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Home»Fan Fiction»I really love you(a twinj story) chapter 13
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I really love you(a twinj story) chapter 13

Fatimaa.By Fatimaa.April 7, 201723 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello guyzzz…
I m early this time…
Well on request of my jaan….purvi…i m posting my episode today…..
Well thank u soo much those who all commented on my previous epi….but i got less comments…plss guyzz plzz do comment….
So here is the 13th episode…

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It was morning…twinkle and chinki woke up…mahi was still sleeping..after twinkle came from bath she woke up mahi…mahi was too sleepy…twinkle asked her..
Twinkle: mahi cmon wake up…till wat time were u talking to bhai..
Mahi: twinkle yaar i slept at 5 in the morning…
Twinkle: wat o my god…like seriously mahi u slept at 5…itni to kya baat kar rai thi…
Mahi: abb…irritate mat kar…lemme sleep..
Twinkle: mahi its already 9:30…apne sasural me itna late nai sote..
Mahi got up wid a thud and made a sarcastic face at twinkle..twinkle laughed and told her to hav a bath..
After sometime they all went downstairs to hav brkfast..
Leela was der at the table …twinkle asked her abt rt and yuvi…leela said that they both already had bf and went to office…
All d girls sat and had der brkfast…
After dat twinkle mahi and chinki went out for shopping…they enjoyed a lot…did lots of shopping….twinkle was shopping like crazy…(really guyzz i shop a lot.??)…
In the noon they returned and rt and yuvi wer already present at the table..
All sat for lunch..mahi and yuvi were stealing glances of each other…
After lunch all went to their rooms…jus then yuvi called twinkle and she went to him..
Twinkle: yes bhai u called me..
Yuvi: umm twinkle vo..mahi ko bhejna mere room me..
Twinkle: wat!! No i m nt gonna do dat…its too risky..wat if mamma comes??
Yuvi: no twinkle aisa kuch nai hoga…u stand outside my room na..plzzz
Twinkle: bhai kya apko me choukidaar lagti hu…
Yuvi: plzz twinkle..plzz na…mere liye itna nai karegi..
Twinkle: urghhh..fyn..i will call her..
Yuvi: thank u soo much..u r d best..
Twinkle went to her room and called mahi…she shyly went to yuvi’s room and den twinkle stood outside their room…????..
It was half n hour and der was no sign of mahi coming so twinkle banged on the door..
Twinkle: bhai mahi…aur kitni der…jaldi kro its half hour…
Jus den mahi came outside and twinke sighed of relief…and they went back to her room….
This way the days passed..and now it was saturday…
Twinkle was very much excited as she was gonna meet her kunj…it was morning and at the noon usha and manohar were cming to take them…twinkle and chinki were packing der stuff..jus den twinkle’s phone beeped..it was kunj’s msg..
Kunj: wen r u all gonna come today??
Twinkle: in the afternoon..ur mom n dad r cming to take us..
Kunj: oh okay…
Twinkle: so desperate?????
Kunj: nope nothing like dat( haha..pakda gaya)..
Twinkle: okay i m bzy jus nw..packing my stuff..will talk to u later..
Kunj: yah dats okay..bye
Twinkle: yup bye..
And den they all packed der things and went down…mahi was looking sad as she didnt wanna leave yuvi..but she had no choice…
In the noon..usha and manohar came to pick d girls…they came inside the house and after sometime…
They bid bye leela yuvi and rt…and den all went…
After 20 mins…they reached sarna mansion…
Kunj was in the hall…and den all entered inside…twinkle looked at him…and they both smiled at each other….and then all sat in the hall….payal and her sister shreya had also come to stay….
All were gossiping and having fun…
Just den chinki said dat they wud play dumb shall ask…first it was mahi’s turn…they gave her a movie…..and she acted and twinkle guessed the movie…
Next it was twinkle’s turn…kunj was going to give her d movie..he stood up and came near her ear and whispered in her ears..
Kunj: its aashiqui 2…
as soon as his hot breath touched her ear and his lips slightly brushed against her ear….shivers ran down her spine….kunj den smiled at her and den sat back on his place…
Twinkle acted for d movie and payal guessed it….
Next it was shreya’s turn and then atlast it was kunj’s turn….
Mahi purposely told twinkle to give him d movie…twinkle stood up and taking baby steps she went to kunj and whispered in his ear..
Twinkle: its jism..
Kunj looked at her baffeled and twinkle smirked…(o my god my kunj was looking soo cute wen i gave him dat movie?????)….
Kunj acted funnily…and finally mahi guessed it…..and all d girls wer looking at him wid open mouth…and then all started laughing at kunj….mahi and twinkle hi-fied…and kunj was giving dem a sarcastic smile??????
After that all were tired and then all resided to their rooms….in the evening…twinkle was walking down the stairs and kunj was also coming…as he saw her he smirked and went to her..twinkle was watching him…he came to her and said..
Kunj: i didnt knew u watch dat type of movies too..
Twinkle: what…what which type..
Kunj: ahan…the one u gave me…
Twinkle: oh plzz i dnt watch dat type of movies..i jus gave u like dat..i have listened its name…
Kunj: oh i see…
Twinkle: kunj..
Kunj: achha ok fyn….dont get mad…
Twinkle smiled and they went downstairs…

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Hope u enjoyed d epi…plzz do comment plzz…
Love u all❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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    23 Comments

    1. Sohi on April 7, 2017 12:54 am

      It was really lovely di
      Hehe ap apne bhai k liye watchman b ban gayi
      One question agar purvi apki jaan hai tho hum kon hai apke liye?
      Do continue and post soon
      Bye

      • Fatimaa. on April 7, 2017 1:39 pm

        Well tq sohi…
        And u all r my jaan…
        Coz i love u all

    2. Presha on April 7, 2017 1:24 am

      Hey dii…
      Its awesome…
      Just loved it…
      Yuvi ne kyun bulaya tha mahi ko room mai…
      Aap donno ki baatein jiju is so desperaye …
      ❤❤????

