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Home»Fan Fiction»My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 20
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My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 20

rj12By rj12March 15, 201715 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hi guys rithika here

Why I’m not getting comments haan, yeh ff itna bura laga??? I think I’ll have to bring the sneak peek track warna u’ll not comment

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DevAkshi reaches to the college

Dev : Lo ur college came

He say’s with a smile looking at her, she smiled back and held his hand

Sona : Come

She was about to walk but he pulled her closer to him

Dev : Aise kaise, ur bf is so nice and good see how he obeyed u and came here as u ordered him toh tumhara bhi farz banta hai na to give him his reward?

He say’s this pointing to her lips winking at her

Sona : Haw!! What do u mean u r good and I’m bad huh!

She hits His hard tone chest saying this

Dev : Arey Sona but I obeyed u and …
Sona : Shut up Dev, I’m ur gf so u have to obey me got that
Dev : Huh! I was talking about the kiss darling y r u changing the subject like a typical wife

He said pulling her closer to him with a cute smile

Sona : U have to make use of it Dev because it will be useful in future
Dev : Haan sure darling

He say’s raising his eyebrows and hugs her

Sona: Dev what is this leave me we r standing outside the college
Dev : Toh what should I do hugging isn’t a crime right, waise bhi I’m hugging my gf only

He hugs her more tightly just then

Voice : Ahem….Ahem

They gets startled hearing a voice… releases the hug immediately and finds Vicky and Elena standing giggling, they gets embarrassed

Elena : (teases) Sona, bhai kya chal raha hai huh!(giggles)

Sona bows down her head in shyness whereas Dev runs his finger in his hairs with a smile

Vicky : And Dev what r u doing here with my sis

He say’s this with fake anger for which Dev raises his eyebrows

Dev : Same to u what r u doing with my sis huh!
Vicky : Woh… I…
Elena : (cuts off) Rehne do Vicky u can’t win over bhai(smirks)
Vicky : Huh! Supporting ur bhai then what about me I’m ur would be hubby right

He says pulling her closer to him

Elena : Vicky stop it (blushes)

She pushes him and he laughs, Dev smiles and looks at Sona who was still standing shying, He smiles and holds her hand

Dev : Come darling let’s go

Sona nodes with smile and they were about to walk just then

Voice : Guys I’m also coming

They looks back and finds Ayan smiling like monkey

Dev : Ayan
Ayan : Haan me u toh left me Alone and came here very bad but see now I came how can miss any feast
Vicky : Wow nice but which stupid told u about feast that u came here (grinned)
Ayan : Haha it’s u only, I followed u and Ele

Vicky gets shocked while others laughs

Sona : Correct Ayan 1st time in ur life u had said right by calling bhai as idiot
Ayan : Haan I know waise Sona pizza arrangement is made in feast right because I came here specially for my love my pizza

Sona gives him a death glare and he gulps in fear and others chuckle, Natasha comes there

Natasha : Dev u here

She asks being surprised, Dev looks back and smiles while Sona looks on angrily

Dev : Hey hi Nats(smiles)
Natasha : Hi Dev

Natasha extends her hands to hug him and like always Ayan comes in between but Natasha pushes him and hugs Dev

Ayan : Ah!!!!

He rubs his back, all laugh. Natasha releases the hug and looks at him

Natasha : From now on wards don’t come in between me and Dev nahi tho yahi haal hoga tumhaara hai na Dev

Dev : Yes Nats, savdan dude

Sona gets angry and jealous

Sona : U (turns to Dev)(mocks) Yes Nats …huh! What do u mean by that no one should come between u both, right alright bye enjoy

She leaves from there angrily While he widens his eyes seeing her jealousy but smiles

Vicky : dude stop smiling and go manao usse, don’t u know it’s very difficult to lessen girls anger, girls becomes angry birds and we boys will end up being fieary birds (looks at Elena)
Elena : huh! Don’t overreact Vicky it’s because u boys we get angry
Vicky : But
Dev : (interrupts) Guys I’m going u both carry on

Vicky and Elena nod and Dev smiles and leaves from there while Natasha was looking confusedly

