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Home»Fan Fiction»Mujhe tumse pyaar hai -RagLak ff part 5
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Mujhe tumse pyaar hai -RagLak ff part 5

DarshiniBy DarshiniApril 12, 201733 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi my dear friends….am extremely chorry for this much late…finally am free hereafter…let’s enjoy our good thief and minijalebi combo…here we go…

“laksh…what are you doing there…come na…”ragini’s voice makes him to come backto senses…
Laksh:- haan ragini…
Laksh(in mind):-what’s happening…did she really kissed me or it was just a dream…(he shooks his head in confusion…)do you love her laksh??naa…she is educated…you’re uneducated fellow…but i feel something for her…why did she tells everything about good thief i mean about me to her family…but she acted like that she doesn’t knows me now…what about that kisss…is that a real one or…
Saying that he touched his cheeks…ragini noticed this and drags him towards the washroom…
‘areyy wait karo yaar’said laksh…
Ragini:-i was calling your name so many times but you’re standing still without any reaction…go and fresh up…
Laksh:-Minijalebi…shit ragu…nahi nahi ragini…
Ragini:-areyy what now why you’re chanting my names…haan..
Laksh:-i called u only once…
Ragini(pout):lier…then what about minijalebi and rag…
She stopped in the middle realising something…
Laksh(murmurs):-dramebaaz…she heard before then what’s the big deal in replying…idiot…no no my pyaari jalebi idiot…
Ragini:-kya!!
Laksh:-kya matlab…
Ragini:-kya matlab why did you called me…
Laksh(pointing something):wo…it’s not working…
Ragini(smiles inside):you have to open the basin over here…hehe!!(cute smile)
Laksh gets mesmerised in her smile…ragini sees something and reminisces their moments…

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Ragini turns his face towards him and kissed his cheeks…he stands in shock…
She used this chance and get away from him and she hid his brother’s pic hanged on the wall…
She sighs a deep breath of relief…

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she rubbed his cheeks…
Laksh:-what!!
Ragini(stammers):W..Wo..dirt!!
Laksh:-ok move i will clean it…
Ragini:-no i will do it…
‘ragu…what’s wrong with you’laksh amazes…
‘am saying na…chup karo’said she rubbing his cheeks gently and erased the lip mark…
Laksh was looking into her eyes deeply…she looked up and sees his eyes…both shared a cute eyelock…
They came out from trance when they heard arjun’s voice…
‘ragini’arjun calls her name…
Ragini was about to reply but laksh closed her mouth…
She sighs him to leave but laksh whispers in her ears to be silent for a moment…ragini felt his hot breath on her cheeks which created goosebumps in her…
Arjun keeps calling her name but no reaction so he was about to leave…
“aah…”laksh screams…

Arjun turned back and says”laksh…are you inside the washroom…”
Laksh:-haan sir…
Arjun:-then why you didn’t reply me before…
Laksh(stammers):-wo…
Arjun:-wo..kya brother…
Laksh:-Wo…sir…i was refreshing…so only..
Ragini smiles sheepishly…while laksh glares her…
Arjun:-ok ok man..did you see ragini…
Laksh:-she was here only!!
Arjun(shocked):-what!!with you…that too inside the bathroom…
Ragini pats her forehead and sighs him something…
Laksh:-nahi sir…matlab…she showed the way to washroom and went away…
Arjun:-oh…teek hai…we are waiting in the hall for you…make it faster and come soon…
Arjun leaves and laksh takes the deep breath of relief…
Laksh(lifting ragini’s chin):-why did you stamped my foot jaleb..i mean Ms.Ragini…
Ragini:-why did you matlab…i feel suffocation when u closed my mouth…
Laksh:-achcha…if i didn’t then we would get caught red handed….
Ragini:- what’s the big deal…we didn’t do anything wrong na…i just stepped in to help you nothing more than that…
Laksh:-but the situation may create certain things…ok now you leave…i don’t want to argue with you…
Ragini:-why should i??no..never..i won’t…this is my home…
Laksh(smiling):-ok then…if you have no problem…then me too don’t have any problem…
Saying that he removes his shirt to refresh…
Ragini turned other side…
‘chi…shameless…you’re removing your shirt infront of me’ragini closed her eyes with her palm…
Laksh(smiles):-listen ragu..i asked you to leave but you only said that you won’t…
Ragini:-you should have tell me na that you gonna refresh…
Laksh:-hey bhagwan…ragini…why you take me here…haan…to get refresh and also to get change my clothes na…
Rag:-oh god…you are such an idiot…
Saying this she was about to leave…but laksh holds her wrist and pulled towards him…
To be continued…

