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Home»Fan Fiction»Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff) By Akshada (Part-5)
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Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff) By Akshada (Part-5)

V.V.harshitaBy V.V.harshitaApril 25, 201712 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey Guys as i promised ..here is the nxt one …so lets Start
***********
Sona’s pov
I called him in….and He followed me…..i pressed the calling bell……
Inside ..
Asha:Shakti …dekh na kho aya hai…(See Who has cm )
Shakti:haan maa (Ya mom)
He opens the door but the Thing was Mr.Dev was bak of me so He did nt see him…
He suddenly hugged and left i Don’t knw Why was He so happy
Shakti: sona mein tumse ek …(sona i wanted to)

And then He saw Dev behind and got shocked…
Shakti: sona….
Me: aayiye na…(cm in)
I told Mr.Dev
He followed me and when He cam Inside asha got shocked
Dev:namaste aunty….
Asha:na….n…namaste…

Shakti: betiye…(Take ä seat plzs )
And Mr.Dev sat on aur Couch …
Me:asha bejoy kaha hai…(asha where is bejoy )
Asha: vo….bahar gaye hai…(He went Out )
Me:aacha asha usse chai toh dena…
Asha:haan…

She went Inside the kitchen ……
Shakti cam near me…i mean i sat beside Mr.Dev…..
Suddenly Shakti pinched me…
Me:ouch !!!
Dev:kya hua …???(Wht happened ???)
Me:ku kuch nahi….(nothing)
I Started mummering to shakti

Me:Agh!!! Why did u pinch me…
Shakti:tumne pheli hi kyu nahi bataya ki He is cming (Why did’nt u tell be before tht He is cming)
Me:arrey mujhe kya pata ki Mr.Dev mujhe chodne wali hai…(hw Do i knw tht He is gona Drop me home)….
Shakti:Hmm….waise bhi mein yeh keheraha tha ki…i got tickets fr Noor …(Ya actually u was telling tht i got Tickets fr Noor )
Seriously !!!

Me:Agh!! Tumi ekdum Bokha yaar….seriously !!
Noor …i am gona kill u…(u r such an Idiot)
Shakti:kyu Movie nahi dekh na hai…(Don’t u Want to See Movie)
Me: arrey aisa nahi hai…tht i don’t Want to See Movie…Its like can’t u get Tickets fr ä Nice Movie…..
Shakti:mujhe pata hai ki tum kiska Movie dekhna chahti ho…(i knw whose movie u wanted to see)
He saw Mr.Dev and told this…Omg !!!
And i knw tht frm the time i sat on the Sofa He was looking at me….
Shakti: sona….maine jhoot kaha…vo actually i got Tickets fr the Movie “SOCHO” (Guys i did nt knw Wht to write……so Wht ever i got i jst gave the Name)
Me: really ???!!!!!

I really got excited ..
Me:Wht time which Date ???????
Shakti: kal 6:30…..(tmrw 6:30)
Tmrw….ahh!!
Me: kal (tmrw!!!)aaj kyu nahi (Why nt today)
Shakti:aaj ?? Arrey Bokha pata hai time kya hai (today??? Hey Idiot Do u knw Wht the time is)
Me:haan mujhe pata hai…(Ya i knw)
Shakti:toh kyu pooch rahiho idiomatic sawaal ??
(Then Why Do u ask such stupid questions)
Me:kk baba …leave tht…

Asha cam and gave coffee to Mr.Dev me and Shakti we all drank …he did nt even open his mouth except to drink …aftr he finished he got up
Dev:so….bohot derr hoyaye hai…bye…
Me:Bye Mr.Dev…

Shakti (mummered):Hey tum toh usse bhaiya bula sakti ho na.. sona ….(Hey u can Call him brother knw)
Me:kya bahi….r u in Ur Sense …jst Shut up (Wht bro r u in ur sense )
Aur mein kyu usse bhaiya bula u …(and why shuld call him bhai ???)
Shakti:kyuki Hana ka bhai hai toh tumari bhi hai na (if he is Hana’s bahi then ur’s too rite)
Me:knw wrong nw jst shut up…
Mr.Dev bid Bye to us and went home..
********

Thts it fr today guys srry if it too small …coz fr reading it jst takes 2 to 3 mins but fr writing it atleast takes 30mins and more…..
Bye frm Akshada and Harshita

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    12 Comments

    1. Princess. on April 25, 2017 8:24 pm

      Awesome

      • V.V.harshita on April 25, 2017 9:46 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon ??????

    2. Richa144 on April 25, 2017 8:32 pm

      Nice one post soon

      • V.V.harshita on April 25, 2017 9:47 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon ??????

    3. Riti1107 on April 25, 2017 10:30 pm

      Chota packet Big Dhamaka
      Ittu sa update tha but accha tha
      Post soon

      • V.V.harshita on April 26, 2017 12:32 pm

        Thnxs ???

    4. aamu on April 26, 2017 10:17 pm

      Chotu tha lekin sweet tha…
      Dhamaka …
      I loved it..
      N dear sorry for not cmntng on previous sm epi..
      I had read…
      Pls open my acc..on my wall i jad posted all cmnts…n d reason also..
      Read all ur epis cmnt out there….
      Sorry for disturbance?
      Anyways u r going superb

      • V.V.harshita on April 28, 2017 4:30 pm

        Ya i can Unterstand and vil Post soon ??

    5. darshana on April 27, 2017 7:58 pm

      Really sorry for the late comment..i guess u know the reason…
      it was a short update but awesome????…and funny too???..
      post soon and if possible a little longer one

      • V.V.harshita on April 28, 2017 4:31 pm

        Ya vil Post soon ???

    6. priya12 on April 28, 2017 12:49 pm

      Akshada,
      It was fab…superbb…
      Really it was so nice..
      Luved it..
      Post asap
      Sryb4 late cmt

      • V.V.harshita on April 28, 2017 4:32 pm

        Ya vil Post soon ????

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