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Home»Fan Fiction»THE O’BROS LOVE STORY- EPISODE-15
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THE O’BROS LOVE STORY- EPISODE-15

NilashBy NilashMay 8, 201758 Comments11 Mins Read
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Yee back with the next part. Thank you to all of you for all your sweet appreciating comments. So let’s move on to the episode. The link for the previous episode is given below.
Episode 14

EPISODE-15
EVENING TIME. The members of boys gang as well as girls gang are happy that their competition ended up in a good note. After sometime of their discussion and huge laughter everyone dispersed to their rooms. Soumya went away to her room with a sad face. Rudra noticed it went went behind Soumya to her room. Soumya entered her room and was about to close the door but Rudra jumped in.

Rudra: sumo…

Soumya: hmm…

Rudra: kya hua hai? Itni udaas kyun ho?
(what happened? Why are you so sad?)

Soumya: no nothing like that

Rudra went near the door and closed the door. After that he came close to Soumya and made her sit on the couch at the room. Soumya could not stop herself from crying after noticing the sweet actions of Rudra.

Rudra: kya hua sumo ro kyun rahi ho?
(what happened sumo why are you crying?)

Soumya: I’m sorry…

Soumya was continuously crying. Rudra was trying to console her and hugged her tight. After sometime she stopped her vigorous crying but continued to sob. Few more minutes passed.

Rudra: kya hua hai Soumya?
(what happened Soumya?)

Soumya: tumhare muh se sumo zyaadaa achha lagta hai
(sumo suits your mouth better)

Rudra: hmm to mere sumo ko kya hua hai..
(hmmm… then what happened to my sumo?)

Soumya: mere sumo ko matlab…??
(what do you mean by my sumo??)

Rudra: tum point par aao hua kya hai… achanak itna rona dhona kyun?
(you just come to the point.. what happened why are you crying like this suddenly?)

Soumya: meri aur rohit ki shaadi hai
(it’s mine and rohit’s wedding)

Rudra: what??

Rudra’s eyes widened in shock.

Rudra: ye kab hua?
(when did this happen?)

Soumya: aaj thodi der pahle..
(today.. just sometime before)

Rudra: sumo theek se bolo hua kya hai
(sumo be straightforward.. hust tell me what exactly happened?)

Soumya: rohit mere mom se milne gaya tha kal and he said to my mom that he loves me, mere mom ne uske saath meri shaadi fix kar di…
(yesterday rohit went to meet my mom and he said to my mom that he loves me, so my mom fixed my wedding to him..)

Rudra: tumhaare decision jaane bina??
(without knowing and considering your dicision?)

Soumya: hmmm. Maine kaha tha rohit is a very good guy to mere mummi ko laga ki I like him so mujhse puche bina hi…
(hmmm… I said to my mom that rohit is a very good guy.. so my mom thought that maybe I like him so she fixed the marriage without asking me..)

Rudra: to ek kaam karo abhi bol do ki you don’t like him and ye matter ko yahin par end karo..
(ok now just tell your mom that you don’t like him and end this matter over here only..)

Soumya: maine wo bhi kaha but my mom wants him as his son-in-law
(I said that but my mom wants him as his son-in-law)

Rudra: to ab??
(then??)

Soumya: ek kaam karti hu mai rohit ko kah deti hu ki I am a…
(ok let’s say it to rohit that I’m a…)

Rudra: I am a??

Soumya: l*s*o

Rudra: what are you serious?

Soumya: Rudra…. I’m not but is problem se nikalne kaa last solution
(Rudra… I’m not but this the last option we have to solve this problem)

Rudra: cheee…. Thodi der pahle o g*y bane the and ab tum l*s*o.. ye ho kya raha hai?
(chhee… sometime before o was behaving like a g*y and now you want to become a l*s*o.. what is happening?)

Soumya: Rudra it’s the last solution..

Rudra: no sumo tum aisa kuch bhi nahi karogi..
(no sumo you will not say anything like that…)

Soumya: to tum hi batao ki mujhe kyaa karna chahiye..
(then you only say what should I do..??)

