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Home»Fan Fiction»Dear to nobody (RagLak) – intro
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Dear to nobody (RagLak) – intro

AstraBy AstraJune 8, 2017Updated:June 8, 201736 Comments4 Mins Read
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Dear to nobody

A lonely area..
A guy is thrown to ground, he falls on the ground with wounds.

‘Laksh..!’ A girl shouts.

Shekar: Ragini, get back…!!
He pulls Ragini back.

Some men are beating Laksh.

Rag: papa, plz don’t beat Laksh. It’s my fault..!!

Shekar glares at Ragini and she becomes calm being shocked.

The men beats Laksh and he falls unconscious. Ragini looks at him in tears.
Shekar pulls Ragini away from there..

All leaves Laksh. Laksh was bleeding in that lonely place. He is lying on floor lifeless like that..

His inner heart starts speaking,

‘Alone..!! I’m alone again..!!

Betrayal..!!

I have faced only this till now..!!

Nobody loves me..

Nobody cares for me..!

I’m dear to no one.

I’m always alone..!’

The screen becomes blank…

A title appears on screen..

‘DEAR TO NOBODY’

25 years back…

Someone brings an months kid to an orphanage.

‘who is he..?’ a lady asks.

‘someone, I found beside road’ he says.

‘oh, abandoned kid..!!’ she says and takes him inside.

That kid grows up into a one year boy..

He is crying endlessly… no one cares…

Screen blanks..
(after 5 years)

The boy is playing with kids around. They push him back.
‘get out..!! don’t play with us..!’ those kids say.
That boy in tears looks around,
All kids are playing together happily, no one is accepting him.

He is alone..!

The boy cries, no one cares.

(After few years)

The boy grows up into a teenage boy. All boys and girls around him in school are teasing him,
“Hey see Laksh came, see him..hahahaha..!!”
Fun..! he was only the fun to people around..
Because, he never talked with people.

Now..

He is a 20 years old guy.

The arrogant, stubborn.. but stunningly smart.

He was walking in the college, he is the topper of college.

All the girls drool over his handsomeness, but he cares none.

Laksh sits in his place in library as usually…
He looks at a simple small family..

Parents are kissing their one and only one kid.

Laksh smiles looking at it. he gets smile only when he looks at such scenes.

His pov starts,

“Family..! family is such a nice word to listen.. which sooths the heart. If we say, there is someone for us.. what a proud moment is it..!! but I’m…”
Laksh bends his head, and a tear drops from his eye on the book.

He listens all the students talking around him.

“Hey dear.. hai dear… hello darling..!!”

Laksh smiles sadly, “But, I’m dear to no one..!”

“Hai Laksh..!!” he hears a voice of a boy. Laksh looks at him, he is Sanskar.

Laksh just looks at him expression less,

“Don’t think much. I’m not dear for him. Just a use..!”

San: bro, can you help me in assignments..?

Laksh: sure..!!

San: wow, thanks..!!

Laksh pov continues, “I’m just useful to people like this. nobody asks, did I eat, or did I sleep.? Nobody cares when I’m sick. No one is there to share my happiness. Why I will have happiness, what does that mean..??”

Just then he hears a voice, “Sanskar…” a girl calls.

Laksh raises his eye brows to look at that girl.

That girl, who is wearing a pink shirt covered by a white over coat upon a white jeans.

“Is she is a girl in their college..?” Laksh amazes.

San: hey Ragini, come Laksh will help us this time..!!

‘Ragini..’ that name resonates in his mind.

Ragini smiles and sits beside Laksh.

“The first girl in this world at whom he was admired first..!!”

……………………………………

Flash back end..
Now, present…

Shekar pulls Ragini into the house, she was crying badly.

Rag: papa.. plz save Laksh..!! I want him..!!

Shekar shouts: shut up..!!

Ragini cries silently.

Shekar: you both together have cheated this whole family..!!

Janaki, Daadi, Annapurna, Durga Prasad, Uttara and Chirag who are standing aside looking at them silently.

Ragini: that was all my mistake papa.. don’t harm Laksh..!! He is innocent..!!

Shekar: he has cheated the rich mansion of this Gadodiya family. How can he be innocent..???
Shekar shouts and Ragini faints suddenly.

