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Home»Fan Fiction»THE CHRISTMAS THAT CHANGED MY LIFE – RAGLAK FEW SHOTS BY DEESH (SHOT 4 and 5) Part 2
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THE CHRISTMAS THAT CHANGED MY LIFE – RAGLAK FEW SHOTS BY DEESH (SHOT 4 and 5) Part 2

deeshBy deeshJanuary 7, 2017Updated:January 7, 201740 Comments7 Mins Read
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THE CHRISTMAS THAT CHANGED MY LIFE ( RAGLAK ) FEW SHOTS BY DEESH SHOTS 4 AND 5 ) PART 2
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” Hey Rahul!” I waved at him in response to his call uninterested. I was on my way to follow Mr. Mystery. This has become my regular schedule. And the irony is that Shiv himself knows that I am following him. To say directly, I am stalking him. He found that 4 days after I started to follow him. They say that he doesn’t like girls. But, till now he had never told me not to follow or warned me. This mystery man is a total mystery. So, I took this as an added advantage and am stalking him. It is a day past new year and I am leaving for Chennai tomorrow. I will miss Shiv so much. And this rahul! He had to come right now!! Uff! “Gini…. woh, actually, it has been 2 weeks” he fumbled. God! I hate fumbling. Now I hated myself for fumbling like this before Mystery man that day. What he would have thought about me?? They say first impression is the best impression. And I ruined my first impression.”So?” I told him. “2 weeks” he stressed that again. Why is he fumbling like this? And what’s the great deal about 2 weeks? I looked at him blankly. Then his proposal before 2 weeks came to my mind. Gosh! For that he was blabbering “2 weeks, 2 weeks” Why can’t he speak clearly and straight to the point? And the weirdest thing is that in these 2 weeks, I completely forgot about Rahul and his proposal. And after meeting this Mr. Mystery @ Shiv, I know that I don’t have any romantic feelings towards rahul. I don’t know why. Attraction towards shiv perhaps. “Rahul, I think that I don’t have any romantic feelings towards u. Sorry for making u wait.” I told him directly. His smile faded hearing that. But, I didn’t bother. I waved bye to him, whose face looked dull. Even I would marry Shiv, but not this Rahul. I find Rahul, a so soft guy completely opposite to me. I would prefer an honest person, who is good at heart. Rahul is not a baddie, but I think he is a too cheesy guy for me. And where did Shiv came into this? God! Nowadays, I am thinking too much about him.
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“Gini!! Wear an anarkali at least today” Mom shouted, in fact pleaded me. It was Jessie’s marriage today. And it has been 3 weeks since I came to chennai. I had took 3 days break for my cousin’s marriage. I missed my mystery man terribly that I was literally counting the days when I would come here. Here, I am. Now, after getting ready, I will meet him today. Because, I wanted to tell him something.

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It was the day when I departed to Chennai after my christmas vacation. I wanted to see Shiv before I departed. When I was searching frantically for him, I heard a familiar voice. On hearing that known voice, I turned. It was Rahul and Sasha. I hid behind a tree and started overhearing him. I know it is not manners. But, curiosity u see.
“I really loved her so much Sasha. Now, I am not able to bear that she doesn’t love me.” I heard him saying in a cracked voice. Though, I never feel emotional towards these kind of things, but his dull voice made me feel pity for him. “How do u say that it was love?” Sasha asked him. Duh! Sasha herself knows about that and she has taken an oath that she will never tell me about that. Then, why is she asking him? I stood there and continued to hear them. “Whenever I saw her, or I am close with her, my heart will start beating abnormally. I could hear my heart thumping loudly. My eyes always look out for her. When she was studying here, with me, I didn’t realise. But, when she left for chennai, I felt lonely. I know that she would always fight with me. And I missed them. It is in this 1 year, I realised my feelings for her.” I heard him saying. I stood numb. I couldn’t understand anything. I felt something wrong with me. Rahul’s conversation affected me. Am not affected by his feelings. I felt numb because the same feelings happened with me, whenever I saw shiv. I can remember how my heart started beating loudly when I found myself in his embrace on that day at the bus stop. I can remember very well how my eyes follow him wherever he goes. And the thought that I will not see him made me upset. So, does all these things indicate that I love Mr. Mystery?? What crap?? How is this possible? I returned to my home and I didn’t see Shiv on that day.

