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Home»Fan Fiction»Nothing is immortal except my love for you…. Chapter 8
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Nothing is immortal except my love for you…. Chapter 8

rainaBy rainaMarch 7, 201763 Comments10 Mins Read
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~FRIENDS~
MORNING 6.30 AM
Mostly all were up now, after all a marriage house! Today they had a special pooja, praying for a prosperous life ahead for the bride Neha! Swara looked at the preparations that were taking place in a hustle bustle and then looked at the time! She would be peacefully sleeping by now after irritating sanskar by waking him up! That have always been her habit since she knew the way to his home, she suppose! She again went to her room and closed the door, she looked at herself in the mirror. Her face fully red, her eyes swollen, her pale face showing the evidence for her endless cries and her sleepless night. She looked away from sanskar’s photo that was on the bed, she was hugging it all night and now also she didn’t realize when did she start staring at his photo after coming inside the room. He was her everything like her breathe which she could never avoid, it was impossible to be without him! her phone beeped indicating a message, she went towards the phone and took it. She widened her eyes seeing it and the very next moment, her phone was thrown on the bed and she was running to washroom to get ready….
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Take a breathe! Take a breathe! This was not that difficult! Was it? No! he just can’t get scared after reaching the railway station of Patna all the way from Kolkata. At least not after even messaging swara about his arrival to Patna. He know he can just call shomi aunty and ask her the address and reach singhaniya mansion by booking a taxi but still, it was necessary to meet swara first! His innocent devil first!…
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‘I AM IN PATNA RAILWAY STATION.’ – that was it! And she was here now, in the same railway station by reading this message. What does he wants to tell her through this message? She should meet him? but she has understood this message in this meaning only, she has came to meet him! but why did he come to Patna? Was he going to give any advice to her To…not love him? was he going somewhere like he went to abroad for one year? Did he came here to meet her for one last time? Did he came here forgetting everything and want to become her friend again? Did he came here may be because he started LOVING her? Uff… her imagination has no limit…. She messaged him asking the exact place where he was…
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She was hating the tears that was bluring her vision from seeing him! but she couldn’t control it too. As those tears flowed out of her tears clearing her vision, she gulps seeing him crying too. She could feel her legs becoming very weak not supporting her to even walk. She walked near him muting those loud noises around, she stumbled not being aware of a rock and that’s when he ran to her from his happiness flowing world that came after seeing her. “swara!” she closed her eyes hearing his love filled voice. How do he manage to give her hope that he loves her and the very next second she gets nothing but his rejection! She opened her eyes still crying sensing his grip becoming tight on her shoulder, his grip was the only source supporting her from not falling down. She felt herself dragged by him and then she was sitting on a bench by his support, he also sat near her. “come on! Don’t make me cry like this!” sanskar said as few more tears flowed from his eyes seeing her crying. She looked at the other side as she wept hard. She could feel his hands wrapping her shoulders, she closed her eyes to not cry hard, sanskar turned her towards him. “stop crying!” at his choking order, she could do nothing but cry more. His hands automatically cupped her face wiping her tears, “swara! Listen to me! Why are you crying? What do you want me to do?” swara touched his hands that were on her cheeks and said, “talk to me!” that’s all what she could demand from him, she just can’t force him to love her back. Because this feeling was very much special to her, precious to her. She didn’t get this feeling by any advice of someone, not by anything! She felt it from the core of her soul, she never knew when this feeling came and she never tried to know, but she knew one thing for sure that this feeling was never going to die! She will love him forever and ever. “I am talking with you!” his complaining innocent voice made her smile, she almost forget what she demanded him by indulging in her deep and pure love. “you are not like before…. You changed!” swara said shoving his hands from her cheeks and then turned the other side. Sanskar frowned hearing her, he made her look at him, “what do you mean by, ‘I changed’?” sanskar asked her. “you would have hugged me as soon as you came! But…..” she stopped as she was pulled by him in his tight embrace. She smiled with tears and hugged him back tightly. “I missed you!” his whisper soothed her and she hugged him more tight. “I am sorry…” he whispered again hugging her more tight as few more tears came out of his eyes. “for everything! I am very sorry for ignoring you! I should have not just did this! I am sorry!” as his every word broke, swara could do nothing but cry. She broke the hug and wiped his tears. “angry with me?” he asked. Swara smiled and