Ladies run to Ragini and make her sleep on couch.
Daadi checks Ragini’s wrist.

“Shekar, Ragini is pregnant”

All shock with the news. Shekar gets tears. He and all others look at Ragini who is sleeping lifelessly on couch.

To be continued…

this is my original work. don’t copy paste.

Astra

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    36 Comments

    1. avika on June 8, 2017 1:45 pm

      Nice and interesting

    2. Ankita on June 8, 2017 1:45 pm

      Amazing story dear plz continue

    3. Follybraverl on June 8, 2017 1:50 pm

      Asthu baby mystery overloaded omg my ragu is pregnant

    4. Ammy on June 8, 2017 1:58 pm

      superb

    5. sanchami on June 8, 2017 2:15 pm

      Awesome plot dr but plz update it regularly

    6. asra on June 8, 2017 2:32 pm

      interesting astu dear….am excited…oh our ragu pregnant…eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

    7. DivzS on June 8, 2017 2:32 pm

      First first only all rocking shocking mysteries and twists…. Expectations will be increasing drastically for next chapters……. Astra, . . . Be Careful..

    8. Asw on June 8, 2017 2:56 pm

      Amazing I read in the fb keep going

    9. Arjuna on June 8, 2017 3:11 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    10. Makku on June 8, 2017 3:25 pm

      Awesome akka. The title is superb akka. Eagerly waiting for the story to unfold akka. Please update next part soon.

      Bye akka. Take care.

    11. Malu on June 8, 2017 3:31 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    12. aleeza on June 8, 2017 3:37 pm

      Nice

    13. Monisha on June 8, 2017 4:02 pm

      Awesome

    14. Rasha on June 8, 2017 4:07 pm

      wow my choto sis always with a different concept, it’s so amazing yar..

    15. Sherin on June 8, 2017 4:28 pm

      Awesome

    16. Soumya on June 8, 2017 4:35 pm

      Awesome plot di

    17. Mitra on June 8, 2017 4:50 pm

      Awesome please post next update soon

    18. Darshini on June 8, 2017 5:52 pm

      Mystery queen..it was such a lovely part..waiting for the next part asthu…
      Post it soon dear..?
      Tc da..!!

    19. Anju on June 8, 2017 7:05 pm

      Awesome start

    20. Pearly on June 8, 2017 7:17 pm

      Superb

    21. Ashly on June 8, 2017 7:51 pm

      Awesome superb

    22. mark@lotha on June 8, 2017 8:46 pm

      super superr..

    23. Ammu on June 8, 2017 8:56 pm

      It’s interesting intro dear and eagerly waiting for next episode. Feeling bad for Raglak specially Laksh. Please post next part ASAP ??????

    24. tëìtō kUn on June 8, 2017 9:06 pm

      Amazing….
      Poor Laksh & Ragu ?

    25. IQRA222 on June 8, 2017 9:26 pm

      Superb story asthu di
      will wait eagerly for the next part

    26. Elizabethlovely on June 8, 2017 9:51 pm

      Awesome

    27. Bela on June 8, 2017 11:54 pm

      Aww my poor Laksh. Don’t worry baby, I love you????

      Love this work of yours, eagerly waiting for the next part?

    28. hemalattha on June 9, 2017 8:07 am

      Awesome dear. Interesting.

    29. Vennila on June 9, 2017 1:18 pm

      Awesome

    30. Rehna on June 9, 2017 3:34 pm

      Awesome dear

    31. Monu on June 9, 2017 3:40 pm

      Awesome episode

    32. Monisha on June 9, 2017 4:02 pm

      Awesome

    33. Vini on June 9, 2017 4:23 pm

      It seem to be different plot interesting

    34. Jiyani on June 9, 2017 8:07 pm

      Sry fr not commenting last part. Totally interesting

    35. Akshata on June 10, 2017 6:04 pm

      omg, very emotional, title itself says it all. dont worry laksh astra love u so much. so u r dear to her n if u r dear to her then me also becoz astra is dear to me.

    36. A.xx on June 13, 2017 2:13 am

      Superb and such an amazing concept. Xx

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