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Home»Fan Fiction»TWINJ= I craved for love – SHOT 2
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TWINJ= I craved for love – SHOT 2

SimiyyBy SimiyyMarch 13, 201726 Comments10 Mins Read
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Shot 1

Hello everyone. I hope everyone who celebrated Holi enjoyed themselves . CP I loved the name you thought for Mahi and Chinki= Mahki LOL. Mia/Priya I will try to fulfil your wish in the next part.Thanks for your beautiful comments on the previous part everyone.
Continued

Twinkle was laying down in her room bed crying as she remembered what her sisters had said. She was supposed to be happy as her marriage just got fixed today with a person who loves her immensely. But she couldn’t stop her tears. There was a knock on her room door. It was her parents. She quickly wiped her tears and sat up properly. Leela came and sat on the bed next to her whilst RT stood up.
Leela= I can’t believe you have grown up so quickly that your getting married in less than a week, are you happy with this alliance?
Before Twinkle could reply RT spoke= Manohar is a good business man and it will be beneficial for our business if you get married to Kunj. Leela we have a lot to prepare for before she goes. Her parents leave.
Twinkle’s broken as no-one cares for her. Her phone rings and it was Kunj
Twinkle= Hello
Kunj= Hi, how are you now?

Before Twinkle could reply her sisters walked into her room. She quickly put her phone under the pillow without disconnecting it.
Mahi= Maa has asked for your measurements
Twinkle goes towards her cupboard and gives her comfortable salwar kameez as a measurement and gives it to Mahi.
Alisha= Twinkle what did Kunj see in you? I mean look at you ,you’re so plain and simple compared to me.
Mahi= Exactly , Alisha Di I don’t know what Jiju saw in Twinkle
Chinki= Di leave it lets go anyway Twinkle will be gone soon
Alisha= Chinki she will be gone in a few days lets disturb her as much as we can now. I wonder if you will be loved In your sasural (husbands family) Twinkle as no really cares for you here.
Kunj who was listening to this on the phone felt sad for her .But he also felt angry on her sisters.
Before anyone could say anything else Leela called them and they left her room. Twinkle burst into tears for a good few minutes she then remembered that Kunj was still on the phone.
Twinkle= You still have time, cancel the marriage. BYE she disconnected the call.
Kunj= I promise you Twinkle I will fill your life with beautiful colours. I will give you all the care and love you never got in your life he said to himself.

All the wedding preparations began with a bang. The invitation cards were made first. RT decided to get Twinkle married in the house as it would be cheap and easy. If it was Alisha, Mahi or Chinki he would get them married in a 7******* hotel. All the clothes were designed too. Alisha, Mahi and Chinki probably spent more money than Twinkle. Twinkle used her own earned money to get whatever she needed. Guest had arrived and the wedding ceremonies had started. Twinkle and Kunj only met each other once after that day and it was the engagement day. They didn’t say anything but their eyes spoke. The rest of the functions took palace too.
The Wedding Day had arrived. Not like normal brides Twinkle was not dressed by her sisters or friends. She had to dress herself up as everyone else was busy in getting ready themselves. She looked beautiful in her Red and cream lengha with gold embroidery that the Sarna had gifted her. Her jewellery elegantly matched her. Her sisters entered her room some time later and were shocked to see how pretty she was looking. Before they could say anything for the first time Twinkle spoke.

Twinkle= You all must be happy that I am going now. They were shocked to hear Twinkles words. She continued don’t be shocked I know that you 3 never considered me as a sister for some reason. You only wanted me when you needed me for your own good. It didn’t matter to you if I lived or died. I’m finally going today. I will try to make sure you don’t see my face again or that often.
TWINKLE= Leela said in a loud voice with RT standing next to her looking at her angrily
Leela= Yeh kya kahri hai (what are you saying?)
Twinkle= Sach (truth)
RT= Yeh kya bakwas hai, koi apne behein sai aisa baat karta hai(what nonsense is this? Does anyone talk to their sisters like this?)
Twinkle= why papa whenever Alisha,Mahi or Chinki would talk to me like this you would say nothing cause you only loved them. Aaapne to kabhi mujhe pyar hi nai kiya isliye kyonki jab mein aur tarun pehda hui to who 6 maihine ke baad margya. (you never loved me because when me and Tarun wereborn 6 months laterhe died). It wasn’t my fault that he died. He was my twin brother papa. You always wanted a son and when you had one he passed away when he was 6 months and your daughter I stayed alive. I bet wished I had died instead.
RT = TWINKLE but she continues to talk

Aapne aur maa ne toh mujhe akela chor diya. (you and mum left me alone to grow up independently )Aaapke liye sirf Alisha, Mahi aur chinki aapke betiyan hai jisi app pyar karte ho, mein to sirf naam ki beti hoon. (for you Alisha, Mahi and Chinki are your daughter who you love, I am only your daughter for namesake.
Leela= Beta aisi koy baat nahi hai (daughter its nothing like that)
Twinkle= Aisa he hain maa, aaj toh yeah boujh chali jaygi app saab ke zindagi se (its like that mum, today this burden will go from your life)
Everyone in the room were shocked with her outburst .They knew that she was right and it was probably too late now. Her parents were a shamed of their behaviour as they never knew this is what Twinkle felt like for 23 years. Her sisters were embarrassed of their behaviour. Before anyone could say anything the dhol noises were heard and everyone went down to welcome the bharrat.
Kunj arrived in a black Mercedes. He was wearing a cream and gold sherwani. He was welcomed with love. Everyone came and settled in well.

