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Home»Fan Fiction»SWASAN-LOVE AFTER MARRIAGE (part-16)
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SWASAN-LOVE AFTER MARRIAGE (part-16)

NagamanasaBy NagamanasaDecember 28, 201665 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hi everyone
I am back again with the next part of the story…so let’s start

Recap:Swara’s pregnancy

Part-16

Same night

Swasan r sitting on bed in each other’s embrace enjoying their moments…After sometime sanskar spoke

Sanskar:Swara today I am so happy..We r going to be parents..soon our baby will come to this world then we both will form a team and tease u both…You and laksh irritates me so much na now it’s time for payback..

Swara(pout):Haww sanskar today only you came to know about our baby and you r loving the baby so much…and u forgot abt me

Sanskar smiled and pecked her pout and spoke:No swara how can i forget abt my princess ha..i love her more than anything in this world…

Swara(overwhelmed):Even I love my prince more than anything

Saying this both hugged each other..Soon both slept peacefully in each other’s embrace

Next Morning

It’s again a beautiful morning for our beautiful couple sleeping peacefully in each other’s embrace…Sun rays fall on our sanskar’s face..He slowly opened his eyes and found his lovely wife sleeping peacefully cuddling him…Sanskar pecked her forehead and carefully placed her on bed and got down from the bed..He moved towards washroom to freshen up..Swara woke after sometime..she searched for sanskar but didnt fimd him in room.She heard round from washroom and understood that he went to fresh up..She got down from bed and went towards his wadrobe to take his clothes..At that time Sanskar came out from washroom and stopped her

Sanskar:Swara what r u doing you must take rest come

Swara:Sanskar I am fine and by doing small works nothing will happen to me

Sanskar:Swara listen it is not good for u to work u must take rest understand…you r not going to do any work

Swara:Sanskar i am just in my 1st month so please let me do my work

While they r arguing with each other they heard laughing round and saw towards that direction…They saw Raglak and sumi standing there and laughing..Swasan r embrassed and looked down…Sumi went towards swara and hugged her

Sumi:Swara today I am so happy..I am going to be nani..congrats swara

Swara:Tq ma…

Laksh:But maa when baby comes then I will not give her to anyone…only i will play with her..Baby loves her chachu more

Ragini:No baby loves her maasi more…She will play with me only

Both started fighting with each other while others looked at them shocked seeing them fighting like kids…Finally sanskar shouted

Sanskar:Stop it now…stop both of u…Baby will be with me not with u both so pls stop

Raglak looked towards him wide eyes while he chuckled…Like this they spent some quality time with each other..

Swasan are so happy thinking abt their upcoming life with their baby…Sanskar is taking gud care of her…Life is so perfect for both of them but will it always be???

Swara entered her 2nd month..It is again a beautiful morning for our couple sleeping in each other’s embrace…Sanskar is sleeping peacefully while swara is seen suffering to sleep..She opened her eyes and sat on the bed reasting her head over headboard…Sanskar also opened his eyes and asked her

Sanskar:Swara what happened..Why did u get up so early today??Are you fine??

Swara(Painful expression):I don’t know sanskar I am getting severe pain

Sanskar(worried):What!Is it paining more..it is btr if we would go to hospital now..chalo get up

Soon both woke up and went to hospital..Swara is taken inside for check up while sanskar is waiting outside…He is seen worried…Soon doctor came out after checking swara and called sanskar to her cabin..Sanskar followed her…Soon that entered cabin and doctor asked him to sit…Sanskar sat there and asked her

Sanskar:Doctor what happened to her she is fine na..our baby is fine na

Doctor:I am sorry Mr.SM u r wife has lost her baby

Sanskar is shocked hearing that…He felt as if someone has snatched his world from him…Tears r continuously flowing from his..But he slowly composed himself and spoke

Sanskar(with tears in his eyes):But doctor how did this happen..We r taking gud care of her…we r even taking care of her diet and see that she is taking medicines…Then how did it happen doctor

Doctor:No Mr.SM it is not abt her medicines..Sometimes it happens..She is in her 2nd month and it is the time when some ladies loose their babies due to some issues in their pregnancy…So pls u must take care of her…She is very week so take care of her diet also..And ha i am changing her medicines take care that she takes them on time

Sanskar(teary eyed):ji doctor

He came out from doctors cabin and cried his heart out…soon he composed himself and wiped his tears and went to swara..Swara smiled seeing him and asked

Swara:Sanskar what did doctor tell??

