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B’day surprise…OS for sumo

kanfiBy kanfiJune 8, 201759 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hii everyone……today’s OS is a surprise….so lets start….for my sis somu aka SOUMYA85

6 june 2017

KOLKATA
How does she manage to convince mom n dad….thnk u sooo much kanfi di,,,this is all becoz of u that i m going to visit manali……….””says girl 1

MUMBAI
I m so xcted today i m going on a trip with three most imp person of life…manali i m coming…,its all get possible due to kanfi,,,thnx yrr….”’says girl 2

MUMBAI(another house)
I m wondering how mama get agree to let me go with my sooooper diiiiis..
Kanfi di!,what an idea u’ve given to us….”says girl 3

PATNA
I start coughing while drinking water……
Ughhh….
I know all this is happening due to that three pagals…they must be thinking about me…..
Chlo confernce call krti hu unhe…

On call
Me—–hellloo paglon

G1–hiii kanfi di…i was thinking about u…

Me–hii somu….i know ,,,mai khanste khanste pagl hogyi…!!!

(G1 is our b’day girl SOUMYA)

G2—hey kanfi….nautanki mt kr….ek to tujhe yaad karu or tu bhav kharhi h….

Me–mss naira…..zda bano mt….meri wajah se manali dkh paogi tm,,,,be thnkful

(G2 is naira from yrkkh)

G3–di,,,,,forgot me,,just talking to them only…kattii

Me–haayee meeshtu,,,,u know i love u n….

(G3 is meeshty from yrkkh)

FLASHBACK
5 yrs before…

Naira n i are best frnds…we become good frnds on instagram,…despite of belonging to different states,,we somehow manage to meet once in 6 months….

naira n meeshty r cousions,,,,so i also have good rapo with meeshty…
once we three decided to visit kolkata….

Soumya n i have bestest sis bonding…..we frst talked to each other on TellyUpdates…..
As i was going to kolkata so we three decided to meet somu…

Somu n we three spend a week togethr,…we njoyed a lot..somu make us visit to famous places of kolkata…..
We all 4 become buddies…!!

These 5 yrs made our bond more deeper….
______________
PRESENT TIME…..
ON CALL

Me—so packing done???

MeeshRa(meeshty n naira)—yeah done…

Somu–no di,,,i m not done….i m going to do packing….u three continue….
We’ll meet at station….byee

Me–okk somu bye….

Then we three had a conversation which was muted….!!
___________________
MANALI 7june 2017

A beautiful ,,must visit place in our india…..snow covered mountains….cool breezes,,,new people…..we r going to have a great time here….

We reach hotel….n take our room keys n proceed to the room…we have booked two rooms….
In one room–MeeshRa
Another–SomuKan

At 11:50PM
Someone knocked on our door….
I went to check…

Meesh–hii kanfi di…..

Me–u didn’t sleep yet,..

Meeshty run towards somu with a card in her hand….

Meesh–somu di…HAAPPPPY B’DAY

Somu–awwwwee..meeshty thnk u….

Naira has also came to the room.

Me n naira–somu,,,today is ur b’day……how can i forget….

Me–happy b’day somu…sorry

Naira—soorrrrryyyy….happy b’day

Somu ger teary eyed that her buddies didnt remmbr her b’day…..she said thnx n went to washroom…..

At 12:00 AM/8JUNE 2017

Somu comes out of washroom bt all lights were off

Somu–kanfi di,,naira di,,meeshty where r u all..???

N suddenly….lights get on
Lots of balloon burst….

Evryone….
HAPPPPPPYYYY B’DAY SOMUUUUU……..!!!!

Somu shocked…..tm sb?????

Everyone…
Hn hm sb

So there r.
Ronu,,,janvi,,,ishu,,,fenil,,,,,,neha,,,,neeti,,,,adi,,,,,candy………..(srry if forgetting someone,,,i dont know somu r closed to whom,,bt about these i m sure)

Ronu–hey bff….how u thought we forget ur b’day….!!

Janu–xctly bff….u r duffer….

Somu—i m speechless right now…

Fenil—acha h….we dont want any speech..

Everyones laugh

Ishu–tu hmari bestie h ,,,how can i forget u…!!we will obviously going to wish u,,,,,,bt these surprise was plan of kanfi di

Neha–yeahhh….somu u know we love u…..
Kanfi ne ammazing plan bnaya….n u r surprisd….we all r happy..

