Hey guys u must be shocked I m ending..but I have to end cause of less comments but soon I will come up with new ff…
Nd thanx who commented on previous episode..
Link for previous episode
Episode 15
Hope it works…
Episode 16
Its yuhi engagement they exchanged rings nd everyone enjoyed soon all the guest left..after 1 week the day of marriage function starts..everyone was Happy… But on the sangeet day twinkle felt unconscious… Kunj called the doctor..
Doc- its nothing to worry..there is a good news for u all..nr kunj ur wife is pregnant… Everyone was happy..kunj was on cloud 9..
Ruhi was also happy that finally her wished completed she was just waiting for the small baby to come in their life.. Kunj strictly told twinkle not to do any work..
Finally yuhi’s marriage completed nd they left for their honeymoon…
Twinkle always be pampered by kunj nd ruhi…once twinj were walking in the garden hand in hand..
Ku- twinkle our life is finally.. completed..our ruhi nd this small baby nd placed his hand on her baby bump..
Tw- yaa..kunj how many ups nd downs we have to faced but still we r together..
Ku- acha twinkle what we will name is baby..
Tw- umm..if boy than kunal nd if girl than pihu…
Ku- hmm..nd both hugged so…
After 5 months
Twinkle have birth to a baby girl..nd they all were happy nd mahi was also having a small baby bump… ruhi was happy to become a big sister….nd they lived..happily..
THE END
Sorry guys but I have to end..nd I will soon come wid new story on twinj…
Bye guys
Adeeba
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Nice
Thnx Aisha..??
This ff was really good and awesome
Will miss you dear
Plz come back soon
Do continue
Love you
Hey sohi..thnx yrrr u always supported me in this journey.. nd yaa i will come back soon…?
Hey Adeebu!
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I am very a much angry with u??N I am not gonna talk to u??u ends ur ff??I asked u not too… but u don’t consider me ur api na that’s why u did this??i know I was not able to comment last time bcuz I was having my Xm’s… but u just finished it??jao… I won’t talk to u??
Hey api plz..mujhse naraz mat ho..sorry api lekin mujhe end krna pada..apko main bataun kyun…cause use page mein sare writers ko 15 to 19 comments mil rhe aur mujhe sirf 12..toh mujhe bht hurt hua isileye maine end kiya..lekin main jaldi neww ff ke saath aungi ab plzz..plz..angry mat ho mujhse…i really Luv u api jaan.
Huh!! R u mad?? This is soo bad yrr..not the ff..its too good..its abot u man..y did u ended this..look dii..my aduu dii..my sweetu di..i know ki i never comented in ur post what urs i never commwnted in any1s posts..m srry..dekho ye bachi kaan pakad kw maafi maang ri..but app ne ye ff end kyu kiya..its just suoerb di..i loved it..i love ur writings di..n agar aapne ye ff end less comments ki wajah se kiya then get a thing in ur brain that many r having exams n cant comment..n some people r like me..u know what…i have a joint family..so i cant read all the ffs on the spit..so i save them for reading them offline..thats the reason i can never comment..now when u have ended this ff..do promise me ki u will come back..u wont hurt ur choti si sis na..hu na mai aapki sis?? Ni hu then also ek tu member to hu..usi ke haq se aapko order deti hu ki apna dusra ff n ek or new ff n ek or new ff n ek or new ff..i know ki aapko l ra hoga ki galti se itni baar likha gaya then u r wring..mene likha h yaar itni baar..mere kehne ka matlab h ki aap bohot saare ffs start karo..n mere birthday tak ek vi khatam ni hona chahiye..n this birthday nai..next borthday..ehich means ki ek pure saal chalana padega aapko ff..n sirf ek pura saal kyu..aap never ending ff chalao..i know ki kuch zyada bak bak ho gai but its ok..byee..love u..
