Hidden Hate (intro)

Hello every one… Plz give me one chance…i hope i wont disapoint this time… Plzzzzzzz..
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Hidden Hate
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Swara boss
Cute,bubly naughty girl.. 20 years old… Her life is in her family… From middile class girl… She come to Mumbai for study higher…loves her boy friend laksh Maheshwari..

Lakshya Maheshwari
Smart, dashing handsome hunk of his clg.. He is the son of the great minister… But for safety he hide his real name… Loves Swara alot..but Swara too dont know his real name

Sanskar kapoor
The hit bollywood star Sk… Arrogant, ruthlesse man…handsome ..In 4 years of career his every single film was hit…thats why he was that much famous…Ruler of milliom hearts….

Ragini gadodiya
Swara’s best friend…and roomate…
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MY SMALL WORLD
Swara’s pov
Hi am Swara bose… From behrampur village… My family is only my mother… My father leave my mother when i was only 1 month n married other women… My mom is my life… She send me mumbai to study… There i meet my laksh..m happy with them… Smiling for them…there is another reason which bring smile to my face… This color box n drowing book…this is none of my childhood friend’s..he took my color box n i took his..i dont where is he… I am happy with my small world…
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A GIRL was watching movie when suddenly some one put hand on her eyes
girl: (starts to shout) aww laksh what’s this m watching the movie of my favourite hero Sk
laksh big smile faded away
laksh remove his hand… N turn his face with a pout…
Laksh:jaa i dont want to talk with u Swara
swara pulls his cheecks
swara:aww my sweet lucky is angry with me i was just watchig sk..
Before she could complet laksh put his lips into her lips…

MY TRUE LOVE
laksh pov
hey budies its laksh aka lucky..heartrobe of clg…i was play boy of clg… But after i meet Swara i was no longer play boy…i truly love her alot… This money,luxury nothing is infront of her… I love her TRUELY….
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HIDDEN HATE
a boy was sitting on roof of car…n resting his head on his hands…
Sun was raising…sun light touch his face…he was wearing hoodie n sun glass…
Man:its time to payback… Now i cant hide My HIDDEN HATE….
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A girl was shouting… N a man was drags her to a room
girl: plz m begging to u… I dont want to lose my dignity…
Smirk was playing on his lips…
He bolt the door…
“aaaaahhhhhhhh”
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