said, “If I am angry with you, you should give me a pizza! And if I am not, you should give me an ice cream! Tell me your budget first!” sanskar smiled hearing her. “don’t be angry with me! I will give you an ice cream!” he said. “you are such a conjus sanskar!” she said and beat on his shoulder. “you forgave me?” sanskar asked. Swara smiled and asked, “what mistake you did?” sanskar looked down, his voice still choking, “I hurted you! Even after knowing my ignorance will hurt you, I did it! I am sorry!” he said crying again, he looked up and was confused to see her glaring at him. “swara?” he said. “you are very much conjus! You are diverting the topic so that I don’t ask my ice cream! You can’t do this! I want ice cream!” she said stamping her foot on the ground. Sanskar giggled hearing her. He wrapped his hands around her, while she took her hands to his face and wiped his tears. “tell me once, you forgave me!” sanskar asked. Swara smiled and said, “I forgive you. Now my ice cream!” she whined. Sanskar smiled. “you will get it! Always keep smiling like this!” he said as her smile filled his soul. She smiled wider, “always be with me and I will always smile!” she said as tears filled her eyes saying her most wanted wish. Sanskar wiped her tears before they could come out and then hugged her, “I will always be with you!” swara smiled hearing him, “promise?” she asked closing her eyes. Sanskar hugged her more tight before answering, “PROMISE!”…
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SINGHANIYA MANSION
“aunty!” sanskar shouted as soon as he entered, swara was shocked hearing him and immediately closed his mouth with her hand. “have you gone mad? What are you doing?” she took her hand from his mouth and continued, “sanskar! this is not my home! You just can’t call maa like this! This is my relation’s house! Ok?” she asked and sanskar nodded to her. “arey! Sanskar!” sharmishta shouted seeing sanskar. swara slapped her forehead with hand, just now she told sanskar to not shout and now her mother started. Shomi came near them worriedly, sanskar took blessings from her. Sharmishta looked at swara worriedly, swara noticed her worried gaze and smiled to her assuring. She gets relieved by her smile and blessed sanskar smilingly. Uttara too came there and was shocked seeing sanskar. “uttara! Introduce sanskar to everyone” swara said, uttara was confused but still took sanskar with her. “maa! We both became friends again!” swara said jumping excitedly and hugging her mother as soon as sanskar went far. But both uttara and sanskar didn’t fail to hear it. Sanskar smiled thinking her craziness, uttara became happy hearing this. She turned to sanskar and said, “bhai! Thank you so much!” sanskar was confused to hear her. “you don’t know bhai! How much shona di was sad! So thank you so much!” sanskar smiled hearing this, he followed uttara to meet everyone but still his mind was absent. He was just thinking about swara, her pain on his ignorance, her happiness on their friendship, does he even deserve this much love….
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AFTER FEW MINUTES
“sanskar!…sanskar! my ice cream!” swara said shaking sanskar. sanskar opened his eyes irritated and said sleepily, “swara! I am tired after the journey! Let me sleep for sometime, I will take you in the evening!” he again closed his eyes. “no! no! no! I want it NOW!” she said waking him. sanskar took the pillow and threw it on her. He got up from the bed and said angrily, “come let’s go!” swara becomes shocked as he dragged her outside. The ice cream shop was very near so they were walking, sanskar was keeping an angry and a cold face. Swara gets sad seeing him. she tries to talk to him but he was not listening to her at all. They reached the shop. “get whatever you want!” sanskar said angrily. Swara gets tears seeing him angry, “sanskar! please don’t get angry, I don’t want anything!” sanskar was not seeing her but hearing her choking voice, he turned to her and was shocked seeing her crying. “hey devil!” he said cupping her face while she continued to cry. “arey! I was just acting!” swara looked up at him shocked, “what? Sanskar! you are very bad!” she said and pushed him, she started going. Sanskar immediately holded her, “swara! Arey! I was kidding! I am sorry!” swara shoved his hands.. “even after knowing, I will cry if you will scold me, why are you doing this?” swara asked angrily. “even after knowing that I always play pranks, why do you cry?” sanskar asked, swara closed her fist “urgh..” she said irritated and started walking, sanskar followed her and then holded her hand, “I said sorry na?” swara remained quiet. “shall I put sit ups?” he asked and holded his ears, he was about to sit when swara stopped him. “sanskar! we are in a road!” she said. “so, what shall I do now?” he asked. “the thing which you do every time! Just forget this, any ways I will talk to you tomorrow, because I can’t live without talking with you! Come now!” she said and started walking. Sanskar was shocked and gets tears hearing her, she was right! He has never cared about her feelings, never thought about the effect of his prank on her because she used to be normal the next day, but she was hurt! she was suffering a lot which he never knew! “the thing which you do every time! Just forget this!” her words repeated in his mind as he saw her going. He swallowed a lump feeling the guilt engulfing him. his tears still flowing endless, as a choked whisper escaped his lips that was inaudible to everyone, “I am sorry swara!”…..