Hey jasmine…u know first time mujhe itna long comment mila vo bhi tujhse..acha try to understand bachaa..ussi page mein jitne bhi tei ff h unhe ache comments mil rhe ek main hi hun jisse less comments mil rhe the..isiliye maine end kiya..yaa..my choti sis i will come back but in april..aur tera bday kab h?? aur tuna aise questions na pucha kar tu meri sis h..samjhi pagal…aur han plz..mujhe angry mat ho..luv u meri jasmine flower…byee
Dii mera birthday na 29th april ko h.. :p..hehehe..mazak kar ri…june 4th ko h..n di aap story or likho na..mai bol ri ki na mai hamsha comment karne ki t karungi..plzz..mere liye..n april me kyu?? Avi start karo ff..plzz…love u..
Jasmine yrrr actually ek ff h mere dimaag mein but abhi na main apne grandparents ke ghar ayi hun..toh main April se hi start karungi…lekin main kosish karungi march se start krne ka..
Agar dimag me h to fatafat likh lo na..n avi to aap apne grandparents ke ghar pe ho..but aap jab apne ghar vapas jaoge to likhte likhte hi jaana n ghar pahuchne se pehle likh ke post kar lena..thik h?? Mai wait karungi..n tu chod ke ni jaana..plzz..
Hey adu this journeyqid u was very beautifull..
Love this ffof urs….
Awesome…
Love u… N
Thnx preshu..u always supported me throughout the journey…. Luv u too meri jaan..
??????? that your ending this ff and people should comment if they are reading I mean writer are doing their hard work for reader then they are not commenting on other ff but read waiting for your new ff and happy ending.
Exactly arati di this only I m trying to say..u know in the same page all the writers r getting sufficient comments nd only me getting 12 comments its really hurt di..each nd every writer uses their half energy to write a ff nd if not sufficient comments than seriously the writer have to end their ff..nd thanx arati di..u always supported me..luv u di
Heyy addu…it was soo cute…
Bt i m sad u ended it…
Abb plzz jaldi se new ff start karna..ok i ll b waiting…achha ek baat batau me na ye comment mere kunj se type karva rahi hu….nd he is getting irritated nd m enjoying….soo ab smile karna ur jiju has commented…haha???..
Well luv u …cya
Hey fatima plz dont be sad..soon i will start new ff…aur jiju se typing kra rhe ho..acha h..thank u jiju for commenting…
Why why why ????? Why did you end the ff … I won’t talk to you Katti ? The episode was so sweet just loved it …. You should have not needed the ff … But now after you have done it start the new ff as soon as possible …. Love you but I am still angry on you …. Si start the new ff soon ❤
Hey mili di plz dont be sad..soon i will start a new ff..aur han thank u di u always supported me in this journey.. i really luv u di. Ab mere se plz gussa mat ho..
Adeebu I m sorry for not commenting on previous epi . Actually I m having a severe headache because of which i haven’t opened the TEI page for previous days.. i was just writing my ffs.. wo bhi Priya be bolA tha is liye .. warna i was not in a mood to write anything.. pata nhi kiya kiya likh diya .. or tera ff bhi nhii padh paayi.. sorry Jaan. .. I m really very sorry ..
But tu ne end ker diya.. yarrr itna acha ff tha.. ab jaldi come back with a new one.. coz i can’t wait to read another ff of yours.. plssssssss mujhy maaf ke day mere sir me bht pain tha… Sorry ????????????
Or haan tu thik keh rahi hai… Pata nhi readers kyun comment nhi Kerty . Yarrr sb ko kerna chahiye kyunki hum writers itna hardwork Kerty hain likhny ke liye or fir jab comments na mily to such mein bht hurt hoty Hain.. i can understand.. mere Sath bhi yehi horaha hai or fir me toh 3 ffs likh rahi Hun…. I know kitna time lagta hai likhny ke liye or fir apny busy schedule se time nikal ke likhna bht mushkil kaam hai.. or fir studies .. bht mushkil hota hai or jab comments na mily to bht Rona aata hai seriously mujhy to bht aata hai….!!!