Sanskar(avoiding eye contact):Ntng swara she jst asked me to take care of u

Swara(smiled):ohh…

She is confused due to sanskar’s behaviour but shrugged thinking that may be because of work pressure…Soon they reached home…Sanskar helped swara till room..He made her to drink juice and made her lye on bed and kissed her forehead

Sanskar:Swara take rest for sometime…

Swara:Ok but pls sit with me

Sanskar without any option set beside her..When he confirmed that she slept he slowly came out of the room and went to garden…He is sitting in garden and crying…Tears r continuously flowing from his eyes which he controlled till now…Suddenly be felt a hand on his shoulder..He turned and saw Sumi standing there..He immediately stood up and hugged her tightly and cried loud…Sumi is worried seeing him like that but she thought to calm him first then she will ask him the reason…

After 30 mints sanskar stopped crying and broke the hug..sumi cupped his face with one hand and asked

Sumi:Sanskar what happened that u r crying

Sanskar narrated her the whole thing with teary eyes…Sumi is also shocked hearing him..She has heard in her eyes…But she composed herself as her children needs her and spoke

Sumi(choked voice):Sanskar does swara know about this

Sanskar:No ma I didn’t tell her…I even don’t have courage to face her…You u only tell her ma…I can’t do that

Sumi:No sanskar…I can’t do that…it is only u who can do that…She needs you in this situation..You must be strong for her..Only you can control her in this situation sanskar..

Sanskar:But maa… (interrupted)

Sumi:No sanskar how much you want to cry you get now only but u will not cry in front of her…You must be strong enough to tell her the truth…

Sanskar hugged sumi again and cried loudly..Soon sanskar composed himself and prepared himself to face swara…

Here in room swara woke up and found the room empty…She is abt to get down from the bed when sanskar came into the room with dinner…He sat infront of swara and started feeding her silently..He did not speak a single word to her…Swara is getting doubt seeing him but ate silently…After feedind her sanskar gave her medicines and was abt to go but stopped hearing her

Swara:Sanskar

Sanskar turned towards her and spoke:Ha swara tell me

Swara:What happened to you sanskar you r behaving so oddly from the time we came from hospital…

Sanskar:Nothing like that swara…

Swara:Ok then tell me why did doctor changes my medicines..

Sanskar is shocked hearing her question and he is thinking what to answer her..When he is lost in his thoughts swara again asked him the same thing

Swara:Tell na sanskar

Sanskar(stammering):Wo..Woh…Swa..

Swara stood from bed and went towards sanskar..She held his collor and asked:Sanskar will u tell me what happened..Why did she change my medicines…What happened to our baby sanskar pls tell me

Sanskar:Swara woh we lost out baby swara

Swara is shocked hearing him and started beating him and spoke:Sanskar why r u telling me such a bad joke ha…I will not leave if u again tell me such jokes understand..Now tell the truth what happened

Sumi came into the room hearing her shouts and is shocked to see the scenario..She went towards swara and held her tightly to stop her from beating sanskar…

Sanskar(teary eyed):Swara this only truth…We lost our baby forever swara…

Swara went numb on hearing this and was abt to fall on ground but sanskar held her on right time…She looked towards sanskar who has tears in her eyes and spoke

Swara:my baby sanskar…our baby sanskar….We lost our baby sanskar..

Saying this she hugged him tightly and cried loud..Sanskar and sumi tried to stop her but failed..Soon she slept in his embrace as sanskar gave her sleeping pills..He realised that she slept and took her in his arms and placed her on bed carefully…He caressed her hair and kissed her forehead…He also slept beside her after some time..

