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Home»Fan Fiction»‘Bay Khudi’ – A tale of Love, Hatred, Obsession & Forgiveness! TwiNj [Episode #4]
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‘Bay Khudi’ – A tale of Love, Hatred, Obsession & Forgiveness! TwiNj [Episode #4]

Purvi128By Purvi128June 3, 201716 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hi guys!!! So here I m back with ‘Bay Khudi’ ..! Thanks to all those who commented on the previous episode. Love you all??

Episode 4 ~

Leela followed Usha to Tanushree’s room not noticed by her. Usha entered her room and Leela stayed outside.
U – ‘Ye Leela jo chahti hai na aisa me qat’ai hone nhi dungi.’ (I won’t let that happen what Leela is wanting.)
Tanu – ‘Kya nhi hosakta? Aatay hi shuru hogayi.’ (What can’t happen? You just came and started.) Usha makes faces. Leela was listening everything standing outside.
U – ‘Me Twinkle ki shaadi Kunj se hone nhi dungi!’ (I won’t let Twinkle marry Kunj!)
Tanu – ‘Kyun nahi hone dungi?’
U – ‘Kyun nhi hone dungi! (She repeated.) ‘Sab kuch jaante huay ap mujhse ye sawaal ker rahi hain.’ (Knowing everything, you are asking this question from me.)
Tanu – ‘Isi liye to keh rahi hun aakhir kharaabi kya hai Twinkle mein?’ (That’s why I m saying what is bad in Twinkle?)
U – ‘Dosron ki galtiyan samaitne ke liye kya sirf mera hi ghar reh gaya hai?’ (Only my home is left to hide other’s mistakes?) Pehly wo Raminder (Rt) or ab yeh Kunj.’ (First Raminder and now Kunj!) Leela was hurt.
Tanu – ‘Apne dil ko vasee karo Usha!’ (Make your heart big Usha!)
U – ‘Me apne dil ko bada nhi ker sakti! Twinkle ki haqeeqat jaantey huay me usy apne ghar me laany wali nhi hun. Yeh baat samajh lein ap.’ (I won’t make my heart big! After knowing Twinkle’s truth, I m not going to take her to my house. Understand that!)
Leela was standing being hurt by Usha’s words when Twinkle came there.
T – ‘Arrey! Ap yahan khadi hain?’ (Arrey! You are standing here.)
L – ‘Haan tumhari buaa aayi hain!’ Twinkle’s face became pale.
T – ‘Acha wo Nano ap ko bula rahi hain, baba bhi aagaye hain. Ap unhein lay aaye!’ (Nano is calling you, baba also came. Bring her.) Leela nodded and Twinkle left from there.

Next Scene ~
Leela nd Rt came in their room.
Rt – ‘Kya hua kheriat?’ (What happened?)
L – ‘Usha di aayi hain bht gusse mein..!mujhe darr hai bahir aake wo Twinkle ke saamne kuch na keh dein..!’ (Usha di came in very anger. I m scared what if she says something in front of Twinkle.)
Rt – ‘Kuch nhi kahein gi me change ker ke aata hun.’
He left from there. Leela left the room.

