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Home»Fan Fiction»Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff)By Akshada (Part-13)
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Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff)By Akshada (Part-13)

V.V.harshitaBy V.V.harshitaMay 20, 2017Updated:May 20, 201720 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys srry fr being late……and i am a bit sad coz i jst got 4 comments in my last epi anyways lets start
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Dev’s pov:
Kya karoo?? She cam near me touched my face
Sona: omg!! I can even touch touch u!!!!
Arrey yaar i am so…..confused shuld i go or…..shuld i……
Arghh!!!!
Feel like killing myself fr cmimg at a wrong timimng….better let me do one thing….i took a coin frm my pocket……..heads-shuld be here
Tales-shuld leave
I tossed the coin…..
Hahahaha to my luck it cam heads
Wow!! Thanks god
( oho mr.devrath dixit u hav to thank me!!!! Hw dare u thank god when i helped u in this!!! ??????)
Kk kk nw wht shuld i do…..like……
(stupid!! Of course romance)
Suddenly i heard hr talking wid me
Hmm i hope nw its better to listen to hr….
Sona: why the hell am i imagining u!!!!!!???
I jst hate this….i mean i like this….. But….. Omg!! Sona tumi ekdum bokha……u said u like this…. Shit!!!! I feel like kicking myself….
She saw me….
Sona: i hope this imagination is too……long….
U itself tell something na??
Is she aksing me!!!
Me: whtever ur heart says!!!
Sona: heart….???!!! Heart heart!!! Arghh!!!
I sat on hr bed i was jst staring at hr antics
Omg!!! She is jst killing me…..
Nw wht shuld i do….!!
She cam near me and sat nxt to me….
Sona: wht if everything wht i am thinking is wrong…..!!??
Me: but wht ever u saw in my drawer is true rite????
Sona: hw do u knw?
Dev u dont hav any sense!!!
Before i could say…..
Sona: ya ik u r my imagination so…..u would knw…..hmm….
Sona: do u really love me?
No……i cant ans this one….tht too nw…
Sona: waite waite waite waite……hw vil u knw u r my imagination and u vil the same brain as mine…..sona u r jst a buddhu…..i am jst gona become crazy!!! Whtever it may be….. Hw did u even get my childhood pics…..only i had those copies….
Nw wht shuld i say…i hav all hr pics i mean frm the time she was born…..till nw….i was curious to hav hr pics
Me: hmm…..maybe frm someone whom u knw….
Sona: ik??????……this is the biggest doubt i hav…..idk correctly tht u love me or nt….but we can jst imagine like u love…..but….HW CAN U EVEN LOVE ME???
Me: i did nt get ur point hmm!!!
Sona:… …iss duniya main mujhse zyada cute,gorgeous,smart,bubbly,sweet,beautiful,hot ect ect ladki hai…toh tum kyu mujhse pyaar karti ho….i mean u r world wide known super hero….hw can u even???!!!
She said this while leaning hr bak on the wall….
I got up went near hr…
Me: iss duniya main kinte sara ladki hoti idk par….un sab ladki tum aur tumari jaisa nahi ho sakta hai na???!!!
I said this confidently…
Sona: gud ans but i am nt satisfied….hmm…
Me: hmm….satisfied nahi hoti toh…..i can give u more…….
I went near hr
End of dev’s pov

Sona’s pov:

He cam near me….i mean so…..close to me….he got hold of my face in his hands….more than the before imagination i feel this as real…..(ohh!! So sad of sona….its real only buddhu!! ?????)
He cam more close to me…..i can feel his breath on my lips….i jst dont want to get lost in his eyes so i looked dwn….but he made me look at him….nt again…..but ya i got lost in his eyes…….they were again killing me…i heard him speaking…….
Mrdev: i love ur eyes….mujhe pata nahi ki….sara ladkiyan ko tumare jaise aanke hota hai….and ur nose….. Ears…..lips…..everything…. Is jst admirable…
Kk kk i blushed at his sentence bu…..really imagination main poetic baate bhi aate hai kya???? i bored of addressing mrdev…….so let it be short and sweet “D”
D: toh aap blush ne karte ho??? (so u blush too)
I tried to control my blush but waste of energy…..
D: aap blush karte hue cute lagti ho ??
Nt again man….but again i blushed ?????
D: i hope main aise hi baat kana padega
Kk kk i understood his line….but again blushed
He cam more close….i mean….so…close tht our lips were jst inches away…..he stared at me like 2 mins…..i again looked dwn….he put my flicks bak of my ears….maybe it was disturbing his view…. He kissed both my cheeks….i felt really gud…..i got a positive vibration…. Frm him…….he roamed his thumb finger on my lips….when i felt his touch on my lips i closed my eyes…..i did nt wht was he doing…..but…but….but….before i could realise….he latched his lips on mine….god man…. I hope i am imagining so much….but i dont knw when i started to respond to him…..but it felt awesome…..he was kissing me….so softly and passionatly…. He bit my lower lips so softly….i opened my mouth….and he started tasting and expolring each and every corner of my mouth and lips too…….he broke the kiss coz of lack of oxygen……i did nt open my eyes my house…coz i felt so….embaressed…… I felt his hands off my face and when i opened my eyes he was nt there….
But seriously i was enjoying the kiss so…much….
But i did nt think i would imagine him so….much….like making myself crazy fr tht kiss….
I went near the bed layed dwn….and was totally thinking abt the kiss….
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Precap: dev’s pov and sona ignoring Hana and dev……

Plzs do bear me if there is any mistakes…..
Bye frm Akshada and Harshita

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    20 Comments

    1. Princess. on May 21, 2017 12:34 am

      Amazing Episode

      • V.V.harshita on May 21, 2017 12:58 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon

    2. akshita on May 21, 2017 1:26 am

      Plzzz Plzzz post soon????
      it was fantastic ✔✔✔

      • V.V.harshita on May 21, 2017 12:59 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon????

    3. DramaQueen1004 on May 21, 2017 1:37 am

      Awsum epi yr
      Really loved it
      Devakshi ki pehli kiss…. ye sona apne pyaar ko realise kab karegi
      Sry fr not commenting in d prev epi
      Pls post soon
      Love u loads
      Nafia

      • V.V.harshita on May 21, 2017 1:01 pm

        She vil soon realise….and ya vil post soom ????

    4. Manasi on May 21, 2017 8:58 am

      Awesome ?? post soon luv u dear ?

      • V.V.harshita on May 21, 2017 1:05 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon ????

    5. MANSINAIK on May 21, 2017 5:16 pm

      Hi I’m finally registered l’m happy ??

      • V.V.harshita on May 21, 2017 6:05 pm

        Thnxs

    6. Fan Lover on May 21, 2017 5:43 pm

      Niceeeee plssss post soon

      • V.V.harshita on May 21, 2017 9:40 pm

        Thnxs….vil post soon ? ? ? ?

    7. Sgatik on May 21, 2017 9:12 pm

      Awesome episode. Waiting for next

      • V.V.harshita on May 21, 2017 9:40 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon

    8. ayshakhan on May 22, 2017 12:25 am

      fantastic epi next post soon

      • V.V.harshita on May 22, 2017 11:20 am

        Thanxs vil post soon

    9. darshana on May 22, 2017 12:13 pm

      Wow what an episode?????…lovely dear..devakshi ki pheli kiss aur sona ko lagta hai ki woh imagine kar rahi hai…OMG!..when she will realise the truth????..would be fun to read….
      post really soon!!
      love u?

      • V.V.harshita on May 22, 2017 2:20 pm

        Thnxs…..and when she realises tht he was nt imagination…..thr would be a vry big drama????????????
        Vil post soon

    10. Riti1107 on May 22, 2017 6:15 pm

      Sona bhi na seriously buddhu hai

      That Dev you should thank me & not god was so funny?????

      First kiss❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

      Post soon

      • V.V.harshita on May 23, 2017 9:52 am

        Thnxs yaar…… And i hav already posted

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