Rudra: ek kaam karte hai aunty ko jaakar bata dete hai ki we love each other and we are already married.
(let’s do want thing… let’s go to aunty and say to her that we love each other and we are already married)

Soumya looks Rudra in utmost shock with her mouth open.

Rudra: muh bandh karo nhi to makkhhi ghush jayegi
(shut your mouth or else bees will get in)

Soumya shuts her mouth but her eyes were full of ashtonishment.

Rudra: kya hua bhoot dekh liya??
(what..?? you saw a ghost over here??)

Soumya: haan… na mera matlab nahi. Na bhoot kahan hai… Rudra what did you just say?
(yes.. no ..i mean no ghost is over here but what did you just say??)

Rudra: wahi jo sach hai
(that’s the truth..)

Soumya: what?

Rudra: sumo mera matlab… hai ki… yehi baat ko sach prove karna padega tumhaare shaadi ko rokne ke liye
(sumo I mean… actually… we have to prove this as the truth to stop your marriage…)

Soumya: bhul jao agar mere mom ko pata chala ki maine tumse shaadi ki hai to unko heart attack aa jayega..
(just forget it if my mom comes to know that I married you then she will surely get a heart attack)

Rudra: wooo… very good phir to wayse bhi tumhaari us rohit ke saath shaadi nahi hogi… great idea from Rudra the genius…
(wow.. very good then your marriage will definitely get canceled with rohit… so this is a great idea from Rudra the genius…)

Soumya: Rudra ye joke karne kaa time nhi hai… wayse rohit achha ladka hai… I think I should think about him once..
(rudra this is not the time to joke.. by the way rohit is a good guy… I think I should think about him once..)

Rudra: nhi tum koi think nhi karogi..
(no you will not think anything)

Soumya: kyun problem kya hai?
(why? What is the problem?)

Rudra: problem yahi hai ki tum sumo ho and wo sumo wrestler…
(the problem is that you are sumo and he is a sumo wrestler..)

Soumya: aaeee… mere fiancé ke bare me kuch bhi ulta seedha nhi..
(aeee.. not a word against my fiancé..)

Rudra: arreeee.. abhi to khud hi ro rhi thi ki shaadi nhi karni and abhi hi fiancé bana diya..
(arree.. sometime before you were crying that you don’t want to do this marriage.. and now rohit became your fiancé..??)

Soumya: at least tumse to achha hai
(at least he is better than you)

Rudra: ok fine.. mai tumhara help karne aayaa tha nhi chahiye tha pahle bol deti bekar me rudy the great ka time waste kiya…
(ok fine… I just came to help you but if you don’t want my help you should have said it earlier just waster the great rudy’s time)

Soumya: ok ok fine.. no fights..

Rudra: tum…. Choro to batao karna kya hai?
(you… leave it just say what we should do now?)

Soumya: I think iss matter ko seriously and maturely handle karna chahiye
(I think we should handle this matter a bit maturely..)

Rudra: yup… good idea..

Scene shifts to shivika’s room.

Shivay: anika… so tie ho gaya competition…
(anika.. the competition was a tie)

Anika: waah.. kya khoj hai aapki masha allah..
(wow.. what a discovery.. really nice…)

Shivay: kya hua… aise kyun bol rahi ho…??
(what happened..?? why are you saying like this?)

Anika: nahi mr. kanji aankh aap to aise bol rahe hai ki mujhe pata hi nahi tha ki competition tie hua hai..
(no actually mr. kanji eyes you are saying as if I don’t know that the competition was a tie)

Shivay: wo.. Conversation shuru karne ke liye kuch bolna parta hai.. to maine yahi kaha…
(to start a conversation we should say something at first so I just said it..)

Anika: jayse duniya me kuch aur topic hi nhi hai..SSO
(as if no more topics are present in this world to start a conversation… SSO)

Shivay: ho gaya? Ab thora araam se baat Karen?
(done?? Now can we talk calmly??)

Anika: aap na rahne hi do…
(you just leave it..)

Shivay: ok fine let’s talk about something

Anika: hey mere champa par ghumne chale..?
(then let’s go on a ride on my champa)

Shivay: a big no no to your champu right now

Anika: ye champu champu kya laga rakha hai… wo champa hai meri champa
(hey what is this champu… she is champa my champa..)

