Hi guys… This is pikachu… Guys… I know you all can’t support my new story married to drunkard season 2… Problems with swara’s language and behavior towards sanskar and family…. Guys whatever it is but the main thing is i am writing this story and making swara’s character like this then must i have some my own point of view… Ok then let’s answer my few questions…
1st of all i was not the writer of swaragini serial right?? So the writer only made swara’s character as helpful kind hearted and always truthful… Right?? So now answer…
If you all watched the main serial then you must be know that 1st sanskar told to break relationships with swara… And the reason is sanskar told not to keep any relation with Ragini though swara join hand with Ragini.. But the main fact is swara joined hand only for HIS family right??
Now you all will say sanskar didn’t tell swara to save his family moreover he said to keep distance… But we all know sanskar loves his family a lot… So it will surely effect sanskar… Which wife will remain silent seeing her hubby sad… Chalo yeh bhi chhodo… In serial swara was a father less child… She had none other than her dida and ma… I don’t wanna talk about spineless Shekhar… I didn’t like him at all… So when she got this much big family she treats them as her own family and who will not want to save their family…
A66a chalo chhodo ye sab… Adarsh gya jail… Then swara called sanskar to talk but what he told he will never forgive her…. Like this type of talk only right?? But later sanskar never said sorry…. I am not saying ki swara did right leaving sanskar neither i support her…. She in rage didn’t wear vermillion and mangalsutra… But was there no fault of sanskar?? He should ask for sorry but no… He also being egoistic threatened her… So i think fault was of both… Sanskar ko ek baar swara ko payar se samjhana chahiye tha… And swara ko bhi sab samne sanskar par chillana nei chahiye tha…
A66a chalo… I agreed with you all swara keep her sister above sanskar but which was not at all true… Swara always remain with truth… It’s true Ragini needed swara… Cause in serial Ragini is very sensitive and weak person so she might take some wrong decisions… So swara took that decision… Yes i agree for that she doesn’t need to break relation with sanskar… But firvi… A66a chalo chhodo… So i agree with you all but after that what sanskar and his family did… They fixed uttara’s wedding dealing on swara.. And sanskar agreed for that… If the groom’s family would not be greedy and all… If they would keep only one condition that swara will never return in family then obviously uttara would get married… Then what about swara??
Chalo yeh bhi chhod di… Sanskar mistrust swara and her love… I know he was jealous but should he talk like that?? And mistrust and jealousy is two different thing… Sanskar mistrust swara and her love… Did swara mistrust sanskar for a single moment no… She has full faith on him and his love…
So i show you sanskar’s faults… For me swara had fault but sanskar too… And fir dekha jaye to.. Now both had fault so as per serial at the end both forget everything and forgive each other… So that was perfect end… So if it’s really a perfect end then what need to continue my story and waste my time and energy….
Next swara’s behavior…. So guys… As i said above swara is angry on them… And they kept party on that night so i think her behavior and as well as language is not wrong… And as much as i remembered she was drunk when she is using those slung language….
So guys that’s all i wanted to say…. Now i should give a teaser… If i don’t give then tu will not post….
Teaser…..
Swara drinking in baar but soon she got disturbed with a continuous gaze…. She turns and shocked to see sanskar showing his full teeth ???
Swara : what the hell are you doing ???
Sanskar : staring you… You look chooo cute when you drink ????
He pull her cheeks firmly…
Swara jerk his hand??.. . Sanskar gets upset for sometime ???.. Then again smiles brightly ???…. And quickly pecks her lip… Then again show full teeth ???…. Swara wide her eyes ???later got angry ???…. She was about to slap him…. But stops… Sanskar close his eyes tightly to feel the tight slap of her delicate hand ??…. But feel a slightly firm push… He opens his eyes and sees her going out from the pub….
Sanskar : i will make you my swara again…
Guys i don’t know when i will post and i am quite busy… I don’t know further i will post or not…. So don’t wait for me…. I am sorry if i am rude….
39 Comments
Lovely your reasons are correct. I am eagerly waiting for your story please dear don’t stop it
Baccha plz dont get disheartened
I can understand
Eveeyone has the habbit of watching mahan swara
But personally i love this bold swara
I always wanted her not to forgive anyone easily
Plz continue ur amazing story dear
Ur exactly right dear. Swara is right at her place. They all made her like this. Now it’s their responsibility to bring back that real Swara. But feeling sad for Swara ?????she is making her life more hell by drinking.