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Well. On that day, I thought that Rahul’s words were bullshit. But in these 3 weeks, I realised that how much desperate I was to meet Mr. Mystery. My mind was only occupied by him. Hence, 2 days back I concluded that I LOVE MY MYSTERY MAN.

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The clouds and the sun were chasing each other through the sky raising the doubts about the weather that afternoon. It was 3 in the afternoon. It was Sunday. And Jesie’s wedding with that baldie was over. That baldie seemed more aged than that day at his engagement. Now, why am I thinking about all that. I heard a rustling sound of the leaves. I turned back and found Mr. Mystery, making his way towards the steep hill, to which he comes every sunday to Lord Shiva temple. I was there too. In fact, I was waiting for him. I am meeting him after 3 weeks. I can’t describe the burst of emotions inside me after I saw him after this long gap. He looked at me and gave an unbelievable look at me and proceeded towards the temple. I followed him. He joined his hands and started praying. I, being a christian, don’t know what does he mutter under his breath. I, as usual, looked at his majestic form. His smooth, silky hair was covering his forehead. I lost myself again in him that the time stood still for me. His wave in front of my face brought me back to reality. He started descending the hill. I held his hand. I could sense his hand stiffening as soon as my hand touched him. He glared at me. If he’s stubborn, then I am 200 times stubborn than him. I didn’t leave his hand. I made him turn towards me. I looked at his eyes. His eyes made me go weak on my knees. I gathered courage and forwarded him a box. He looked at me doubtedly. I indicated him to open that. He opened that and he looked at me shocked. The box had a locket, in which, I LOVE U was engraved. I don’t know where the confidence came from suddenly that I told him, “I LOVE U SHIV”

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Guys, deesh here. I know the story is progressing fast. But i have to wind it up soon because of my ongoing exams. Hope u liked the chappy. Thanks for reading. Sorry to those who I haven’t replied. I will reply soon.

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    40 Comments

    1. Naimi on January 7, 2017 12:48 am

      Hey dear happy new year….update was too good….gini is in love with Mr.mystery hmm….wow…but it’s too early too realize but it’s okay because u described it in a very good way…..well am so excited about Shiv’s answer….. Will be waiting… Love u…tc

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:23 am

        Hey Naimi. Yes she is in love. And u r right that it is soon. But you will know about its consequences soon. Thanks a lot naimi. Love u ?

    2. lisa on January 7, 2017 4:21 am

      loved it
      will shiv accept her as she is from different religion

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:24 am

        Thank u so much Lisa. You will know about it soon. ?

    3. lovely on January 7, 2017 6:47 am

      Amazing

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:25 am

        Thanks a lot lovely ?

    4. Shruti on January 7, 2017 8:03 am

      Oh my godddddddddd!!!!! What an ep!!!! At last Gini confessed her lv 4 Shiv..Thts really vry gud of this ep..Really its too amazing…What to say yr…Ok now I want 2 stop my bak bak..Stay happy n keep smiling always..

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:26 am

        Yes shru. She had confessed. Am so glad that u liked this chapter dear shru. Thanks a lot and take care ?

    5. Riya on January 7, 2017 8:22 am

      Oh gosh!!!!! Deeshu what you have done???? What I will say???? Its awesome,outstanding, lovely,amazing and superb episode Deeshu…Just mind blowing fabulous…Finally our Gini realised her love for Shiv and confessed it…Oh god I am tapping my shoulders you know because I guessed it that in this episode only Gini will confess her love and will realise it as well…And see how much intelligent I am??…But why you again stopped it in the interesting place?? That’s not fair?…You always do like this??…And while reading it I was thinking that how Shiv will react after hearing her confession…And you stopped it…This is very bad…One more thing I don’t think that the story is progressing fast…I think it is the correct time to show Gini’s feelings towards Shiv…And everything you are doing in the correct time only…So I don’t think like this even I don’t feel like this…And your name is really justified…SORRY QUEEN???…Why you always asks sorry for some silly reasons? Don’t ask sorry this much OK…Stay blessed and keep smiling always…

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:47 am

        Riyu… What to say dear?? I just love ur essays. I know I have told u before but I can’t resist from telling that again. And U are a mastermind riyu! Yes I do that always ?? thank u so much riyu for understanding me. Love u riyu ?