Shivay: haan wahi champa.. suno na…
(yaa.. champa.. but listen..)

Anika: kya?
(what?)

Shivay: tumhe nhi lagta hume aur thora sa…
(you don’t think so.. we should..)

Anika: kya…??
(we should what??)

Shivay: hamare relation ko thora aage badhana chahiye…
(we should take another step in our relation)

Anika: cheapdeee…
(you cheeaaaappp..)

Shivay: cheapdee kyun mai apni biwi se kah raha hu..
(cheap.. why I’m saying this to my wife then why cheap?)

Anika: nahi mujhe sharm aati hai chaliye choriye mujhe
(no I feel shy… now just leave me..)

Anika was to get up but Shivay held her right hand.

Shivay: theek hai tum mujhe apni biwi ke saath romance nhi karne dogi to mai kisi aur ke biwi ko dhoond lunga.. no problem at all
(ok fine.. if you don’t allow me to romance my wife then I’ll find someone else’s wife.. no problem at all)

Anika: double cheapde.. nhi nhi triple cheapde… aap ki himmat kaise hui ye kahne ki?
(double cheap.. no no triple cheap… how dare you to say like that?)

Shivay: I’m SSO to mai kuch bhi kah sakta hu mujhe us ke liye himmat ki zarurat nhi padti..
(I’m SSO.. I can say anything without any extra dare or strength..)

Anika: mai aapse baat nhi karungi… jaiyee aap
(I will not talk to you.. you just go..)

Anika gets up moved towards the pool side window. Shivay stood up and went to her and continued his mischief by back hugging her

Shivay: hmm.. to mai ab kya karu meri biwi mujhe apne paas jaane nhi deti to isme meri kyaa galti hai?
(hmmm.. then what can I do my wife is not allowing me to go close to her.. so what is my mistake in that?)

Anika: Shivay.. wo mujhe thora aur time chahiye… wo mai..
(Shivay actually I need some more time… soo..)

Shivay: kuch kahne ki zarurat nhi anika it’s ok but haan thora romance to banta hai.
(you need not explain anything but a bit of romance is fine right?)

Shivay turned anika to his side and placed a small kiss on her forehead. Anika smiled at this sweet gesture of her hubby.

Anika: I love you Shivay

Shivay: I love you to anika

The scene now shifted to omkara’s room. Chulbul was doing sit ups to make his body fit and om was making him to do that forcefully.

Om: ohh.. mahashay.. ruke kyun?
(ohh.. sir ji why did you stop??)

Chulbul: aap apne rafari se ye sab nhi karwaa sakte..
(you can’t make your rafari do all these)

Om: o mere rafari I mean referee ke bachhe.. chalo continue karo ruk na nhi hai..
(oh my rafari.. I mean the referee.. now just continue with your sit ups..)

Chulbul: ye ghor atyachhar hai
(this is persecution…)

Om: atyachaar.. seriously? Maine tujhse kaha tha ki tu Rudra ke saath gym me jayega… tu to gaya nhi to ab tujhe yahi karna padega.. chal chal rukna nahi hai
(persecution… seriously?? I asked you to gym with Rudra but you won’t do that so you have to do this now so just continue your sit ups..)

Chulbul: ye kaisi baat hui… peechle 10 minute se hum yahi to kar rahe hai… thak gaye hai omkara ji chor dijiye ab hume..
(what is this… I’m doing this from past 10 minutes… now I’m tired also please leave me.. please)

Om: kuch chorne kaa naam nhi lega tu..
(you will not ask me to leave you… just continue..)

Chulbul: aapke sharir me daya naam ki cheez hai bhi ya nhi?
(do you have mercy in you or not?)

Om: nhi hai.. ab continue kar
(no I don’t have…. Now just continue..)

Chulbul (whispering to himself): pati shehat ke liye tu to haanikarak hai (dangal film’s haanikarak baapu song’s style)… hum pe thori daya to kar hum nanhe chiraiyaa hai.. pati sehat ke liye tu to haanikarak hai
(hubby for my health you are so dangerous… (dangal film’s haanikarak baapu song’s style)…. Please show some mercy on me as I’m a little girl.. hubby for my health you are so dangerous…)

He was doing continuous sit ups and om was governing him strictly while the song of haanikarak pati was going through chulbul’s mind.