Candy–smjhi budhu…why were u crying stupid…happy b’day

Neeti–mzaa aya n somu….hm aye h to mza ana hi th…..

Everyone start staring neeti….

Neeti—are mera mtlb hmsb….draao mt is bache ko….

Adi—yeah….finally we all r together….happy b’day somu,….thnk u kanfi di for planning all this…

Somu had tear in her eyes by this time….
She runs towards me n hugged me tightly

Somu–thnk h soo much kanfi di…

Me—again thnk u…..bt its not becoz of me only….uncle aunty allowed me to take u with us,,so big wala thnks to them-…n naira n meeshty also helped me in planning all surprises..
When u went for packing.,we ,,three ,,were dicussing plans
.now many more things r there for u,.,
bt TU frnds k plan mera th,,,u can give me credit fot that…..

All TU family xcpt neeti said

Di/kanfi dont praise urself like neeti…n everyone starts laughing…..neeti makes puppy face

Then i bring chocolate cake…( dont know which flavour u like,,so sry)

Somu cuts cake we all sing
HAPPY B’DAY TO U

Everyone gifts somu….bt i didn’t give her anything

Me–sry somu,,,in all these i forget to take any gift….

Somu–dont say sorry…..ye gift se km h kya …love u…

Me—okk…everyone go to sleep,,.have to wake up at 6 pm…more surprises r there for somu….gd night

(Thats why i booked two rooms)
We all get settled n went to sleep….

At 6:00 pm
There is a storm in these two rooms….everyone is running here n there n busy in getting ready..

Neeti—candy di….ap b same colour dress q phn rhi…bs copy kro mujhe

Candy–tu n chup rh..mai yhi phnungi….tu chnge kr jake….

Neeti chnged her dress….
Neeti–ishu u r also wearing the same colour ,,everyone is copying me…huh

Ishu–tu koi actress h kya,,,jo sb tujhe copy krnge,,,mai ni krne wali chnge….

Neeti again chnged her dress…finally no one was wearing same colour dress as her….

Adi went to wake up fenil n starts laughing like meniac n we all reached there…..everyone starts laughing….

Listening voics fenil wakes up…

Fenil—what???sb pagal hogyi ho???

Ishu–mjhe to ap lg rhe ho ……she shows him mirror…

His whole face was smashed with cake….

Fenil–kisne kya ye sb,,.mre itne ache face k band bja dye,..

Janvi n ronu–hmne….ap eklaute bhaiya ho hmare to itna to bnta h….*winking*

Me–chlo bhut hogya…everyone go n get ready n where is somu….

Somu—di i m here….

she’s looking so pretty…..

Everyone…
Woww somu looking ammazing….

Me–u all wait outside hm,neha or naira ate h chnge krke….where is meeshty???

Janvi–she went downstairs with everyone….

Me–ok u also go…we r coming
__________________
After sometime,,,i,naira n neha came downstair n everyone was amazed seeing us…..

We all r wearing same dress,,,on naira’s dress it was printed HAPPY,,,,on neha’s B’DAY….on mine SOMU

somu gets soo happy,,,everyone is soooo happy….

Then we all went on mountains…..we all enjoyed very much……snow fall get started,,we r loving that…

We all reach at the top of mountain,,,,we take selfies……
We were there for 8 hours without getting bored…we eat street foods…..

We all had pani puri competition,…n gues who win??
Obvio,,,,me….!!;-) ๐Ÿ˜‰ no one can defeat me in this…

Now this is evening right now,,,,,moon wasn’t seen,,,there was darkness,,,we all r using flash lights of mobile….

Then i said…

Me—somu watch up in the sky….

Evryone watched up…..
I lit a fire cracker(rocket)….it goes up n get burst with glittering lights n get wrttn…..
HAPPY B’DAY SOMU…..

We all starts hooting n shouting,….
Now its time to go back…..
Bt all TU members have to go by todays train only….they were here for one day only….
We all four bid them good bye n reach our hotel….

Meeshty slept as she was vry tired….
I,naira n somu were sitting….