Acha now I m waiting for you..
Love you loads my soutan
Hey my soutan plz dont be sorry i understand ur problem aur han thank u for ur support mujhe bhi acha nai lag rha apna ff end krna but less comments ki wajah se mujhe end krna pada…aur han hm writers ko bht mehnat lagata h ff likhne ke liye but agar comments nai milenge toh hame bura toh lage na…aur abhi tera headache kaisah? APNA dhyaan rakhna…aur main jaldi neww ff ke saath aungi…luv u meri soutan..
nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii adeeba di u cant end it because of less comments
aapne toh kha bhi tha ki dont be disappoint with less comments no u cant do this to me u cant end it noooooooooooooooo u know naa their exams are going but dont worry u r toh count in best writers nd m sorry 4 not commenting on ur pre episode bt what to do…
aur vais ebhi i have to leave tu obn 31st march pls till then write some os 4 me please u write sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo no words marvelous atleast u write ff and see me 5s pr hi atki hui hooon
luv u sooooooo much adu di..
Hey meri ariya jaan…first time tu comment kr rhi h…thnx yrr..aur han main ek os try karungi likhne ka..lekin kya tu TU hamesha ke liye chod rhi h? Yrrr aisa mat kar janemaan..aur mujhe end krna pada cause of less comments..kya karun ab main…anyways luv u..bachaa
hmm i have to leave tu for forever but i will definitely come back with an os on my birthday…. i will miss u all alot…
u know till 14 yrs of my life i have never get any true friend or sis who can understand me even though i have 1 real sis who is of ur age and 1 younger bro who is js 7 and so many cousins but u all are the best…luv u a lot… <3 <3
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Wonderful episode my cutie my princess and why you ended it I loved your this ff to the core I know I don’t able to comment on some episodes but I still readed all only for you,you are the best writer ever…
You are my favorite
I don’t wanted you to end it so soon how beautifully you writed this story but I am not angry with you, how can I angry with my princess my lovely &my cutie little sis& I know your brain is full of new ideas so you will come soon with another mind-blowing story
And I am warning you don’t get sad about comments how many times I have to tell you comments are nothing in front of your beautiful writings be happy with the comments you got with so much love ,if you again get sad na then I will not talk to u so choice is yours you be happy or be sad for making me sad also but I believe you that you will not make your Di sad
Bye
Love you so so so……………………………………..
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Hey my sweet di..thank u for ur support…i m not sad di..i know i write well..but if not sufficient comments than only i took this decision… but yaa..soon i will come up..wid new story nd i will never make my di sad cause i luv u..my sweetie…
Adee my cutei mujhse gussa ho?????????????????? sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? but kya karun yaar you know na that I’ve very very very very very verrrrrrrrrrrrrrry hectic schedule nd not getting time to read ffs bahooooooot mushkil se time nikal pati hun ??????????? Sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ?? but please
gussa mat hona.
Well your ff was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb. Loved it’s journey so much. You are really very good writer. Come soon with next.
Love you ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
Hey didu sorry kyu bolte ho..u dont need to..i know u r bzy..nd thank you for ur support didu in this journey…
Such a cute ff dear I love your ff a lot but I’m disappointed as u discontinued it and plz come back with a new ff and plz do continue with ur ss yaar I love it
Hey sushmitha thnx yrr..u always supported me..dear nd yaa soon I will start a new ff.luv u..
Heyy aduuu
Dis is not fair
How can u end dis dat to bcoz of less comment not fair mujhe bohat bura lag raha hai
Tu na jab bhi mai busy hoti hu aisi harkate karti rehti hai I mean episode end karna aise wali I’m angry on u for dis
But awesome amazing episode
It really awesome journey of ir story
Love u
N come back soon varna I think u know
Love u keep smiling
Hey di sorry but i have to end..but soon i will come up wid new story.nd plz..don’t be angry.. aur han..thanx for ur support..luv u..
nice..lovly..ending
plzzzzzzzzz.come..back..soon
Thnx maha..luv u..