PRECAP- OMKAARAA TO BEOME A SAGE THE GREAT SADHU BABA????
Hmmm… peeps stay tuned to know about the great om sadhu baba…. Well eager to know all your reactions after reading the precap. Bye- NILASH

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    58 Comments

    1. Ayeshashk on May 8, 2017 11:58 pm

      Amazing nilash….precap looks interesting

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:10 pm

        Thank you Ayesha.. but this part was the utmost boring part i know but then also you loved it thank you for that

      • Ayeshashk on May 10, 2017 7:30 pm

        No dear not at all….. they are really good….. one should never think such way…. doing something which never one can think to do is a great thing

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 8:20 pm

        Ayesha thanks for your sweet support dear but i’m stuck at the position that how to proceed now after this episode.

      • Ayeshashk on May 10, 2017 8:30 pm

        Ur welcome and in sure you will definetly get an good idea to proceed further

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 9:25 pm

        Ayesha you can also help me by showering your valuable suggestions dear

      • Ayeshashk on May 10, 2017 9:29 pm

        Will do it definetly

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 10:33 pm

        and i’m waiting for it…
        thank you dear

    2. Tara on May 9, 2017 12:05 am

      nice

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:10 pm

        thank you Tara

    3. mehakchalag on May 9, 2017 12:33 am

      Yeh part bhi ek dum mast h.Amazing…Precap is khidkitod as always.

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:51 pm

        Thank You Mehak but this part was not at all good… thank you for loving it

    4. Nitika on May 9, 2017 2:55 am

      Poor Chulbul is at the mercy of hanikarak pati parmeshwar. Rumya are sooooo compatible,understanding and supporting. Loved the episode

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:50 pm

        Thank You Nitika…. thanks a lot for sweet comment but dear this episode was a real time waste dear

    5. san on May 9, 2017 7:28 am

      Nice epic…..

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:21 pm

        Thank You San

    6. Arpita on May 9, 2017 11:27 am

      Ye part bhi ekdum khdkitod. ……
      Last part bechara chubul…..????

      Post next part soon. ..

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 8:04 pm

        Arpita tumne mera ff shuru se padha hai na to tumhe ye part achha kaise laga???
        Thank You is bakwaas part ko padhne k liye and appreciate karne k liye
        I am in no mood to upload the next part soon kyunki Nilash ka style change ho raha hai and purane style me wapas jaane k liye thora time lagega bas utna time dedo yaar please

    7. UF on May 9, 2017 11:44 am

      EXCELENT FUNNY?AWESOME SUPERB??????

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:23 pm

        No Uf it was not at all superb it was just a waste of time… but thanks a lot for appreciating the crap also thank you

    8. Vishakha on May 9, 2017 1:07 pm

      super se upar episode Nilu.. loved it ???

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:28 pm

        Vishu Thank You… ye comment k liye nhi but that support you know na what I mean I was badly in need of that as I was very much upset but you set my mood thank you

      • Vishakha on May 10, 2017 7:58 pm

        u don’t need to thank me dear.. anything for you anytime 🙂

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 8:21 pm

        hehe isiliye to phir se aapka dimaag kha rhi hu…

      • Vishakha on May 10, 2017 8:24 pm

        kha le..jyada to hai bhi nai 😀

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 9:21 pm

        Vishu aapke paaas mujhse 10 times zyada dimaag hai and uska roof mai aaj hi dekh chuki hu. so ye to bilkul nhi kahne ka ki aap ke pass dimaag kam hai

      • Vishakha on May 10, 2017 9:31 pm

        tumse to kam hi hai dear.. i can’t even write one page.. and u have written so many fabulous ones..

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 10:28 pm

        but Vishu OS ki baat bhul mat jaanaa… it’s an order..

