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Home»Fan Fiction»Ishqbaaz – Shivaay and Mahi (One shot)
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Ishqbaaz – Shivaay and Mahi (One shot)

Nita DBy Nita DApril 19, 2017Updated:April 19, 201740 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey all….how are u guys….
I just thought to end the character of Mahi with a positive note and so, this is the first time I am posting something. Please tell me your reviews for this.
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After Shivaay had fallen unconscious during the fight with the goons, Mahi comes and saves him and takes him to the hospital.

After some time when Shivaay is resting in his room, he heard someone approaching.

Shivaay’s POV – Hey isn’t that Mahi coming in? Is he here to take my place again? I should just act as if I m asleep and should know what is his plan.

Mahi comes and caresses Shivaay’s hair and starts speaking, “Shivaay, u must be wondering that why I saved u from those goons and brought u here as this was the best opportunity for me to take your place. But trust me Shivaay, I never wanted to hurt you. When I came to know that ma had sent some men to kill u, it was very late. But I had realized my mistake and did all that was possible for me to save you.
Till now I had been living in a web of lies. People always called me an illegitimate child. With whatever little time that I spent with your family, I understood the real meaning of what a family is. They have given me lot of love Shivaay, because all of them love you so much. You are the strength of the Oberoi family. If anything happens to you, the entire family will shatter and I cannot let such a loving family shatter like this.
After everything that I have done, I know that sorry is a very small word but still, I ask forgiveness from you and your entire family.
Also please ask Anikaji to forgive me. I insulted her, fought with her so that she stays away from me. I am bad but not so bad that I’ll put my eyes on someone else’s wife. I just look like you, but I will never be able to become like you Shivaay. Now, I will go very far from here and start my life afresh. I will never come in between you and your family ever again. Shivaay, I ……..”

Both Shivaay and Mahi heard someone entering Shivaay’s room. Mahi quickly hid behind the door and as soon as that person entered, Mahi quickly left the room and their lives forever….!!

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So guys this is it from my side. Please tell me your reviews on this.
N I’ll not be coming on TU for a while now as I have my college exams and my professional course exams back to back. As much as difficult it is for me to stay away from here, but that’s the only choice I have. But I will definitely catch up with all the FFs and stories I am following once I am back.
Bye till then…..
Love you all….

-Nita??

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Nita D

    Main thodi si moody hoon , Tu thodi si tedhi hai, Kya khoob ye jodi hai, Teri meri! Love u Zindagi!!

    40 Comments

    1. Setu on April 19, 2017 7:40 pm

      Nice

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:43 pm

        Thanks dear ??

    2. gayathri.visu on April 19, 2017 7:43 pm

      Wow! Nita its emotional ending….. Beautiful and very good! All the best for ur exams Nita.

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:45 pm

        Thank u so much dear?? Means a lot….

    3. Kripa on April 19, 2017 8:08 pm

      Emotional dear

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:45 pm

        Thanks Kripa??

    4. shabnam on April 19, 2017 8:10 pm

      Amazing continue story

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:47 pm

        Thanks for commenting Shabnam. Sorry dear this was just a one shot.

    5. alekhika20 on April 19, 2017 8:31 pm

      nyc

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:47 pm

        Thanks. N thx for commenting?

    6. Lilly on April 19, 2017 8:44 pm

      Superb…..

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:48 pm

        Thanks Lilly. ??

    7. anri on April 19, 2017 8:48 pm

      Nice update

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:48 pm

        Thanks u so much dear??

    8. VHM on April 19, 2017 8:56 pm

      Awee such a nice one Nita…exactly what we expect CV’s to show us in serial…you write so good …come back soon with other khidkitodh os or ff…all the best for your exams

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:51 pm

        Thank u so much di….your comment means a lot….??Oh God u expect that in show….that’s too big a praise….
        Another ff, for sure if u give me one of your khidkitodh ideas…..??

      • VHM on April 21, 2017 1:20 am

        i wish to read an FF from your own imagination from the current track …what will happen after Pinky separates Anika and Shivaay

      • Nita D on April 21, 2017 9:32 am

        Let’s see di….anyway thx for the idea…

    9. nikitajai on April 19, 2017 9:10 pm

      It is awesome dear….

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 9:51 pm

        Thank u so much dear n thx for commenting….!?

    10. Arthi on April 19, 2017 9:47 pm

      Good dr awesome

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 11:03 pm

        Thank u so much??

    11. Samm on April 19, 2017 9:55 pm

      such a nice way to wrap up the story right here in the show! with colourful paper, pretty pink bows and a lot of love for both my fav characters 🙂

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 11:04 pm

        Thank u so much for such a sweet comment dear ??

    12. Jerry_36 on April 19, 2017 9:58 pm

      Hey Nita !! You also write I never know and this amazing !! Loved it. I also really wanted this to happed in CVS. Hope it comes true. Mahi’s part was so emotional, overall its superb di !! Best of luck for your exams and courses☺

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 11:15 pm

        Thanks so much Jerry….writing is a part and parcel of what u read n such a voracious reader I m, I guess that is were it comes from….well some day I’ll may match up you all wonderful writers….
        N thank for your wishes as well??

        PS- I know voracious is the one who devours food but the same is with books n articles in my case??

    13. Ahaana on April 19, 2017 10:05 pm

      Amazing

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 11:04 pm

        Thanks Ahaana??

    14. Bhavana on April 19, 2017 10:53 pm

      Wow! Awesome one..
      Loved it!!…so simple yet amazing…
      Nd all the best for ur exams..

      • Nita D on April 19, 2017 11:38 pm

        Thank u so much Bhavna….??

    15. Manasvi on April 19, 2017 11:38 pm

      Hey dii!!
      Juz read it now!!
      It will be really amazing if something like this happens!!

      • Nita D on April 20, 2017 7:31 am

        Ya manasvi, but it seems that the writers have something else in store for us….
        Thanks for commenting!

    16. Ankita on April 20, 2017 12:01 am

      Awesome

      • Nita D on April 20, 2017 7:31 am

        Thanks Ankita?

    17. shuklarashi on April 20, 2017 9:53 am

      Awesome

      • Nita D on April 20, 2017 11:17 am

        Thanks?

    18. AHSANA on April 20, 2017 1:48 pm

      It’s was an awesome shot ????

      • Nita D on April 20, 2017 3:41 pm

        Thank u??

    19. Neha-17 on April 21, 2017 1:50 am

      I like d the way you portrayed the ending…..it reflected sweet and caring heart of Mahi….Superb work! I loved both Mahi and Shivaay…Write soon when you are free again. Love ya ??

      • Nita D on April 21, 2017 9:31 am

        Thanks dear?? luv ya more??

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