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I committed a sin [episode 1]

Shubhangi1By Shubhangi1March 16, 201717 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello beautiful people!!
I hope u enjoy the epi.

episode-1

Maheshwari mansion……
A boy of 17 or 18 was sleeping in his bed. His faced reflected the purity and calmness of his heart. He looked so innocent while sleeping. The room looked clean. It only contained some pictures of him and other people. Suddenly a lady entered the room. She sat on the bed and started caressing his face. She started waking him up.
Lady- sanskar beta wake up……sanskar see u also have to go to college na ……chalo wake up.

Sanskar- no mom plz i want to sleep more…..
He kept his face in her lap and again started sleeping.
Mom- beta no chalo wake upp
She started shaking him. Atlast he wake up. He was about to hug his mom but everything went black he felt like his mother was going far away from him.
Sanskar-[shouts with taears in his eyes] MOM!!!
He started breathing heavily. When he calmed down he realized that this all was just a dream.
His eyes got filled with tears
Sanskar -[whispered] mom….

Suddenly he wipes his tears abruptly.
Sanskar- no sanskar no need to fall weak they r no one no one….they r betrayer nothing more[shouts] u people r no one to meeee…….
Still one tear slipped his eye.
He got out of his bed and got ready for office. He ate his breakfast and went to office in his car.
He was driving to his office suddenly his eyes caught a boy proposing a girl. He looked towards them and started remembering his past.

Flashback…….
A boy is seen proposing a girl.
Boy- [ with lots of love] I love u…..u ……i love u sooo much my darling.
He holds her hand and slides a ring in her finger.
Boy- [whispers] I love u….
Seeing the ring the girl became shocked. She started shouting.
Girl- wowwww!![takes her hand from his hand] oh my god this ring is so beautiful sanskar…..ahh…I just love it….. u wait here I am going to show it my friends yayyyyy…….
Saying this she runs from there. Seeing her running away sanskar became sad.
Sanskar- its ok….she was just excited…..she for;got to tell but she only loves u.
He smiles sadly and goes from there.

Flashback…….
Tears formed in his eyes.
Sanskar- why u did like that with me…..y……I love u so much…….ahhhhhh! I hate u…..
Saying this he hits his hand on the steering wheel and drives away. But while going he got a message. He took his phone to check the meassage but someone bumped with his car. He immediately got out and found out that it was a lady.
Lady- ahhhh can’t u see while driving…..
Hearing her he became very angry.
Sanskar- what the hell….how dare u talk to me like that…
He holded her with her sholder and jerked her.
Lady- r u mad do u have any sense Iit was ur fault and u r talking to me like that
Sanskar- uuuu…..women like u I know very much….u want money right here take it[throws money on her face] now just get lost.

Lady- r u even in ur senses.
Sanskar- ohhh plz shut up I knW girlas like u only roam.around rich people to get money right…..blo*dy….
A girl who standing in the crowd and was listening to the whole conversation became angry ? listening to sanskar. She went there and gave a tight slap to sanskar.
Chtackkkkk!! Everyone standing there became shocked specially sanskar. Sanskar had his hand on his cheek. First he disn’t understood what happened but when he realised. He became hell angry. It seemed like someone has awaken the beast in him.
Sanskar- uuu…..how dare u slap me….do u know who I am ….huh….i am SANSKAR MAHESHWARI THE BUSINESS TYCOON who can destroy ur life in second.

Girl- [angry] shut up! Don’t u have any manners u stupid first u hit her with the car and then blaming and disrespecting her….r u out of ur mind[points her finger] and listen I don’t care u the hell r u…I don’t give a damn….but next time learn to respect someone…..and if u did something like this again then I …. Swara gadodia would again come and give u a tight slap……stupid cheapo…..
Saying this swara goes from there with the lady. Also the crowd dispersed from there. While sanskar was standing there boiling in anger. He had the fire of revenge burning inside him.

Sanskar-[angry] u will pay for it I will make ur life hell[smirks] Swara gadodia I will make u regret what u did….u r a very independent woman who can’t see injustice or bad happening to anyone right huhhhh I would make u beg for happiness….this independent girl would be this much broken that she could never be complete. And that time no one would come to ur aid[smirks] get ready ms. Gadodia the time is ticking tick-tock tick tock……

He also went from there.
One the other hand swara went to a well known office and applied for job. She also got selected for the job. She was very happy and went home to her home.