Next scene ~
Twinkle was pouring the tea in the cups. Everyone was sitting there. She gave it to her Dadu. She stood up to give it to Usha, smiling.
U – ‘Rakh do!’ Her smile fades away.
Rt came there.
Rt – ‘Wah bhaee di aayi hain..!’
U – ‘Kehte ho to wapis chali jaati hun.’
Rt – ‘Me ne aesa kab kaha.’
U – ‘Kuch logo ko mera yahan aana acha nhi lagta!’
Tanu – ‘Kisne kaha aesa?’ Mahi stood up and side hugged Usha. Twinkle’s head was bowed down.
M – ‘Mujhe to apka yahan aana bht acha lagta hai.’ Usha caresses her face.
U – ‘Tumhari bat nhi ker rahi.’ (I m not talking about you)
M – ‘To phir kis ki bat ker rahi hain.’ (Whom u r talking about)
U – ‘Hain kuch log!’ She said looking at Twinkle.
M – ‘Kon log?’
Tanu – ‘Chup raho.’
Kunj came there, he greeted everyone. He came and sat beside Rt.
K – ‘Kya baat hai bade ache time pe aaya hun mein!’ (I came at very good time.)
U – ‘Yahan kesy arahy ho tum Kunj.?’
K – ‘Kyun me apni Nani se milne nhi aasakta?’ (Why? Can’t I come here to meet my Nani.)
Rt – ‘Haan bilkul aasakty ho. Kon rok sakta hai tumhe?’
K – ‘Wesy agr mehmaan ghar me aaye to usy chaaye pooch leni chahiye!’ He said looking at Twinkle.
Rt – ‘Twinkle beta!’ She looked at Kunj.
T – ‘Mujhe padhna hai me apny room me jaa rahi hun.'(I have to study I m going in my room.) She said and stood up to go.
K – ‘Arrey me aaya hun tum jaa rahi ho ruk to jaao!’ She just ignored him and left from there.
U – ‘Kunj tum chup chap khamosh kyun nhi beth sakty kuch der.’
Tanu – ‘arrey kya hogaya usha konsi aesi bat kehdi usne.’
M – ‘Chodein buaa apna mood off na karein..’ she gave her tea. Usha faked a smile.

At Night ~
Leela and Rt were laying on the bed.
L – ‘Kya soch rahy hain?’
Rt – ‘Usha di ke behaviour ne pareshaan ker diya hai mujhe!’ (Usha di’s behaviour has made me worried.)
L – ‘Unhein to ap jaante hi hain unka rawayya mere sath or Twinkle ke saath ek jaesa hi raha hai hamesha se..’
Rt – ‘Haan lekin ab Twinkle badi hogayi hai mehsoos kerny lagi hogi.’ (Yes but, twinkle is grown up now, she must be feeling.)
L – ‘Sawaal to uthein gay na..! Koi nhi bhulta .. aesi baatein to koi bhi nhi bhulta yad rakhte hain sb..! Aditya bhai, anita bhabi kis kis se bachayen gay hum.’ (Questions must have risen. No one can forget, no one can forget these things. Everyone remembers. Aditya bhai, anita bhabhi from whom we will secure.)
L – ‘Apko lagta hai me roshni me agayi hun.. lekin pata nhi kab se ek lambi andheri surang me hun .. jis se nikalna ka baahir raasta hi nazar nhi aata. Andhera dekhte dekhte aesa lagne laga hai jesy meri aankhon ki roshni chin gaayi hai or ab meri bachhi ki baari.’ (You think I came in light but don’t know from when I m in a long dark tunnel .. nd can’t find the way out of it. I feel like seeing darkness my eye’s light has been stolen nd now its the turn of my daughter.)
Rt- ‘Nhi leela esy mat bolo .’ (Don’t say like that.)
L – ‘Apne to mera haath thaam liya tha..! Mujhe andhere me takrane se bacha liya lekin meri bachhi uska haath kon thaamey ga?’ (You held my hand. You saved me from colliding with darkness. But my daughter who will hold her hand?)
Rt – ‘Uske liye tumhe pareshan hone ki zarurat nhi, bhagwaan ne uska bhi jod bana rakha hoga!’
L – ‘Aesa hoga na?’
Rt – ‘Zaroor hoga! Jitnj achhi hamari beti hai na utna hi shaandaar wo bhi hoga!’ Leela just smiled.
Next Scene ~
Kunj was standing near the pool side in his house thinking about Twinkle and Usha’s behaviour.
Kunj’s pov ~
Pata nhi maa kyun is qadar chirti hain.! Wo itni achi or masoom hai, zaheen (intelligent) hai kamgo hai or taa’bedaar (obedient) hai .. aj kal ki ladkiyon wali to koi bat nhi us mein! Or kya chahiye .. unke bhai ki beti hai jinhe wo is wadar chahti hain .. shayad.. shayad Mami., mami ko wo pasand nhi kerti, koi baat hai aesi jo mujhe pata nhi hai. Or ye baat mujhe sirf Leela Mami bata skti hain!
Pov ends

