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Home»Fan Fiction»Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 11)
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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 11)

DarshiniBy DarshiniFebruary 21, 201739 Comments6 Mins Read
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It’s morning…
Ragini wakes up and she sees some note near her table…
“good morning laadoo…sorry yaar some important work came up…i have prepared everything for breakfast…I will directly come to the engagement hall..don’t skip your breakfast…with love your cutiee bro Bala…”Ragini smiles…
“important work…may be he found a girl…”she giggles…
Ragini got freshen up and goes to the kitchen and found sandwiches…
“Sandwich!!I expected more….”Ragini makes a pout and starts eating…
Her phone rings…she smiled and picked it…
“haan..bhaiyya..how are you??”Ragini asked excitedly…
“it seems like someone is not missing her darling I think…”Krish teases…
“bhaiyya…not like that…I got stucked here with some important works…so only darling…sorry…”Ragini convinces him…
“ok ok..is everything ok??what about chote??is he disturbing you??”Krish keeps on questioning her…
“darling…this is not your debate…you are keep on questioning…huh…”Ragini said angrily…
No reply from Krishna’s side…
“I was just kidding bhaiyya..”Ragini bursts out laughing…
“sweety tum bina…first answer my questions…everything ok na..”Krish asks the same…
“haan darling..everything is fine here..bala is here na…so no problem…don’t worry…”Ragini hides about laksh to him…

“that’s why am worrying…he will create more trouble…”Krishna teases Bala…
“you said that you’re coming for weekend…but you are talking on phone…huh…”Ragini makes a pout..
“haan…but I held up with some works…next week sure…”Krish gave assurance…
Doorbell rings…
“bhaiyya…i will call you later..”Ragini hanged up…
Ragini opens the door…she was shocked…who is that??
Obviously our laksh…
“Hii…Rasagulla”he grinned…
“tum…what are you doing here??”Ragini asked him to go…
But to her surprise Laksh pushed her beside and went inside…
“hey…how dare you…out…getout from here…”Ragini shouts…
“oh sandwiches…wow laadoo…”said laksh and starts eating…
“laksh…that was mine…damn…”Ragini goes hyper when he eats the remaining half of her sandwich…
“why are you here…haan..”Ragini holds him…
“wait…first I will finish it…then I will talk with you..”laksh didn’t listens to her…he concentrates on eating…
“finished…now bolo…”laksh turns her towards his direction…
She glared him…
“oh my god…you gonna eat me alive I think instead of sandwich…”laksh bursts out laughing…
“argghhh…”Ragini proceeds towards hall…

Laksh holds her wrist…
“tell me what you gonna wear for evening…”laksh raises her eyebrows…
“dekho…i won’t come for the engagement…now please go…”Ragini points towards the door…
“areyy…my cutiee rasagulla…don’t get hyper…because you are looking damn cute…that I can’t go away from you…”laksh pulled her cheeks…
“just stop it Laksh…do you think that everything will become fine between us again…not at all…everything is over…don’t try to create scene over here…”Ragini pushed his hands away…
“Ragini…just listen to me…only once…”laksh pleads her…
“do you listened me…that day….now what brings you here…haan…just leave laksh…infact I don’t want to see your face…but what to do…it’s my fate…”Ragini bursts out in anger…
“Ragini…i know everything…now I understand everything…please don’t leave me na…”laksh hugged her…
“do you think that my life is a game for you to play with…”Ragini cries and pushed him…
“please Ragini…i found that it was Kavya who is responsible for everything…please I want you back in my life…”laksh pleads her by holding her hands…

Ragini laughs…
“you found!!so soon yaar…waah…taliyaa…but what’s the big deal…am the one who undergone pain always…how many times I told you that I didn’t do anything…haan…have you listened…no na…why you came here…if you came for convincing me then please go away from here right now because it’s a waste of time…i won’t hear you…you doubts me believing some idiots …now when you realised you are coming back to me…you know what laksh love is based on trust but you have broken that itself then what is the need for patching up…just get out from here…please I plead you…”Ragini falls down and cries…
Laksh was not able to bear this pain…he don’t want to disturb her more…he ran away towards his bike..he hits his hands on seat…
He was crying badly…he wipes his tears and leaves in his bike…
He reached his quarters…he gets a call from Balaji…
“lucky…am following that as per our plan…but seems like she is also coming for the function…”said Balaji…
“yes…she will come I know…go by our plan…am hanging…bye…”laksh was about to hangup…
“oii..oii..laksh…have you planned anything for laadoo…”Bala asked curiously…
“I have met her just now…she was like a cracker yaar…bursted out her anger…what to do…i deserves it..seems like she won’t hear me…she is crying badly yaar…i can’t digest that thing…because of me she is getting hurt more..”laksh cries..
“areyy laksh…stop crying…you are regretting..”said Bala….
“instead of consoling…you too blaming me…i didn’t do anything intentionally you know na…”laksh cries even more…
“ok don’t worry…i have an idea…”Bala explained his idea..
“is it..but…”laksh got interrupted…
“nothing will happen…don’t worry…laadoo is still loving you only…am confident…you do what I say….ok..”Bala hanged up…

