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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyam : Kyun karte ho muhjse itna pyar (Prologue)
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Kriyam : Kyun karte ho muhjse itna pyar (Prologue)

NnnyaBy NnnyaFebruary 5, 201713 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hi all. Thank you for reading. My very first ff. I’m very nervous as to how it’ll turn out. Hope I do justice to the cutest couple that is our Kriyam
My ff is basically just my thoughts on what should be happening with Kriyam in the current track.

Krishna and Saiyyam are in their room
Saiyyam: yeh sab kya hai Krishna?! Kabhi mere liye khana banaathy ho kabi apni best friends se mere liye ladti ho… kabhi coffee pilaa thi ho mujhe. Kyun? Iraadha kya hai tumahara?
Krishna felt hurt on being questioned. She had mentioned earlier that she wanted to be his friend but even then he accused her of trying to manipulate him. She genuinely wanted to be there for him
Krishna : kya kar rahin hun mathlab? Mein tumse pehele bhi kehe chuki hun mujhe sirf tumhara dost banna hai. Tumhe ye ehsaas dhilaana hai ki main tumse nafrat nahi karti. Ki agar tum ek mauka do to hum dono ek nayi shuruvaath kar sakte hai.

Saiyyam gripped krishna’s arm tightly and pulled her close to him…
Saiyyam : nayi shuruvath huh? Tum mere saath nayi shuruvaath karogi? Ek baath samajh lo Krishna. Main tumhare layak nahi hoon!!! Main kisike pyar ke layak nahi hoon!!! Mujh jaise insaan se sirf nafrat ki jaasakti hai pyar…..ya dosti nahi….
Saiyyam was still holding onto Krishna. She had tears in her eyes she was hurt, both by his tight grip and his harsh words…. They were staring deep into each other’s eyes…
Sorry it’s a little short. If you like it Ill try to make the next one a little longer. Please leave me your comments I’d appreciate any kind of feedback….

Precap: Saiyyam throws things in his room in anger… Krishna looks on with concern…..

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    Nafrat paas aane de, Pyar door jane na de

    13 Comments

    1. Sugarpop ? on February 5, 2017 12:12 am

      This is really good. Its a good start. Please continue writing ?

    2. Shiza Arif on February 5, 2017 12:36 am

      It’s very nice….. making me more curious for the next part??

    3. Zai on February 5, 2017 12:36 am

      It’s interesting and waiting for it. Nice beginning

    4. Hafsa16 on February 5, 2017 12:43 am

      Amazing start✨ Update soon please ??

    5. Aarti32 on February 5, 2017 12:45 am

      It’s fantabulous..I’ll luv it if u make d next episode longer n post it soon

    6. Nnnya on February 5, 2017 12:48 am

      Thank you sugarpop means alot. especially coming from a regular commentor on the ssel pages like you….yes i’ve noticed. will be uploading a second part soon

    7. Hrn on February 5, 2017 1:04 am

      Its awesome..what a start!! Eagerly waiting fr ur next prologue dear

    8. Nnnya on February 5, 2017 1:32 am

      Thank you all for your lovely comments Ive uploaded the first official chapter… Should be available soon… PS aarti love your pic..shrishti looking sooo cute

    9. Shaani on February 5, 2017 6:36 am

      Woow.. Superb start…waiting to read next part.. ?

    10. Kriyam Lover? on February 5, 2017 6:40 am

      Omg this is so good. ?❤️ I was reading this so deeply. ?❤️

    11. Kavi on February 5, 2017 8:30 am

      Pls post entire in English dear

    12. Isha on February 5, 2017 10:33 am

      A good start….keep writing… 🙂

    13. sana on February 5, 2017 10:58 am

      You’ve actually shown Sayyam’s characters essence in this…ur an amazing writer…keep it up!!

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