Next Morning ~
Kunj came to his Nani’s house. He was on the entrance when Leela came there. He greeted her.
L – ‘Kunj tum kab aaye?’ (When you came?)
K – ‘kahin ap ye to nhi kehna chah rahi k me kal bhi aaya tha or aj bhi.’ She just smiled.
L – ‘Nhi Kunj me aesa kyun kahun gi?’ (Why would I say that?)
K – ‘Maa ke behaviour ki wajah se ap aesa keh bhi sakti hain.’
L – ‘Nhi kunj tum mujhe ache se janty ho me aesy nhi hun.’ (U knw me well, i m not like that.)
K – ‘ye to me janta hun ke ap itni achi hain per Maa apke sath aesa sulool kyun kerti hain?’
L – ‘Kunj, kuch baaton per parda dala rahy to wo sabke liye acha hota hai!’
K – ‘Aesi bat hai koi Mami? Kya ye sb kuch Maa ki wajah se hai?’
L – ‘Kunj kya janna chahty ho?’ (What do u wanna know?)
K – ‘Yeh ke Maa apse or Twinkle se itni khafa kyun rehti hain.’
L – ‘Array wo to sab hi se khafa rehti hain ..! Mom se, badi ammi se, aditya bhai se anita bhabi se.’
K – ‘Wo to me janta hun.. aditya mamoo ne unse bachpan me engagement ki thi or phir Anita Mami ki wajah se tod di..!’
L – ‘Tumhe ye sb batein kese pata hain?’
K – ‘Maa Nani se hamesha is baat ki shikayat kerti rehti hain.’
L – ‘Dekho Kunj ye bht ghalat baat hai tumhe apni Maa ke past se koi matlab nhi hona chahiye.’
K – ‘To wo apne past ki wajah se mera present kyun kharab ker rahi hain.’
L – ‘Tumhe apne past present or future ke liye pareshan hone ki zaroorat nhi.’
K – ‘Mami ap mujhse ek promise karein.’
L – ‘Kunj abhi mujhe Mahi or Twinkle ko lene jana hai aj Twinkle ka last paper hai. Hum baad me baat karein.’
K – ‘Me chala jata hun.. ap lunch ready karein me lunch yahin karunga..’
He said and quickly left.
L – ‘Kunj ruko..! Arry kunj samjho.’ She tried to stop him but of no use.

Next scene ~
Kunj was standing outside Twinkle’s college. He was waiting for her. Twinkle came out and saw him. She came to him.
T – ‘Ap?’
K – ‘Zaahir hai tumhe pick kerny aaya hun.’ (I came to pick you.)
T – ‘Per driver aany wala tha mujhe pick kerny.’ (Driver was going to come to pick me.)
K – ‘Voh busy tha to Mami ne mujhe bhej diya tumhe or mahi ko pick kerny.’
T – ‘Toh ap kaam karein, pehly Mahi ko pick ker ly mujhe apni frnd se notes share kerny hain.’
K- ‘Kya tum pagal ho. Pehly mahi ko pick karun phir ulta ghoom ke yahan aaun.. tumhe pata hai mera ghr mahi ke college se kitna door hai. Mere saath chalo.’
T – ‘To phir ap mahi ko lay jaayen.. or wapis nhi aayega.. mujhe to koi na koi pick kar hi lega..’
K – ‘to tum saath nhi chalogi.’ She nodded in no.
He went to the car and opened the door in anger.
T – ‘Kunj rukein.’
She said and sat down on the passenger seat.
He started the car nd drove off. Kunj was angry. She looked at him.
T – ‘Ap naraz hain?’ (Are you angry with me.)
K – ‘Tumhe konsa fark padta hai meri narazgi ka.’
T – ‘Fark padta hai tabhi to pooch rahi hun.’
Episode ends..

