 9, 2017 9:49 pm

      Awesome ??

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:36 pm

        Thanks dear..I am glad you found it awesome..Do tune for the next one..!
        Love ya!????

    3. nikita_jai29 on June 9, 2017 9:58 pm

      It is awesome dear

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:37 pm

        Thanks dearrr….a lott! For your care and motivation from the start..!
        LOve ya???

    4. Sofiya. S. on June 9, 2017 10:08 pm

      Awesome episode dear..
      Shivay also had Buddhi ka baal for Annika ??…?
      What happened to sahil?
      Anyways loved the Update?…
      Post soon ?❤…

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:39 pm

        What happend to Sahil is an unexpected mystery unfolded
        Yes, Shivaay had..afterall..Its from a Candy shop in Boston
        I am glad you loved it!
        Love ya!???

    5. Nidhi on June 9, 2017 10:13 pm

      Amazing
      Update soon

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:41 pm

        Thanks dear Niddhi! For commenting…really..It means a lott!
        Ya, tomorrow…you will have your update!
        Love ya dear..Do tune in for the next!
        Love ya!???

    6. pari on June 9, 2017 11:12 pm

      Nice

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:42 pm

        Thanks, dear Pari. I am delighted and super happy that you commented!
        Thanks for your efforts..I encourages me a lott!
        Love ya dear!???

    7. Annika51 on June 10, 2017 12:15 am

      Hii Neha..
      This was really amazing dear.
      Will catch up with your work now.
      Sorry for being late.
      I know I am gonna love all the chapters.
      This one was really amazing.

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:45 pm

        Hey, Anika..such a motivating comments..
        I am sure..you will love them..as u a amazing writer too!
        You arent late..only your comments matters dearr
        Thanks a lott dear..for the appreciation!
        Love ya!???

    8. Ankita27 on June 10, 2017 12:24 am

      Amazing update.. loved it..

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:46 pm

        Thanks dear..Ankita!
        I am happy that..you liked itt..
        I will update the next tomorrow..which is gng to be a fun
        Thanks for commenting..again
        Love ya!???

    9. Abbi on June 10, 2017 4:11 am

      Hey Neha! Yesterday I was wondering that you haven’t posted a new chapter yet, but look when I saw the title a wide smile crept on my face, I literally loved this chapter, you wrote ot well, especially their formal mail conversation I dunno why but I liked that part.
      Keep writing great. Update the next one asap. ❤

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 5:56 pm

        Wow, thanks Abbi dear..I am contended..that someone was remembering this story.It means a lott. Yeah! Even I am smiling by your lovely comment. Mail conversions are interesting ..I will surely update tomorrow..!
        Love ya!????

    10. Banita on June 10, 2017 12:38 pm

      Amazinggggggg…. Update dr…. Luv it… Post ASAP…

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 6:00 pm

        Thanks dearr Bani! Your friends call you that..I have seen in many updates..![Can I call you by this name?]..I am gonna post tomorrow dear! Thanks for youyr precipus comment!
        LOve ya! ????

    11. Jerry_36 on June 10, 2017 1:07 pm

      Hello Neha.
      Well now the intezaar ki ghadi has came to an end. Thank you for updating. I am in love with your ff??
      Shivaay’s and Robin’s talk were on full swing. Girls, uff literally if I would meet a friend of mine, the same would have happened?
      Shivaay wanted to spend some quality time with Anika, ohoo Billu ji. The candy store, there is a request don’t give such descriptions, it make your mouth watery?
      I love their talks and the embarrassment too when there was silence.
      Anika’s vulnerable state, gosh Sahil is dead in your ff, really sad for it.
      And yeah I loved the email part too very much. Poor anika, waiting for the progress in their relationship.
      Di do update soon. You are an awesome writer. Love you very very much❤

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 6:23 pm

        Hey, Jerry…what an amazing comment dearr..
        Even I have waited a lott..[intezaar ki ghadi for this too]..to reply your comment..Jst kidding
        Well, even I will chat a lot..with my old friend
        I was also,..temped a lott. I too have a sweet tooth like Biluji…haha!
        There is story which is yet to unfold about ANika’s past and Sahil! Stay tuned for it dear!
        Thanks for such a fab appreciation..you guys find me so..I write just my heart out!
        Thanks, choti writer!
        Love ya!????

    12. Radhika on June 10, 2017 1:13 pm

      Wow plz update soon

      • Neha-17 on June 17, 2017 5:02 pm

        Sure, dear..Thanks a lott for commenting. I am totally delighted reading it. You took efforts, I am filled with glee. Next one is updated, dear! Love ya!???

