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Home»Fan Fiction»Loving you was a mistake Chapter 8: Jealousy!
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz Swaragini

Loving you was a mistake Chapter 8: Jealousy!

Charms22By Charms22May 26, 201724 Comments6 Mins Read
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Chapter 8 : Jealousy!

Anika’s pov
I went to OM to meet everyone there, because today they will fix Shivaay and Tia’s marriage date. When I went inside everyone was staring at me, because of my clothing.

My dress
http://m.asos.com/motel/motel-vail-dress-with-cut-out-waist-in-shimmer-fabric/prd/6889620?iid=6889620&clr=Blackgold&SearchQuery=cut%20out%20dress&pgesize=299&pge=5&totalstyles=299&gridsize=2&gridrow=140&gridcolumn=2

“Oh my mata, what are you wearing Anika?” “Pinky aunty, these are my working clothes.” “But I have spare clothes with me!” “Ok beta!” Dadi said. “Where’s the pandit?” Mrs. Suraya Kapoor asked and someone answered back: “I’m here!” “Heya Anu, you look fabulously hot!” Robin said, Shivaay ? at us like he is going to kill Robin and Tia looked like she is ? and sad. “Hey Robu, you know what darling you look so hot today, hayee!” I flirtingly said, which made my dear Billu ji jealous.
End of her pov
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Robin’s pov
“It’s so funny ? to see my Tia jealous ?!” “When everyone calls them RoTiLana, it seems like(Swetlana roti hai).” “Hahahhahahaha??????.” “Why am I talking like the duffer(Rudra) Singh Oberoi?” “Mujhe kya ho raha hai(What’s happening with me)?” “But Anika’s plan is working!” I laughed out loudly and everyone looked at me as if I’m a mental case. “I’m sorry!” “Oh my mata, are you mental or what?” “No, I’m sorry aunty, I’m just so happy for RoTiLana!” “And soon it’ll be your marriage too!” Mrs. Kapoor said, while she smiled and I knew it was a fake one.
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Shivaay’s pov
“I can’t let Anika marry this idiot Robin!” “What should I do?” “Only Rudy can can help me!” “I can’t see her with someone else than me!” “Why am I jealous?” “I’m getting married to Tia!” “I’m so confused!” “Why can’t I get her out of my thoughts.” “I have to, I should think about my future with Tia!”
End of his pov
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Tia’s pov
“Robin you are dead!” “I won’t talk to you!” “Flirt as long as you want with that Anika!” “Hey Tia, I’m sorry for flirting with your Robin, but it’s only to make Shivaay jealous and nothing else!” Anika whispered in my ear. “I will help you!” “How?” I asked her and she replied back: “You will get to know soon!” “Ok!”
End of her pov
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Pinky’s pov
“Oh my mata, what is happening here!” “Anika is trying to make our Shivaay jealous!” I whispered into Shakti’s ear. “Yes, that’s true and our Shivaay is getting very jealous!” Shakti said whispering. “I hope that Shivaay realizes Anika’s importance in his life and accepts his feelings for her!” Jhetani ji said and jheth ji agreed.
End of her pov
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Mrs. Suraya Kapoor’s pov
“I think I’m in a comedy show!” “Everyone’s behavior is weird, like all of them are against these marriages!” The pandit started his work, he took Tia’s and Robin’s(Dusyant’s) kundli, matched it and said: “they are like Ram and Sita!” “Pandit ji you have taken the wrong kundlis together!” I said. “Ok so then they are like Radha and Krishna!” The pandit said, while he took Shivaay’s kundli and matched it with…
End of her pov
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Ragini’s pov
The pandit matched Shivaay’s and Robin’s kudli???? and said: “oho, it’ll be bad if they get married!” “Pandit ji, you took kundlis of two men.” “Kya(what)?” Then he took Anika’s kundli and matched it with Shivaay’s. “This couple is very fortunate and their marriage will be successful in every life!” “I will never let Shivaay live his life in peace, but if he gets married to Anika.” “Will I be able to forgive him or not?”
End of her pov
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Sanskar’s pov
“I think that the pandit isn’t a real one!” I whispered into dadi’s ear and she whispered back me: “yes he isn’t a real one, because I don’t want Shivaay to get married to Tia!” “Nicely done dadi!” “I know beta!” “How did you arrange that?” “Do you know who that is?” “Nope!” “It’s Rudra!” “What?” “Haan beta!” “Hahahhaha, Mrs. Kapoor will have lots of problems coming in her way!” “Yupsy!” Swara whispered into my ear. We the Oberois except for Shivaay our jaalkukre(the jealous one) were smiling, because our plan is working very successfully.
End of his pov
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Nidhi’s pov
Vicky and I were engrossed with the conversation about our mission, but I felt a jealous stare towards Vicky. When I turned around I saw that it was Amaal, who was giving death glares to Vicky. I was happy that my plan in making Amaal jealous is being successful. “Earth to Nidhi!” “What happened Vicky?” I asked, while I was confused and he answered back, while he?at me, making Amaal even more jealous: “I was talking about “our” relationship and you were lost in your thoughts!”
End of her pov
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Amaal’s pov
“Nidhi has already got a boyfriend!”
“I’m too late!” “No, you are not!” Sam said whispering into my ear. “What do you mean?” “Vicky isn’t her boyfriend, but her bestfriend!” “What?” “Yupsy!” She said and I sensed that she was right, because two people were eyeing us with jealousy and I hugged her, making it even worse and the jallkukres were Nidhi and my brother Armaan, which shocked me to the core. “What were you guys talking about?” Armaan asked and I replied back, shocking Armaan: “Sam is getting married to Vicky!” “What?” ArDhi(Armaan + Nidhi) shouted.
End of his pov
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Vicky’s pov
“Yeah Amaal and Sam are right!” I said, but then I didn’t hear what they were saying, because I was lost in a girl, she was so beautiful?. “What’s happening with me?”
End of his pov
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So with whom will Vicky and or Daksh be paired with?
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Author’s note
“Crazy Ladkiyoon ki gazab kahani will be put on hold for a few weeks, because I don’t have any ideas for it right now, until then you guys can enjoy the stories: Loving you was a mistake, Meri Zindagi tum ho and Sun saathiya, I hope you guys understand.” “The Copyright of this story belongs to me and if you copy paste it, then I will personally kick you where it hurts the most?.”
End of Author’s note

