Hlo wonderful people there…Firstly I m new here…I don’t know anything about my writing..I m writing this because I feel so.There may be,no no not maybe there will be many mistakes..Strange impression to give at first na??..This story is not something brand new..It will be the story you heard or you read around..These are like a combination of stories that strikes me with my imagination??…Thanks to SALLY??to ur encouragement and all helps..n I m a silent reader here.I really adore Bela,Ria,Azure,Megha and some awesome writers here????
He is back…
LAKSHYA is back…oops yaa I know ,LUCKY.After a long time…What ? C’mon RAGINI it’s just 3 months.Still…This is what happening after I realized my CRUSH on him,talking to myself..The thought to face him makes my heart beats faster..I put my hand to my chest to calm myself down.The same feeling of nervousness when I feel around him..
I know he is inside my house now,having “boy time”with my brother…I can’t help but keep wondering when everything flip down.Sanskar my brother…Perfect man to be a “BROTHER”.He makes me feel I have three parents not two…..He and Lucky was friend since school days..Lucky was the BOY who gave me my favorite chocolates,he was the BOY who helps me to trick Sanskar for parties…and now he is the MAN who makes my heart skip a bit..He is the reason of my recent frequent visits in La La Land..When these feelings arises, even after knowing that he didn’t reciprocate.Infact he doesn’t give a damn..He treats me as a little baby sister na?…arghhhhhhh
“So,did you have a nice time?” I sigh as a voice interrupted my thoughts..Here I am,sitting on the car with Rohan infront of my house..I don’t want to face Lucky now.So it’s better to be out somewhere..Rohan has been constantly asking me on a date..I agreed today so that I can “skip Lucky”…..Stupid girl..He is not meal so that you can skip it.Now I m irritated,with Rohan’s boyfriend tone.
“Yes,it was nice”.I faked a smile as I said.He smiled at me and suddenly I feel guilty to use him.But what to do…My straight thinking capacity had gone 2 years ago when I started feeling for Lucky.
“I really like you Ragini”he leans close to me..I heard some noise and tilt my head to the opposite side..A shadow..what? I turned to face Rohan,but immediately his lips sealed mine..WHAT THE HELL??? I didn’t see that coming…Oh god!!!Reality strikes me and I tried to push him…Arghh that 6 pack abs are not a jock!!he is strong he doesn’t budge..His lips are torturing.I don’t want this…I hit him with my elbow…I heard the car’s door clicks open and suddenly Rohan’s weight is not on me…I put hands on my chest and look straight…My eyes widened….
THERE HE IS..HOLDING ROHAN BY HIS COLLAR..LAKSHYA………
51 Comments
Awesome!!
Loved it!!
Post soon!!
Thank you dear??..yaa I ll try to post soon??
Amazing….dear
Thank you so much???
Awesome dear friend i loved it
Thank u berdilla..by the way your name is cute??
Thank you dear friend
Awesome
Thank you ??
Amazing dear..!! Omg..poor ragu..!!! May be that someone is lucky
Thank you Mintu…who else????
I love it
Thanks yaar???
Hey that was awesome
Thank you folly…????
Awesome
Thank you ??
Awesome
Thanks sindhura…I was a silent reader of your ffs…Now I ll make sure I m not silent???
That’s great to hear from you that you will comment on my osts
Amazing interesting keep going
Thanks dear??
OMG ? did you just mention my name nazu. I’m like speechless. And I have always told you you are a wonderful thinker and now I can see you are so damn good writer too. So many people will agree to this. And keep your thanks with you ? love you sissy ?????
Sally???….Thanks is a small word,yaa took it back…..I m so happy that you liked it?????
awesome episode naz di
that rohan he is so chipku i hope lucky will teach him a good lesson
waiting for the next part
Hehe that’s true Iqra??..thank you
Amazing yaar
Thank you???
Awesome episode and feeling bad for Ragini. Eagerly waiting for next episode
Thank you so much Ammu??
awesome
Thanks yaar???
Nice concept
and i was searching one ff of raglak in which after kavlak merrage ragini went somewhar and become owner of hotels of one old man who saves after that all calls her baby and kavlak comes to celebrate their anniversery in that hotel after that with the help of ragini’s frnd ragini saw real face of kavya to all please any one help me to remamber that ff pleaseeeee
Thank you???..yaa I read it but can’t remember the name??
Awesome naz..r u the same man who comments in my ff
Thank you shri…yaa that same naz…coming tu world a bit late…n yaa I m a super girl yaar? not ‘man’????
I Know naz it was the mistake of auto spell check
Same naz
I think I have read this in wattpad in the title ‘heartbreaker’ sry if I hurt but I have read this
Yaa Kristen somewhat…I told na the plot is not new…but I make it’s different…I took only the starting phase…I m not planning to continue as that story..???
N I can’t help but do something like this on raglak???
Eekkksssssss This was too awesome!
You described the emotions of Ragini brilliantly, I feel the same whenever HE is around?
And yes, I am waiting to know how Lucky deals with this pest Rohan.
Brilliantly done, and even if the story isn’t something new, I have full faith on you that you would twist it to become your original one?
And thanks a ton for mentioning my name in your favourites first, I am really honoured ?
I m honoured….yaa I ll try????
Awesome
Thank you ??
Omggg superbbb dear?? loving dis storyyyy…rags is soooooo fab. n woho laksh??? N d way u have written dat laksh is not a meal to skip? hahahah awesome???? waitng eagerlyyy for nxt part????? keep rockng n stay blessed sweetheart??
Thank you so much fairy ???
Nice
awesome dear…
Awesome…
fba xx