Kumkum A New Dream (intro)

I guys i am shruthi.i am writing my first ff.
Pls do support me..
My main purpose of writing a ff is everyone has a dream which has to be fulfill.but some fulfill their dream and some not.Lets see who is gng to fulfill their dresms..
Abhi a cute handsome boy of 25.who is dreaming to have a gud a great future and life and he is rich too.
Abhi:purab where r u gng?
Purab:arey abhi i will be back
Abhi:come soon.we have to receive aliya.if we go late she will dance in our head.
Purab:ok ya
Abhi:in his mind.i have everything execpt my parents love and care towards us but i have my dadi.she is taking care us more than her.she is best dadi.at age 22 i become a great rockstar.
Now i am giving my family a luxurios life.they should suffer for anything in their life.
Though i am looking arrongant by my look,i am soft hearted to my heart.i have changed dur to my cirumstance which i gone through by small age.i am waiting to see my future with full of love and care towards me and my family
A dream broken by purab
Purab:abhi cme lets go.
Abhi:hmm
On the way to airport
Abhi and purab received aliya
Aliya:bhaiya how r u and purab u r looking awesome.
Purab:ok stop u r drama.cme lets go
Aliya:wait purab my frnd is coming
Abhi:friend???
Aliya:ha bhaiya my clg mate i and my close friend..wait
One beautiful girl standing with her ma and waiting for her sister arrival
Screen freeze on both face….
Guys let me know how my story is..
Pls cmnt i want u r suggestion