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“SwaSan in hospital”sequel of an os by Sumayyah

sumayyahBy sumayyahJune 5, 2017Updated:June 5, 201757 Comments12 Mins Read
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Assalamualikum friends
how are you all miss me or not
I’m very thankful to all the Readers and those who comments also their words are supporting me to write more and more
so here is the link of the os
OS here
now I’m presenting here the requested sequel of the os by
Neptune
Aarushi-99
Sanu
Gayathri.visu

I hope I will not bore you and reach your expectations
so fingers crossed

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after the confession of the most beautiful feeling of the world they continue staring eo with love filled eyes when Sanskar broke the silence
Sanskar:(whispers near her ear) Swara
Swara feels his hot breathe on her delicate skin and shivers lightly: hmmmmm
Sanskar feels this and smiles and trying to nuzzle his face more in her neck: I think we should tell all hospital that we are married
Swara shocked and tries to free herself : hmmm Sanskar
Sanskar more nuzzles into her neck and tights his grip : what hmm Swara
Swara in a husky way : leave me Sanskar
but naughty Sanskar starts biting her neck making her moan his name with pleasure now its uncontrolable for Swara that this will led them to something so she thinks other way to free herself
Swara acts as angry : I can’t forgive you so easily your punishment is still pending
Sanskar leaves her and shocked: what Swara what are you saying???
Swara smiles: you have to fulfil my demands first
Sanskar understands her naughtiness that now she will ask him to go for shopping (he knows his wife so much)
Swara : say you accept or not
Sanskar ( smiles and hugs her tightly rest his chin on her shoulder ) Swara aj tk tumhari koi demand accept nhi Ki kiaa ( till today Swara your all demands are accepted )
Swara smiles and hugs him more : it means you are accepting naa
Sanskar: isky ilawa koi chara hey ( there is no other way )
Swara : now my hubby will tell what are my conditions
Sanskar (smiles and frees her and look deep down in her hazel doe eyes ) my wifey wants to go for shopping right
Swara pecks his lips in utter happiness if a husband cares for his wife like this it will definitely reflects by her face so as Swara face starts much more to glow as usual by the proximity of their closeness
Sanskar shocks but then suddenly his lips turned to a smirk as she has ignited the fire inside him
Sanskar ; widely now won’t say that its all my fault
Swara understands him and closes her eyes as shyness prevailed inside her than their is a lip lock between them which was nothing but a bliss for them
they are blessed to have eo

at shopping
Swara buys lots of things and Sanskar being a sanskari husband carries all and follows her to each shop
Sanskar ( lil tired) : shona bus kardo now see all my hands are full
Swara : no Sanskar I want to buy more you know what you looked more cute when you carries my belonging hehee
Sanskar (pout) Swara I’m not cute I’m handsome
Swara : now whom will say that a strict doctor like you is like this (pointing towards him) in real life
Sanskar chuckles and say :Swara I think you are on a mission
Swara eyes turned to big ones : what type of mission
Sanskar : to empty your hubby account right
Swara acting ; so now you will taunt me for a small thing OK fine
Sanskar cuts her as he knows she is acting (she is really a drama queen Naa so he also plays with her) : you are not buying more naa
Swara smirks: nothing like you think I’m not going to forgive you I will buy more things now and you will have to carry them all I won’t help you
Sanskar pout: OK sorry buy whatever you want Swara
Swara smiles sheepishly comes near his ear and whispers: Sanskar I can’t control seeing you pout you know naa
Sanskar smirks & decrease the distance between them and huskily: my dear wifey let’s go home even I cant control myself more
Swara hits him playfully on his manly chest :shut up Sanskar come and pay the bill

