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Swaragini-Sanskari Swara & Atrangi Ragini Shot 9

Aditi.AyanshBy 57 Comments3 Mins Read

Thank u so much all..guys thank u for showering ur love on me..kisses and hugs..love u my favourite people
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Adi 🙂
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Recap: Dida guilty
Gadodias reach RM
Shobha: Ragini beta i’m really sry for wat i did..and sry everyone for tht day pls come with us..
Ragini: i can forgive u but i cant come with u..pls i am sry..
Sansjay goes and angrily holds her.
Sanju: Ragini u r my sister..and they r our parents hw can u see them getting hurt..i can die for them..
Ragini: i am also doing the same bhaiya..
Ragini pulls her hand back.
Ragini: Shobha aunty could hv getted me killed it was dadi who sved me..and tomorrow she will again hink i am a black shadow in all our life and then wat is the guarantee tht she will not add poison in my fud?
Mishti breaks down.
Shekhar: u r our blood hw can we u live with these characterless people.
Ragini: keep ur voice low sir..just becoz u r my biological father i am controlling myself..if anyone else speak lyk tht abt my family..then u’ll hv to face me and tht really tough
Mishti slaps Ragini
Rathore Janki and Chandrakala. Are shocked
Rathore: hw dare u slap my girl.
Ragini stops him.

Ragini: let them show their love for me na papa.
Mishti: he is ur father talk to him with respect.
Ragini: pls..ma’am clam down..see u may b my biological parebts but i was raised by them all these yrs and yday u said u r my biological parents then i’ll leave my family and should go with u?
Janki: stop it bhabhi..all these yrs we hv not even touched my Laado and today u slapped her infront of all.
Mishti: she doesn’t knw how to talk with respect to her elders..ofcourse u will not hv taught her all these
Janki: my Laado never created any situation where we had to beat her or scold her..
Mishti: it used to b nw i am her mother
Ragini: no u not..u cant replace my mumma’s place ever
Sanjay: Ragini..

Ragini: sry i am not lyk Swara am different i am not sanskari..i am atrangi..and pls becoz of u people i am staying in my house even after getting married to Sanskar…hv u people ever thought abt it..
Shekhar: we will talk to Maheshwaries
Ragini: my papa is still alive..and i swear if u slap me again i’ll not stop papa beacoz this tym i am telling wat the truth is..
Janki: pls..i knw u r my family members..but pls we cant let u take her…
Ragini: sry but i am not going with u why dont u understand ..they raised me..all these years even after knwing i am nobody to them.
Shekhar: then wat abt us?
Ragini: u people came to knw abt the reality nw only ri8….
Parvathy: come with us u r my poti..
Ragini: ok..i’ll go with u ..but i’ll wear wat i lyk tht is modern dress..and i’ll never b lyk Swara and even if u people try hard then also i won t become lyk tht coz i am different.
Parvathy: but beta
Ragini: you people think i am crazy they raised me so badly and all..but thts not true..they raised me just lyk u people raised Swara..the only difference is she is traditional and i am extraordinary
Maheshwaries reach there

Precap: last shot

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57 Comments

  1. shrilatha on

    Love ragini ka self confidence…and eagerly waiting for ur new ff ..fingers cross for ragsan

  2. Rehna on

    Adi dear you r going to end this story also. Will you start new one, this shot is amazing.

    • Aditi.Ayansh on

      Thank u so much Rehna di..yh will come back with another Ragsan ff soon tk cr love u 🙂

  9. CrazygirlS.P on

    I’m speachless Adi, I love Ragini’s avatar, what she said is absolutly true❤❤❤❤

  10. Jis123 on

    Superb dear..raginis confidence&strong decision wow..i loved raginis charecter…

  11. asra on

    awesome dear…ragu s so confident na…loved it alot dear…waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

  13. Jayanti on

    super duper awesome…loved to see ragini’s stand for her family….keep it up choti

  14. aditi on

    awesome adi 2day no ragsan scenes. pls show ragsan dr. comeback with new ff sooon. Love u

    • Aditi.Ayansh on

      Sry yaar aditi..cant include Ragsan scenes ri8 nw but will surely show them in my next ff Yh it will be on Ragsan love u dear tk cr 🙂

    • Aditi.Ayansh on

      Thank u so much di..i’ll surely come back with another longer Ragsan ff soon tk cr di 🙂

  22. Hannah on

    I assure you that no Swara fan will read this!You know the reason?It’s the indirect method of yours to belittle Swara.See you have a nice storyline.I read this daily.I liked it as Swara’s character was different here but you seem to belittle the traditional people.Like the ways Ragini said that she cannot be sanskari and she is extraordinary.Your story revolves around Ragini.Fine enough please don’t attach Swara’s name here in your title.You reversed their characters..its unique but being modern and being ill mannered are quite different.I don’t think ShMish had any role in separating Ragini so why was she mistreating them?You are trying to show Ragii modern fashionable exactly like the show portrayed swara.But Swara was never this I’ll mannered.Ragini is acting like a spoiled brat and not a bold ATRANGI girl.I know your fans will bash me but befor you spill anything against me people please scroll up and read my entire comment.

    • mahima on

      Yaar tum logo ki toh Hadd hi ho gayi….. grow up man… She has shown both ragini n swara… N ragini is not ill mannered whtever happened with her was not right… N she has whole right to support those who supported her when her own family disowned her so stop it right here okay???