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Precap: ~years hard work for a revenge~
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A/N- hey guys! hope you all liked the chapter!
Thank you all. Thanks to the silent readers too!
Love You All….

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raina

    I love music... the rescuer of my stress and boredom!... I make a wish and blow candles every year on 23rd of November an ardent swasan lover.. currently obsessed with riansh

    63 Comments

    1. Simin on March 7, 2017 10:19 pm

      M sooooo happy n emotional to read this
      Sooooo happy to seee shona happy
      I hope sanskar understands her n her feelings soon
      Awwww i love it ??????????

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:35 pm

        very happy you loved it! sanskar will understand her soon! thank you simin!

    2. AnuAnn on March 7, 2017 10:20 pm

      Loved it dear …but revengue?

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:36 pm

        about revenge, you will know it soon! glad you loved it!
        thank you anuann

    3. Ria on March 7, 2017 10:23 pm

      hawww what revenge raina. please nothing wrong in between swasan

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:36 pm

        nothing is between swasan! thanks for commenting ria!

    4. Sus on March 7, 2017 10:28 pm

      Awesome

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:37 pm

        thanks sus

    5. xyz on March 7, 2017 10:29 pm

      uff chalo dono normal to huye
      bt raina precap kuchh smjh me nhi aaya
      anywyz nice epi as alwyz

      • xyz on March 7, 2017 10:30 pm

        see ajkl i’m the first one to comment h na!!

      • xyz on March 8, 2017 6:32 pm

        sadly no

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:38 pm

        you will understand the precap soon! yes! they both became normal, but still there are many hurdles to pass!
        thanks xyz

    6. Simi on March 7, 2017 10:37 pm

      Awesome dear…

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:39 pm

        thanks simi

    7. Stg on March 7, 2017 10:38 pm

      Awesome ??

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:39 pm

        thank you stg

    8. Arunika on March 7, 2017 10:40 pm

      Amazing……felt very happy reading it…..the last part was sad but still overall just awesome!!
      Upload asap

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:40 pm

        next chapter is on the way! very happy that it made you happy! thank you arunika!

    9. Arunika on March 7, 2017 10:40 pm

      Amazing……felt very happy reading it…..the last part was sad but still overall just awesome!!
      Upload next chappy asap!!!

    10. Ummaymah on March 7, 2017 10:44 pm

      The precap is confusing who’s revenge?

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:41 pm

        you will understand the precap soon! thank you for commenting ummaymah

    11. Aashi on March 7, 2017 10:49 pm

      Wow!! Dear iy was just wonderful!!
      Loved it.❤

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:41 pm

        glad you loved it! thank you aashi!

    12. independent on March 7, 2017 10:50 pm

      I was Also crying with my swasan

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:42 pm

        sorry for making you cry!
        thanks for commenting independent!