Will be waiting for next part.post asap
I cent percent accept your point of view. Both of them are in fault. Waiting for your next chapter…
I love the way u convey the character of swara .plzz dont end this ff. I will miss ur ff because i am quiting TU for 1month since i have my degree final exam .but when i return i will read all ur episodes. So plzzz plzzz…… dont end this. Its my request.
No dnt quit i want this ff and where is life partner ss? Plz that 2 plz waiting for both ss
Nice..
I agree with u.. Sanskar n Swara was at fault…
Pikachuuuuu!!!!! huh! so much threatened naaa!!!!
well about my Swasan fight..
A husband and wife’s fight…i dunno much about marriage in Hindi,
a woman put her marriage sign at mangalsutra in sindoor..
how about boy ? there is nothing, but HIS WORD, rite ?
Sanskar by HIS WORD, break his marriage with Swara because of HIS HURT EGO..
(he yelled her that he won’t back to her even if he survived, don’t say it won’t hurt Swara)
Swara by HER SINDOOR and MANGALSUTRA, break her marriage with Sanskar because of HER VULNERABLE SISTER..
When both came back to family, both busy to their own sibling, sanskar busy searching laksh, swara busy calming Ragini.
Did sanskar grateful to Swara ? NO..
Did Sanskar asked apology to Swara to gave her that CRUEL WORD ? NO…
Sanskar apology to Swara mostly about SPONTANEOUS action , he didn’t do that as a guilty feeling, he did that to stop Swara from leaving him…
What is that ? if you angry, you can threatened that you will leave her ?
when she get hurt you can easily say to forgive you and ask chance ?
between hurt heart and caring to her sister…. Swara left him..
and for me, really, Swasan fight mostly about boy and girl position on their marriage life 😀 😀
huh! whatever! update soon! and wait..
why TU won’t upload your story without teaser ? huh! naughty TU *pull TU cheek
absolutely correct! i agree with you! sanskar should have definitely not talked those words even after knowing how much it will hurt his princess! the scene when sanskar said in phone that they will never be united even if he survives and swara stumbling hearing it….. that scene was too emotional and very touching, huuuu… i cried!
hold on! why are you telling TU as naughty?
stop crying..huh! your ff is more emotional you know !!!!
waaa.. you didn’t read that TU threatened Pikachu to post teaser otherwise she can’t post her story ? 😀 :D..
see.. TU is soo naughty rite ?
threatened Pikachu mean threatened us!!
We love ur ff. Bcoz of some people u cant stop that in middle. If they have problem they can stop reading. Pls dont be dishurted. Take ur time nd come with a blast. We r waiting. And ya i always wanted to see swara like this. Thank u for making swara like this.
what you said about swasan is absolutly right…continue your story
U r right… sanskar and swara both are in fault…. update soon
Pickachu…..!!!!!!! Leave all this stuff…..!!!!!!! Concentrate on ur ff….!!!!!! Don’t stop writing dear…. We all love ur ff…..!!!!! And do continue it…. Will be waiting…..
awesome dear plz don’t stop it bcz of someone. if writing is ur passion just do it don’t look around and take their words for granted be cool ok and for god sake plz continue it as soon as possible. its just that ki i can’t wait for it more
Dear it’s interesting, now people had seen Sanskar in different shades now it’s swara’s turn.
By this now people will stop assuming always girls have to do all things to correct things. In your ff it’s boy turn.
Dear plz provide the link of all previous parts from season 1
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Married+to+a+drunkard+
nice continue
continue as u have planned pikachu……ur story is amazing….. I love ur first season of MTAD ……Please don’t finish it soon….
Awesome yaar please continue I can’t wait more….
Whatever u said was truth yaar both have their own folds so why to judge one person now don’t make us wait long…
hi picachu don’t get upset I also think ki cvc has show swara to Mahan but I love to read your ff and I know how it feel when your closed ignore you so what it feels so swara in not wrong but she is hearted and I am wating for next part please post soon ;puppy face; pleasessssssssssss
You r right yr both r at fault they made swara like this the way u portrait drunken swara is outstanding I don’t have words to describe your work don’t get dishearten Yr Plz continue soon we r waiting for you
Don’t stop this dear….It’s really awesome……Ur point of view is true……So continue with this new shade of swara……. Loving it ……..
u are right but please don’t stop this ff.. waiting for both life partner and this one..and try to post next part soooon.
