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Home»Fan Fiction»I am Watching you- RagLak (Part-1)
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I am Watching you- RagLak (Part-1)

IMEBy IMEJune 5, 201770 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello Everyone!!

Happy Reading!!

Link for prologue- Prologue

———-Part-1———-

Ragini was siting on a chair and near a messy table. Laksh was on in front of Ragini sitting on that messy table. The table had 25 letters and a number of coffee cups.

Laksh was reading the letters and drinking the coffee when his eyes saw Ragini’s scared, nervous and Sweating face.

“Ms.Ragini, why are you sweating so much in my AC office??”

“Actually….”

“Ah.. no need to say i know I am very hot that’s why you are sweating right”

“-_- -_-”

“Ah. ok ok sorry sorry I know it was a lame joke…..but dont get scared and nervous……..as……….I am Watching you..” says Smirking Laksh

“Laksh……the autopsy is done”

“Great Dr.Swara, you did autopsy in a very less time. You are becoming better day by day working with me”

“Can we please stop all this non-sense talks and talk about the dead body”

“Ohk Ohk so tell me how was the…..”

“He was stabbed 7 times on his chest by a Left-Handed person”

“How do you know he is a left handed person??”

“How did your parents got to know you are a boy?”

“Doctors told”

“How doctor knew?”

“Because they were doctors”

“Exactly!!……I am a Doctor!!…..not a faltu detective like you…….whose most cases are solved by a doctor that is me!! huh”

Swara turns towards Ragini.

“Ms.Ragini, I am Swara Dr.Swara, So Do you know the person??”

“Yes”

Laksh gives a shocked expresion.

“What! What! What!” shouts Laksh like a typical women does in serial

“You told you dont know him” adds laksh

“Excuse me I never told this ….you were not allowing me to say” Says Ragini in a high tone

“When???” asks Laksh

“Remember”

———-Flashback———-

After telling Ragini that the boy was Laksh……Detective Laksh and shaking hands……Ragini goes near the body. She tries to see the face of the body.

As it was dark everywhere she was not able to see the face. She took out a torch and saw his face.

She was SHOCKED to see his face.

“Do you know him??” asked laksh

“..he……”

“Your face tells everything you dont know him naa dont worry come come”

Saying this he does not allow Ragini to speak anything.

———-Flashback Ends———-

Swara was very angry listening this.

“So called detective Mr.Laksh can you give up your over smartness??”

“Sona…….I…..actually” says laksh trying to melt Swara

“Excuse me Mr.Laksh I am Dr.Swara for you right now”

“Okay DR.SWARA”

“Shut up. You are a Detective act like a detective not a kid now you are not that small child who was playing detective detective in childhood.”

“You both know each other from childhood??” asked Ragini who was confused by their conversation

“Yes…..we…”

“We are very close from childhood” says laksh cutting swara’s talks again

He goes near Swara and hugs her from side tying to annoy Swara and confuse Ragini.

“Were you neighbours??” asks Ragini

“No…more than that” Says laksh hugging swara more tightly

“Best Friends??”

“No…more than that” says laksh and hugs swara more tightly

“Lovers??”

“No…..more than that” says laksh and hugs swara more tightly

“then..” Ragini was about so say but swara cuts her

“No more guesses or else my bones will break…..Leave me Laksh” Says Swara angrily

laksh leaves her and tries to control his laughter

“Then how you both are connected??”

“Fortunately she is my sister” says Laksh with a Grin

“Unfortunately he is my brother” says Swara giving unamused look

“oh..” Says Ragini with a fake smile.

“So can we focus on the case??” says Swara

“Ya..sure” says laksh

“Ms.Ragini who is he???”

“He is my senior”

“Name??”

“Arre you know na Ragini her name is Ragini” says Laksh

“Shut up stupid I was asking his name” shouts swara in a angry tone

“Ohk Ohk sorry sorry”

“Now if you speak one more time then I will not leave you……Ms.Ragini you continue”

“He is Mr.Suresh Shah”

“How was he?? what was his nature?? did he have any enemies??”

“He was very rude to his juniors especially me”

“Why only you?? ”

“Actually I was told that i may replace him in coming years”

“Why??didnt he used to works??”

“No he just used to shout on us and did not do any kind of work he was a lazy person”

Tringgggg-tringgggggg

Swara’s phone rang. She took the call.

“Ha bol”(yes say)

“No hi no hello… huh”

“I dont have time to waste here so please say”

“The work is done”

“Good I am coming with Laksh now”

“Bye”

She hangs the call.

“Laksh show Ragini her room and come soon”

“Room??? I have my own house!!”

“Where you live alone which is not at all safe for you. so you will live with us but right now we have some work so we right now you will live in a secret room that we have in our office” saying this swara walks towards the door but stops listening Ragini

“But it must be in the corner and a dark place. I am scared of it”

“no need of being scared cause I AM WATCHING YOU” says swara with smirk and leaves.


TO BE CONTINUED…..

I hope you liked the 1st part

sorry if it bored you.

Do comment if you want next part.