Natasha : (confused) Ele….y Sonu got angry and y r u asking Dev to go behind her
Elena : Uffo Nats we forgot to tell u that Sona’s secret admire is non other than bhai
Natasha : What!!! Dev!!! How come
Elena : WO ( she say’s everything)
Natasha : Aw!! Dev loves Sona so much
Elena : Haan I know (smiles)

Sona was sitting with a angry face, Dev comes there smiles seeing her and goes towards her and sits beside her

Dev : Sona

He calls her so lovingly, she looks at him in anger and turns her face he smiles and keeps his hand on her waist she angrily jerks his hand, he shakes his head and smiles seeing her anger

Dev : Darling ….sorry..I …

His words left incomplete as a boy interrupts them

Boy : Sona
Sona : (looks at him) Rahul tum
Rahul : Sona don’t get angry I didn’t came to propose u again I just came to inform you tat dean asked u to come in music room he wants to discuss about some music arrangements
Sona : Oh!! Okay I will come And Rahul I’m not angry on u any more

She say’s this with a smile for which Dev gets angry and jealous

Rahul : Oh thank u Sona u r so sweet

Rahul pulls her cheeks, Sona smiles and Dev gets up and pushes Rahul little away in jealousy

Dev : Hey stay away
Rahul : It’s my wish and who r u to advice me (to Sona) u know him

Dev looks at her for her reply

Sona : No I don’t know him might be some road side romeo leave it and come let’s go

Dev looks on shock but smiles seeing her anger, she was about to go but he holds her wrist and she turns angrily

Sona : what the hell leave me
Dev : Darling u very well know tat I won’t leave u
Rahul : Hey Mr…
Dev : (cuts off) U better close ur shit mouth

He say’s angrily and Rahul gulps seeing his anger

Sona : Enough!!! 1st u shut ur mouth and leave my hand
Dev : Sweetheart itna gussa isn’t good for health I’m sorry my love please apologize ur love
Rahul : Love
Dev : Yes I’m her love and u r her bhaiya got that

He say’s this raising his eyebrows giving him a death glare

Rahul : (gulps) Sona bye I have to leave

He leaves from there Sona looks at Dev and angrily jerks his hand

Sona : Get lost Dev go and enjoy with ur Nats I’m not coming in between u both

She leaves from there angrily

Dev : Hey!! Her anger will surely kill me once

He shakes his head thinks something and smiles

Here

Sona : What do he think of himself … stupid fellow … Idiot huh!

Just then she hears “ This is for u my love sorry darling ” Sona gets startled and whispers

Sona : Dev!!

She turns and finds a boy playing guitar who’s back was facing her

tally-ho
tally-ho…

ton sourire m’ensorcelle
je suis fou de toi.
le désir coule dans mes veines
guidé par ta voix.
ton sourire m’ensorcelle
je suis fou de toi.

{Sona tries to see the person but some girls starts dancing behind the boy playing guitar the girls clears and there comes our cute handsome hero our Dev with cute smile Sona widens her eyes seeing him }

nashe si chaRh gayi oye
kuRi nashe si chaRh gayi
patang si laR gayi oye
kuRi patang si laR gayi

{ he walks towards Sona pointing her with cute smile and stands in front of her she was just looking him with widen eyes and does steps according to the song}

aise khainche dil ke penche
gale hi paR gayi oye

{He winks at her and pulls her closer to him she looks at him angrily and jerks him and was about to leave but he holds her wrist not letting her to do so all come there and smiles }

nashe si chaRh gayi oye
kuRi nashe si chaRh gayi
patang si lad gayi oye
kuRi patang si laR gayi

{And pulls her closer to him keeping his hands on her waist while she struggles as he tightens his grip on her pulling her more on him he sings the above lines pulling her cheeks and kisses her cheeks}

O uRti patang jaise
mast malang jaise
masti si chaRh gayi
humko turant aise
lagti current jaise
nikla warrant jaise
abhi abhi utra ho
net se torrent jaise

{He holds her finger and twirls her over and over singing the above lines while Sona clutches his shirt tightly in fear}

nashe si chaRh gayi oye
kuRi nashe si chaRh gayi
patang si laR gayi oye
kuRi patang si laR gayi

{He stops and back hugs the whole college was just looking at them which makes Sona embarrassed and she was about to move but he pulls her more closer to him crushing his hard tone chest on her back}

khulti basant jaise
dhulta kalank jaise
dil ki daraar mein ho
pyaar ka cement jaise
ankhiyon hi ankhiyon mein jang ki front jaise
mil jaaye sadiyon se aTka refund jaise