Precap:
Arjun found laksh’s truth…

What gonna happen next??stay tuned to know more…
Take care…
Bye bye!!
~Darshu

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    33 Comments

    1. Follybraverl on April 12, 2017 9:58 pm

      Nice sweetie ajja

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:28 am

        Tq my dear sweetie ? waiting for ur ff’s post it soon dear…

    2. lovely7 on April 12, 2017 10:04 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:29 am

        Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it…

    3. Mahi on April 12, 2017 10:39 pm

      Nice akka

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:29 am

        Tq dear mahi? glad that you liked it…keep commenting..

    4. IQRA222 on April 12, 2017 10:41 pm

      darshuuuu di so much in love with this episode i read it 5 times
      lovely heavenly awesomely
      waiting for the next part

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:30 am

        Aww that’s so sweet of you iqu dear ? it means a lot da..tc…

    5. asra on April 12, 2017 10:42 pm

      awesome darshu dear….ohh our mini jelabe kissed her good theif…superbbb darshu dear….precap ohh no….arjun neyum un sister mathiri laksh oda character understand Paniko…plz yar….eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear….

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:32 am

        Tq da asra? s she did it…paapom Arjun undrstnd pannuvananu…hehe!!
        Will post soon dear…tc too…

    6. Mintu on April 12, 2017 11:08 pm

      Amazing sis .. Laksh freeze aana moments 24flim mari irundhuchu da…!! Poor boy.. Laksh therila.. Athu unmai dhn nu..!! ena arjun ku therinjudum ah truth..?? Wow… Avan reaction ena va irukum..??? Waiting for next part dear

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:33 am

        Tq da sissy ? hehe!!24 mvie…
        Aama avanukku thrla appaviya irukkane….
        Arjun reaction paakka u hav to wait da…
        Take care da?

    7. Ammu on April 13, 2017 7:00 am

      Awesome episode and Raglak scenes are superb

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:35 am

        Tq dear ammu ? wow am hpy that u lovd them…tc da!!

    8. Dolly on April 13, 2017 9:17 am

      Nice . Upload soon

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:35 am

        Tq dear dolly…will post it soon dear…

    9. avika on April 13, 2017 10:06 am

      Superr

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:36 am

        Tq dear avika ? glad that you liked it…

    10. dharani on April 13, 2017 10:23 am

      Awesome?

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 2:21 pm

        Tq my dear dharu? glad that you liked it…

    11. alli on April 13, 2017 10:38 am

      nice

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:37 am

        Tq so much dear ? glad that you liked it…

    12. Astra on April 13, 2017 10:54 am

      nice…

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:37 am

        Tq dear asthu…am so hpy that u liked it…

    13. Sreevijayan on April 13, 2017 11:07 am

      Nice update my dear…

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:38 am

        Tq my dear shree? glad that you liked it…

    14. aleeza2 on April 13, 2017 11:10 am

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 11:39 am

        Tq dear aleeza? glad that you liked it…

    15. keerthu on April 13, 2017 11:48 am

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 2:22 pm

        Tq dear keerthu? glad that you liked it…

    16. saranya on April 13, 2017 6:37 pm

      super dear

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 7:40 pm

        Tq Saranya dear ? glad that you liked it…

    17. A.xx on April 16, 2017 7:38 pm

      Nice xx

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