    13. Tanz on June 10, 2017 1:58 pm

      Awesome update Neha Di. I really didn’t expect this about Saahil …. I guess something related to his death has made Annika hate her parents, I hope you’ll unfold that mystery soon. I loved their e-mail convo and after that Anika’s POV…and Shivaay-“Respected Ms. Anika” – how could you?… I think Shivaay is also angry with her she contacted her after a long time, that’s why a single line reply …well if i would have been in Shivaay’s place, i would have done the same???
      I’m waiting for the next chapter…

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:30 am

        Hey, dear thanks a ton for commenting. I have long story in my mind as of now. I will update till, I am with ideas. Do tune in for the next ..I have posted it and Shivaay is angry or not. We will come to know soon.

        Next one…is update..have a look sweetie. You comments are always delight to read.
        Well, yes even I would have done the same! I am glad you like email idea.
        Love ya ????

    14. Sanskriti120 on June 10, 2017 2:17 pm

      Hooo these girls na??????…….
      I loved the way you showcased the POV of shivaay…. It was marvellous..
      And sahil??… Bechari anika.
      The way she expected him to Write more is cute.. And yeh shivaay bhi na yaar… Thoda Aur likha nhi sakta tha.. Aur Uper se respected daaldia?………
      Everything was too perfect..
      Loved it..❤..
      Post soon?

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:35 am

        Thanks dear Sanskriti, for such awesome comments. Really, I am so happy readings them. Sahil’ s mystery will unfold but, that will take some time.
        Wow! You found it perfect….Tysm.
        Yes, let’s see what explaination Shivaay gives when he meets Anika.
        Do tune in. Also, dear as you are friend of Somya…I have included your name in this Os for her bday.
        Here is the link- http://www.tellyupdates.com/anika-meets-somya-bday-gift-os/

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:36 am

        Love ya ???

    15. thedreamsoul on June 10, 2017 3:42 pm

      Awesome one Neha di ! Shivaye’s and Robin’s conversation was fun and Shivaye was too desperate to talk to Anika !
      Di you can’t give such description for for the candy story , it was mouth watering when i m picturing it and fasting doesn’t help ! The candy part was so sweet and cute .
      I feel so bad for Anika , I never thought Sahil wouldn’t be there . The email part was also amazing . I loved this and over all the chapter was perfect .
      Love you di and update soon .

      Sana ?

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:41 am

        Hehe! Even I could not hold myself researching for types of Candies, I am glad you liked it. After, your fast gets finished, do have a candy remembering me. I hope you have great fasting month. The email part, did suddenly popped up.

        Yep, I know Sahil isn’t there but, the story behind it with be emotional.Tysm, that you found it perfect. I get motivated for writing, when I have supports like you.

        Hey, the next part is updated. Do check! Love you too??, Sana dearling.

    16. Vanisha on June 10, 2017 4:30 pm

      awesome epi di
      shibin conversation was fun
      what happened to Sahil
      loe you..

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:44 am

        What happened to Sahil is a mystery and a long story which I will be revealed with time.
        So, dear just hold on for sometime. Haha, even I was smiling writing the shibin conversation,
        Thanks dear, I am glad that you found it awesome.
        Next part is posted dear, do have a check!
        Love you tooo…Vanu babyy?????

    17. kanfi on June 10, 2017 4:55 pm

      Nehu…
      I was waitinggg for ur ff sincee linggggg…
      It was ammmazinggg…
      Shivaay n robin’s convo was hilarious,.,.
      Shivaay was desperately waiting for anika’reply,,,n what he get a formal mailll..
      Bt our tadibaaz is not less,,what a reply he did…
      Sahil is no more,..how….!!
      Poor ani….
      Let see how u unfold tge story….
      Awwwwssmeee update….
      Loveee uu

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:48 am

        What happened to Sahil is a mystery and a long story which I will be revealed with time.
        So, dear just hold on for sometime. And, Anika is really missing her bro.
        Well, even I was smiling writing the shibin conversation.
        Yeah, everyone liked the mail conversation part, like you!

        Thanks for reading dear. And ya, next part is updated, do check. I am happy you loved it.
        Love ya ???

    18. ruksy on June 10, 2017 7:00 pm

      Loved the amazing update

      • Neha-17 on June 17, 2017 4:53 pm

        Thanks a lott dear. Rusky you are a dear supporter from long time. It means a lott. Love ya dear???. Next one is posted. Do have a look..It has a twist!