in car
Swara : Sanskar ITS not the root to our house ???
Sanskar ; yes my love
Swara : then
Sanskar : then we are going for a movie
Swara :yippie ( excitedly kiss his cheeks) you know you are the best husband in the whole world
Sanskar ( smiles at her childishness) now again shonaa if you keep giving me kisses the whole ride than I’m sure I will do something than don’t blame me
Swara cheeks turned into red like those of tomatoes thinking of something something hehee
Sanskar smiles seeing her
@ movie
a romantic movie was playing and the love birds hand in hand enjoyed it
in between the movie when the hero and heroine were going to kiss eo Swara thought to tease Sanskar(as he was watching it keenly ) put a mouthful of popcorns in his mouth
Sanskar get irritated : Swara why are you forcefully making me eat
Swara pout : oops sorry Sanskar I spoilt your kiss
Sanskar :what nonsense what kiss
Swara (innocently) : you were staring her like that you were going to kiss her
Sanskar understands her that she is teasing him so he starts tickling her she laughs loudly
Swara giggles : hehehee sorry Sanskar sorry na heehee plz leave me
Sanskar: not at all Swara Ki bacchi
they were interrupted by the people in cinema who are disturbed by their fun
smiling sheepishly they return back to their car
Sanskar : what was that shonaa I have said you so many times that you should be serious some times naa
Swara : ik serious kaafi nhi kia huh you are that much serious naa that all the seriousness of mine are given to you hehee now stop scolding me or else …
Swara was cut by Sanskar which was now on her top and was bending more towards him Swara breathe flinch due to sudden proximity
Sanskar (huskily) :or else what Mrs Maheshwari ….
Swara ( breathing heavenly): Ssaannskaar umm I think we are in car
Sanskar ( pecking her cheeks) : yes my love
Sanskar left her and she was red due to shyness
then they go to sea side as this was the only place on which whenever they come they feel relax ( what you say guys )
Swara was playing with water splashing and jumping along the waves like child playing with his favourite toy looking like an innocent fairy indeed she was Sanskar’s innocent fairy which lits up his life .
Sanskar was lost in her he only wants to lost in her angelic smiles
she notices this as in this whole world she can easily identify her love’s gaze as his hot gaze gives her goosebumps and then she realize its too late she splashes water on him which broke his beautiful gaze and he saw the most beautiful scene in front of him as the sun was going to drawn in the magnificent sea and his innocent angel with her open hairs which was flying with the tune of air was smiling at him
Swara : chalen Sanskar its too late naa
Sanskar : you know what I must say you are the most beautiful girl I have ever meet .you light up my life with your smiles and laughs .I wish every day of my life starts with you and ends with you .never in my life a day comes when you are not with me .I will die without you .
Swara tears in her eyes( cuts him); Sanskar please I have told you not to talk like this again or else I will not talk to you ..understand..
Sanskar engulfs her in a bone crushing hug
Sanskar: don’t leave me ever if I do a mistake punish me do whatever you want but don’t leave me
Swara : I wont because I also can’t live without you you are my world and no one would leave his world right
Sanskar : right
Swara: I love you so much
Sanskar : I love you more than you love me
Swara : I love you more
Sanskar : no I love you more
Swara: no I
Sanskar: I
Swara: I
Sanskar: I
Swara: you
Sanskar : you
Swara : hehehee I win Sanskar it always work on you
Sanskar frowns : OK now let’s go home
Swara : hmm but take me to dine
Sanskar: hmm of course
@restaurant
Swara was having dinner quietly than she notices Sanskar eyes as it was on a couple who was feeding eo (lovely :))
Swara (clears her throat): umm Sanskar please feed me naa please
Sanskar ( happy). really
Swara: hmm please
Sanskar fed her following Swara fed him they have a beautiful eye lock
At outside restaurant
When Sanskar was going to sit in car with Swara he saw her running like mad to other side of road his eyes travel to the direction where she was going then he saw a truck coming towards her with full speed which brings sweat to him as his life’s life is in danger
He also started running like hell behind her
In the mean time he catches her and now both were on eo arms rolling on the other side after that Swara looks Sanskar’s eyes which was full red in anger now she knows what was awaiting for her ….
Sanskar (angry): what is this Swara! Are you mad or what ??? Someone runs on road like this ?? Can’t you see a truck that blo*dy truck if by chance hit…..
Swara hugs him(with soft eyes): nothing is going to happen wrong with me if you are with me love
Sanskar immediately engulfed her in a more tight hug wanting to show his emotions
Then suddenly a voice came of of. … a dog’s barking
Sanskar ( still hugging ): Swara this voice of dog is coming from somewhere close ??
Swara : oops I forgot here it is (showing a beautiful puppy to him) it was going to come under a car so I just run to protect it .sorry
Sanskar (understand her situation as if he will also in the same place then will have done the same ) : OK Swara let’s go
Swara (pleading eyes): Sanskar what if we take it to our home plzzz plzzz if you not mind
Sanskar (smiles at his lil wife as he knows she loves pet) : OK its your home also shona not only mine that you asked me .do whatever you want to
Swara hugs him : thank you so much hubby and I named it poppy (to puppy) do you like it poppy ??
Poppy : barked
All laughs
they went to home and sleep in eo arms
after some days
Swara was feeling dizziness and nausea for some days but she kept ignoring it then one day Sanskar came to know about it
DINNER
Sanskar (seeing her nausea ) : what happened shona why are you not feeling well ???
Swara : I think I have eaten something bad that’s why I just feel to vomit eww
Saying so she runs leaving behind a hopeful Sanskar as he lil know about her condition so swara do the pregnancy test and it was positive
Their happiness knew no bounds .they were like on cloud 10 they start preparing for upcoming child the symbol of their love
After some months
Swara : I don’t want to take injections Sanskar you are so bad plz na plz
Sanskar (with soft eyes) : poppy make this crazy woman understand that she is acting like a child now .who will say that she is a doctor by herself
Poppy which was seeing their antics barked
Swara : plz
Sanskar ; Swara its a vitamin injection you need to take it .it will affect your and baby’s health now be a good mom and take it
Swara : no it will cause pain
Sanskar ; (diverting her) Swara what you think the baby is girl or boy
Swara : it should be boy like you Sanskar
Sanskar (smiles) : no I want a girl and it is in the reports also
Saying so he faces her injections
Swara : you cheater
Saying so a pillow fights start