      • Vishakha on May 10, 2017 10:31 pm

        won’t promise..but will try 🙂

    9. Arthi on May 9, 2017 1:37 pm

      Superb dr and all the three pairs amazing and loved rumya shivika an Omri scenes superb dr……chulbul situps nice

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:47 pm

        Thank You Arthi… but dear it was just a time waste but thanks again that you loved this crap as well

    10. Niriha on May 9, 2017 2:54 pm

      Awesome…loved it

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:28 pm

        Thank You Niriha… thank you for loving this crap

    11. Amayaa on May 9, 2017 6:16 pm

      This part is not as good as de last one
      Nilash di
      Do labour hard my dr author
      last part itna accha tha na ki ye thora sa ekdum thora sa boring laga
      MERA FF h aur mai boss hu
      So I can tell u
      No problem at all na

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 8:00 pm

        Amayaa you are the Gul maataa of the ff and I am Harneet Singh of it so basically you have the right to order your writer.
        You are busy with your studies maybe so you did not get time to reply the pm I sent you it’s ok dear…
        Hey all the best for your studies but missing your long comments

      • Amayaa on May 10, 2017 9:28 pm

        Oooooo really ( in my bhaiya style )
        So my dr author
        I m so so so sorrrrryyyyy for not replying u ( deals apart )
        Heyyyyy Nilash di
        Now don’t copy me by putting deal apart
        Deal can certainly put aside only by me
        Boss hu extra power to milna chahiye na
        I saw ur message earlier only
        But I was waiting for today ‘s IB TU PAGE to come
        I have to answer u in a special way
        But u asked me so I m informing u
        Otherwise if my silence may kill u then from where can I got such an amazing writer ( kidding )
        Heyyyyyyyy I think my words hurt u somewhere in ur heart
        So just throw that thinking out of ur mind in same way by which we want Pinky ponky donkey out of OBEROI MANSION
        Y r u telling everyone that this part is not good
        This part is not so good for me it doesn’t mean this part is not good
        U know na how much pagal I m? ?????
        This is all de influence of last part which is memorable for me
        The answer of ur question will come on today’s ususl episode
        Okkkkkkkkk
        Nd ur second para is a little bit rude only a little bit
        In future I may not get de full time to comment regularly but then also I never try to neglect ur or any ishqies comments
        Aur abhi to meri study shuru bhi nahi hui hai
        Nd tell me one thing TRUTH
        DO U HURT BY MY ABOVE WORDS
        ND IF YESSSSSSS THEN AGAIN A BIGGGGGGG SORRRYYYYYYY
        ( deals again apart )
        Apni baby sister ko maafh kar do ???

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 10:27 pm

        Amayaa tu thappad khayegi mere haathon se… arrre GUL MAATAA kya bana diya tadi dikhaane lag gyi.. tu pagal hai kya mai and tere se gussa ho hi nhi sakti seriously and mai hurt bhi nhi thi but i also felt this part to be boring after the last part isiliye kaha seriously and mai kal se ib tu page nhi khol rhi and aaj ke episode ke baad to ab kholungi hi nhi
        Amayaa seriously mai koi hurt nhi hui thi.. ab agar kabhi aur sorry kaha na to pakka mujhe gussa aa jayega..
        yaar tu hi kuch help kar na ideas de kar.. Vishu ne bhi bahut zyada help kiya…
        chalo ab ye ulta pulta hurt wala chinta dimaag se hata aysa kuch tha hi nhi..
        you know na your nilash di loves you loads… so ab se seriously no sorry and tu mujhe order kar sakti hai as the best sister of mine and gul maataa of my no yours ff…
        chalo chotu sa motu sa smile kardo ab…

      • Vishakha on May 10, 2017 10:41 pm

        @nilu @amu tumhe nai lagta ki tmhari age k hisaab se tum dono kuch jyada hi senti baatein karte ho.. “ye bandhan toooo pyar ka bandhan haiiii..janmo kaaa sangam haiii (sob..sob) sorry aap logon ki baatein sun k mujhe ye song yaad aa gya.. relax karo yaar.. ek episode hi to hai.. and itna bura bhi nai tha.. in fact accha tha.. chalo dono jadu ki jhappi do and chotu motu sa nai ekdum khidkitod smile do..JALDI!!