@evening…engagement hall…
Ragini reached the hall in pink colour designer saree with silver colour flower patterns in it…she looks gorgeous in that saree…laksh wears blue coat suit and he looks dapper in it…
RagLak enters at the same time…laksh was left mouth opened when he see Ragini…
They proceeds inside…laksh didn’t notice anyone he keeps on staring her…she noticed him while tucking her hair behind which falls over her face…she feels quite uneasy…
“why are you staring me like this…if someone noticed this means what they will think…”Ragini goes near him and whispers…
“that was not my mistake..”laksh whispers in her ears and suddenly pulled her pony…
“how dare you…”Ragini got interrupted…
“shshh…everything was perfect except that ponytail…you look gorgeous…free hair suits you the best…”laksh said and walks past her…
Engagement ceremony starts…
“where is this Bala…”Ragini searches him but couldn’t find him….laksh drags Ragini towards the stage…
Rithu and pratheek exchange rings…
On the other side…two hands blindfolds some girl’s eyes….
“Now let’s play a game…i will write some kind of emotions in this box and you have to pick one..and you have to speak few words about what you get…”pratheek said and everyone cheers him…
“Laksh I will start with you…”rithu points towards laksh and she shakes the box..
Laksh picked the chit..”what..”everyone got curious…
“love…”said laksh by smilingly…
Everyone claps….
“come on…come on…”everyone asks him to start…

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“As I found you…my life has changed,
I have become all new
I lose myself in such a way that I don’t ever find myself again.
gradually I give my life to you only..
Like clouds you have created a shade over me..
Like rains you have drenched me in joys..
Like storms you have blown away my senses..
I find excuses to meet you..
When you smile I wish to be the reason..
My world was lone you came with flowers…
My heart beats faster when I say your name…
All I struggle is to live with you
I want to spend all my day with you everyday…
Still I love you my love…i love you only…please come back to me…”

@@@
laksh smiles stupidly by seeing Ragini…and tear drop falls from his eyes…
Everyone claps…
“wow…what a lines man…”pratheek hugged him…
Ragini feels something inside her…she wipes the tears which is falling from her eyes too…

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Sorry for the typo’s…who is that blindfolded girl???
Do really Ragini got impressed??
Stay tuned to know more..
Drop your views in comment box
Bye bye…
~Darshu

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    39 Comments

    1. IQRA222 on February 21, 2017 4:35 pm

      awesome loved the episode

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 5:24 pm

        Thnks dear…glad you liked it…

    2. saranya on February 21, 2017 4:37 pm

      simply awesome

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 5:30 pm

        Thnks a lot dear…so glad that you liked it…

    3. Sindhura on February 21, 2017 4:41 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 5:33 pm

        Tq Sindhu dear…glad u liked it…

    4. Mintu on February 21, 2017 5:00 pm

      Superb dear….bala laksh kita sonadhu correct dhn.. He is regretting for his acts..!!!! ragini laksh words la mayangi irupa dear…. Bt innum kovam irukum la da…!!!! Andha girl kavya nu nenaikurn da….may be bala va kuda irukalam.. Hehee…!!!! Take care dear

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 5:35 pm

        Thnks a lot da…aama da kovam irukkum…athu epdi udane pogum…bt light uh impress aayrukkum…
        *secret sollava nee guess pannathula onnu rightu…yaartayum sollatha*
        Hehehe!!take care da…

      • Mintu on February 21, 2017 5:43 pm

        K dear.. Solla matn..bt seekram post panunga

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 7:00 pm

        Sure da?

    5. jazzy on February 21, 2017 5:00 pm

      amazinggg yaar

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 5:38 pm

        Tq jazzy dear….am glad that you liked it…

    6. Jaan on February 21, 2017 5:27 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 5:39 pm

        Thnks dear…glad you liked it…

    7. Follybraverl on February 21, 2017 6:51 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 9:13 pm

        Thnks dear…glad you liked it…

    8. lovely7 on February 21, 2017 7:14 pm

      Superb

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 9:14 pm

        Tq lovely dear…glad you liked it…

    9. dharani on February 21, 2017 7:14 pm

      awesome

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 9:15 pm

        Tq dharani dear…glad you liked it…

    10. neina on February 21, 2017 8:52 pm

      amazing

      • Darshini on February 21, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thnks dear…glad you liked it…

    11. Ammu on February 21, 2017 9:20 pm

      It’s interesting episode dear and loved Raglak scenes

      • Darshini on February 22, 2017 1:04 pm

        Thnks dear…glad that you liked it…

    12. asra on February 21, 2017 9:39 pm

      awesome darshu dear…..laksh ne inum neraya try pananum da….ne evalavu kasta paduthuna Enga ragu va…..laksh u r man ya….behave like that…..Ipa yeadhuku alugura….alugatha kanira thoda……thodachu daya…Hmmm good boy…..now focus on ur mission dear….
      blindfolded girl kavya va irukanum….waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear….

      • Darshini on February 22, 2017 1:06 pm

        Ha ha…asra…gd advice…laksh bcmes strng with ur words…
        May b iruklam…ha ha…
        Thnks a lot da…
        Seekrm post panren da…
        Take care da

    13. Arjuna on February 21, 2017 9:40 pm

      AWESOME

      • Darshini on February 22, 2017 1:07 pm

        Tq Arjuna ? glad you liked it…

    14. A.xx on February 21, 2017 9:50 pm

      aww cute xx

      • Darshini on February 22, 2017 1:08 pm

        Thnks dear…glad that you liked it…

    15. Barani on February 21, 2017 10:12 pm

      Arumai

      • Darshini on February 22, 2017 1:08 pm

        Nandri dear ?

    16. Barani on February 21, 2017 10:14 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 22, 2017 1:09 pm

        Tq dear…glad you liked it…

    17. Ammy on February 21, 2017 10:21 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 22, 2017 1:10 pm

        Thnks dear…glad that you liked it..

    18. Priya on February 22, 2017 1:00 am

      Superb…

      • Darshini on February 22, 2017 1:10 pm

        Tq dear…glad that you liked it..

    19. Sherin on February 22, 2017 8:56 pm

      Superb

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