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Home»Fan Fiction»Love story! (Episode 1)
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Love story! (Episode 1)

MABy MAJune 4, 2017Updated:June 4, 201734 Comments3 Mins Read
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I’m new here, as some of you know me
My name is Zoya manzer, I am 13 years old
Studying in class 8
Solutions, enough of my bak bak
Let’so start with a smile
I have taken this story from Internet

_____________________
It’s evening 5’0 clock,I was standing on bridge waiting for my friend who planned for movie

It was a very lovely yet pleasant climate.I was roaming around on the bridge thinking about my friend if he is coming or not.Suddenly a girl crossed my sight.she was beautiful yet simple girl.

She stand a few metres away from me looking at the water below the bridge.I thought she was waiting for some one

My heart beat raised and heart said to me”GO AND TALK TO HER”can I?
No I cannot…it again says”Nothing will happen if you will talk to her…don’t miss the chance”

I went towards her
I:Hi,myself kunj sarna
She:Hello
I:what is your name
She:twinkle taneja
I:(thought:wow!twinkle,nice name.kunj sarna weds twinkle taneja)(is ne to abhi se shaadi ke bare me socha lia???)
I:If you don’the mind tell me what are you waiting for?
She:what? (She widened her eyes)
S:I am waiting for my father

I:oh
I:can I say you something?
S:what?
I:your voice is so sweet and your face…and
S:and
I:nothing
I silently followed her
S:what?
I:can we have a cup of coffee
S:no
I:tea
S:no
I:at least pani puri

S:you are too crazy
I:please,please…..
S:OK
I:thank you….
(When I was walking beside her for the first time my heart beat raised and said to me that she is the one you are looking for)
I: can I say you something
S:what?
I:nothing
I:what’s your father?

S:doctor
I:(thank God, not a police)
S:you want to say something
I:ya..I..I

S:ha you
S:what?are you joking?
(I picked her hand and start running away from the bridge as a great killer wave struck the bridge and the people ,shops ,vehicles started to drown into water)
S:thank you
(Ambulance started coming for the rescue of people)
I:hey you stay here I am going for the rescue. ..
S: i will also come…
I:let’S go

I and she was helping some people
When a huge truck hit her
I rush towards her and took her in my lap
Tears were coming like stream from my eyes
I:twin…twin… open your eyes
S:kunj,you said you want to say something ,please say it now
I:I love you twinkle
S:I love you too kunj

And,she closed her eyes

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34 Comments

  1. Anayaali on June 4, 2017 8:33 pm

    Hey zoya ur first attempt was cute and sweet… Luvd it…. Plzzzz post something more keep posting sweet and cute stories like this…. Luv u…. Byeee…. Tc

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:40 am

      Thank you

  2. SidMin23 on June 4, 2017 8:33 pm

    Nice and welcome to tu sad that it seen twinkle will die ??? their confession was unexpected but love it.

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:40 am

      Thank you

  3. Presha on June 4, 2017 8:53 pm

    Hey emotional nd sweet story…
    Loved it…
    Wlcm in TEI TU …
    Do write more stories…
    Love u…

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:42 am

      Thank you for welcoming

  4. Sohi on June 4, 2017 9:12 pm

    ? very thrilling os
    But amazing one
    Keep writing

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:41 am

      Thank you

  5. Nisha on June 4, 2017 9:50 pm

    Awesome epi but emotional

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:42 am

      Thank you

  6. nishfd on June 4, 2017 10:24 pm

    Its great dear…
    Bt I m kinda confused. ..
    Its an ff or os..

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:39 am

      This was an os

  7. maha on June 5, 2017 12:59 am

    nice n emtional

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 9:21 am

      Thank you

  8. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 5, 2017 2:38 am

    Emotional

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 9:22 am

      Thank you

  9. Sanam kapadia on June 5, 2017 3:29 am

    Hey zoya even i am in 8th can we be friends

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:38 am

      Ya,why not

  10. Sanam kapadia on June 5, 2017 3:29 am

    Hey zoya even i am in 8th can we be friends nd d epi was very cute loved it yaar

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:44 am

      Thank you

  11. Sanam kapadia on June 5, 2017 3:30 am

    Post soon

  12. Twinj on June 5, 2017 5:29 am

    Hey zoya
    Firstly welcome to TEI TU family..one of the craziest family…yaha sab log crazy hae n that countse as well…welcome….
    Regarding the os ohhhh god it was tooooo cute n sweet…aww loved it…go n talk his heart said…that line was really so sweet…although it had a sad ending…it was so cutr…keep writing…

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:39 am

      Thank you

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 8:43 am

      Thank you for welcoming

  13. nimmi on June 5, 2017 2:24 pm

    Good one zoya

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 5:36 pm

      Thank you

  14. Purvi128 on June 5, 2017 3:22 pm

    Hey zoya..! Welcome to TEI TU…!!!
    Yournfirat attempt was amazing..,
    I mean i just loved that..!
    U knw i love emppotional stories nd tragic endings..! So that was really fabulous..
    I loved it..!
    Their confession was really unexpected…!
    I didn’t expected that she would die..!
    Sad that she died..!
    Post more of ur writings…!

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 5:36 pm

      Thank you
      Post your ff a devil……..

  15. Ramya on June 5, 2017 3:43 pm

    Awesome one zoya
    Pehle milan mai hi shadi and propose bhi kar diya
    N even accident bhi
    Omg ek hi din mai itni Sari
    Awesome

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 5:37 pm

      Thank you

  16. twinjfan.tamanna on June 5, 2017 4:48 pm

    Hey Zoya!
    I guess You know Me? as I know u! ?? Anyways this was just so unexpected! Seriously the ending, I never thought the ending would be like that! Ur first attempt was too good! All the best for ur further stories! Keep Writing!

    With Love,
    Urs Tamanna

    • Zoya9 on June 5, 2017 5:39 pm

      Ya,di I know you ,thank you for your precious comment
      I will try to start an ff

  17. baby on June 6, 2017 10:51 pm

    nice and too emotional……♥
    srsly loved it…….♥
    lods of love…………..♥♥♥♥

    • Zoya9 on June 7, 2017 4:24 am

      Thank you

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