      • Nilash on May 11, 2017 7:48 am

        Vishu aapko a biiiggg wala jaddu ki jhappi from me and a chotu sa motu sa nhi baru sa motu sa smile followed by little laughter.
        Amayaa tujhe bhi ek biiiiggg wali jaddu ki jhappi
        ok Vishu ab se no to any senti baatein… wayse maine and Amayaa ne senti baatein karne ki PhD kar rakhi hai so try karenge wo wali degree ko ignore karne kaa….
        LOVE YOU LOADS VISHU AND AMAYAA

    12. Akriti on May 9, 2017 6:37 pm

      just awesome nilash….
      agar mere bas ki baat hoti toh sach me Mai tumhe officially IB ka writer bana Deti yaar…..
      ekdam old IB ki yaad aa hai tum hata ye ff padh ke…..
      keep it up….
      and please remind me whenever your next ff is complete….

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:45 pm

        Thank You Akriti… may be you have not read the previous parts of the ff for this reason only you loved the episode but I am not suitable for that CVs title
        And I will surely send you the link whenever i post the next part

      • Akriti on May 10, 2017 9:24 pm

        no nilash dear i have read all the parts of this ff after reading this……
        but i had reply to only this part…..
        because its the new one and in old parts i have that doubt that you see my reply or not…..

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 10:34 pm

        it’s ok i can understand but this part i felt it to be really very boring so i asked that question.

    13. alekhika20 on May 9, 2017 8:24 pm

      Nice part

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:43 pm

        Thank You Alekhika

    14. gayathri.visu on May 9, 2017 8:56 pm

      Its just good ash. Shivika, Gaurikara scenes are nice but Rumya scene is ok. I don’t know dear but something is really missing in this part. Sorry ash if I hurt u. But this is not ur ff dear.

      By the way os name is A GROOM FOR ANNIKA. Sorry ash I don’t know how to share a link n what is pm? Please tell me dear……

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:57 pm

        Gayu thanks really I was waiting for your comment and ya you proved that you really a keen ff reader.
        Hey I sent you a message but maybe you overlooked it
        Pm means personal message that I sent you and about sharing a link it is when you open a particular ff a link comes over the search box you can check it for any ff you want
        And please do read the message and reply me back soon

      • gayathri.visu on May 11, 2017 3:25 pm

        Yes ash I saw it. First let me know u get my msg or not. Bcz now I using my phone. So I m not sure that u get my msg or not.

      • Nilash on May 11, 2017 4:50 pm

        no Gayu i did not get your msg… you are asking about this reply or the reply of the msg i sent you?

      • gayathri.visu on May 11, 2017 8:35 pm

        Reply of the msg which u sent to me. Ash can u plz tell me how can I sent pm by PHONE. My lappy is repair dear.

      • Nilash on May 11, 2017 9:41 pm

        Gayu at first chose the members name and then go to their page… you will see a msg icon click over it and type your msg… word limit is there and send it to the person

      • gayathri.visu on May 12, 2017 12:38 am

        I also do this only Ash. But don’t know what happened to this stupid phone. If I want my lap I will wait for 2 weeks. Then do one thing if u r in fb then pm me ur id n dp details.

    15. Banita on May 10, 2017 12:30 am

      Wow!!!!! Nilash ek dum khidkitode song hahaha……. Luv it….

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 7:43 pm

        Thank You Banita…. thank you loads for loving this crap

    16. Rasika on May 10, 2017 8:23 pm

      Nice, loved chulkara part ???

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 9:35 pm

        Thank you Rasika but really was it nice?? i was not satisfied after writing the part but you liked it thank you dear…

    17. Jerry_36 on May 10, 2017 8:52 pm

      Hey Nilash di !! To be honest I didn’t felt it boring. It is a wonderful episode and I really appreciate that.
      Don’t dare to say it was not good. Rumya were good, Shivika were on fire and Gauri bechari she is doing push ups.
      Enjoyed the episode through and through. And sorry for the late comment. Post soon❤

      • Nilash on May 10, 2017 9:30 pm

        Jerry in no mood to post soon dear i’m dealing with the next part now. thank you that you liked the part but really it was a bit boring and no one can deny it. thinking about some amazing dialogues so just wait for it dear

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