    6. Arjuna on January 7, 2017 8:47 am

      SUPERB

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:27 am

        Thank u Arjuna ?

    7. nikky on January 7, 2017 9:16 am

      awesome amazing excellent superb mind blowing brilliant speechless next part soon don’t be late and yaa thanks to all raglak writers for writing mind blowing concept and they are just brilliant hope we get more raglak ff ts ss O’s and plzzz raglak ff give daily ff or be regular and yaa plzzz write more bcoz now days raglak ff is very less in comparison to Swasan so all raglak ff writer plzzzz it’s a request

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:43 am

        Thank u so so much nikky. Glad that u liked it. ?

    8. Berdilla on January 7, 2017 9:41 am

      Awesome dear friend i loved it so much

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:27 am

        Thank u so much sweety ?

    9. Sally_blr on January 7, 2017 11:08 am

      She realized now that she is in love. Really? And she confessed her love OMG. She is seriously different mahn. I’m just waiting what will be shiv’s reply. You just made me so restless now. I’m waiting for next chappy

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:42 am

        Yes sisso she has confessed. Ha, she is different. Thank u sisso. Will meet u soon in the next chappy’s comments ?

    10. Raglakholic on January 7, 2017 11:34 am

      Omg deeshna
      It’s outstanding update
      Totally amazing one
      Gini proposed to shiv
      D way she realised her love is superb one
      She is so brave to propose shiv
      Eagerly waiting to see what he replies
      Can’t wait more
      So please do continue soon

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:39 am

        Yes gini is courageous harshu. Thank u so much harshu dear. Glad u liked it. ?

    11. Ankita on January 7, 2017 12:13 pm

      This is one of favrote ff loved it

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:38 am

        Aww. Such a big compliment ani. I am on cloud nine now. Thank u so much buddy ?

    12. Asw on January 7, 2017 12:32 pm

      Nice keep going

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:35 am

        Thank u so much asw. ?

    13. asra on January 7, 2017 1:22 pm

      omg deeshu update pathi solrathu ku munadi un dp’a pathi sollanum….it’s make me crazy dear….what a look yar it’s killing…His beard moustache omg am totally flat…again am fall in love with you gym boy….aprm un update amazing yar….yar pa sonna unda ne fast’a porenu…ne correct than scenes move panra…aana ne correct aana situation la stop panida ya…gini Mr. mystery kida love va sollida…avan oda reaction yeapadi irukum therunchuga na eager ra iruken dear….plz update soon my deeshu sweety…waiting for ur update….tkcr my dear sissy….

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:50 am

        Thank u asru sisso. Glad that u liked my dp ? thanks for understanding me sisso. Apa dhane sisso viru viruppa irukum ? adha na epovume correct timela stop panuven. Next epi post paniten sissy. Love u sissy. ?

    14. Sreevijayan on January 7, 2017 2:19 pm

      OMG..u stopped at the wrong point…cnt wait to read more….mindblowing update dear….

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:35 am

        Ha ha..? I know sree that I stopped at a very bad time. Thanks a lot sree. ?

    15. Ragz_teju on January 7, 2017 3:39 pm

      wow unexpectable proposal… just loved it so much…. waiting for shiv reaction… I am more excited than gini to know his answer ???

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:33 am

        Is it?? He he… ? Am glad that u liked this chapter dear ragz. Thanks a lot ragz ?

    16. Vk on January 7, 2017 3:43 pm

      Deesh Chlo I loved it alot dr….. Awesome

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:32 am

        Thank u so so much vk dear. Am very glad that u liked it. ?

    17. Malu on January 7, 2017 4:44 pm

      superrrrrrrrrrrrrrr part

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:29 am

        Thanks a lot malu ?

    18. Ammu on January 7, 2017 10:28 pm

      Interesting and awesome episode

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:29 am

        Thank u so much ammu ?

    19. jazzy on January 7, 2017 11:08 pm

      omg finally ragini ko pta lag gya ki pyaar kya ha wahhjjh amazing chappy

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 11:28 am

        Yes James bond. Thanks a lot partner ?

    20. hemalattha on January 8, 2017 7:44 pm

      awesome

      • deesh on January 8, 2017 8:11 pm

        Thanks a lot ?

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