Twinkles Room
SORRY she heard her sisters say
Twinkle= its ok she said even though she still had pain in her heart
They knew that Twinkle was still hurt. The took her downstairs where everyone was awestruck with her beauty. Kunj looked at her and smiled. She was made to sit next to Kunj and the marriage ceremony began. The Sarna were very happy whilst the Taneja were still feeling guilty. The marriage was complete and Twinkle was now MRS Twinkle Kunj Sarna. The couple took blessings from everyone.
One lady= Her mehndi colour has come out really dark. Kunj loves her a lot probably.
Another lady= Your saying the truth Sunita (ladies name)they also make such a beautiful couple like they have been made in heaven

Everyone smiles. Sometime later the Bidaai ceremony happens. Everyone was actually upset. They actually treated Twinkle like a Taneja daughter/ sister for the first time. During the Bidaai time everyone actually cried. Twinkle had some tears in her eyes only . She sat down in the car next to Kunj as the journey to her new home began. She looked at Kunj who was smiling at her, she actually smiled back too. For some unknown reason Twinkle leaned towards Kunj and put her head on his shoulder. He smiled and held her and then entangled their hands together. The journey was quiet. After 20 minutes they reached Sarna Mansion.Kunj came out of the car first and gave his hand forward soTwinkle can hold it. She held his hand and proceeded towards the house with her husband. Twinkle saw that the house was decorated like a palace. Dhols were being played as they walked towards the door roses were being thrown to them. It was the first time she felt so special her life. They stopped at the entrance where Bebe did their aarti and welcomed her in her new home. They were about to enter when Aliya and Maya stopped them.
A/M= STOP

Kunj smiled and gave them money= Babi app bhi lo he said to Niki (Babi you take some too)
Niki= Thank you Devar Ji
He was about to enter the house when Usha stopped him
Usha= Kunj have you forgotten our family tradition.
Twinkle looked confused. Usha continues
Usha= You have to carry Twinkle and bring her in the house in your arms.
Twinkle looks shocked whilst everyone else smiles and hoot for them. Kunj carried Twinkle in her arms and brought her inside, whilst everyone else cheered. Some post marriage rituals had happened then Twinkle and Kunj were sent upstairs to their room.
They entered the room and saw it was decorated beautifully in red roses and candles. It was quiet for some time until Kunj started to talk.
Kunj= Twinke I always wanted to take a selfie with my wife on our wedding day, so…
Twinkle shook her head and they both took a few selfies. Twinkle smiled as she saw the love Kunj had in her eyes for her.

Twinkle= Since when do you like me sir?
Kunj= Kunj not sir, I am your husband
Twinkle= I mean Kunj
Kunj= since the day you started work, your elegance made me fall for you, your simplicity everything about you. Ever since our marriage got fixed I have fallen for you more.
Twinkle was shocked as no-one had ever loved her before.
Kunj continue= But one thing was always missing from your face, your smile, I have never seen you smile. At office I would always call in my cabin just to get a glimpse of you. I just wanted you to smile.
Twinkle could see true love in Kunjs eyes. She hugged him and broke into tears. He reciprocated the hug and tried to make her calm down.After a few minutes he broke the hug and made Twinkle sit down on the bed and sat down next to her. He gave her some water and made her drink it. He then made her put her head on his chest and she spoke. She told him who she was always treated differently and was never loved by her family. She told him how she craved to be loved by someone. She said with some tears in her eyes. She then closed her eyes in Kunj embrace.
Kunj= Twinkle I promise to give you all the love you have craved for. I promise to make you have a better future where we will be together and I will shower you with love.
He suddenly felt some weight on him and saw that Twinkle had fallen asleep on his chest. He smiled at her innocents and kissed her forehead and fell asleep holding her firmly.
I hope you all enjoyed it.

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Loads of Love Simiyy

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    26 Comments

    1. Kiya on March 13, 2017 3:46 pm

      Nice episode post soon ?❤❤❤❤❤❤?❤️??

    2. Sameera on March 13, 2017 3:56 pm

      Hayeee simmy soooo cute yaar twinj scenes loved it mahki ????actually sounds good and yeah twinkle did right they should be more guilty plzz show some scenes nah plsh where tanejas were feeling guilty for mistreating twinkle plzz …
      Anyways the episode was amazing loved it ???????

    3. Aamna_2690 on March 13, 2017 4:00 pm

      Hey simiyy!
      .
      This is such a lovely TS??
      I really enjoyed it☺
      I am really sorry… I wasn’t able to comment on ur last shot as my preparatory xm are going on… hope u don’t mind…
      Loved Kunj’s care n love for twinkle❤❤Felt bad for twinkle ??She always craved for love??
      Post next shot soon☺
      Loads of love ??

