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My evil heart Chapter 5: RagLak date?

Charms22By Charms22December 17, 201636 Comments5 Mins Read
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Chapter 5: RagLak date?

Sanskar’s pov
“I really feel bad for Neha, but I can’t help her, cause Laksh will do something to Ragini, but somehow I will find a way to help out Ragini and Neha!” “Poor Neha, I feel bad for her!”
End of her pov

At night Neha sneaked into her room, she was crying, cause what Laksh did to her and she got to know that Raj is the good one, cause she saw, how Laksh tortured his own brother. She fell asleep with tears on her face, but she promised herself that she won’t cry anymore, she will be strong and protect Ragini and herself.

The next day starts with Ragini’s pov.

Ragini’s pov
“I’m so excited about my first date with Laksh, but I need a dress from Neha!” So I went to her and told her about my date and that I want to borrow a dress from her. “This one is perfect for you di, if you wear this one then you will take Laksh’s breath away.” “Thank you Neha, this dress is amazing!” Then I went to get ready.
End of her pov

Neha’s pov
“I called Sanskar and told him about di’s date with Laksh and he said: “that stupid beast!” “We should do something about it!” I said. “Will you go on a date with me?” “Ya, sure!” I said and the phone convo ended. “Now, I have to get ready too!” “Di, I’m going on a date!” “With whom?” “With Sanskar.” “Ok!” A jealous di said.
End of her pov

Both sisters got ready and came out of their room at the same time, the complimented eachother.

Ragini’s dress

Neha’s dress

Laksh’s pov
“I was waiting for Ragini infront of her house, then Sanskar came too, so I asked him: “what are you doing here?” “I could ask you the same!” Sanskar replied back. “Hey Sansku!” Neha called him, she was looking hot in her dress, but she ignored me and said: “let’s go Sansku!” “Ok, Nehu!” After a while Ragini came out she looked mindblowing, I could see how Sanskar was staring at her, so I went to her and put my arm around her waist, while I thought: “today I will have fun with her, hahahahha!” “I will ruin her life, like I ruined her sisters life!” “Laksh can we go?” “Ya sure!”
End of his pov

RagLak scene
“I don’t know, how to tell you Ragini, but you look more than beautiful, I would love to kiss you!” “You can only kiss me after our marriage!” “Oh, really Laksh Maheswari gets whatever he wants.” “To get me isn’t easy Mr.” “Really we will see Ragini!” He said with an evil smirk. Soon they reached at an farmhouse. “Where are we?” Ragini asked a little bit scared. “Baby, that’s my farmhouse.” “Why are we here?” “I wanted to show you something!” He said, but before Ragini could say anything, he picked her up and threw her on a bed. She saw the lust, which he had for her and nothing else, he moved closer to her, he was about to kiss her and rip of her clothes, but to her luck Sanskar came and saved her. He punched Laksh till he fell unconscious. When he woke up he saw Neha there, so he asked her: “what are you doing here did you forget our deal?” “No, I didn’t, I came here to warn you to stay away from my sis!” “Oho baby, I know that you want me for yourself, but I my thirst for your sister has grown bigger, I need her for a night!” “You never will touch her or I will kill you!”
End of the scene

RagSan scene
“Ragini, are you allright?” A concerned Sanskar asked her, she tightly hugged him and cried like a small child, then she said: “thank you Sanky, if you weren’t here, then I don’t know, what would have happend to me!” “Shhh, Ragini calm down!” They were standing for a few minutes in an hugging position untill someone interrupted them with fake “cough!” “Cough!” It was Neha and then she said: “sorry to interrupt you guys, but we should get going and di I wanna show you something.” So they left for Gadodia mansion, after they arrived, they straightly went in and Neha showed them a recording, where Laksh forced her to do whatever he wants or he will rape Ragini. “That means Laksh and you betrayed me, get out of my house right now!” “But di, I didn’t do anything!” “Yes, you did, cause you and Laksh did, you know what!” “So get out from here right now and go to your Laksh, then you guys can do whatever you want happilly!” Ragini pushed Neha out of the house, Sanskar wanted to say something, but Ragini stopped him, he couldn’t stop her and then she said: “I’m going away from this place Sanky, will come with me?” “Yes, I will Ragini, cause I can do anything for you!”
End of their scene