{She gets angry and hits him by elbow pushing him away she walks angrily while he goes behind her lip sing the above lines and comes in front her stopping her way she gives him a death glare but he smiles and touches her face lovingly pulling her in his arms}

zubaan pe chaRh gayi oye
kuRi zubaan pe chaRh gayi
lahoo mein baRh gayi oye
kuRi lahoo mein baRh gayi

{He moves closer to her caressing her lips lovingly and brushes his lips on her soft rosy lips she widens her eyes in shock. He winks at her pulling her more closer to him by her waist and instantly places his rough lips on her soft yet rosy lips. Whereas Elena keeps her palms on Vicky and Ayan’s eyes who were staring them with a widen mouth}

Nashe si chadh gayi oye
Kudi nashe si chadh gayi
Patang si lad gayi oye
Kudi patang si lad gayi (x2)

She melts forgetting about the surrounding and reciprocate the kiss. His hands were placed on her waist while her’s one hand finds its way to his hairs and caresses it lovingly yet passionately clutching his shirt with other one she kisses him hard showing all her anger he smiles between the kiss and pinches her wait she gasp taking it’s an opportunity he enters into her mouth their tongues intertwines perfectly tasting the sweet essences of their lovers. Its was a passionate kiss longing for last but broke due to lack of oxygen and were staring each other lovingly

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    Rithika Bhatia Study in 9th youngest in my family very stubborn but sweet, hate being called cute sweet and all crazy & mental with my friends & family but I change myself out?

    15 Comments

    1. Rekhadhir on March 15, 2017 4:19 pm

      Awesome dear

    2. Princess on March 15, 2017 4:31 pm

      Awesome episode dear but plzz post the next episode soon as possible and u really write amazing

    3. Ritika on March 15, 2017 5:04 pm

      too good. noooo plz don’t bring the sneak peek track.

      • rj12 on March 15, 2017 5:51 pm

        hehe I will bring it bus kuch episodes ki baat hai

    4. akshita on March 15, 2017 5:06 pm

      The way you write I just love it PLzzz post soon yr

    5. Richa144 on March 15, 2017 6:19 pm

      Too good dear.. Awesome..Do post soon

    6. V.V.harshita on March 15, 2017 8:11 pm

      Arrey yaar….kaisa math karoo….mein marjaungi….don’t bring tht sneak peek dude….I beg u ….and it was fab!! Awsome!! Lovable!! Speechless!! Post soon ???

    7. Heshine on March 16, 2017 4:40 pm

      Hey Rithika..! This was juz splendid..!
      After a long time u have posted..! And its awesome..!
      And juz read all ur ss u posted btwn..! It was short yet sweet..! Sorry couldn’t cmnt..! Was in a work so..!
      Believe me..! This was juz an awesome epi,.! I must say..!
      Don’t worry abt the cmnts.!
      And yeah..! Wats abt the sneak peak..!?? Anything serious around devakshi..! Sorry dear haven’t looked through it…!!
      Anyways..! This was awesome..!
      Post soon..!?????

      • rj12 on March 16, 2017 5:01 pm

        Its very serious ???

      • rj12 on March 16, 2017 5:03 pm

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/secret-admire-devakshi-sneak-peek-2/
        Here is the sneak peek read it and get the shock of ur life

      • Heshine on March 16, 2017 5:16 pm

        What..! Oh my god…! Dear this is not at all fair..! Pls don’t get this track along…! Pls.
        And yeah thank you

      • rj12 on March 16, 2017 5:30 pm

        Everything is fair in love war and ff’s ????????

    8. Ritika on March 17, 2017 4:29 pm

      pehle next epi post karo uske baad yeh track lana. tum aur ek ff likhrahi thi na. woh bhi jaldi se post karo. tumhari ffs mujhe bohot pasand hai. tohwait maat karwao.

    9. priya12 on March 25, 2017 1:04 am

      Sry 4 the late cmt dr…dnt worry about cmts…and pls post soon
      Cmg 2 ghe epi..epi was lovely…

    10. Kashish on March 27, 2017 10:33 pm

      Plz update dear…25 th kab ki Chaligai…ab to update de do

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