    3. Prudence on April 7, 2017 1:42 am

      Beautiful, luv it so much

    4. SidMin23 on April 7, 2017 1:47 am

      Cute as always. Donpsit soon.

    5. Kiya on April 7, 2017 6:26 am

      Awesome….what an epi…
      Cant wait to know more…post soon

    6. lovey on April 7, 2017 9:32 am

      Diii wahh kia epi tha awesome very nice jijio ko kia nam dia jism love it and uv bhai ka liya watch man love love love love it

    7. Purnima.agrawal30 on April 7, 2017 9:59 am

      Amazing awesome fabulous funny

    8. Nisha on April 7, 2017 11:04 am

      Wow Fatima it was really awesome amazing
      I loved it

    9. Esha Fatima on April 7, 2017 2:03 pm

      Hey api yeh epi super sa b uper wala tha….
      Really i don’t have words for ur epi….
      U become watchman for ur frnd and bro luvd that part….
      Ur kunj and ur talk was awesome….
      U and ur story both r amazing….
      Luv u soooo much…..

    10. Aashiya on April 7, 2017 2:20 pm

      Hey gummie bear ,
      it was just shooooooooooo cute….I’m in love wid ur love storyyyyyyyyyyyyy…….
      All the 5 epis were just awsm mm. ……throughout the reading I was having a big smile on my face…..jeegs getting desperate☺☺☺??……Wd lack words if I start explaining….
      love u a lot,
      post the next soon…
      -urs chotu baby

    11. AF on April 7, 2017 2:32 pm

      Fabulous episode

    12. Aafi on April 7, 2017 2:33 pm

      Amazing yet funny episode

    13. AKA on April 7, 2017 2:34 pm

      Awesome episode
      Post soon

    14. SAF on April 7, 2017 2:34 pm

      Cute episode

    15. Tushi on April 7, 2017 2:35 pm

      Nice episode

    16. SidMin on April 7, 2017 5:14 pm

      Aww Loved it
      Awesome… your love story is so sweet ??
      Love you post soon ❤

    17. Amaya Bhardwaj on April 7, 2017 5:42 pm

      Hey Fatima,
      It was soooooo amazing superb cuteeee funny episode yrrr…I am laughing like minacs reading it……Srsly u have jiju to enact jism movie…. Hahahaha….Wat must he have done I am thinking that…… Bechare hamare jiju…..U made acchaa fun of him….Or tere Bhai k liye Tu watchman ban gyi…Achaa kam Diya unhone tujhe….
      Hyeee romance sonance Haan…..
      And last part was amazing and funny too….Sachii m jiju be tere we pucha ye Sab….Sachii me bare naughty h….U both were so desperate for meeting EO….I loved reading it yrr..
      Plz post soon
      And Haan only Purvi is your jaan wat about us…nt fair Haan Fatima….??????????
      LOADS of LOVE
      Tc

      • Fatimaa. on April 7, 2017 7:17 pm

        U r my janeman…?????
        Amaya…

    18. Cp on April 7, 2017 8:12 pm

      Maine bahut baar khaha hai ..aur phir keh rahi hoon?you and jigs are just adorable?????????and desperate onee haaan??….you acted as a catalyst in yuhi ka love story …speeding up their meetings??
      Post next soon ???

    19. Ramya on April 7, 2017 10:04 pm

      Kya bolu Fatima
      It’s super cute amazing Superb
      Lovely
      Bechari twinkle yuhi ke chakkar mai kitna karna pad raha hai hehe
      But it’s superb amazing
      Love u keep smiling

    20. mia12 on April 8, 2017 6:42 am

      Meri fattu meri janeman…☺☺
      Ohhhhh myyyyy goddd…??
      Whattt is thisss haan..??? Accha naam dia jiju ko..??? n accha bacchu meri desperate jiju,???? accha pakaungi jab milega toh..???? or tu watchman bangayi..??? yarrrr I can’t describe it word’s ki how much I love this episode and prvs also..❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Sacchi yrrrrr justttt Amazing fantastic awesome lovely cute episode,,??????????????? Really you and jiju truely really made 4 each other..????????????.. God bless u both,,????.. And sry yrrr meri net pblm ho rai hai 2 dinse toh kiski bhi ff par muskil ho raha hai cmnt Marne mai.???..I hope tu mujse naraz nai rahegi..???.. Now
      LOAD’S OF LOVE meri fattu ko..???❤❤❤❤???❤❤❤❤?????❤❤????

    21. baby on April 16, 2017 5:41 pm

      ohhh my god……….hahhahahaaahahaaa fatimaa dii aaj ka day bhot achaaa tha….hehe…..srsly dis was sooooo cute jst lovely………..☺
      hehe how romantic kunj n u got shivered hehe….dumshrats was a great idea…….☺
      n den……d movies…….amazing lovd d episode…yuhii were cute………..haha srsly till 5 dey were chatting……….omg……….☺
      well lods of love……….☺

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