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Home»Fan Fiction»UNDENIABLE DESIRE – Part-20
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UNDENIABLE DESIRE – Part-20

Aastha_ReddyBy Aastha_ReddyApril 27, 201744 Comments7 Mins Read
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“Ouch!!!”-“Thudd!!”- Shivaay fell down from the bed by the scooter kick of his newly wedded wife.
“Thank god!!”- He prayed,”I didn’t order for any small bed”.
“Good morning Shivaay”- Annika twisted her arms like punching on his face,”wish me back”.
“Ha..han ..haan”- Shivaay sat on the floor,”Very good start of the morning for me..you gave a start to my body early”.
“Are you praising me?”- Annika also sat near him on the floor,”I know I am always good”.
“You don’t know any thing about a happy start of morning”- Shivaay pulled her close,”but you know about the happy ending of a night”.
Annika remembered the Raita she spread by asking for a kiss last night.
“Now”- Shivaay fanned her lips by his hot breath,”wish me in a proper way”.
“Dadi!!”- Annika screamed looking at the closed door ,”I am late for kitchen pooja”.
Shivaay looked at his back and the bird flew by this chance.
“Come out soon”- Shivaay knocked on the closed bath room door,”I am getting late”.
Annika came out the very next second,”I forget to take my clothes”.
“Finish soon yaar”- Shivaay get naughty,”I know better way of saving time by bathing together”.
“Aap…”- Annika shouted from inside,” Shameless Singh Oberoi”.
“Bhaiyya!!”- Rudra knocked the closed glass door,”Dadi is asking for bhabhi”.
“Yehi..what is wrong in this house”- Shivaay muttered under his breath,”every one need my wife’s attention”.
“Are you chanting mantra for some prayer”- Rudra left him in his poor condition
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“Dadi”- Annika smiled as soon as she came down the stair,”I am late”.
“Hota hey puttar hota hai””- Dadi show her patanjali tooth paste using shining teeth,”Billu is the reason for this late”.
“Arre Dadi”- Annika forget the situation of teasing environment of a house right after marriage,”you are correct..he is such a Tadibaaz”.
“Annika”- Shivaay came down to hear the conversation ,”To kitchen”.
“Dekha Dadi”- Annika complained,”Always shows tadi to me”.
“You are not less”- Shivaay fought back,”I am not saying any thing does means a lot of complain is there that I have to make a list for it”.
“Bhaiyya said kitchen”- Rudra teased,”not bed room”.
“You too come to kitchen Rudra”- Shivaay ordered,”I don’t think Annika know to make breakfast”.
“Bade bhaiyya”- Gouri came with a flower basket in her hand,”We should pray God for this happiness today..for our family togetherness”.
Jhanvi smiled at Tej who reciprocated the same with an extra honey.
“Chulbul was a disaster to my morning sleep everyday”- Om felt relaxed,”now every one have to bear her morning prayer and sound of bell with that incense stick”.
“Hey Shankarji..”- Gouri closed her eyes after putting flowers at the feet of Lord Shiva,”keep my Jatadhari hippi always happy like this”.
“Gouri come here”- Dadi hold one hand of Gouri amd dragged her near her husband,”Om..put the vermilion on her hair”.
“No one saw your marriage “- Jhanvi filled the needed information,”Its your right as his wife”.
“Gouri come here”- Om took her back to the idol,”Meri bulbul”.
She felt his finger on her head ..slightly on her forehead drawing a red line.
Gouri closed her eyes as tears make the moment memorable for her. OmRi took blessing from the elders.
“I too want to perform this ritual”- Shivaay also dragged Annika near Omkara and Gouri.”I am want to do it”.
“Shakti..Tej “- Dadi asked,”do you both want it too”.
“I am better in my position”- Shakti sulked his own saliva,”my eyes are opened after 30 years of marriage”.
“I too want to do the same”- Tej came forward,”Children close your eyes”.
“Kya baat hai Sumo”- Rudra felt happy like Omkara,”Amrish Puri in Romantic mood”.
“Prasadam”- Gouri distributed the sugary white balls among all.
“Bhabhi more”- Soumya ate more of it. Rudra and Saahil were left speechless,”I want to eat this with Aloo ke parathe”.
Dadi along with her both son and Daughter- in-law in the living room as the youngster went to kitchen.
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Rudra brought three extra apron from a closet and gave to his both bhabhi. Shivaay took a stool and made Saahil sit on it.
“Soumya may need my help Shivaay bhaiyya”- the little devil flirted,”I want to assist her”.
“Manner Saahil”- Soumya taught,”call me Soumya Didi like you call Annika didi”.
Saahil looked sad. His mehnat went in vain. His Soumya asked him to call her as Didi.
“Gouri didi “- Saahil went near the left girl,”I want to help you all”.
“Saahil..you sit”- Gouri smiled as she gave some green peas,”peal the seeds here”.
“Labzon ka yeh rishta nahi..lamhon ka yeh rishta nahi..Saadiyon ka hai yeh vaasta ..hai rooh ka raasta”- Rudra chirped on his harsh voice.
“Shut up Rudr..”- All wanted to shout in unison but no one did.
“Annika look, stay away from my chilli cheese toast”- Shivaay wanted to protect both his dish and his wife,” I will make it my self,green chilies are dangerous for beautiful girls “.
“I will make Aloo puri for you”-Shivaay offered,”just be safe”.
“Didi ,He too “..Gouri joined Annika with the sitting club,”Soumya come and join us”.
“Bhabhi let her do her work”- Rudra objected,”her small dose of exercise before eating that oily food”.
“Bhaiyya “- Rudra hold the packet of Oil and a scissor,”help me in opening this packet”.
Shivaay hold the packet and Rudra tried to open it with the scissor. The packet slipped form his hand and a little amount of blood come out from his finger.
“Shivaay lagi aapko”- Annika sucked the blood from his finger,” is it paining a lot”.
“Annika stop it”- Shivaay take his finger back to hide behind his back,”Some mich michi is happening”.
“Whats this language”- Rudra and Om replied instantly.
“I don’t want to eat aloo paratha today “-Sumo declared after watching a hurt Shivaay,”lets go and have breakfast soon..bahut bhook lagi hai”.
“Ya..lets go”- Om asked Manish to bring the cooked dishes to dinning table,”I am also hungry”.
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“So…sweet and delicious smell”- Pinky smelled the dishes.
“Gouri and Annika bhabhi”- Om paused,”didn’t make it..we all did it”.
“Joru ka gulab”- Rudra put wrong words.
“Shut up Rudra”- Om hit on his back of head,”Its Gulaam not gulab”.
“Khotiyya…all are khotiyya”- Saahil sat on the chair near to Tej,”Dadi will say this now”.
The breakfast was a noisy affair with a lots of smile,teasing and roar…
“This is for you”- Pinky handed over a box of jewellery to her daughter-in-law.
“Gouri”- Jhanvi gave another box to her Daughter in law.
“This happiness on the face of Om is more precious then any gems”- Three persons said at a single time and looked at each other. Jhanvi,Gouri and Tej.
“I misunderstood an innocent girl in Bareilly”- Om sighed,”It was my mistake to leave you after marriage. Thank God you don’t have a brother to bash me”.
“I left you then and was angry on papa for a long years to torture mom and his words of leaving mom hurt me to a unrepaired damage..”- Om looked the tear filled eyes of Gouri,”How can I do the same injustice with another girl which I don’t want to see on my mom”.
“Jhanvi Thakur is weak to commit suicide”- He continued,”but Jhanvi Singh Oberoi is strong to fight against the third women in her life”.
“She blamed only you and not her swine husband Kaali who is at fault all the time”- Om went on with his philosophy,”You are very nice and innocent and did your duty as a wife even as a disguised Chulbul for me”.
“Ishq pe hua yakeen Ishq ho jaane ke baad”- Saahil remembered the lines of Om bhaiyya.
Tej whistled. all his bad deeds in past gave him very unexpected and sweet result.