Hawwww this is not fair yaar adeeba ..
Umm pehle to i am soooo sorry for late comment yaar and that too last episode yaar y ???? I was in love with this ff but koi nahi u have to come back with another one soon ….
This ff overall journey was superbbb year each n every bit either it’s twinj romance twiraj freindship kuhi bond or anything was just wonderful yaar loved it to the core enjoyed the whole journey …
Will miss this ff n u too ??????
Love u ,????
Hey samu plz..don’t say sorry..u r really amazing di..acha thnx for ur support di…nd i will come up wid new story soon..luv u di..
Heyyy aduuuuu…..
Yrr tune mera dil vil today Diya….Agar tune less comment k wajah SE end Kiya h toh yrr tune achaa no Kiya bilkul mere sath…. Tujhe Maine bola tha na m busy hoon Iss week isliye comment ni Kiya Tha yrr….Par fir v tu gussa hoo Gyi or FF end kr Diya…..Hmmmm
Tera ye FF mujhe itna pasand that ki Avi v sare epi save h mere pass offline read krne k liye…..
It was really very sweet lovely cuteee amazing superb excellent outstanding FF yrr….Twirwj Ruhi or uv ki bond and Twinj BHT psnd the meko….
PR tujhe m ek hi condition PR Jane de RHI hoo …… Promish Kr ki tu APNA ff mere birthday SE phele start kregi…..Or mujhe use FF k more than 100 epis chahye….. Samjhi tu…..Ye mere wish ni order h tujhe yrr Teri sis cum friend SE…..Or I hope ki Iss bar tu mujhe disappoint ni kregi….
Yrr ye tu wale mera comment ek baar m kiu ni post krte third baar likh RHI hoon….I hope ki Iss baar post hoo haye( fingers crossed)……
OK bye
Take care
loveeeeee youuuuuuuu my darling sweetuuu cutipie??????????????????????????????????????????
Miss uuuuuu
Please come back soon with ur FF yrr……
Mai intzar krungi tera…..
Tu APNA whatsup no Yaa fb I’d de Sakti h meko tujhse chat krni h…..agar tu Okkk h toh….
Chal yrr bye
Hey amaya sorry yrr chal tera bday kab h…vaise maine apna new ff ka intro post kr diya h..acha main fb mein nai hun but insta mein hun..agar tu insta mein h toh mera id adeeba khan 10 h…nd thank u for ur support
Mera birthday 6 April ko h .. .I will read ur new FF intro. . .Well love you too infinity babes ?????
Amazing cute epi
Nice
Haii debuuuuuu I’m really going to miss this ff… Again no use of saying…. But I’m really feeling very sad…. And ur new ff… Amazing…. Beautiful episode yaar debuuuuuu… Ur such a amazing writer keep it up yaar…. Well done…. I’m really blessed to have sis like u….
Oye addy ki bachii….. :l
Kun end kia haan….matlab cmnts nhi mil rhe merko bade milte hai huh…..m angry bt apne addy se kaisee angriiee ho sktI hun…yaar tujhe pata haina how mch I use to love ur ff…still bt promise me n dare u end ur odr ff I luv dat one toh or jyada samjhii…usee end krne ka sochna bhi mat voh bhi iss siillyy rsn ki vajah se….kunki I wont talk to u den….. :l I wish I culd show u my angry face wid a pout….hahaa…..yaar…srsly a blissful jouney wid ur ff…I use to love it….n still love it wont forget it….adorable n cute….wid emotional thing….well srsly vry beautiful ruhi got a sis…ohhh I wish I 2 had 1….. 🙂
Loved d last episode which begins wid a new jouney…..love u…. 🙂
Post nxt thing soon… 🙂
Awesome amazing fantastic yrr…..
My birthday is on 12 April…..
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