Somu–thnk u soooo much kanfi di n naira di….u r the best …..love uuu

Naira—awwwwweee….love u too somu

Kanfi–lovee u dear….n i dont give u any prsnal gift…so i buy this,,,its very small,…hope u like it,….
N i forward her envelope….

Somu–iski kya zarurat th di….or jo b ho mjhe psand ayega….

She opened n envelope n scream at her loud voice…

Somu–yeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh…..(sab kaan band krlo)

Naira gets shocked n poor meeshty waked up….

Meeshty–kya hua????earthquake aya???

Naira—kya hua somu…pagal aise kon chillata hai

Somu just run towards me n literally jumped on me….

Somu—-thnk uuuuu diii…..lovee uuu

Naira–will anyone tell me whats this??

Me–nothing just ticket of VIRAT KOHLI’S match…

Naira sits on sofa with thud..

Naira—what?……..!?????

Me–chlo bhht ques ansr hogya…sleep now,,,we’ve to go tomorrow….

Next morning we went to watch virat’s match….i m not intrsted in cricket bt someone beside me was jumping….
After match we four went to meet VIRAT KOHLI

Me–hii sir,,,,my frnd is ur huge fan,,,n tomorrow was her b’day so i wnted to fulfill her this wish….she is somu…

VIRAT–ohh..so sweet of u,,bt where is ur frnd

Me–here……..bt when i turned somu wasn’t there i searched her, n know what where i found her..

She was sitting on nearby sofa with a shocking xpression…

Somu…somu…..i shook her hard,,,somu….

Somu–yaa di….

Me–do u want to meet him or not…..

Somu–ofcourse….

Then we four had a talk with Virat…..somu ,,naira,,meeshty take selfie with him n his autograph

VIRAT–happy b’day soumya…..it was nice to meet u all….i’ve to go now…bye

Virat went ,,,somu was still in shock….
Next day ,,we returned to our native places….
Somu is still not ready to belive he met VIRAT KOHLI…..
——————–
NEXT DAY

Somu post her selfie with virat on TU
Candy k kya haal th pucho mt……
Candy–akele akele mil li n…!!bhul gyi hmko

Somu–are it was kanfi di’s surprise ,,i didn’t know about this at that time.. everone’s ticket was booked so u had to go n…!!

Candy–chl koi ni i m happy for u….

Everyone congratulate somu
_____________________________________________

HAPPYYY BIRTHDAY SOMU
THIS IS UR B’DAY GIFT…..LOVEEE UU
HOPE U LIKED IT……

N ALL TU MEMBERS,,,HOPE U R HAPPY WITH UR CHARACTER…
N WHOEVER READING THIS..,HOPE U ALL ENJOYED IT….

lots of love
Kanfi

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    59 Comments

    1. Soumya85 on June 8, 2017 9:54 am

      Wow di it was amazing awesome outstanding superb I don’t have words to define that how much i liked it no actually I loved it..the surprises were fabulous I just wish a b’day celebration with TU friends and the last part was omg it was like dream come true I meet VIRAT KOHLI..
      Love u doso much di
      Thank you so much for coming in my life I’m thankful to TU it has given me lots of friends thanks for making my b’day special love u di??

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 11:24 am

        Awwwwwwwweeeeee…….ittttaaa saaara thnxxx…loveee uuuu….
        U were my frst sis cum frnd to whom i become very close’…..loveeee uuuuuuu bhhhhhht saaara

    2. ronumowl on June 8, 2017 10:12 am

      awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe not only a gift for somu alone u surprised all of us….no one can give such a wonderful gift…..di love u love u a lotts…i alwayz dreams abt meeting them all my cutie tooo….n u have made my day by posting this os love u a lots..i dont know whether cutie will read this….if u read my comment cutie i wanna tell u m missing u a lott

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 11:26 am

        Loveeee uuuu ronu…..urs b’day willl also be dhaasu.. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
        I missed rufi here,,,n m really guilty for that…..hope she forgive me
        ????????…….
        I m also missing u rufi….
        I also want to meet u alll…..
        Lovee uuu

    3. ronumowl on June 8, 2017 10:12 am

      n happy happy bday to u somuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

      • Soumya85 on June 8, 2017 4:49 pm

        Love you bff??

