Guyz…do you feel kya my ff is not interesting and i m not good writer…bcoz i m getting less response and comments…shld i stop writing…?
Swara opens the door….
Naina throws her on bed…all members enters the room…finally Sanskar comes in….n closed the door…
Asha – So…hows your room?
Swara gives her angry lady look…
Karan plays with her hairs…n says..
Karan – Aww…babu ko gussa aa gya
Sanskar laughs….
Sanskar comes towards her and step his one foot on her bed…n grab her hairs…
Sanskar – U think that you r too smart?But you are not…u try to ruin our image…to create a scene over there..I’ll make your college life hell now…you just wait and watch…
Swara is hurted and a tear drop escape from her eyes…
Sanskar somehow felt something inside in his heart and suddenly looses his grab…
Arjun comes forward and raised his hand on her to slap her…
Sanskar hold his hand…
Arjun – What the hell bro?
Sanskar – Guyz…letz go from here..
Karan – y?Abhi toh party suru hui h..
Sanskar – Do what you want…i am leaving..
He leaves the room…
Here all others started troubling Swara…n she quickly msg Wardon to come at her room….
Precap : Wardon walks towarsa Swaras room…n sanskar saw this
25 Comments
its awsm dear…..
post asap……
nice bt too short
Nice
no dude! its interesting. but i guess plz increase the script of each part. specialy part 3. it was too short, that i didnt got when i started reading and when i end it. just thats the point where u can get urself corect. else everythng is nice!! I liked it!!
Awesome but ittu sa kyu????
Awesome..don’t stop give long updates..this is too short.
Nice
Fab but give longer updates xx
uuughhh.. too short
Awesome.
but give long updates.
Gud one dear.. Keep going with longer updates
I just loved it pls try to update asap
Nice part
nyc
Awesome…
Awesome but a bit longer pls………..
nice 🙂
Superb awesome continue
Plzz dnt stop..I loved dis chappie just want next soon
Short epi but nice??
Its too short
Nice
nice
nice..
awesome…!!loved it…!!