Shivika holi utsav part 1

Hi frnds I am Aditi an ib fan. This is my first fan fiction. I am giving the first part. plz say if I should continue or not

So here it starts

In OM all members r chatting after Ranveer slaps Daksh. Just then dadi comes
Dadi: kya hua yaha itni bhir kyu hai?
Shivaay: kuch nahi dadi aap andar chaliye.
They go inside and shivaay explains what all happened .
Dadi : chalo Bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukar hai ki SAB thik ho Gaya.
Shivaay: ha dadi.
Dadi: acha Billu Anika kaha hai.
Shivaay: Mai use Abhi lata hi.

Shivaay goes to his room and finds Anika near the pool side. She was wearing a simple cotton frock and had her hair open. He gets mesmerized by her beauty. He then comes back to his senses and goes towards her.

His pov
What is this happening to me. Mai kyu Baar Baar use dekh ke kho jata hu. Oh no why is she crying.

Shivaay: Anika kya hua .
Anika : kuch nahi bas Khushi ke aasoon hai, aapko kuch chahiya tha.
Shivaay : ha . Dadi tumhe bula Rahi hai.
Anika : acha Mai jaati hu.

She feels a jerk and sees that shivaay is holding her close. Her breath quickens . He wipea the tear out of her eye and brings her close.

Anika pov
Ye kya ho Raha hai. Mai unse jitna pyar Na karne ki koshish Karti hu utna hi unke pyaar Mai doobti hu. Kyu man kar Raha hai ki unke bahon Mai aise hi Raju. Kyu?

Shivaay pov
She is so beautiful. Her cheeks so red. Her lips so smooth. I want to hug her like this forever.

They keep coming close when dadi calls out.

Anika blushes and goes from there.

Dadi: are Anika idhar aa.
Anika ji dadi.
Dadi: kal se holi hai. Holika dahan ki tayaari shuru kar de. Aur ye is ghar Mai Teri pehli holi hogi. Maaze karna.
Anika: ji dadi.

She goes and starts preparing for holika dahan . Rudra seeing all this goes to shivaay and starts crying.
Shivaay: kya hua Rudra.

Om also comes with Gauri

( In my ff Svetlana goes and Gauri is om’s wife)

Om: Kya hua rudra
Gauri: kya hua mere devar Ko.
Shivaay and om: ek bhabhi kafi nahi thi ki dusri uske team me Shamil hi gayi.
Rudra: bhaiya bhabhi kal Holika dahan hai parso holi…..
Om: are wah. Ye toh achi baatein hai phir tu kyu to Raha hai.
Rudra : without pre holi party ….. Not possible aaj raat ki mujhe pre holi party chahiye.
Sivom: no Rudra

Anika comes
Anika: is Baar me in dono se sehmat hu.

Rudra makes puppy face and both bhabis melt.

Gaurika: awwww.. thik hai.
Gauri: aaj raat pre holi party.

Rudra: thik hai mai priveer Ko inform karke aata hu.

Rudra goes outside the door and gets shocked.

Why is Rudra shocked.

Guys plz say if I should continue.and plz do commemt