Flashback and Ragini’s pov
“After my convo with Laksh, he stopped the car and showed me an MMS of him and Neha making love with eachother, I was dissgusted with my own sister and fiance, they were having fun, while doing this and Neha’s words hurt me very much, cause she asked him: “Laksh, leave my sister come to me and we can have fun together as much as you want, cause you won’t have fun with her, not as much as you will have with me!” Then he forrcefully took me to the farmhouse and was gonna rape me, to my luck Sanky saved me.
End of the flashback and her pov

Neha and Ragini drifted a part, cause of the MMS, which Laksh showed Ragini, but is the MMS real or fake?

What will happen to Neha now?

Will Ragini forget Laksh and move on?

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    36 Comments

    1. Sindhura on December 17, 2016 7:26 am

      Nice

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 3:33 pm

        Thank you very much dear???

    2. nikky on December 17, 2016 7:32 am

      it’s totally different story and so amazing I really want raglak together but u know plzzzz be regular and complete it don’t take break or stop in middle bcoz I want to read it soon plzzzz update daily and reached till 50 part

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 3:36 pm

        Thanks a lot dear, but I can’t update daily, cause I have my other stories to write as well as this so every story will be updated a day after another

    3. Sreevijayan on December 17, 2016 8:30 am

      Nice update dr

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 3:45 pm

        Thanks a lot dear???

    4. lovely on December 17, 2016 8:53 am

      Interesting

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 3:46 pm

        Thank you very much???

    5. Ammy on December 17, 2016 8:53 am

      superb

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 3:47 pm

        Thank you so much???

    6. Asw on December 17, 2016 9:09 am

      Nice

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 3:47 pm

        Thank you??

    7. Astra on December 17, 2016 12:19 pm

      it’s interesting

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 3:48 pm

        Thanks ??

    8. crystal089 on December 17, 2016 3:58 pm

      ok at last i found time today and i read all parts sorry for not commentimg these days though i read but incomplete hope u understand and coming to story its amazing and intersting update sooonnn

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 4:56 pm

        Thanks a lot dear???
        I can uderstand that you didn’t have time???

    9. dharani on December 17, 2016 5:23 pm

      sorry due to exams i am unable to read and comment superb

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 17, 2016 6:08 pm

        Thanks a lot dear and good luck in your exams, I’m sure you will rock the papers??????

    10. jazzy on December 17, 2016 5:37 pm

      ahhhh thank god sanky came in time and suoerbbb part

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 18, 2016 1:03 am

        Thanks a lot???

    11. silent_writer on December 17, 2016 5:47 pm

      Amazinggggg momsy itssssssssssss superbbbbbbbbb

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 18, 2016 1:46 am

        Thanks a lot???

    12. asra on December 17, 2016 7:27 pm

      awesome didi….Sanky came in correct time and save ragini….didi ur mms question give me shock didi….real or fake means neha have a grey shade….i don’t know didi….waiting for nxt one….tkcr didi….

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 18, 2016 2:14 am

        Thanks a lot my dear???

    13. hemalattha on December 17, 2016 8:23 pm

      titally different and awesome.interesting and waiting for next part.

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 18, 2016 2:15 am

        Thank you very much dear???

    14. Pooja on December 17, 2016 8:27 pm

      suprrrbbb

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 18, 2016 2:15 am

        Thank you so much dear☺☺☺

    15. Jessica on December 17, 2016 10:25 pm

      Osm…

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 18, 2016 2:16 am

        Thanks a lot dear???

    16. A.xx on December 18, 2016 8:13 am

      fab but hate lakshya and feel bad for neha.xx

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 18, 2016 2:08 pm

        Thank you so much dear???

    17. Ragz_teju on December 18, 2016 4:25 pm

      awesome

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 18, 2016 5:13 pm

        Thanks dear??

    18. Liya on December 20, 2016 7:49 pm

      Sorry about the late comment…super epi dear? how can ragini believe that MMS even after knowing laksh’s true colour??poor nehaa

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 20, 2016 9:15 pm

        Thanks a lot my dear liya???

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