Precap:Don’t know

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I know many of u don’t want miscarriage sequence but I choosed it as it is the worst part of one’s life..I jst want to show how a couple support each other and become each other’s strength when they r facing a worst situation in life…So hope u understand my Pov…

Let me know ur views abt this part through ur valuable votes and comments…posetive or negative comments accepted..If u don’t like anything in my story then u can tell me through ur comments…I don’t feel had instead it will help me to improve myself…

Keep smiling:-)
Take care
Bye

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Nagamanasa

    I am from Andhra Pradesh and I am doing my engineering...I am a big fan of Swasan

    65 Comments

    1. chanu on December 28, 2016 3:10 pm

      huuhuuhu
      its so sad epi!
      my poor swasan!
      feeling rly sad 4 them!
      im sure they ll support eo in dis hard tym and cm out f it!
      swasan plz be normal soon!

      keep writing
      be happy always!

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:43 pm

        Tq so much dear…

    2. Shrinjal on December 28, 2016 3:11 pm

      ..Amazing dii

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:44 pm

        Tq Shrinju

    3. maryum on December 28, 2016 3:20 pm

      Nice sad hai but no problem

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:45 pm

        Tq Maryum dear…

    4. SHAN on December 28, 2016 3:20 pm

      nice dr…..

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:49 pm

        Tq Shan

    5. Akankshanna on December 28, 2016 3:44 pm

      Emotional and sad.

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:51 pm

        Tq so much dear…

    6. Simi on December 28, 2016 3:50 pm

      Awesome chapter
      Emotional too??

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:52 pm

        Tq Simi

    7. Tamil on December 28, 2016 4:13 pm

      Awesome

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:52 pm

        Tq dear…

    8. sweeta on December 28, 2016 4:18 pm

      Awesome episode dear….
      At 1st swasanraglak scene is vv lovely nd beautiful. …..bt after that left part is vv sad …..
      ????

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:54 pm

        Tq Sweeta

    9. Dharshaini on December 28, 2016 4:33 pm

      Amazing update… but felt very sad to know that swara has a miscarriage… hope they pass this phase of life soon…

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:55 pm

        Tq Dharshaini

    10. dharani on December 28, 2016 5:02 pm

      awesome

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:55 pm

        Tq Dharani

    11. hemanshi on December 28, 2016 5:05 pm

      Awww that’s soo awesome…..and go om with this track…i am loving it,??

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:50 pm

        Tq so much dii..

        Now tell me how r u and chotu baby…Take care of ur health di…

    12. anu on December 28, 2016 5:31 pm

      awesome

      • Nagamanasa on December 28, 2016 7:51 pm

        Tq anu

    13. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on December 28, 2016 5:59 pm

      Mind blowing chappy..Aww,poor swasan??feeling bad for them..Hope they overcome the situation..It’s reality of our life..Everyday many couples lost their child in the world.. It’s a tough situation for them..Apne bacche ko leke jo sapne dekte hain vo 1 second main tutt ke bikar jate hain..You showed the reality through swasan,good job dear..Keep going.. Waiting for nxt..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:40 pm

        Tq uma dear…yup it is the reality of life…There r many couples who loose there babies and they will be shattered by knowing that the dreams that saw abt their baby will remain as dreams….Tq so much that u liked my work..I will post next one soon dear

    14. Sri on December 28, 2016 6:00 pm

      It’s true at that time support to one other is must I liked it .u nailed it.

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:41 pm

        Tq so much sri

    15. SwaSanFan.Goldie on December 28, 2016 6:02 pm

      Awww..its soo emotional ??. .Poor Swara..she is Broken n same wid Sanskaar too..my poor swasan…continue soon

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:42 pm

        Tq so much Goldie dear…I will post soon

    16. SNY on December 28, 2016 6:15 pm

      Awesome epi…
      Flng bad for SwaSan…….
      Nxt one soon..

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:42 pm

        Tq so much dear…

    17. Purvi on December 28, 2016 6:18 pm

      Toooooooooooo sad………….