After one year
Sanskar was carrying a lil girl in his hands trying to calm her following him poppy carries a toy which was making noise
Sanskar: Sanskriti plz shshhh your mamma is coming with milk don’t shout or else neighbours will come
But Sanskriti was a child can’t understand his words
Swara came with a milk bottle and gave it to sa after drinking milk baby sleeps
The screen shows their sighing faces
————–

So how was it friends do tell me your reviews it will be helpful to me to write more clearly
Sorry for typos or mistakes
Stay blessed
Good bye

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    57 Comments

    1. Sus on June 5, 2017 4:28 pm

      ohh god so beautiful and lovly

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 5:38 pm

        thank you so much dear

    2. Mars on June 5, 2017 4:30 pm

      Sumayyah dear it was super se upar.loved it..
      Swasan is the cutest couple.

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 5:40 pm

        thank you so much Mars
        glad you like it
        swasan is the cutest couple let me admire them more

    3. Nagamanasa on June 5, 2017 4:44 pm

      Awesome dear…

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 5:41 pm

        thank you so much

    4. Kumu on June 5, 2017 5:11 pm

      Loved it

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 5:42 pm

        thanks dear

    5. Milestone on June 5, 2017 5:32 pm

      Awesome dear……

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 6:07 pm

        thanks dear

    6. independent on June 5, 2017 5:48 pm

      superb dear

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 6:09 pm

        thanks dear

    7. rabia0032 on June 5, 2017 6:03 pm

      Awesome dear…

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 8:24 pm

        thank you so much Rabia dii
        I’m so happy that you liked it
        I loved your story second chance I read it on fb its amazing I already said it on fb thank you so much

      • rabia0032 on June 5, 2017 11:29 pm

        Thank you so much for liking my story

      • sumayyah on June 6, 2017 4:28 pm

        Rabiaa dii plz come up with another story soon
        I’m missing you

    8. Tamil on June 5, 2017 6:48 pm

      Amazing loved it

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 8:25 pm

        thank you so much dear

    9. Neptune on June 5, 2017 6:52 pm

      suma thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for writing the sequel of this story you know i was literally waiting for it and i became soooooooooooooo happy on seeing it, it was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very cute yaar you know i love SWASAN sooooooooooooooooo much they are the cutest and the most heavenly pair and reading these beautiful stories on them i fall more and more for them do write more dear………

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 8:27 pm

        thank you so much friend you made my day hehee
        thank you so much
        I’m glad that my lil effort made someone happy

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 8:29 pm

        & about swasan they are the solely reason for me to write really I get inspiration to write from swasan writers
        let me imagine them more so sweet naa
        I’m missing them badly

    10. Simi on June 5, 2017 7:26 pm

      Beautiful

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 8:30 pm

        thank you so much Simi dear

    11. Harshita on June 5, 2017 7:46 pm

      It was awsm

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 8:31 pm

        thank you so much dear

    12. anu on June 5, 2017 8:25 pm

      awesome loved it

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 9:52 pm

        thanks dear

    13. sneha on June 5, 2017 8:36 pm

      Loved the shot..