    19. Ahaana on June 11, 2017 3:14 am

      Awesome. .ek dum khidkitid neha dii?

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:50 am

        Thanks dear, your this sweet works were music to my ears.
        I am delighted for your comments.
        Also, for your appreciation.
        Love ya?????

    20. Madhuani on June 11, 2017 3:58 am

      Waiting for this since ages(winks) tnq god atlast u posted it.
      It’s amazing dear.

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:52 am

        Ohh thanks Madhuani dear.
        Even the next part is posted, so again no wait here.
        Also, I am sorry to make you wait . Maaf kar dena yaar.
        I am glad you found it amazing.
        Love ya ????

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:34 am

        Hey, sorry, I know you have liked the next one.

    21. Rutuja on June 11, 2017 11:36 am

      Hey dii..sorry for late comment..it was soo amazing update ..i loved it alott..nd sso lied jus to spend some time wid anika..tats great..plz post d nxt one asap..luv u loads❤?

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:56 am

        Hi, Choti sisy…Yeah that’s true, SSO lied..!
        Shivaay can really go to any extend, to get what he wants.
        I am glad you found it amazing ?
        The next one is posted do have a look it has a twist.
        Love you a lots ???

    22. Shraddha-DBO on June 11, 2017 1:18 pm

      This was khidkitod yaar…
      Loving this story??

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 4:59 am

        Thanks dear, Shraddha for reading and giving your time.
        I admire you as a punctual person.
        I am glad you are loving this story.
        The next one is also posted, do check, it has a twist.
        Love ya ??

    23. Adi on June 11, 2017 5:27 pm

      Awsome dii i love it ???pls post next epi

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:02 am

        Thanks, Adu dear! ?
        The next one is posted, do have a look, it has a twist.
        I am glad you are liking this story.
        So, happy to have a great bestie like you.
        Also, delighted that you found it awesome.
        Love ya ???

    24. Soumya85 on June 12, 2017 10:40 am

      Wow di it was amazing really this epi contains emotion,fun,povs in was good to read..I was waiting for this epi and will wait for next epi too?loved it..sorry for late comment?love u ??

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:04 am

        Tysm, Somu dear.
        The next one is posted, do have a look, it has a twist.
        Aww, so sweet you were waiting for this.
        Hey, comments are never late, you read ..that gave me immense happiness.
        I am glad you loved it and found amazing.
        Love ya too????

    25. IME on June 12, 2017 10:04 pm

      Awesome I loved it
      superb
      Amazing
      m busy sry for short comment
      byee

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:07 am

        Thanks darling, Ishu?
        The next one is posted, do have a look, it has a twist
        You are busy and still you commented- means a lott dear!
        Length of comment doesn’t bothers me dear, you commented and liked it that gave happiness.
        Tysm, for appreciation.
        Love ya ???

    26. Radhika.k on June 12, 2017 10:29 pm

      Wonderful job di!! It was so delightful for me to read ur FF. I just felt like i was redaing a story book,but got sad when the story ended in such a short time.Really enjoyed this episode.Shivaay feeling for anika leaving his tadibaazi was amazing!! Waiting eagerly for the story to be continued! N sorry for the late comment dii didn’t had such a time to read n enjoy.All the best for next epic dii.Love u.

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:11 am

        Hey, Dear Radhika, such a sweet appreciation, really I am on cloud nine.
        The next one is posted, do have a look, it has a twist.
        Next time sure a longer story. Hey, comments can never be late, you read and took efforts that means a lott.
        Well, before separation track, Shivaay had almost forgotten his tadi for her.
        I hope you like next one too.
        Love ya ???

    27. TU Friends Forever on June 13, 2017 8:58 pm

      Bookie finally I am commenting here ufff it’s late I know but comment is the matter.i loved the panjumittai part(panjumittai is the tamil name of candy) n those shops R rare here I hope I go to that kind of shop n sahil ????????????? my cutu sahil but he is always near anika but????? if I was in anika place I can’t even imagine how I will be n SHIVAAY is becoming mature n anika breaking down????? it’s was a bit emotional that too sahil but I loved the epi bookie keep writing

      • Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 6:28 pm

        It’s Okay Rufi! I have lotss of patience and my heart says..Rufi will come for me..! Idk..but It means a ton..that….you wont be there to chat like mad but you are there..to support and ping your adorable presence in my heart. And, I will writee..so that..you will comment dear!
        Ya, Anika has a unexpected past and I will develop it. But, ANika is a strong person.
        Well, Even, I am fond of panjumittai…! I got your mail too, I will reply soon..as I have guests!’
        Thanks a lot! I will post next one tomorrow.
        Love ya!????