Miss pikachu it point of view is so right. Actually they r not accustomed with bold female leads they want weeping ever forgiving female lead they want brute and rude male leads rudeness is a virtue of masculinity not senstivity while the female lead must always forgive their husband for every fault. So they r not angry on swara they r angry that how could she not forgive and weep like in the mandir scene(I always felt that Swara should not forgive sanskar for that mandir scene and throw tantrums ) leave it . u should know girls existence lies with her husband and she must stay in sasural but husband has every right to hurt her and in the end ” Jo shaam ko ghar bapas usse bhula nahi kehte” the girls must reunite “Chahe sau joote khalo pati hi tumhara sabkuch hai sasural mein se tumhara arthi uthna chahiye ” so they r not angry on u . lastly there are many waiting for ur story but u writers threaten us we love ur work but it should not be stopped for any reasons other than personal engagement if u feel That u r a writer nothing should stop you as pen is mightier than sword. U writers are so scary cats that I can’t understand that how could writers be like that writers are the strongest person but u PPP disappointed me specially u. Naughty is small word tu is not letting u post without a teaser u r really naughty wink if u don’t post soon I will call u AS* wink*
The Miss pikachu it point of view is so right. Actually they r not accustomed with bold female leads they want weeping ever forgiving female lead they want brute and rude male leads rudeness is a virtue of masculinity not senstivity while the female lead must always forgive their husband for every fault. So they r not angry on swara they r angry that how could she not forgive and weep like in the mandir scene(I always felt that Swara should not forgive sanskar for that mandir scene and throw tantrums ) leave it . u should know girls existence lies with her husband and she must stay in sasural but husband has every right to hurt her and in the end ” Jo shaam ko ghar bapas usse bhula nahi kehte” the girls must reunite “Chahe sau joote khalo pati hi tumhara sabkuch hai sasural mein se tumhara arthi uthna chahiye ” so they r not angry on u . lastly there are many waiting for ur story but u writers threaten us we love ur work but it should not be stopped for any reasons other than personal engagement if u feel That u r a writer nothing should stop you as pen is mightier than sword. U writers are so scary cats that I can’t understand that how could writers be like that writers are the strongest person but u PPP disappointed me specially u. Naughty is small word tu is not letting u post without a teaser u r really naughty wink if u don’t post soon I will call u AS* wink*
pikachu…pls dont get disheartened.
.pls continue…we love ur ffs…
The Miss pikachu it point of view is so right. Actually they r not accustomed with bold female leads they want weeping ever forgiving female lead they want brute and rude male leads rudeness is a virtue of masculinity not senstivity while the female lead must always forgive their husband for every fault. So they r not angry on swara they r angry that how could she not forgive and weep like in the mandir scene(I always felt that Swara should not forgive sanskar for that mandir scene and throw tantrums ) leave it . u should know girls existence lies with her husband and she must stay in sasural but husband has every right to hurt her and in the end ” Jo shaam ko ghar bapas usse bhula nahi kehte” the girls must reunite “Chahe sau joote khalo pati hi tumhara sabkuch hai sasural mein se tumhara arthi uthna chahiye ” so they r not angry on u . lastly there are many waiting for ur story but u writers threaten us we love ur work but it should not be stopped for any reasons other than personal engagement if u feel That u r a writer nothing should stop you as pen is mightier than sword. U writers are so scary cats that I can’t understand that how could writers be like that writers are the strongest person but u PPP disappointed me specially u. Naughty is small word tu is not letting u post without a teaser u r really naughty wink if u don’t post soon I will call u AS* wink*
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Teaser was awesome?????
Plzzz don’t stop yaar.. Agree with your every point
plz dont stop ur ff i just lv swara’s character 4 sake of those who lv u n ur ffs including me just continue u will get many criticise u also compliment u its ur wish 2 listen wht u wnt
It’s awesome dear…..and please update life partner also soon.
you are right dear! sanskar comparing swara with nikhil, that scene would be very much painful… and swara was very very hurt! waiting for your next part! post soon! i know you are busy! but sorry…. for being so selfish like this!
Pikachu, dont stop ur ss… Your P O V is absolutely correct!! Swara and Sanskaar both are fault. Take your own time and post next part…. But dont stop it yaar..! Please try to post your life partner ss also dear…please…
Interesting teaser.
But plz don’t quit.
honestly speaking i really liked this story..it is very realistic..
swara has suffered so much from d beginning..so her behaviour is quite natural..its readers duty to give their opinions..bt at d end its ur wish how u want to write ur story..plz write d way u want to..dont fell sad..continue soon..tc..
Don’t get disheartened..keep writing.
Will wait for your next update