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 9:54 pm

        thanks dear

    14. sanu on June 5, 2017 8:42 pm

      Awesome dear loved it….wanted more hehe….full epi was swasan…my god its fentastic…..thanq soo mch fr eccpting our request….. Come vd new stry dear….tk cre

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 9:57 pm

        my pleasure
        if my lil effort made you happy I’m also happy
        I will come soon inshaalaah
        as my family don’t know that I’m a hidden writer hehee so got less time to type secretly
        you too tc
        lots of love

    15. kojagorimalik on June 5, 2017 8:43 pm

      Sooooooko sweet

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 10:00 pm

        thanks dear

    16. sanu on June 5, 2017 8:45 pm

      Their cute nokjok make our day beutifull mis them sooo much

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 9:59 pm

        hehehee they are like that only this made them heavenly I loved them I loved them so much ummmuah to them
        yes missing them hope they will come soon together

    17. a on June 5, 2017 8:59 pm

      nice

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 9:57 pm

        thanks dear

    18. Remi on June 5, 2017 9:41 pm

      Dead dead dead… :*
      It was more than awesomeness…. ^_^ u rocked baby.. :*

      • sumayyah on June 5, 2017 10:30 pm

        Remiiiiii!!
        dead seriously I don’t know that you will be dead only by this or else I would have been killed you
        wese I can’t afford your dead you are only besty naa so lots of hugs and kisses to you ummuaaah
        thank you so much dear remiii

      • Remi on June 6, 2017 12:21 am

        Love back dear.. :*

    19. Seebu_s on June 6, 2017 7:17 am

      nice dear☺

      • sumayyah on June 6, 2017 4:08 pm

        thanks dear

    20. vyshu10 on June 6, 2017 7:55 am

      Awesome…glad that u wrote a sequel

      • sumayyah on June 6, 2017 4:10 pm

        thank you so much Vyshu dear

    21. gayathri.visu on June 6, 2017 2:00 pm

      Sumayyah……..thank u so so so so so soooo much for the sequel of this story dear. You know what I m eagerly waiting for this part.
      Lovely ending dear! I loved it! Shopping part is funny… Awww! Soooooo cute our Swasan! Am I right dear?

      • sumayyah on June 6, 2017 4:12 pm

        Aaaw Gayathrii
        I m so glad that you like it
        I hope I reached till your expectations dear
        about cuteness they are no1
        heheehee our beloved couple

    22. Arshaanya on June 6, 2017 6:46 pm

      Loved it

      • sumayyah on June 7, 2017 4:38 am

        thanks Arshuuuu

    23. Kakali on June 7, 2017 1:55 pm

      Awwwww Sumaaaaaa! Lovely ending dear! I loved it soooo much! Thnk u sooo much for writing this sequel!
      SwaSan’s love for each other is so heavenly, so eternal. Urghhh miss them truly!
      Sorry for late comment! Love u loads! Now m more eager to read your further works.
      Do write whenever you get time! TC. *hug! ;-*

      • sumayyah on June 7, 2017 4:43 pm

        Kakuuuu! Yaar I was waiting for your reply finally got it
        Thank you shoo shoo much dear I can’t even tell you how much am missing them wish to see them TOGETHER soon I’m hell missing them only ffs on them are trying to quest my thrist
        Thanks to all the SwaSan writers who make them alive till now or else the bashers are too much to expell our love our happiness our heavenly couple

    24. sri on June 9, 2017 6:38 am

      nice

      • sumayyah on June 9, 2017 6:46 am

        thanks sri

    25. Shifa96 on June 10, 2017 11:01 am

      Awesome

      • sumayyah on June 10, 2017 12:18 pm

        thanks Shifa

    26. mavo on June 15, 2017 3:04 am

      Awesome awesome awesome loved it

      • sumayyah on June 15, 2017 6:06 pm

        thanks dii

      • mavo on June 15, 2017 10:10 pm

        Welcome ?

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