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Home»Fan Fiction»A SwaSan SS: Innocent Souls by Manasvi (Part 2)
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A SwaSan SS: Innocent Souls by Manasvi (Part 2)

MABy MAApril 19, 2017Updated:July 31, 201754 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hello frnds!!
How r u all??
So I’m back with the second part of Innocent Souls..
**Note:- Swara & Sanskar are in 10th std.. Swara is one year younger than Sanskar..**
Recap: Swasan family intro and background.. Both SwaSan leave for their School..
Sanskar entered in the school campus and met his best friend I.e. Arjun.. He hugged him tightly..

After that they both were going towards the stairs when suddenly a car came and Swara with Shekhar came out… Seeing her, Sanskar was lost..
Arjun to Sanskar: Sanky, come on.. We are running late bro..
Sanskar: (coming out from his dreamland) Yeah.. Come on bro.. Why are you wasting my time?? I’m running late!!

Arjun gave you-are-unbelievable look to Sanskar.. Later they both went in the class..
Sanskar was sitting in the third bench.. Whereas Arjun was sitting behind him in the fourth bench talking with Uttara..

At that time, Swara entered the class.. Sanskar was watching her (no..no..actually staring her!!?) and Swara stood in front of him..
Swara: Excuse me!!
Sanskar: …

Swara: EXCUSE ME
Sanskar:…
At last Arjun smacks on Sanskar’s head from behind.. (Poor Sanskar!!?) and Sanskar comes to his classroom back!!
Swara: Ohh hello.. Can’t you hear.. I’m calling from the last five minutes??
Sanskar: ??Yeah!! Say.. Wh..whhat hap..happened?? (he was stammering because of embarrassment..)
Swara: (in a cold tone) Can you tell me who is Sanskar Maheshwari here?? Principal ma’am is calling him..
Sanskar: ?? You came at the correct place dear.. I’m Sanskar Maheshwari only..
Swara: (rolls her eyes) is it?? You already wasted your five minutes here!! I guess you should run now!!

Sanskar nods and goes from there..
Swara scans the whole classroom.. But doesn’t finds any vacant seat except for Sanskar’s..
She rolls her eyes over and then keeps her bag beside Sanskar’s bag and sits there.. (All credit to me.. It was my plan ?)
Just then, the teacher arrives in the class.. Sanskar also arrives just after her.. He goes towards his bench, sees Swara sitting beside his place and gets confused yet happy..
He smiles at her and sits..
Teacher: So, as it is the start of your new academic year, I will like to take a small intro from everyone.. (Actually there were many new students, so it is necessary for everyone to know each other’s name and befriend each other)
Thus, every student was giving their intro..
Soon, Swara’s turn came..
She stood up and said, “I’m Swara, Swara Somani..”
Sanskar: (monologue) Swara.. Nice name..

Like this, lectures passed.. Soon, it was break..
Swara: (monologue) uff.. At last finished with these lectures.. Damn hungry.. Come on Shona.. Let’s go to canteen and have food otherwise my stomach will be no more? But where is canteen?? Uff..
Sanskar: (monologue) ughhh.. M feeling too hungry.. Chal Sanskar beta.. Kuchh khaa lete hai.. (Come on.. Let’s eat something..)
Swara: (monologue continue) with whom should I ask?? What to do!! M too hungry!!?
At that Sanskar saw her biting her nails.. He went towards her and said, “Do you need something, Swara??”
Swara: (in her mind after seeing Sanskar) yeah.. I should ask him only..

Swara to Sanskar: Yeah.. Can you show me the way to canteen??
Sanskar: (smiles genuinely) Great!! Even I’m going to the canteen.. I can give you a company!!
Swara: (gives a tight smile or you can say a too fake smile) If possible just show me the way.. I will be really thankful towards you..
Sanskar understands what Swara is trying to say and shows her the way to canteen..
Swara muttered a quick thank you (audible to Sanskar) and also a sorry in a really low voice (not enough for Sanskar to hear) and goes from there..
Sanskar muttered: How rude!!
Sorry for this short update!!

But my exams ended today only.. And I was seriously not in a mood to write anything.. So please ignore any typos or grammatical errors!!
I’m eagerly waiting for your reviews!!

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54 Comments

  1. rabia on April 19, 2017 5:21 am

    Ayyan’s mana it was awesome andd no problem i knoww after exams no one wants to write anything soo take your time ???

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:34 pm

      Even I m searching for a bf for you. 😛 😉
      And thnk you dii..
      Love you ???

