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Home»Fan Fiction»Don’t stay away it kills me -RagLak fs by folly and darshu A/N and part 3
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Don’t stay away it kills me -RagLak fs by folly and darshu A/N and part 3

DarshiniBy DarshiniApril 4, 201754 Comments7 Mins Read
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Don’t stay away it kills me 3
Hii dear friends and am extremely sorry for taking so much time…and in between I thought to update this ff…please bear me and suggestions are welcomed…sorry haven’t proof read..here we go…
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Raglak reached the room where doctor is checking swara’s condition…
Both Maheshwari’s and gadodia’s gathered there outside the room and were panicking about swara…
“what happened to this girl…how to react I don’t know whether I should be happy for her return or should I be sad for spoiling her sister’s life…areyy bhaghwan…”Sujatha starts panicking…
“Sujatha…”ap asks her to keep quiet…
Doctor comes outside…
“doctor kya Hua mere swara ko..is she ok…no problem with her health right…”sanskar rushed towards him and pleads him to say something…
“dekhiye Mr.Sanskar Maheshwari…your wife is undergoing partial memory loss and she forgot everything that happened in these months…that’s why she is thinking your brother as her husband..she only remembers her marriage fixed with laksh and she doesn’t recognize anything other than that…she remembers everything that happened before her marriage fixed with laksh and one more thing don’t try to stress her more because it will result in serious consequences…and don’t worry when time passes she will remember everything…since it is an short term memory loss…if any emergency occurs call me…”doctor leaves…

“Swara!!”sanskar collapsed on the floor and cries bitterly…
“bhaai…”raglak consoles sanky…
Sanskar hugged Laksh and cries badly…
While swara gets some flashes of sanskar and their first date…then sanskar shooting Rajat…
“Sanskar!!”swara shouts and wakes up without recognising what she said before…
Sanskar and raglak rushed inside hearing her scream…
They finds swara sitting on the bed…
Swara:Ragini…why did you do this to me…
Ragini:swara!!

Swara(crying):why did you snatched my Laksh Ragini…
Sanskar interrupts…she shows her palm against him…
Swara(teary eyed):kyun Ragini..kyun..
Swara shooks her shoulders…and she packs ragini’s things and shouts at her to get lost…
Laksh gives her a tight slap…
Sanky:laksh!!how dare you slapped my swara…
Swara collapsed down on the floor and fainted…
Sanskar:Swara!!

Laksh shooks Ragini which brings her out from trance…
Ragini(in mind):dream…but it seems to be real…i don’t want it to happen…
Ragini wipes her face and approached towards swara…
“swara…tum teek hona…”Ragini caresses her head…
“Ragini…i get some flashes…someone shooting the one who is holding by neck with his hand and we are standing at the edge of the bridge…and other flashes…”swara holds her head with her hands and panicks…
“swara…relax…it’s a bad dream…just a dream…relax..”sanskar said by holding her hands…
Swara feels something for him and she nods…
Swara found laksh standing beside Ragini and she calls him and hugs him…
“please laksh don’t play a prank with me…don’t say that again that am not your wife anymore…promise…”swara forwards her hand…

Laksh was shocked and sees Ragini with teary eyed…
Sanskar pleads him through tears…Ragini pushes his hand slightly towards swara’s hand…
Swara smiles and holds his hand…Ragini ran away from there…laksh noticed that and he asks swara to take rest…
Laksh sighs sanskar to handle it…sanskar sits besides swara and sees her sleeping…tears rolled down from his eyes…
While swara continues sleeping like a kid…

Laksh follows Ragini who is holding the pillar and was crying…
Laksh places his hand on her shoulder…she suddenly turns back and hugged him…
“we were left with no other option laksh…just accept it…”Ragini cries bitterly…
“Ragini…please stop it…even i was not able to see swara in this condition…we can explain her slowly na there may be some solution for this…let’s hope for the best and please don’t hurt yourself…sanskar sighs me so that i consoled swara and i am only for you…i love you Ragini…”laksh hugged her tightly…
“laksh you need not to say that…i know Laksh…i feel for swara and sanskar…i can’t able to see sanskar in that state…i can feel that pain laksh because I felt that pain in my life laksh…”Ragini sobs…
“please Ragini…don’t kill me with your words…please…”laksh turns back and wipes his eyes…
“laksh I didn’t said with any intention…am sorry but…”Ragini got interrupted…
“but what…do you think am I happy with it…please Ragini…let’s end this topic here and chalo mere saath…”laksh drags her with him…