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    44 Comments

    1. Setu on April 28, 2017 12:13 am

      nice

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:18 pm

        Thnx. Setu

    2. Nithu on April 28, 2017 12:39 am

      awsm paapa….

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:20 pm

        Hein!!Akka ko paapa bola tumne..lolz ha ha…ha.

    3. Sofiya. S. on April 28, 2017 12:49 am

      That was really a cute Dil Bole Oberoi moment ???… Loved today’s episode. Post soon ? ??….

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:45 pm

        Sofiya… Thank you dear. I will try soon.

    4. Banita on April 28, 2017 2:33 am

      As always SUPERHITE KHIDKITODE epi…… Shivaay fell down from bed..,hahaha……. I luv this sence in ib also…Poor boy sahil’s heart break when soumya told him to call di….. Shivom become joru ka gulab…. hahaha…… Ur ff always make a smile on my face di… Thank u sooo much 4 this….. Luv u…..

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:48 pm

        I want to paste that khidkitod smile on your face forever Banita.
        Love you too….

    5. Fffan1234 on April 28, 2017 8:01 am

      Super awesome

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:49 pm

        Thnx. Fffan.. ya I know they are awesome couple lolz…

    6. navz on April 28, 2017 8:56 am

      Yeah!!!!omri mu cleared.hurray all d 3 pairs on romantic track now..???
      Well written aastha….loved it

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:51 pm

        Navya.. the way Om cleared MU ..kaash DBO mein aisa kuch hota ..We would have loved the show more… Thnx. Navya.

    7. Bhavana on April 28, 2017 8:59 am

      Astha didi!! Fantabulous epi!!
      Loved it to the core!!

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:53 pm

        Thnx. Bhavana dear.

    8. Arpita on April 28, 2017 9:57 am

      Asthababy only you can do this romance in a funny way ????
      Loved this part.