    4. Sohi on March 13, 2017 4:20 pm

      It was fantastic
      Twinkles family deserve that
      Happy that twinj got married
      Do continue

    5. Presha on March 13, 2017 4:25 pm

      hey simiyy its just marvellous …
      i just loved it yaar…
      to good…
      twinkle outburst tanejas guilt kunj love sarnas love for twinkle,……..just loved it yaar…
      love u…
      post soon…

    6. Joonakanksha on March 13, 2017 4:46 pm

      Awesome dear

    7. Sushmitha on March 13, 2017 4:51 pm

      Aww!! Cute episode simmy I loved it and plz show some romance in the next part if you can ❤❤❤

    8. SidMin on March 13, 2017 4:53 pm

      Aww Just loved it …
      I really felt happy with Twinkle’s outburst and the Taneja’s guilt … they must feel guilty after what all they have done …
      Loved Kunj’s concern for Twinkle and his promise to give her the love she craved for ….. Sarna’s are a very good and sweet family 🙂
      Love you 🙂 Post soon 🙂
      Happy Holi 🙂

    9. Cp on March 13, 2017 4:57 pm

      Superbb and cute episodeeeee ????
      Twinkle’s emotions Wonderfully written???and mahki?is perfect for them?
      Post next soon sim dii????

    10. aleena on March 13, 2017 5:09 pm

      Simiyyyyyyyy!!!!!!
      ???????????
      Loved it to the core!!!!!
      Love you!!!! ???
      Post next soon!!!! ??
      See Ya!!??

    11. maha on March 13, 2017 5:52 pm

      toooooo..awsm..cute..heart..touching..epi
      post..soon

    12. adeeba_zain on March 13, 2017 6:10 pm

      Simiyy..simiyy..simiyy..I don’t have words to explain…the episode was just spectacular marvelous superb…nd wat not..well the last part..when twinkle hugged kunj was fantastic…
      Post soon..
      Luv u..
      Bye..

    13. Uc on March 13, 2017 6:17 pm

      Soooososossooo daaaaammnnn guuuud

    14. mia12 on March 13, 2017 7:24 pm

      Ohh my ghosh simmy how can u write sooooooo well,,????.. ufff sometimes its left me speechless yarr,,??.. truly no word’s to tell,,☺☺.. And this episode was just MARVELOUS,,??????.. twinkle out bursting was just AWESOME,,??.. But they should be never get forgiveness from twinkle,,??.. coz what dey did it was really bad,,??..
      And twinj scean uffff it was soooooo beautiful,,????????????…
      I just loved it to the CORE,,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤.. Plzz plzz post next soonish,,??.. and don’t end it soon I wanna read more,,??..
      Load’s of love..?❤?❤?❤?

    15. kruti on March 13, 2017 7:29 pm

      That outburst was just Amazing….all of them were worth that guilt
      Awesome update
      Continue asap

    16. SAF on March 13, 2017 8:35 pm

      Lovely episode
      Happy for twinkle
      Waiting to read more

    17. AKA on March 13, 2017 8:36 pm

      Fabulous episode
      Her family deserve severe punishment
      Do continue

    18. Aafi on March 13, 2017 8:37 pm

      It was emotional and lovely episode
      Finally twinkle will get her love
      Do continue

    19. Nisha on March 13, 2017 9:48 pm

      It’s nice

    20. Purvi128 on March 13, 2017 10:00 pm

      Ohh my gosh simiyy.., it was just outstanding..!
      Loved it., the outburst was awesome,.! Felt bad for Twinkle..!
      Post soon
      Love you

    21. SidMin23 on March 13, 2017 11:02 pm

      Nicely written and twinkle each line was nice and twinj ? Iam sure that kunj will shower her throw his love ❤️ and do post soon.

    22. Lucy on March 13, 2017 11:59 pm

      Awesome. That was a very nice episode. I wish twinkle gets the loved she craved for. Plzz post soon

    23. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 14, 2017 12:09 am

      Amazing awesome emotional too….twinkle ne jo bhi kaha sach kaha….esi family se toh family naa ho accha h….cozzz unka hona ni hona ek barabar rehta h…..

    24. Shalini15 on March 16, 2017 4:47 pm

      Simiyy it was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb episode. Twinkle’s dialoges were good nd kunj is too cute nd naughty too. Loved it so much.

      Lots of love ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

    25. Ramya on March 16, 2017 7:25 pm

      Wowwww simiyy
      It’s so awesome amazing so atlasther parents n sisters got to know about her value bad of dem
      But I’m happy as kuunj is wid her na who lovez her alot
      Sry for late
      Love u keep smiling

    26. baby on March 17, 2017 11:53 pm

      Awwww….simmy too cute loved it…thank god atleast dey realised huh…..bt srsly too lovely sch an beautiful adorable lovely caring episode it was jst wowaa… 🙂
      Lods of love…. 🙂

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