    28. HarSHaN on June 13, 2017 11:56 pm

      Neha!! !It’s Superbbbb!!!Lollipop?!!!!Nyccc.????.When ‘ll the nxt?? ??????Waitingggg…

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:13 am

        Hey, bro yeah you commented. Thanks a lott.
        The next one is posted, do have a look, it has a twist.
        I know ..even lollipop ? holds a great place in your FF too.
        You wait is over, I hope you like the next one.
        Love ya ??

    29. Riana on June 14, 2017 3:15 pm

      Very Cool N superb dear…???
      Soon i will start reading the old parts…
      Updt soon…??

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:15 am

        Thanks Raina dear, that means a lott!
        The next one is posted, do have a look, it has a twist.
        I hope you like it.
        I am filled with glee that you found it, cool and superb
        Tysm
        Love ya ???

    30. anagha on June 14, 2017 5:04 pm

      Hey!!.. That was a clean bowled episode!! Anika’s vulnerable State was well explained.. hats off dude . Love ya .

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:18 am

        Thanks dear, Anagha for lovely appreciation.
        Really, you were to the point and that did filled me with joy.

        The next one is posted, do have a look, it has a twist. I hope you like that too.
        Thanks again for taking time and commenting-means a lott.
        Love ya ???

    31. fenil on June 14, 2017 6:34 pm

      Wow Superb chppy.
      Robin and Shivaay r right u girls so busy in talks that sometime u forgot that u have a family and friends also that they are waiting :P:P:PSayad aap bhi ??:D:DGushtakhi maaf karna.

      Loved Shivaay Pov.

      U made my swwet si , Innocent si Anika cry that also uncontrollable I will ….plus u added fuel in fire by Sahil’s death…..i will…

      Janta maaf nahi karegi:)):)):))

      E-mail was nice.
      Can u pls help in defining brief hug!?8)8)8):)):)):))

      • Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:22 am

        Thanks dear, Fenu Bhai.
        Haha, bro maybe, I feel you have been through similar kind of situation. Ya, right even I was waiting.
        I am glad you loved Shivaay POV.
        Well, age se aisa nahe hoga, Anika will be strong now. Janta and app is baar maaf kar dena?
        Ya, email idea came while writing.
        Sure, check your hangouts, I have some messages for you.
        Love ya ??

    32. Mrunal on June 16, 2017 1:48 pm

      well first thing i did after becoming free is reading ur ff that too in one go…
      i was so eager to read next part that i even skipped commenting on previous parts… sorry for that but couldn’t help my curiosity u know…

      just loved the way ur story is progressing… sahil’s part was little unexpected.. but I’m loving shivaay’s nature… their blossoming relationship
      and especially i loved ani & tia’s bonding???

      just fabulous… fantastic…awesome… and what not… words will be less… i always admire u as writer…

      U R just Marvelous dear…
      love u…
      and do update ASAP ??

      • Neha-17 on June 20, 2017 1:16 am

        Thanks dear, Mrunal?.
        Such a splendid comment, well you made my day. Really!
        Wow and a long one too!
        You read dear that’s really matters, and you have totally compensated it by this beautiful comment.
        Your curiosity was spark for you.

        Ya, Shivaay is loved by one and all, I like taking things slow and enjoying each moment. Yep, Tia is an potential character but unfortunately she was turned negative in IB.

        I am so elated reading your comment, I read it twice-thrice.
        Love you a lots too??
        Surely, I will update next to next one soon, for you!

    33. Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 5:31 am

      Thanks dear, Mrunal?.
      Such a splendid comment, well you made my day. Really!
      Wow and a long one too!
      You read dear that’s really matters, and you have totally compensated it by this beautiful comment.
      Your curiosity was spark for you.

      Ya, Shivaay is loved by one and all, I like taking things slow and enjoying each moment. Yep, Tia is an potential character but unfortunately she was turned negative in IB.

      I am so elated reading your comment, I read it twice-thrice.
      Love you a lots too??
      Surely, I will update next to next one soon, for you!

    34. Diyaa on June 19, 2017 9:13 am

      This was a lovely update too Neha. I loved their walk together to the subway. Something about a silent walk together at night. I like how you come up with these twists …the short replies…the resulting feeling of sadness… awesome thinking. Very interesting update.?

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