    • Hannah on

      I don’t think Sumi and Shekar knew about their other child.They were wronged too.Its perfectly fine to support the family who has given her food and shelter but that really does not mean that she will behave up to this level with those parents who did not know about their other child’s existence.She was ill mannered and ill say that aloud you know why?Because Krishna ji never misbehaved with either of his mothers.wasn’t he wronged by not being loved by his own parents?But he never misbehaved but what I see in Ragini is she is damn happy being in a rich or so called rich family.i was forced to say so as I see no other reason for this kind of behaviour of hers.What I said was the writer is portraying the wod traditional in an unethical way.Its not mandatory that a traditional girl will be timid and soft spoken.Anyways….im a swaragini fan.Now what I see in this is…writer wanted viewers to love this modern bold Ragini but I’m disgusted by this attitude.i dislike Ragini here and love Swara!!
      I admire such people who walk with time carrying their tradition.Wearing mini skirts or salwar kameez does not really matter.How you behave with the elder ones that matters.Modernism means keeping your point of view and not being silent but yes with respect.some elder ones don’t deserve it..fine enough but make sure you understand that they actually don’t deserve it.Make sure that you r not misjudging them.I thoughts are way beyond this swaragini serial and the creepy fights amid the fans.So please don’t come up with such point of views only to support an actress.I won’t be changing my ethics for anyone whom I don’t even know(The actress and her personal life)

    • Jayanti on

      and one last thing…we don’t want a swara fan over here…we want a swaragini fan……..and STOP STOP STOP STOP….okay….really very pissing all of us off….first abhi then shri then sam and now aditi……stop right there……..limit hoti h har cheez ki

    • Aditi.Ayansh on

      Thank u so much for reading my story Hannah di..but let me pls make it clear i never showed Swara or Ragini ill mannered ..and di pls..if u r a Swara fan i suggest u to stop reading this..also i am happy with Ragini fans and also there are Swara fans who read this..becoz they dont judge my ff with hw much each character is given importance than the other and for other Swara fans lyk u…a big bye bye frm me..

    • Hannah on

      Hey there dear writer,I’m not one of those obsessed fan of anyone.Dare you speak on this topic or use this topic against me cause I never said anything to any writer for just writing on his or her favourite actress.Its totally fine but as you have a title including Swara,you have to give importance to both.After reading my comment you you really think I go on suggestions anyways??? I go on my way.And none of the readers who are solely swara fans would be reading any of your fan fictions because what this story has is just RAGINI.wasn’t the show bashed only because of gave more priority to Swara?Of course everyone judges the amount of importance a character gets or else why do you think bashing occurs?What you can say is you’ll be happy with only the Ragini fans who longed to see Tejaswi in swara’s character.
      A smaller bye would work for me anyways.Moreover dare you call me di cause di means elder sis who are RESPECTED rather being kicked out if arguments occur.

    • Suhasini.k on

      We are free members of this site.We can read any ff we want!
      Jayanti,
      read the title and then inform me if swara fans are allowed here or not!If not then tadaa and if yes then again a tada because the author seems to be double faced.On one side she writes on swaragini and on the other side she asks swara fans to leave.Damn egoistic you are Aditi.Utter disappointment.I loved your ffs but now when you have announced that swara fans are not allowed then i would prefer leaving.
      Janyati from next time please ask your friend Adi to mention if it is allowed of swara fans to read this or not.I am sure i was never seen bashing any writer so please don’t call me a writer basher.
      I don’t jugde stories by seeing the importanc of each character but i am definitely a swara fan and as you saidabout swara fans not allowed tata.

    • Aditi.Ayansh on

      I’ll still call u Hannah di becoz i dont knw u personally..and u r talking to me just becoz i gave importance to Ragini fine…nw pls i dont want any conversation over here..u r a Swaragini fan and i am a Ragini fan fine..nw pls dont irritate me and any of the other readers..and one more thing i knw wat u said is true i gave iomportance to Ragini more but u could have said this a bit gently tht would not hv hurted anyone..but rather u decided to argue..so did us…but if i remember i never said Swara and Ragini will share equal space in this ff..so pls di its a request i hope u understand

    • Aditi.Ayansh on

      Suhasini di..thank u so much for reading my ff..but i hvnt got not even a single piece of encouragement frm u..and yes i am egoistic then wat abt u di?…and pls bashing us lyk this..if u dont lyk how ur fav character is portrayed then stop reading it..and pls stop discouraging writers…stay blessed..and iam not kind of bashing u

    • Suhasini.k on

      Am i not a reader if i don’t comment?Just see the way you are talking.I’m also a writer,thus bashing them is impossible for me.
      And yes you arrogant girl,did I ever bash you regarding how much importance each character will receive?
      If you don’t understand what i say then better you ignore my comment rather than dragging the matter.I simply said that you asked swara fans to avoid this ff and i did not like this!
      I hav no issue with your fan fiction,but i do have issues with your personality and about this girl hanah,i don’t really care about what she says but yes i don’t think you ever said that this is a Ragini based fan fiction.
      Umm wait,aren’t you the descendant of Sarika Shah?
      Then sorry my bad.I know she writes on Ragsan only.I shouldn’t had gone for this ff.My sincere apologies!