Thank you

Ragards,

Ishita

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    70 Comments

    1. tëìtō kUn on June 6, 2017 12:50 am

      Superb…. Loved it…

      • IME on June 7, 2017 8:50 pm

        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it 😀

    2. Sinni on June 6, 2017 6:20 am

      Awesome

      • IME on June 7, 2017 8:50 pm

        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    3. lovely7 on June 6, 2017 6:55 am

      Awesome, ragu is cute

      • IME on June 7, 2017 8:51 pm

        Thank you so much
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    4. Rasha on June 6, 2017 7:16 am

      interesting

      • IME on June 7, 2017 8:52 pm

        Thank you so much
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    5. Naagin on June 6, 2017 7:47 am

      Super

      • IME on June 7, 2017 8:53 pm

        Thank you so much
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    6. avika on June 6, 2017 9:29 am

      nice

      • IME on June 7, 2017 8:55 pm

        Thank you so much
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    7. IME on June 6, 2017 9:30 am

      Hey Guys,
      I am really sorry I sent the cover picture to TU but i dont know why it did not come sorry for trouble.
      Thank you

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:29 pm

        …..

    8. niki on June 6, 2017 10:09 am

      Super. ?

      • IME on June 7, 2017 8:56 pm

        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    9. Soumya85 on June 6, 2017 10:12 am

      Its was just outstanding don really so interesting and full of suspence and how can u say it bored it was amazing yar loved it to the core?waiting for the best part egarly love u don??and pls reply me thanks mat bolna as u know thanks not allowed here

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:29 pm

        Love you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    10. Aadya114 on June 6, 2017 10:28 am

      Awesome. Laksh and swara are sooooo mysterious. Waiting for the next

      • IME on June 7, 2017 8:59 pm

        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    11. aleeza on June 6, 2017 11:10 am

      Superb

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thank you so much
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    12. Megha on June 6, 2017 11:48 am

      Awesome

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:01 pm

        Thank you so much
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    13. nymisha281 on June 6, 2017 11:49 am

      Awesome…Waiting for next part

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:02 pm

        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    14. TU Friends Forever on June 6, 2017 1:45 pm

      So I was impatiently waiting for it.its like I am watching a criminal story.n I thought swara n laksh r friends but sister n brothers fortunately n unfortunately my guess was wrong???? n then swara is watching ragini laksh is watching ragini then who else is watching?? N then phone call I guess it was sanskar on phone n over smart laksh???? didn’t allow ragini to talk.i think the senior is lazy like me.i am interested to know about the dead case n all but swara also takes credits here n Ragini scared nervous n all but bit strong too so awesome updates ishuuuuu it’s not at all boring I am interested to know what’s next n post others too asap

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:27 pm

        Thank you so much
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    15. Rehna on June 6, 2017 2:42 pm

      Awesome dear

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:02 pm

        Thank you so much
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    16. saranya on June 6, 2017 4:14 pm

      Awesome

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:03 pm

        Thank you so much
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    17. Arjuna on June 6, 2017 5:41 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:04 pm

        Thank you so much
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    18. Aamy on June 6, 2017 5:44 pm

      Awesome

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:04 pm

        Thank you so much
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    19. Sherin on June 6, 2017 7:04 pm

      Superb+ dear

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:05 pm

        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    20. Pearly on June 6, 2017 7:40 pm

      Awesome

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:06 pm

        Thank you so much
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    21. Malu on June 6, 2017 7:46 pm

      Amazing episode nd can’t wait for next

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:08 pm

        Thank you so much
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    22. Monisha on June 6, 2017 8:15 pm

      Interesting

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:08 pm

        Thank you so much
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    23. Anju on June 6, 2017 8:49 pm

      Awesome episode

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:09 pm

        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    24. Ammu on June 6, 2017 9:14 pm

      Interesting episode and loved Raglak scenes. Laksh is so naughty. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next episode ASAP ??????

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:11 pm

        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    25. Elizabethlovely on June 6, 2017 9:37 pm

      Interesting dr

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:13 pm

        Thank you so much
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    26. IQRA222 on June 6, 2017 11:10 pm

      ishu it was a perfect episode
      loved it soo much
      this lucky is too melodramatic dont know how shona and ragu handle him huhh!!!
      moreover it was funny too
      waiting for the next part

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:24 pm

        Thank you so much
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    27. A.xx on June 7, 2017 2:47 am

      Loved it xx

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thank you so much
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    28. Bela on June 7, 2017 2:45 pm

      Hmm, so the mystery deepens.
      I love oversmart Laksh????

      This story is getting interesting, love it???

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:24 pm

        The mystery will deepen more in upcoming parts
        Thank you so much
        Happy you liked it ?

    29. Ashly on June 7, 2017 2:58 pm

      Awesome superb amazing

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thank you so much
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    30. Monu on June 7, 2017 3:13 pm

      Awesome

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:17 pm

        Thank you so much
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    31. Vennila on June 7, 2017 4:37 pm

      Interesting

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:18 pm

        Thank you so much
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    32. Soumya on June 7, 2017 5:36 pm

      Ha ha ha laksh was unbelievable di

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:19 pm

        Thank you so much
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    33. Vini on June 7, 2017 7:23 pm

      Can’t wait 4 next

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:20 pm

        Thank you so much
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    34. hemalattha on June 7, 2017 7:48 pm

      Nice

      • IME on June 7, 2017 9:21 pm

        Thank you so much
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    35. Ankita on June 7, 2017 9:55 pm

      Interesting

      • IME on June 8, 2017 9:18 am

        Thank you so much
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