    4. Shrinjal on June 8, 2017 10:38 am

      Awwwwwwwww….best birthday gift for Somu.. right na???? ????????? Awsm OS dii n happy birthday somu????????? have a blast! Love u??

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 11:27 am

        Sorrrryyy shrinju,,i forgot to mention u,,reallyy sorry????????

        I m happy u liked it…..n tell me ur b’day

      • Shrinjal on June 8, 2017 11:29 am

        It’s okk di..stop crying????

        My bday is on 14th march?

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 1:35 pm

        Itss toooo far now…bt i’ll wait

      • Shrinjal on June 8, 2017 9:17 pm

        Hehee..n love u too somu!!

      • Soumya85 on June 8, 2017 4:50 pm

        Love you shrinju??

    5. Radhika.k on June 8, 2017 10:39 am

      LOVED UR SURPRISE PLAN FOR SUMO IN THE STORY AND THIS OS.U R AWESOME KANFI!!!

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 11:28 am

        Thnk uuu radhs,,,,i’ll call u this ok?
        I m halpy u liked it,,,
        Love u

      • Radhika.k on June 8, 2017 11:52 am

        Ya,u can call me whatever u wish!!!ur DP is awesome!

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 12:55 pm

        Thnx radhs….

    6. Aanya on June 8, 2017 10:49 am

      Happy b’day somu.kanfi realy its wonderful gift for ur friend.such a nice site gys n ur frienship too.again wish u many many hapy retns of the day somu.sory gys to intrpt u.i know m stranger for u bt i jst lv to wish pepl their b’day n sudnly i read ur ff thts y i couldn’t cntrol myself sory gys.

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 11:29 am

        I m happy u liked it aanya,…
        N dont be srrry please…
        Hi5 ,,i too love to wish b’day to others,…

      • Soumya85 on June 8, 2017 4:50 pm

        Thank you so much aanya

    7. Riyasmiles on June 8, 2017 11:08 am

      wow.. that was so cool.. os as a bday gift…
      great di..
      loved it…
      hapoy birthday somu di..

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 1:35 pm

        Thnk u ria….
        I m happy u liked it

      • Soumya85 on June 8, 2017 4:51 pm

        Love you riya??

    8. Daisy on June 8, 2017 11:31 am

      good to see your love for each other

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 1:36 pm

        Awwwwee..thnk u daisy,.we can also be frnds

      • Daisy on June 8, 2017 1:40 pm

        thats my line ok
        can we be friends

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 2:25 pm

        Yaa sure..why not….hi i m kanfi,,,u can call me saima or kanfi which u like….u can pm me too

    9. Neha-17 on June 8, 2017 12:32 pm

      #kanfi ..what to say now…I am sure every reader who is reading itt..will have a smile on their face
      Wow..Manali meet..this will be my third time and always I am in..it’s that wonderful place
      They way you used every character and managed everyone’s role is Amazing
      Spectacular! Fabulous OS!
      Happy bday Somu…!
      The t-shirt idea, match idea..I too wish Somu meets Virat
      Love you alll!

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 12:57 pm

        Yeahhhh…..thnk u nehu…,.
        Loveee uuu….
        We’ll definately go together somewhere,,what say??it’ll be fun

      • Neha-17 on June 8, 2017 1:00 pm

        Yep yess sure..and you will get permission for all of us..haha!
        Let’s complete our goals and thennn gooo!

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 1:38 pm

        Yaa sure…yaa i m quites good in convincing others…
        Yaa frsr we’ve to complete our goals

      • Soumya85 on June 8, 2017 4:53 pm

        Love you neha di??even I hope that once I meet virat and we can go to a meet

    10. Zaveesha on June 8, 2017 1:05 pm

      Firstly very very happy bday to saumya….God bless u…keep smiling always…
      Nd it was a nice OS…keep writing..

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 1:41 pm

        Thnx zaveesha…
        I write an ff bt mny epi have completed ,,,if have time then read….
        N this is OS,,u’ll love this,.,i recieved unxpcted response
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/half-girlfriend-shivika-os-kanfi/

      • Zaveesha on June 8, 2017 1:53 pm

        I know u write an ff ..love at first sight naah last sight…nd i have read last some episodes but didn’t know the whole story..yeah when I’ll get time I’ll read all the episodes…
        Nd read ur OS…it was very good…awesome.. very beautifully written..bt although i don’t like sad ending but still it was good…
        Keep writing..