    13. Kaur Daljeet on March 7, 2017 11:11 pm

      Awesome….

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:42 pm

        thank you kaur!

    14. kumu on March 8, 2017 12:27 am

      awesome..tc..

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:42 pm

        you too take care!
        thanks kumu!

    15. mica on March 8, 2017 2:30 am

      Sorryyyy ??? sorry my fooT!!!!!*stamped my foot over ice cream

      • MAHIRA on March 8, 2017 4:09 am

        angry Micua!!!… poor him… he’s trying to find a way… be clement

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:44 pm

        she and being calm? it can only happen in my ff di!

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:43 pm

        huh! you wasted the ice cream! you could have given to me or atleast kaku!
        *thank you mica!

    16. MAHIRA on March 8, 2017 3:51 am

      lovely, lovely, lovely… give me your box of tissues, i’ll buy you a new one for my chapters :p

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:45 pm

        i will gladly give my box of tissues to you! but please you don’t give me anything! please don’t make me cry!
        *thanks didi!

    17. sumayyah on March 8, 2017 8:38 am

      nice and looking forward for the next part…
      love u and tc

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:46 pm

        love you too sumayyah! next chapter is on the way! take care
        thanks

    18. Soujanya on March 8, 2017 9:22 am

      Awesome

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:46 pm

        thank you soujanya!

    19. Namra on March 8, 2017 11:20 am

      Awesome dear… I’m so happy while reading it… its one of the best confrontation… Precap seems shocking but interesting too… Please post the next part soon… take care stay blessed n ya Happy Women’s Day…

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:48 pm

        one of the best? aww… thank you so much! next chapter is on the way! glad it made you happy! you will understand the precap soon! you too take care. happy women’s day!
        thank you namra

    20. vyshu10 on March 8, 2017 12:27 pm

      awesome….precap?? revenge? whose’s revenge? funny or serious?

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:48 pm

        very much serious revenge!
        thanks vyshu

    21. gangadhar on March 8, 2017 2:05 pm

      awesme …….precap?????

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:49 pm

        you will get to know about the precap soon! thanks gangadhar

    22. Kakali on March 8, 2017 2:15 pm

      Nice episode Raina..!! Loved it..!!
      Precap seems very interesting.. continue soon dear.!! Thnk u.. ;-*

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:50 pm

        happy you loved it!
        thank you kakali

    23. SNY on March 8, 2017 3:39 pm

      Amazing Raina…..!!! I just Loved it??????
      Nxt one soon…..!!!

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:50 pm

        very happy you loved it! next chapter is on the way!
        thank you SNY

    24. G.Chandu on March 8, 2017 4:17 pm

      Awesome!!! Loved it!!!

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:51 pm

        glad you loved it!
        thanks chandu

    25. anu on March 8, 2017 8:21 pm

      nice continue

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:51 pm

        thank you anu

    26. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on March 8, 2017 10:06 pm

      Aww, it’s so cute.. Swasan moments are so sweet and adorable.. Loved it.. Haha,sanky ko duri bardash nehi huyi??.. Keep it up dear.. Waiting for nxt.. Sorry I can’t comment a little long one bcz I am out of town..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:53 pm

        ‘sanky ko duri bardash nehi huyi’- voh tho hai! next chapter is on the way! no need of sorries dear! glad you loved it!
        you too take care and keep smiling!
        thank you uma

    27. Seebu_s on March 8, 2017 10:15 pm

      awesome

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:53 pm

        thank you seebu

    28. Rachna on March 8, 2017 11:31 pm

      Awsm Dr…
      Precap seems like shocking????
      Update soon next part

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:54 pm

        you will understand the precap soon! next chapter is on the way!
        thanks rachna

    29. Pramudi on March 8, 2017 11:52 pm

      Awesome dear. Loved it. ?

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:54 pm

        glad you loved it!
        thank you pramudi

    30. Arshaanya on March 9, 2017 1:45 pm

      Nyc

      • raina on March 9, 2017 3:55 pm

        thank you arshaanya

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