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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan- Being A devil’s Slave (Chapter 11)
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Swasan- Being A devil’s Slave (Chapter 11)

sharma_ananyaBy sharma_ananyaJanuary 12, 2017Updated:January 18, 201730 Comments4 Mins Read
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Chapter 11

Laksh’s pov.

Sometimes the life becomes so much complicated. Never thought it will happen.

I was coming back to farmhouse when someone called me.
I knocked the door. Swara opened it and I came inside.

I checked the caller id. It was Sanskar. I don’t know should I pick it up or not.

Finally I picked it before I could start. He started questioning while I was looking towards Swara.

“Listen Laksh. I know you are angry on me and you should be. But I just wanted to know do you know where Swara is? Is she fine? Please Laksh speak up.” He asked me and I looked towards her who was trying hard to smile but cant.

I excused myself and went inside a room.

“Why are you so much concerned about her? Aren’t you able to find her?” I questioned him angrily.

“Please Laksh. If you know about her then please tell me. Please. I beg you. I need to know about her. If she is fine? I just wanted to meet her once. Just once.” He cried towards the end but are this tears original may be yes. I felt he is changing but I cant let him hurt her. She is not ready yet.

I was about to say no. When swara entered the room and nodded her head asking me to say yes.

I don’t want it but she squeezed my hand so I unwantedly accepted it.

“Xyz place in an hour.” I said and hung up.

I know she loves him and I am with her but may be this is not the right time. I hugged her and she cried in my arms.

My little princess. She cried. What have she done to herself?

I still remember few days back.

Me and my family were sitting when someone ringed the bell.

My wife Ragini went and opened the door. A girl in her 20’s came inside.

I have seen her somewhere. Yes yes. She is Kavita. But what is she doing here?

She came inside and sat down.

We all were waiting for her to speak something.

Ragini went inside to bring snacks.

While she started speaking.

“I know you all must be wondering what am I doing here. I am here to tell you something about your sister Mr. Laksh.” She said.

What the hell she wanted to say about my doll?

“You know she is having an affair with my to be husband. It will be better if you make her understand to stay away from him.” She said voice full of venom.

“And remember she is not having a normal affair. She is being a submissive. Make her stat away otherwise I do have my own ways.” She said angrily.

“Who the hell are you to question about or point towards Swara. Huhh. If you are having any problem then go and handle your husband. This is your f**king problem. May be they are happy with each other and he don’t want you and we know how you are?” said ragini coming from the Kitchen.

I was unable to react anything as I was beyond shocked. I don’t want this to be true. Not at any cost.

Ragini pushed her out of the house and closed the door on her face. Then she came to come and hugged me.

“If it is true?” I questioned her while tears started to fall down my eyes.

“Trust Swara, Laksh. She won’t do anything bad. If it is true then may be she will be having a reason behind it.” She said I nodded and we stayed der until my phone rang.

I picked it up and I got a shock that Swara met an accident.

I lost my senses. Somehow we reached in the hospital. I wasn’t able to see her like that. I rushed out from the hospital.

***present***

This time Sanskar must have talked to Swara. I need to check on my baby sister.

I without thinking much entered the house.

Der I saw he was holding her from her shoulders while she was facing ground.

“Will you marry me, Swara?” he asked.

To be continued.
Do you want me to end it soon or should I continue?
Sorry. I know I am late I do have my some personal issues. But now everything is sorted. So if you want next episode soon the do comment.

Thank you.

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    30 Comments

    1. SNY on January 12, 2017 3:57 pm

      Amazing dr..
      Plz continue…

    2. Sanji on January 12, 2017 3:59 pm

      olz continue

    3. mumpi on January 12, 2017 3:59 pm

      laks pov is unexpected bt needed… superb… wow he proposed her … bt i wanna know d full convo.

    4. Kaur Daljeet on January 12, 2017 4:05 pm

      Good

    5. Simi on January 12, 2017 4:21 pm

      Its good.. Plz continue

    6. tani on January 12, 2017 4:30 pm

      Please continue….dont hurry up in ending…. its really good

    7. NDSG on January 12, 2017 4:37 pm

      Please continue dear…. ????

    8. deeksha on January 12, 2017 4:42 pm

      Nice dear….. But I want Sanskaar and swara’s point of view….!!!!!!! Continue soon….

    9. shoni on January 12, 2017 5:04 pm

      Awesome dear

    10. praju on January 12, 2017 5:37 pm

      nice

    11. mica on January 12, 2017 6:51 pm

      don’t stop it, i hate incomplete story, but take your time

    12. Radhika on January 12, 2017 6:59 pm

      Continue plssss….

    13. sneha on January 12, 2017 7:17 pm

      awesome plzz post next one soon

    14. crazy princess on January 12, 2017 7:19 pm

      awesome episode plssss continue

    15. Pramudi on January 12, 2017 8:05 pm

      Awesome dear..
      Me too want sanskaar’s & swara’s povs…

    16. Arshaanya on January 12, 2017 8:08 pm

      Nyc

    17. a on January 12, 2017 8:15 pm

      nice..dnt end it so soon..take ur time..tc..

    18. vyshu10 on January 12, 2017 9:01 pm

      superb…update soon

    19. chandu on January 13, 2017 12:03 am

      awesome…!!continue…it please…!!

    20. Shifa96 on January 13, 2017 12:24 am

      Nice

    21. mariya on January 13, 2017 1:12 am

      Just now I read all chapters of ur this ff. It’s really awesome amazing & magnificent superb yaar. Eagerly waiting for their talk about marriage I mean next part . plzz show their talk which lucky not heard above.

    22. kaynatk01 on January 13, 2017 1:21 am

      yes do continue

    23. neha on January 13, 2017 3:28 pm

      Superb . continue soon.

    24. supriya on January 13, 2017 3:28 pm

      Awesome

    25. huma on January 13, 2017 3:30 pm

      Very nice

    26. disha on January 13, 2017 3:31 pm

      Interesting continue asap

    27. Farheen on January 13, 2017 3:33 pm

      Amazing dear , post next part asap plzz

    28. sweeta on January 13, 2017 5:02 pm

      Amazing dear superb
      Nd plzzz continue this ff don’t stop it……
      Post soon dear

    29. mariya on January 13, 2017 8:05 pm

      Yaaa plzzzzzzz continue this ff , don’t stop it dear & plzzzzzzz update next chapter as soon as possible.

    30. Ariba on January 13, 2017 11:15 pm

      Nice❤ but was waiting for SwaSan scene? plz post next part ASAP!

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