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Home»Fan Fiction»A Horror Story (RagLak) Part 2 part-b
Fan Fiction Swaragini

A Horror Story (RagLak) Part 2 part-b

bhuvanachandrikaBy bhuvanachandrikaMarch 23, 2017Updated:March 23, 201720 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello guys,
I’m really very happy to see your response. Thank you for supporting. I couldn’t reply anyone individually, but thanks to A, Lovely, Eba, sinni, sharanya, aadhya, Iqra222, raglakholic, ritu, rinitta, shrilatha, follybrave, jazzy, abi, marklotha, ammu, megha, gayu, xyz, arjuna, sherin, asra and a.xx.
And also to who commented in previous parts, srsl, rasha, akshata and shiksha.. thank you all and thanks to silent readers too..

Now let’s go into next part, from here romance and horror will be high. I will alert wherever romance comes.

Laksh takes Ragini to the farm house. Ragini is crying sitting on a chair.

“I never wanted to kill Swara. I just pushed her so that she might skip marriage. I wanted you to marry me Laksh. I love you so much. But, I never thought Swara will die really!!”

Ragini cries cover her face with palms.

But Laksh is looking in anger at her.

“You are not that innocent as you look Ragini. You have separated my love from me. Now, I will show you how it pains when love goes away. When someone cheats us. You have cheated me. Your sister. Your family. Now, it’s my turn.”
Thinks Laksh.

He keeps his arm on Ragini.

“What is over is over Ragini. If I would have realized your love, this much wouldn’t have happened. See, at last you got nothing.”

Ragini cries closing her eyes. She hugs Laksh sitting itself and she cries, “swara..”
but those tears won’t melt Laksh.

Swara soul who is sitting on other chair looks at Ragini. “Your tears won’t melt me Ragini. They can’t bring me back alive. They can’t make me and Laksh together. You have spoiled my dreams. See now. How I will destroy your love kingdom.” Says Swara. But no one can hear her.

Laksh feels unwilling to touch Ragini. But, now it’s his revenge time. He has to do it.

$$$$$ kids may close their eyes now . Romance alert $$$$

Laksh presses Ragini’s waist. Ragini shocks.
“Laksh, this is not time for this.”

“Ragini, but I want you.” He says and bits her neck. “No Laksh…” Ragini says in pleasure mode.

Then Laksh licks her neck where he has bite. Ragini inhales air heavenly. Laksh moves his fingers in her cleavage, and she pushes him. Laksh falls in couch.
Ragini stands.

“I don’t deserve this. I should be betrayed.” Says Ragini sobbing.

Laksh wakes and drags her near by waist.

“I can’t be far from you. I want you.” He says and makes a kiss with her lips. Ragini gets weak. He lifts her in arms and she closes her eyes. He takes her to bed room. He places her on bed.

“Now, it’s my turn” swara thinks and jumps into Ragini.

Now as Swara is there in her, she pulls Laksh upon her. She tears Laksh’s shirt and rubs his chest. Laksh removes her saree. He bends upon her and keeps kissing her neck. Swara while enjoying this…
suddenly she feels a pull off from Ragini’s body. Swara comes out of Ragini.

Swara shocks. Here, Laksh was planting kisses in Ragini’s neck and Ragini lost her control and she is weak just moaning his name.

Swara shouts, “laksh..!! I’m here. Don’t touch her. I’m yours. You are mine. She is not yours.” But no one can hear her.

She tries to enter into Ragini again. But, it was not possible. She confuses why. Again swara feels a pull and her soul flies away mow someone has locked her soul in a glass bottle.

Here,Raglak are involved in their work. Laksh was sucking Ragini’s neck while with other hand he was smoothing her stomach. He then bends to her navel and kisses and bites there. Ragini clutches bedsheets and bites her lips. Soon, he removes her petticoat from her and now her bare legs are being rubbed by his bare legs. Laksh moves again up to her keep kissing each of her body part and then he reaches her face. She was closing her eyes, he seductively moves his fingers on her face making her go mad and then she hugs him tightly and starts biting his shoulders. Laksh rolls and make her come over him. Her smooth back was being rubbed by his hands and her front has becomes his dinner. He was sucking, licking, biting whatever he want. Ragini lays her head in his chest. And laksh hugs her tighter and room becomes dark.

Morning.. Laksh opens his eyes first. He looks at Ragini who has a wide smile on her face and she is looking cute and innocent. He smiles forgetting what she has done. H kisses her forehead and he blushes remembering the fact they both are naked under those bed sheets. He smoothly moves his finger over her pink lips for which she wakes up. She feels shy to look at Laksh in that condition.

Lakshya then remembers his duty. He wakes from her. Ragini wears her saree back bending her head and Lakshya wears his dress.

$$$$$$ kids may read from here $$$$$$$

“How was the night Ragini?” He asks buttoning his shirt. Ragini blushes without answering.

Lakshya comes back and holds her chin tightly shocking her.

“You wanted this only know. For this only you killed Swara right. Take more..!!” He says and gives a wild kiss on her lips and he bites her lips strongly paining her.

“Lakshya..!” Shouts Ragini and pushes him. Ragini rubs her lips panting.

Lakshya pulls her up from bed and keep dragging her out.

“Laksh stop please. Where are you taking me?” Ragini was asking but Laksh was simply taking her.

Ragini holds a pillar, “laksh, what happened to you suddenly?”

“This is punishment for you for killing swara!!”

