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Home»Fan Fiction»Lovable Love…Raglak…(shot 2)
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Lovable Love…Raglak…(shot 2)

MI_MAHIBy MI_MAHIJanuary 16, 201722 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hii…guys…This is Mahi…back with another chappy of lovable love…thanks for commenting in last chappy… and also thanks to my silent readers….. sorry for mistakes in advance…lets start..

Shot-2

L?vable L?ve….

Ragini’s POV:-

I opened my eyes…i was in a room…

Now…don’t expect me to describe the room…

B,coz….i can’t tell u…how untidy….dirty…and messy…it was…

There was a big bed with white thick sheets…Sleeping on it was Lucky….

Okay…this is wierd…how did i get here??? What m i doing in his bedroom..???

I moved one step ahead…and crap…!!

I fell on the floor…

Hey!!!did i just fell on the floor b,coz of the carpet….yes…i did..

I helped myself to getup….and reached the bed carefully…

“Lucky…wake up…” i shouted…

“Lucky..!! Wakeup…u lousy bag…”
I know thats the wierd thing to call somebody…but if u knew me…u wouldn’t be surprised…

Despite me calling him that…he didn’t moved an inch…

Then he opened his eyes…and picked up something under the pillow…it was his phone…

“Stubborn girl…!!she didn’t called me….”lucky complained…

I realised…he was talking about me…

I also felt pleased…that he remember me as soon as he woke up…But that wasn’t enough to wear off my anger…

“Oh God..!! I love her…”he moaned…
No..!!that wasn’t enough too..

He rose up from bed and walked right through me….

You read correct…!! He walked right through me…
It was like..i was a ghost…or invisible….

Then i thought…it could be a dream….but i wasn’t complaining…
I needed something like this opportunity…to know about him…

He was taller than me, ofcourse…

He was wearing a loose t-shirt and a overnight pants…

His hair is freaking mad..not that it can look anymore tidy…

His eyes were red…,deprived of sleep…
I felt the need to punch him..he wasn’t having enough sleep…he wasn’t even spending time with me…what the hell…???

I checked the time…he should be in gym this time…
So he was bunking that too…

I really have to find about this…

He picked up his journal from the table…he started writing…
I could not resist to look at it…

He was writing…
“Dear diary…I m sorry…i fought with her again…i didn’t want to but i was too tired..and she was angry. I can’t blame her, because i kept on breaking my promises… I promised to take her to watch Shahid’s movie..,but i could not.. I was busy… I know she is more important.. That is why I have been busy.. Looks like I shouldn’t keep the surprise anymore.. Before this fight gets anymore far than it is now… I have to tell her or show her probably.. I hate to do this but I had to.. it’s worth that..”

“Laksh..” somebody called, might be my gonna be mother-in-law.. I was frightened for no reason, her voice did that to me sometimes.. Lucky says she is cool..but she is his mother not mother-in-law.. It depends,u know…on the relationship.. U can’t expect any mother-in-law to be like ur mother…so, mr.lucky shut his journal and left to meet her..

As soon as he left…the room started shaking…

I tried to hold on the table infront of me…but…I just couldn’t…

I fell and was being dragged away in circle like falling off from a twister….

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To Be Continued..

A/N:-do tell me how was it…what do u think what happened to Ragini….?? Guys its TS so nxt one will be last…i hope u like it…thanks for giving ur precious time and reading this..keep reading…be happy.. stay blessed.. tc..bye..?

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    22 Comments

    1. Aim on January 16, 2017 8:26 am

      Plz don’t end it in the next part.I am really liking it?

    2. lovely on January 16, 2017 8:45 am

      Confusing

    3. neina on January 16, 2017 9:05 am

      how ragini came in laksh room? Why cnt he see her?is it a dream?

    4. nikky on January 16, 2017 9:18 am

      Don’t do this yaar raglak ff as ts is are very and ur going to end this plzz see Na swasan ff are so much plzz raglak ff writer try to write more for raglak plzz for raglak write more raglak ff plzz this is a request hope u full fill plzz CVS has done so much partiality to raglak we have to prove that even if that raglak are the best and have equal fandom plzzz give more ff and yaa thanks also that u give so much precious time to raglak

      • tëìtō kUn on January 16, 2017 12:17 pm

        Amazing but Confusing…..

    5. IQRA222 on January 16, 2017 11:05 am

      awesome and interesting

    6. tani on January 16, 2017 2:26 pm

      Wonderful

    7. saranya on January 16, 2017 4:43 pm

      interesting

    8. Arjuna on January 16, 2017 5:00 pm

      SUPERB

    9. Sherin on January 16, 2017 5:40 pm

      Nice

    10. Astra on January 16, 2017 6:26 pm

      nice

    11. jazzy on January 16, 2017 6:34 pm

      amazing

    12. Ammy on January 16, 2017 6:59 pm

      Superb

    13. Jessica on January 16, 2017 7:01 pm

      fabulous

    14. asra on January 16, 2017 7:43 pm

      awesome dear….

    15. Malu on January 16, 2017 8:01 pm

      Don’t end it soon pls

    16. Ammu on January 16, 2017 10:05 pm

      Interesting episode and eagerly waiting for next episode

    17. Aasthu on January 16, 2017 10:19 pm

      confused Mahi….can u give me the link to shot-1???????

      • MI_MAHI on January 16, 2017 11:01 pm

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/lovable-love-short-story-raglak-shot-1/ link for shot 1

    18. Ragz_teju on January 16, 2017 11:48 pm

      awesome loved it

    19. A.xx on January 17, 2017 12:31 am

      amazing xx

    20. hemalattha on January 17, 2017 2:18 am

      Nice.

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