“laksh…where are we going…”asked Ragini but there is no reply from laksh…
Dp:whose evil eyes fall on our family I don’t know…first we lost swara…our happiness shattered..now she came alive we were happy at extreme but it gets vanished when we came to know about her health…i can’t able to see sanskar and Ragini’s condition…when swara points Laksh as her husband…my children’s life were broken…bhagwan why you’re testing us…please bring back the happiness in our life…please bring back swara’s memory…unite my kids forever…
Ap pats his shoulder and consoles him…
Sujatha(saddened):bhaaisaab this swara bina giving pain to my sanskar…i felt really happy when she is back to us…but because of her memory loss now our Ragini and laksh too suffers…
Rp asks her to keep quiet…
Raglak reached the room where swara is taking rest but she couldn’t sleep so swara and sanky were enjoying each others company by chatting and cracking jokes…
“sanskar I thought you are reserved type person but you have broken my guessing…you’re too crazy…”swara pats him…
Sanskar smiled seeing swara laughing and wipes his tears…
Raglak entered…

“aao laksh…you missed some naughty moments…yaah sanskar is really crazy…he is far better than you laksh in naughtiness…”swara laughs out loudly but stops when raglak didn’t gave any reaction…
“swara…listen to me… stay with maa,paapa and dadi for few days…because they will miss you too na…so..”laksh uttered in cracking voice…
“that was a good idea laksh…oh no don’t get saddened I will be back within a week…don’t worry my husband…”swara holds his hand…
Sanskar gets hurt when she mentioned laksh as her husband while Ragini turns away and wipes her tears…
Laksh tells the same to the family members and they all leaves…
Swara(confused):Ragini…where are you going…that too with my family…
Ragini’s heart stops for a moment…
Ragini (in mind):my family…is it not mine…why god you’re torturing me with your game…please I can’t bear this…
Ragini:Wo swara…

She got interrupted by sanskar….
Sanky:Swara she is coming outside to send off us …that’s it…don’t stress more…
Laksh glares him while sanky pleads him…
Ragini sighs Laksh to calm down…
Laksh leaves from there heart broken while sanskar felt happy about a fact that atleast swara is alive…
Ragini goes inside…

Gadodia’s looks her painfully especially sumi collapsed on floor and cries…
“Maa..”Ragini goes towards her and consoles her…
“am sorry laadoo…Shona did…”sumi gets interrupted…
“maa…it’s not your fault and infact swara is not at fault too…don’t think about it…let’s bring back our swara’s memory…trust me maa…”Ragini holds her hands…
Suddenly sumi hugs her tightly and Ragu wipes her tears…
Ragini goes inside her room and looks outside through the window…
Laksh waves his hands…Ragini rubs her eyes and sees but he was not there…
“hallucination…”said she and turned back and finds swara behind her…
Swara:Ragini…just tell me one thing…are you hiding something from me…
Ragini (nervously):nothing swara…nothing….
Swara:then answer my question…
Ragini nods…
Swara(curious):who is your husband??
Ragini stands dumbstruck…
To be continued •••

Precap:new entry who makes laksh jealous towards Ragini…

Done with this chappy??how is it??I know it’s boring but please bear me…take care friends ?
Don’t forget to comment…
~Darshu

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    54 Comments

    1. dharani on April 4, 2017 5:54 pm

      arey yaar already they are suffering due to swara’s memory loss and all again this jealousy huu… and ha the episode is awesome

      • Darshini on April 4, 2017 6:12 pm

        Yes dear…hereafter only possessiveness trck gets strtd…so plz bear me? and thnks da for commenting…tc dr?

    2. Ammy on April 4, 2017 6:13 pm

      Superb

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:10 am

        Tq dear ammy ? glad that you liked it..

    3. Sindhura on April 4, 2017 6:13 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:10 am

        Tq dear Sindhu ? glad that you liked it…

    4. lovely7 on April 4, 2017 6:16 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:11 am

        Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it…

    5. Sayana on April 4, 2017 6:37 pm

      Sprb
      Plz update nxt prt…

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:11 am

        Tq sayana? will update soon dear ?

    6. Sharanya on April 4, 2017 6:43 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:12 am

        Tq dear sharanya? glad that you liked it…

    7. shrilatha on April 4, 2017 6:55 pm

      I thought Swara will think Sanskar as ragini’s husband..it was awesome

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:14 am

        Haha!!shri I planned one new entry da..so I didn’t put forth ragsan …sry and thnks da…if u have any idea u can suggest me…tc

      • shrilatha on April 5, 2017 11:43 am

        akka please parth

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 1:51 pm

        Aww thnks dear and sure…

    8. Shreya on April 4, 2017 7:12 pm

      Its awesome . Loved it . If possible can u plz post next episode today only . Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:15 am

        Thnks dear shreya? bt u have to wait for the next update…sry dear ?