Ragini jerks Laksh’s hand.

“I didn’t kill Swara.” She shouts. Lakshya looks at her. “I just pushed her into river, I thought she will get unconscious for sometime.”

“Even kids know that after falling in river that they will die Ragini.” Says Lakshya holding her arm tightly. He drags her.

“Laksh, please don’t do this to me.” Shouts Ragini . But Laksh pushes her out.

“You betrayed all. I will betray you now. Get out.” Laksh closes the door. Ragini remains numb and starts walking away slowly.

Lakshya closes the door and leans to door remembering romantic moments happened in between them. He rubs his neck in upset.

Ragini keeps walking away.

Then, Swara breaks from that glass bottle and reaches near Ragini as fast as she could. She enters into Ragini. Ragini gets struck suddenly. She opens her eyes and they are red.

$$$$$$$

There in mm, priest informs that swara soul escaped again. Ap Dp shocks. They don’t understand how to save Lakshya now.

Ragini who is possessed by Swara keep walking back to the Laksh’s farm house.

Lakshya sat at table remembering Ragini. He was looking at the hikes made by Ragini on his shoulder.

Suddenly, the door gets break as if it pushed by someone and door falls away with force, Lakshya shocks and looks. Ragini steps in laughing as devil.

“Ragini?” Says Lakshya. Ragini nods negatively and shouts loudly, “Swara..!!!”

With her shout all the lights blast and fall down in pieces. She laughs aloud and all windows and doors keep shuttering. Laksh looks shocked.

Ragini who is possessed by Swara laughs madly and reaches in middle of hall. She sits on floor one leg folded and other leg placed on foot and she places her hand on her knee.

She sings in devilish tone,

“Jiya dhadak.. dhadak..”

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaye..!!”

She keeps stamping her foot strongly on the floor and she looks around smiling evilly showing her all teeth out.

Lakshya takes gulp looking at her, his knees start shivering. Ragini(swara) puts her hands back and laughs aloud making Lakshya scare more, then she shifts her cruel gaze towards Laksh. He looks shocked.

To be continued.

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    20 Comments

    1. Rinitta on March 23, 2017 5:14 pm

      Wow really scary and too romantic ???. Waiting for the next update eagerly sissy

    2. IQRA222 on March 23, 2017 5:23 pm

      awesome episode di

    3. Ritu on March 23, 2017 5:46 pm

      Awesome .Waiting for the next episode.

    4. a on March 23, 2017 5:57 pm

      Interesting

    5. Sindhura on March 23, 2017 6:19 pm

      Nice

    6. Follybraverl on March 23, 2017 6:30 pm

      Too good awesome episode you are such a writer gives the reader that feel awesome raglak Ragini should not forgive him

    7. Sharanya on March 23, 2017 7:02 pm

      Superb episode dear

    8. lovely7 on March 23, 2017 7:04 pm

      Scary and romantic
      Awesome

    9. Eba on March 23, 2017 7:26 pm

      Keep going DEAR it’s Awesome 🙂

    10. Ammu on March 23, 2017 7:30 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and Raglak romantic scenes are beautiful. Day by day it’s going to be very interesting. Eagerly waiting for next episode

    11. Shiksha on March 23, 2017 8:02 pm

      Good one.. Update soon

    12. Megha on March 23, 2017 8:25 pm

      Wow hot and scary epi.update nxt part soon

    13. abi on March 23, 2017 8:54 pm

      Ooh My God
      Unexpected part

    14. Arjuna on March 23, 2017 9:53 pm

      AWESOME

    15. Malu on March 23, 2017 10:24 pm

      Superb

    16. raglakholic on March 23, 2017 10:57 pm

      its amazing…superb….plz next part jldi post krna…m eagerly waiting…..too good

    17. A.xx on March 24, 2017 1:44 am

      amazing and hope raga doesn’t forgive him yet xx

    18. Aim on March 24, 2017 2:28 am

      I hate Laksh :'(
      Ragu he never deserved you.He treated you like you don’t exist when you were that sweet & Innocent girl and he was engaged to you only coz you wore Sawar Kameez.He was your fiance but happily flirted with your sister.He never tought about giving you one chance.He never thought about you when he proposed your sister infront of you like it is a very normal thing.He never ever felt guilty for breaking your hearts into pieces but his heart should not be broken.He is a very selfish person.I know you felt betrayed when you came to know about his & your sister’s relationship.I know you saw him and your sister’s marriage &the whole family being so happy,no one there to say it is wrong but they both deserved each other.They had no guilt about screwing you up.Was this selfish&shallow guy really worth all these crimes?You should have slapped them & gone far away but u considered this shallow heartless guy as your prince charming and ruined yourself.See now see these two whose dream palace which they were planning to build on the base of your tears & pain was going to be shattered by Karma but now they get to treat you like this only because of your wrong deeds.See now these people who had no sense of moral values are accepted as good people coz you were weak &chose the path of crime.This is sad.Very sad.I always get very sad when I see this phase of your life where you were trying to win a person’s heart who doesn’t have a heart.Atleast for a salwar kameez wearing traditional girl like you.I wish you would have understood it even later that he was never worth it!

    19. asra on March 24, 2017 9:29 am

      awesome dear….it’s too scary and romantic…..hate thz laksh…y he s doing thz….read ur last part….it’s remember me a tamil movie aranmanai…..eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    20. jazzy on March 25, 2017 11:22 pm

      Superb

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