Sanskar’s office
Sanskar was sitting on his chair and smirking.
Sanskar-[hatred filled. Voice] now lets see what u will do after knowing that u the greats swara gadodia has been appointed as my PA. Lets see [smirks]

Next day…..sanskar’s office

Sanskar was sitting on his chair. He has opened the cctv in his laptop. He was waiting for swara. He saw swra entering the office. He smirks evily. He turns his chair to the other side such that his back is facing the door. He leans his head back and closes his eyes while smirking. He was waiting for his prey. Swara knocked the door of his cabin and asked in her angelic voice.
Swara-[independently] may I come in sir?
Sanskar-[smirks] [whispers] now the game begins [loudly] come in.
Swara- sir I am ur new Pa s……
Sanskar turns his chair . Swara gets surprised seeing him.
Sanskar- swara gadodia…..right?

Swara- [angry] what r u doing here?
Sanskar- shhhhhh……keep ur volume low in my office and I expect u to behave professionally in my office ms. Gadodia
Swara- sorry sir…..but…..
Sanskar- ms. Gadodia lets forget whatever happened yesterday……now u r my pa so we will behave professionally okay?
Swara was surprised seeing his behaviour.
Swara- yes sir.
Sanskar-mmm…..so u have to take care of my schedule……u can ask swathi regarding the information of ur job. And yes I don’t like latecomers and anyone means anyone interfering in my life.m

Swara- yes sir.
Sanskar- now u can go from here and start ur work from today only.
Swara-ok sir.
Swara leaves from there. She was impressed seeing his professionalism. But was still not liking his yesterday’s behaviour. She went from there to swathi and her cabin. Sanskar smirks evily seeing her going.
He opens the cctv of swara’s cabin. He sees her working.

Sanskar- [devilish voice filled with hate] hahahah first stage of revenge completed…..now lets see ms. Swara who would save u from me…..from now on the countdown of destroying ur life starts…. Hahahah[laughs evily]……
Screen stops on sanskar’s hatred filled face and swara determined working image…….

Precap-leap of 1 month….swara noticing sanskar’s loneliness.
So….here was the episode. Do tell me how was the epi.
What would be sanskar’s revenge?
What would swara do?
What will happen?

What sin will be committed and by whom?
For the answer of all these questions stay tuned to I COMMITTED A SIN

BYE…….

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    17 Comments

    1. raina on March 16, 2017 7:39 pm

      nice one.

    2. Rajkumari on March 16, 2017 7:43 pm

      Beatifull… really waw… soon updates pls

    3. mica on March 16, 2017 8:15 pm

      aweeeeeeeee…some.. love it

    4. Swasan on March 16, 2017 8:19 pm

      Awesome

    5. Simi on March 16, 2017 9:35 pm

      Good one.. ?

    6. zelena81196 on March 16, 2017 9:35 pm

      amazing start….update soon….swara should commit a sin….

    7. a on March 16, 2017 9:44 pm

      nice..

    8. bharu on March 16, 2017 10:22 pm

      superbb dear…I really loved it…the plot was awesome…continue it dear..we r here to support u..all d best for ur further episodes dear…waiting for the twists in the story..we will have a great time with ur story dear…post soon..bye take care..

    9. Simin on March 16, 2017 10:23 pm

      Wowwww diii
      Super duper awesome
      I m telling u ahead only i dont want sad endings
      So plz make it all goody goody

    10. mariya on March 16, 2017 10:48 pm

      Awesome Amazing interesting . continue soon.

    11. Pramudi on March 16, 2017 11:59 pm

      Awesome..

    12. neeti on March 17, 2017 1:59 am

      Interesting, please post the next eopisode

    13. swasan on March 17, 2017 7:40 am

      Awesome dear… Swasan k tadak bhadak wali first meeting… Waiting for more ?????

    14. Soujanya on March 17, 2017 10:19 am

      Awesome

    15. anu on March 17, 2017 11:35 am

      awesome

    16. Arshaanya on March 17, 2017 6:39 pm

      Nyc

    17. sumayyah on March 19, 2017 8:03 pm

      love it

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