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 2:32 pm

        Awwwwee..so sweet of you…thnk uuu
        Lovee uu

      • Soumya85 on June 8, 2017 4:54 pm

        Thank you so much zaveesha

    11. Aashi26 on June 8, 2017 1:50 pm

      hey kanfi di do u live in patna ?

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 2:30 pm

        Yes…u too??

      • Aashi26 on June 8, 2017 2:52 pm

        Yes me too….???

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 7:17 pm

        Are waah…from where??
        I m from mahendru post office side

    12. fenil on June 8, 2017 2:01 pm

      Superb
      hope my lil ghost sissy is happy.
      Wonderful job u did.
      Har taraf Knafi hi chai hui hain.

      Jhanvi and Abhija always share cute moment with me hehehe.

      Superb.Nice T shirt idea,Virat,Naira,Mishti love all.

      Thanks for write something.

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 2:28 pm

        Awwwwwwe…
        Thnk u fenil…..
        Hr traf kanfi chai hui h..i liked that line… ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›
        I m glad u liked it

      • ManyaPV on June 8, 2017 10:36 pm

        Kanfi mat pooch inki shaadi hai aur ye gayab hain!

      • preeti on June 8, 2017 5:19 pm

        hello i am new here and i want to make a t.u account so pls can u help me?

      • PREETI on June 8, 2017 5:27 pm

        hi i am new to telly updates so pls can u help me to make a account i tried so many times but it is not possible with me.anyone

      • ManyaPV on June 8, 2017 8:36 pm

        She might be happy but I am not at all I will kill u bhai! Jhooth bole kauwa kaate!

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 10:33 pm

        What happened??

      • kanfi on June 9, 2017 3:36 am

        He he he..wo to jm dkhe hi rhe h…
        Bahnom ke shopping ki oh my matha kr di h… ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

    13. preeti on June 8, 2017 5:20 pm

      and kanfi dear the o.s i awsome i loved it.happy birthday soumya

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 7:26 pm

        Thnk u preety,.i m glad u liked it….
        U can make a/c easily

        Type tellyupdates register…u’ll get that tab..fill necessary info ..then guess images they ask u to do…..

        If u want i can make urs ,,then u’ll chnge ur psssward…
        If yes commnt ur email id…n username

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 7:27 pm

        N watch this page regularly after commnting to get my replies

      • Soumya85 on June 10, 2017 10:54 am

        Thank you so much preeti

    14. Chanya on June 8, 2017 5:52 pm

      Awwww diii..awesome.superb..i don’t have words to express..really I am speechless…loved it di..even I have a dream of meeting u all..so sorry dii I couldn’t comment on your ff due to this studies..love u dii..
      Somu wishing you a very very happy birthday!!

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 6:59 pm

        Thnk u soo much chanya….
        I m really happy after reading ur commnt …
        I also wish to meeet u all.-.
        N dont srry plzzz.
        Loveeee uuu

      • Soumya85 on June 10, 2017 10:56 am

        Love u chanya di??

    15. jasmin on June 8, 2017 6:06 pm

      Awesome os dii..i loved it..n sumo dii would also had loved it..after all she met virat na..i hope she meets him in real life too..loved this os..love u..

      • kanfi on June 8, 2017 7:28 pm

        Thnk u sooo much jaasss…
        I hope the same for her,,,
        Lovee uu

    16. TU Freinds Forever on June 9, 2017 6:34 am

      Hiiii kanfi dii perfect surprise for somo.n last VK n all wahhhhhh n manali wowwwwwwwwww n choco miss u tooooo n love u all n Kanfi why do u need to say sooryyyy??? I am not in TU activity now n what’s the big deal if I am not there u all guys r there n be happy n it was too good n this time no big comment as I have only 5 minutes I come in morning n have to hide n type I didn’t receive my books yet so they let me free n I will come in early morning I guess n bookie sorry yaar I didn’t comment in your ff Tomorow will comment there Pls kanfi post this screen shot in bookie’s wall(neha17).love u all

      • kanfi on June 9, 2017 11:13 am

        Thnk uuu rufiii….
        Loveee uu dher saara….
        All the best for ur future….
        Ok i’ll

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