    • rabia on April 19, 2017 12:36 pm

      Mana dekho i gave u cutest bf ever soo for mee it should be also cute and sweet okay ??? hehehehe

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 2:01 pm

      Don’t worry Rabu dii.. 😉
      He is going to be world’s no. 1 hitler..

    • rabia on April 19, 2017 2:52 pm

      huhh stamping ayyan’s gf foot ?

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 6:22 pm

      Ayyan is stamping your foot!!!
      *possessive bf*?

  2. Febi on April 19, 2017 6:42 am

    Nice dear

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:50 pm

      thnks dear.. 🙂

  3. kat on April 19, 2017 8:12 am

    awesome dear

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:50 pm

      Thnks kat 🙂

  4. Soujanya on April 19, 2017 8:23 am

    Nice

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:52 pm

      Thnks Soujanya.. 🙂

  5. anu on April 19, 2017 10:49 am

    nice update soon

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:53 pm

      Thnks anu dear.. 🙂

  6. Vanisha on April 19, 2017 10:56 am

    Awesome

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:53 pm

      Thnks Vanisha dii.. 🙂

  7. ritu on April 19, 2017 11:12 am

    just loving this cute story…

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:53 pm

      Thnks ritu.. 🙂

  8. Aarushi_99 on April 19, 2017 11:30 am

    It was amazing!!
    I know how it feels when the exams are over so it’s ok?
    Anyways, loved the chapter!
    Update soon, take care!!

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:54 pm

      Thnks Aarushi dii.. 🙂

  9. Anu Rathore on April 19, 2017 11:37 am

    Awesome

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:54 pm

      Thnks dear.. 🙂

  10. vyshu10 on April 19, 2017 11:48 am

    nice

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:55 pm

      Thnk u dii.. 🙂 ???

  11. Seebu_s on April 19, 2017 12:34 pm

    awesome…so cute…waiting for next☺

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 2:02 pm

      Thnks dii.. :-*

  12. a on April 19, 2017 1:12 pm

    Nice

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 1:58 pm

      Thnks dear.. 🙂

  13. Alku on April 19, 2017 2:06 pm

    Aww mana superb?

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 6:23 pm

      Thnks alku dii???

  14. Mickey on April 19, 2017 2:59 pm

    Hey manu my sweetie…it was awesome.. And super fantastic just like you????????
    Enjoy your vacations dear…?
    Love you…???
    Take care…stay blessed…????

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 6:24 pm

      Thnk u DII!!?
      Love you too?

  15. veena on April 19, 2017 3:38 pm

    awesome…

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 6:25 pm

      Thanks dear..☺

  16. scooby on April 19, 2017 4:33 pm

    Superb ?? sanskar fell at first sight?

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 6:26 pm

      Thnk u dii?

  17. Arshaanya on April 19, 2017 5:30 pm

    Nyc

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 6:27 pm

      Thnks Arshaa dii?

  18. Stg on April 19, 2017 6:57 pm

    awesome ☺

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 9:39 pm

      Thnks dear..☺

  19. Shiksha on April 19, 2017 8:15 pm

    Cute..

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 9:40 pm

      Thnks dii..?

  20. Pramudi on April 19, 2017 8:36 pm

    Nice.. ? waiting for the nxt part.

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 9:48 pm

      Thnks dii..?

  21. gayathri.visu on April 19, 2017 8:59 pm

    Aww! Soo cute…

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 9:49 pm

      Thnks dii.. ?

  22. IME on April 19, 2017 9:04 pm

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii manuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    keviiiiiiiiiiiii cheeeeeeeeee
    aneeeeeeeeeeee kyaaaaaaaaaaa cheeeeeeeeeee
    huh
    hu bau busy chu yrr su karu
    atle jyara tu aave che tyare hu nathi hoti!!!!!
    rava de
    awesomeeeeeeeee
    amazinggggggggggg
    loved ittttttttttt
    post soon
    love you
    take care
    byee

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 9:52 pm

      Helloooo!!!
      Tame kem chho?? Hun toh majja ma ja chhu!!
      Baaki tame toh khub aj busy chho!!
      Ane thank you..
      Love you too!!
      Take care!!?????????????

  23. meera_s on April 19, 2017 9:34 pm

    I read 2parts now only…loved it..

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 11:04 pm

      Thnk u so much dii.. ?

  24. Shifa96 on April 20, 2017 9:09 pm

    Nice one..r u going to complete your other ff?

    • Manasvi on April 20, 2017 9:40 pm

      Thnks dii?
      And all the parts I wrote got deleted from my cell phone.. So i will think to write it back later!!

  25. sri on April 21, 2017 11:52 am

    just now i read n loved it dear…continue soon

    • Manasvi on April 21, 2017 12:23 pm

      Thnks sri..?

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