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    24 Comments

    1. shrilatha on May 27, 2017 7:38 am

      Awesome Sam sorrt for not replying but u know my health right.

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 27, 2017 12:40 pm

        Thank you very much and get well soon darling, love you❤️

    2. Niriha on May 27, 2017 11:14 am

      Awesome

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 27, 2017 12:41 pm

        Thanks?

    3. aleeza on May 27, 2017 12:01 pm

      Nice

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 27, 2017 12:43 pm

        Tysm?

    4. dharani on May 27, 2017 12:53 pm

      awesome

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 27, 2017 2:07 pm

        Thanks Dharani Jaanu??

    5. Ammy on May 27, 2017 1:42 pm

      awesome

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 27, 2017 2:07 pm

        Thanks a lot Ammy?

    6. alekhika20 on May 27, 2017 2:26 pm

      Nice update

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 27, 2017 4:59 pm

        Thanks a lot dear?

    7. Madhuani on May 27, 2017 2:54 pm

      Amazing…

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 27, 2017 4:55 pm

        Thanks a lot Madhuani darling?

    8. nikita_jai29 on May 27, 2017 8:00 pm

      Good one dear

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 27, 2017 8:10 pm

        Thank you so much dear?

    9. Liya on May 27, 2017 11:31 pm

      Haha humour baba??? you nailed it..Rotilana- Svetlana roti hai??…robin’s POV was hilarious lol?..Rudy as pandit is doing his work well ??then they r Krishna & radha??…but how come tia got ready to help in making shivaye jealous? …jijju is getting so jealous lol..hehe and on top of that amaal saying you are getting married to Vicky!

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 28, 2017 12:21 am

        Tyvm jaana????

    10. Haridhra on May 28, 2017 1:59 pm

      Omg u r really super hilarious yaar..

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 28, 2017 2:41 pm

        Aww, thanks for the compliment yaara??❤

    11. Nidhi on May 28, 2017 7:23 pm

      OMG Samy hilarious nowdays I’m getting my eyes on too many boys it seems “smirks”
      Lol Are u and Vicky seriously getting married???

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 28, 2017 9:04 pm

        Thanks a lot my dear Nidzu and you’ll get to know soon about me and Vicky??❤❤????

    12. Ankita on May 30, 2017 2:37 pm

      Awesome update..

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 30, 2017 3:21 pm

        Thank you so much?

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