Precap: Kunj was talking with Twinkle on phone.
K – ‘Twinkle me tumhe apnana chahta hun.. saari zindagi ke liye.’
Twinkle’s eyes widened in shock.

****
How was the epi guys?? I hope it was good.. i knw there were less twinj’s scenes.. but I promise the next epi you’ll love it.. becuz it has many twinj scenes.

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Bye
Lots of love ???

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    16 Comments

    1. Presha on June 3, 2017 8:44 pm

      Hey butter cup…
      Awesome…
      Just loved it…
      Too good…
      Felt bsd for twinkle nd leela.
      .love u…

    2. msmahi on June 3, 2017 9:10 pm

      Episode was awesome????
      Mujhe lagta h Rt leela ka second husband h aur twinkle uske first husband ki beti h sayad????
      Jo bhi ho par tum writer mindblowing ho yrr,tumhare dialogues awesome?????????
      Devil wala ff post karna plzzzz????
      Luv u????
      Bbye

    3. Sohi on June 3, 2017 9:10 pm

      I have no words to express that how was the episode
      It was just marvelous and superb ???

      I hate this usha ???

      Waiting for twinj scenes
      Precap is awesome

      Waiting for the next update
      Do continue

    4. Simiyy on June 3, 2017 9:29 pm

      I really enjoyed reading it
      Can’t wait to read more
      Post soon
      Loads of Love

    5. Fatimaa. on June 3, 2017 9:41 pm

      Heyy jaan…
      It was just superb…mindblowing…awesome….amzing..lovedd it to core….
      Post soon please…
      Love uh❤❤??

    6. nrk on June 3, 2017 9:44 pm

      amazing epi…..kunj is very stubborn. ur writing ki baarme kya batau its just fabulous.
      keep writing and waiting for next epi

      • Afra on June 10, 2017 5:19 pm

        Y do u think kunj is stubborn nrk

    7. Nishuu on June 3, 2017 10:53 pm

      Awesome episode

    8. SidMin23 on June 3, 2017 11:31 pm

      Lots of suspense do clear and waiting for kunj confession can’t wait post soon.

    9. baby on June 4, 2017 12:26 am

      puru tu na shocks de kar maar de mujhko….♥
      oh goodness beyhadh beautiful……♥
      loved it soo mch marvelleous…..♥
      precap sounds great…..♥
      speechless……d beauty n suspense jo hai khaa rha hai mujhko……♥
      schii jyada time tak jinda nahi rhe paungi bina jaane aage kya hone wala hai….♥
      post soon yaar…..♥
      love u sooooooooo mch dear…….♥♥♥♥♥

    10. Sameera on June 4, 2017 5:24 am

      Awww yaar purvi seriously amazing amazing awesome marvellous superbbb sooo cute awesome and what not yaar just wanna say that loved it too much ??????????..
      Can’t wait for next episode….
      Post soon ???????

    11. Ramya on June 4, 2017 5:30 am

      Awesome Amazing purvi
      Kunj is so cute
      But not usha
      Lovely
      Love you keep smiling

    12. Cp on June 4, 2017 6:42 am

      Oooo Amaazzziinggg ?????……Usha ne bada dimaag kharab kiya Hai???and suspense se parda kab uthega?????..post soon ??

    13. maha on June 4, 2017 1:53 pm

      awsm nice epi

    14. twinjfan.tamanna on June 4, 2017 3:38 pm

      Awww… TwiNj are just so so cute! yaar kya likhthi hai Tu? seriously meri tho jaan hi nikal gai hayeee….! Kitna cute epi! wowwww… so beautifully written! Amazing work! Just loved it! Love you so so much! I know short comment hai but tujhe tho meri problem patha hogi hi!

      With Love,
      Urs Shona

    15. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 5, 2017 2:07 am

      Amazing awesome

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