    9. Mahi on April 4, 2017 7:17 pm

      Awesome akka..Waiting for next part…pls update soon…

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:16 am

        Thnks dear mahi? will post soon…tc…

    10. AimRagLak on April 4, 2017 7:31 pm

      I want swara to see Laksh caring for Ragini and getting jealous.Ragini has gone through the same pain in past but no one thought about her.After all Laksh was Ragini’s fiance first.I always wanted a payback track like this So I could forgive Rashmi mata & Rangeela for doing injustice with Ragini & then making Her negative to hide her pain.Please post the next part soon!

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:18 am

        Yaah dear ur wish will get fulfilled soon…
        Don’t worry nxt epi will give u wat u expected…thnks for cmnting dear…will post soon…tc..

    11. IQRA222 on April 4, 2017 7:40 pm

      awesome episode darshu di
      the scenes were so lovely that i am not able to specify which i liked the most
      waiting for the next part

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:19 am

        Tqtq my dear iqu? aww…u liked it that’s great to hear da…tc…will post soon da…

    12. Arjuna on April 4, 2017 7:44 pm

      AWESOME

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:21 am

        Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it…

    13. aleeza2 on April 4, 2017 7:54 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:22 am

        Tq aleeza dear ? glad that you liked it…

    14. Mintu on April 4, 2017 7:56 pm

      Awesome sis… New entry dhn ragu husband ah da??? Pavam raglaksan..!!! maybe laksh unmaiya kuda vandhurukalam.. Swara va pathu payandhu odirupan.. Hehe..!! Missing this ff..!!! Waiting for next part dear.. Take care

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:24 am

        Tq deary? aama da new entry will disguise himself as ragini’s hubby…paavam da…hehe!!may b unmaya kooda vanthurklam laksh…
        Sry da…
        I will post it on Monday eve or Tuesday mng da…tc dear…

    15. Asw on April 4, 2017 7:59 pm

      Amazing jealousy interesting In raglak pls post as soon as possible keep going

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:25 am

        Thnks a lot dear? will post soon dear bt u have to wait for it…am chorry?

    16. asra on April 4, 2017 8:22 pm

      awesome darshu dear….ohh jealous track start aga pohutha dear…am excited dear….Oru memory loss ella thukum kasta tha kudukuthu….waiting for nxt one dear…takecare darshu dear….
      anna vuku engagement muduncha dear…

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:28 am

        Oii asra xam epdi senjurkka??Anna engagement Sunday daan da…neraya wrks irukku Inga…inda ff update panni rmba naal aachula ennaya yaarum marakka koodathula adaan thidirnu updte pannen…hehe…
        Enna seiya da bt new entry will mle laksh as a possessive lover…tc da.. Post panren seekrm…bye!!

    17. Ashnoor on April 4, 2017 9:16 pm

      Amazing dear ……. waiting for laksh ‘s jealously……

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:28 am

        Tq dear ashnoor? glad that you liked it…

    18. Ammu on April 4, 2017 9:49 pm

      Awesome episode and loved Raglak scenes. Eagerly waiting for precap

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:29 am

        Thnks a lot da ammu…will post soon da…tc…

    19. Rasha on April 4, 2017 9:52 pm

      wow precap is interesting

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:30 am

        Tq dear rasha? glad that you liked it…

    20. Follybraverl on April 4, 2017 10:55 pm

      Awesome Chappy enjoyed a lot

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:31 am

        Tq dear sweetie ? seekrm post panren…need ur hlp da…tc…

    21. gayu on April 5, 2017 9:06 am

      Superb and mindblowing dear. Feeling bad for RagLak. Anyways waiting for Laksh’s possessive track. Keep rocking dear

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 11:32 am

        Tq da gayu? don’t worry their love becomes strng mre…will post it soon dear…tc…

    22. deesh on April 5, 2017 11:39 am

      This is too good darshu. Just read the 3 parts now and I loved it. Rock on!!

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 1:55 pm

        Aww that’s so nice to hear from you dear…thnks a tonne deeshu…?

    23. avika on April 5, 2017 12:19 pm

      Superrr

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 1:56 pm

        Tq dear avika? glad that you liked it…

    24. MEGHA on April 5, 2017 2:19 pm

      mindblowing epi

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 4:38 pm

        Tq dear megha? glad that you liked it…

    25. Malu on April 5, 2017 7:41 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 5, 2017 8:58 pm

        Tq dear malu ? glad that you liked it…

    26. A.xx on April 12, 2017 7:32 pm

      amazing and can’t wait for next part so post soon and sorry for late comment xx

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 8:34 pm

        Tq so much dear a.xx…nd no need for sorry btwn frnds…will post it soon…tc..

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