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:55 pm

        Thnx. Darling.

    9. Niriha on April 28, 2017 10:30 am

      Awesome part..waiting for next

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:57 pm

        Thnx. Prabhas Raju ha ha.. I mean Niriha…loved that Darling in your dp.

    10. Arthi on April 28, 2017 10:49 am

      Superb dr as always and wow………….

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 12:59 pm

        Thank you Arthi dear…

    11. Shivika on April 28, 2017 11:53 am

      Awesome….Loved it…
      Obros with their ladies in d kitchen…
      All d couples in romantic mood…. 😉
      waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 2:11 pm

        Thnx Shivika..

    12. alekhika20 on April 28, 2017 12:33 pm

      Nyc

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 2:13 pm

        Thank you dear.

    13. nikita_jai29 on April 28, 2017 12:45 pm

      It is awesome astha dii… I am your little sissy nikku.. Wants your help in setting DP please help me…. And continue your update….I am waiting for next laughing therapy….

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 2:19 pm

        Hi Nikku.. congrats for your registration…and I will continue also.
        1. Click on your blank dp.
        2. select the option.
        3. it will lead to more option like camera, Gallery..
        4. select image from your mobile.
        5.wait a second to upload it.
        6. done…
        Try soon and haan ek khidkitod dp lagao… all the best.

    14. Tanz on April 28, 2017 12:58 pm

      Wow Di amazing…..What a start with a scooter kick….hehehe……I really love this version of the whole Oberoi Family .As you say,One for all and all for one.

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 2:20 pm

        Tanz… DIL BOLE ISHQBAAZ…

    15. zaveesha on April 28, 2017 1:07 pm

      Awesome nd wonderful

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 2:22 pm

        Thnx. Zaveesha..

    16. Amayaa on April 28, 2017 1:21 pm

      Awwwwwwww
      What a dining moment Aastha di …………..priceless moment. …………..u know what mere ff ka next part bhi dining moment pe hi base hai jiske baare Maine ab tak socha bhi nahi h …………….ab to lagta hai soch bhi nahi sakti …………….itna awesome update …………..marjawa ……….. I enjoyed very much. ……………???

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 2:25 pm

        Ammu.. think baby sis think.. I left some part of fun as I am in a hurry to end it soon…I am rushing things and incident.. kuch toh choot jaata hai har kisise.. tum uss point ko apna strength banao.. all the very best for your next part of Oberoi family moments….

    17. liba on April 28, 2017 2:15 pm

      ff chadivinanta sepu naku ayitae gulab jamun tintu natlu undi chala sweet ga cool ga pleasant ga ala ala sagi pothu undi bedroom nd bathroom scene ayitae keka… Ib , dbo epudu club chestaro teliyadu kani all pairs r mind blowing here bt prinku ko kyu choda yaar. I like ur style of writing. Seriously d people u luv r so lucky to have u in their lives. God plz plz plz bless my pyari sae gudiya rani astha baby ko god dnt forget to bless her.

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 2:29 pm

        Liba.. if the people Astha loves are lucky then congratulation.. you are in this list…
        I didn’t forget Prinku.. Wait for that another funny moment is there…

    18. VHM on April 28, 2017 3:36 pm

      This was hilarious mind-blowing fabulous , fantastic……in short i am going gaga over this FF…..i mean i donnno what else to say…waiting for the next shot

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 4:48 pm

        Thank you Haarika .

    19. maggi on April 28, 2017 4:15 pm

      hello astha di ,I’m new here
      even i commented in ib 27 april tu page
      as usual ur ff is khidkithod
      ur an all rounder
      perfect analyser ,writer and some of ur chemistry related analysis is mindblowig

      • Astha_Reddy on April 28, 2017 6:08 pm

        Thanks Maggi..For this two minutes..kidding yaar..Welcome to PKJ the loving family of Ishquise…

      • maggi on April 28, 2017 11:14 pm

        thanks for inviting di

    20. Anu on April 29, 2017 3:27 am

      Aasthu.. all 3 with pairs cooking in kitchen.. wow how I wish I cud actually see this.. tha just reading!
      Such a happy sweet family.. sach lafzon ka ye rishtha nahi moment!!
      Dil bole oberois!!

      • Astha_Reddy on April 29, 2017 6:14 am

        Thank you Anu darling..Our wish of obrowife moment in kitchen is not granted in IB ..you have to adjust with my ff for now.

    21. Jerry_36 on April 29, 2017 9:27 pm

      Astha di its super awesome !! Anika kick? Loved it as always. Do post soon. And yaa your Dp is really marvellous❤

      • Astha_Reddy on April 29, 2017 11:30 pm

        Thnx. Jerry dear..
        dp dekhkar michmichi ho rahi hai kya( wink)!!!

      • Jerry_36 on May 10, 2017 11:17 pm

        Nooo, he is really handsome and this is the one of the best picture of him?

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