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:45 pm

        Tq Purvi

    18. Vidhi on December 28, 2016 7:37 pm

      It was really emotional… ??loved it

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:45 pm

        Tq vidhi

    19. Arshaanya on December 28, 2016 7:46 pm

      Nyc

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:46 pm

        Tq Arshaanya

    20. Sanswa on December 28, 2016 7:52 pm

      Marvelous…??

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:46 pm

        Tq dear…

    21. vyshu10 on December 28, 2016 8:00 pm

      Aww Manu….very emotional. Inta edipistava…bad girl

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:48 pm

        Sry akka…I made u cry na…Chollyyyy..but but I am going to make u cry even in next part…so wait for that

      • vyshu10 on December 29, 2016 2:23 pm

        haww….bad girl?? U r gonna make me cry more..huhhh

    22. Mirna on December 28, 2016 8:01 pm

      Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww dear loved it 🙂

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:49 pm

        Tq Mifna dear

    23. niku on December 28, 2016 8:25 pm

      Nice dear….but it’s sad too…

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:49 pm

        Tq Niku dear

    24. Kakali on December 28, 2016 8:42 pm

      Manasaaaaaaaa Dii,,,
      1st lemme kick my moron inbox that i can’t even reply any of my msg.
      2.heh busy n me… urghh don’t joke..
      3.di u know very well that ur ff n work is loved by ev1 . then how can u ask me that i love it or not? it’s just not a question to ask.. i love it..
      4.heheeh living TU is kinda impossible for me.. but seriously i was not well even i have a plaster in my left hand so couldn’t read or comment on any ff/ss/os… par haaa Rimpi is using my account since 3-4 days as i was not allowed to touch my phone… dun know what she has done with it? what blunder she had done? mad girl.. sme as me… u know just now i get my phone back that to after pleading tooo much…
      5.not only u , but i also missed u n ur FF dherr saraaaaa… *hugggggg…
      6.waaa now lemme come to ur chappy …. omgggggg feeling kinda jump to Mount Everest n scream ” How could u do that Manasaaaaaa di,,, how could u? Pregnant se sidha miscarriage..!!! *faint… I couldn’t even get a chance to eat laddu of their godh bharai… *sob….
      i respect u for this idea.. coz in this situation only SWASAN’s love after marriage is going to wrok .. this kind of tough situation r going to make them one again… they will face it together n will over come also as they r our SWASAN… urghhh EPIC couple….
      LIVED IT DII… !!!
      Thnk u… ;-*

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:56 pm

        Kaku dear thank u for ur comment and also loving my story…I know leaving TU is impossible for everyone so u cant leave it that easily…
        Sry that u could not get laddu but don’t worry u r going to get ur laddos in upcoming parts..so wait till then
        And ha this miscarriage sequence will surely do justice to the title of my story…they will face this situation together and come out of this soon…after all that r our Swasan…So wait tell then
        Love u…Thnk u..Bye

    25. a on December 28, 2016 8:44 pm

      nice..

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:34 pm

        Tq dear

    26. pooja26 on December 28, 2016 11:14 pm

      superb part….

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:35 pm

        Tq pooja dear

    27. Milestone on December 29, 2016 11:45 am

      ????

      • Nagamanasa on December 29, 2016 12:36 pm

        Don’t worry dear soon their happy days will be back

    28. Swarna01 on December 29, 2016 1:13 pm

      Its ok. Dis track also awesome. Dere is no bound dat everything should b perfect. So. I lyk dis track bt also sad 4 swasan condition.

      • Nagamanasa on December 30, 2016 8:27 pm

        Tq

    29. Afra96 on December 29, 2016 3:08 pm

      Awesome..

      • Nagamanasa on December 30, 2016 8:27 pm

        Tq Afra

    30. Febi on December 29, 2016 9:57 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Nagamanasa on December 30, 2016 8:28 pm

        Tq Febi dear

    31. rabia on December 29, 2016 10:04 pm

      awesome dear and ya true sometimes happy days come after the sad days 😉

      • Nagamanasa on December 30, 2016 8:29 pm

        Tq so much di

    32. Simin on December 29, 2016 10:07 pm

      Really sad

      • Nagamanasa on December 30, 2016 8:29 pm

        Tq simmu

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